Reasoning questions: such as "having a grateful heart will make our society more tolerant and understanding, and less responsible and entrusted;" More harmony and warmth, less quarreling and indifference; More sincerity and unity, less deception and distraction ... "("Have a grateful heart ").
Voting topic: For example, "What is certain is that no matter whether the road ahead is sunny or steep, I will be firm-painful and happy." ("Pain and Happiness")
Forward-looking topics: such as "I, my future is not a dream!" " "("My future is not a dream ")
Sentiment topic: for example, "She taught me tolerance and learned tolerance." (tolerance)
Echo from beginning to end
(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. ("Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season")
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!
(End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! ("Guarding the Fire of Spirit")
Express feelings and wishes
For example, the "concern" at the end of the article: "The sun is shining outside the window, and the fragrance of cauliflower rushes into the classroom. Spring is so beautiful. Premier Zhou cares about us so much that we feel warm and happy. "
For example, at the end of the article, "Prime Minister Shili": ... The hearse gradually faded away and finally disappeared into the boundless night. People still stand quietly with their backs to the direction of the hearse, as if waiting for Premier Zhou to come back. "
make a telephone call
Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us.
When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. ("Give love to others")
Smart question
Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates.
Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? ("Ha ha me in the mirror")
Quote good sentences and lyrics
"Wild incense is fragrant, beautiful wood is cloudy, wind and frost are noble and clean, and the water comes out." In the past 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! (Thinking from the sky)
Thinking of this, I remembered a famous saying: "There are many books around me. If you find them, you will certainly learn a lot ... "("Reading People Around You ")
Zola said: "Life is only two and a half minutes, one minute to smile, one minute to sigh, one minute to fall in love ..." In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with admiring my mother's dress,
That minute's smile is not forced, and that minute's sigh is no longer a sigh, but a transmission of love. My mother's love for life, love for life, and love for her loved ones are integrated into daily life, and I am indifferent to it ... (intoxicated)
a heated discussion
In fact, peace is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud floating across the horizon, gently dotted with blue sky, fresh and natural.
Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (In the Mood for Love)
Scenery contrast, scenery unity.
The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun fades away in the distance and disappears into a sunset glow. The two are integrated and there is no distance.
At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Growing up in the Sun)
Repeat and repeat
"winter's personality", the main part appears "I love winter. Winter is a sacred symbol ","I love winter. Winter is a respectable strict teacher ","I love winter. Winter is the cradle of spring.
Click the sentence again: "I love winter. I love the sacredness, strictness and selflessness of winter, and I love her unique personality! "
Love comes from narration.
The title of the composition for the senior high school entrance examination somewhere is When I am Conquered. A examinee used the first person "I" instead of the brave and unyielding little ant in the form of fable, describing the process of tenacious struggle between "I" and various atrocities that killed "I", which concealed the author's attitude of love and hate.
In the end, the hidden feelings finally broke out: "That little guy, he foolishly thought he could conquer me, a little ant, but he didn't know that the desire for freedom and life could not be extinguished by violence!" " .
From one to another
What is said here is the meaning there, which is the expansion and sublimation of thought. A candidate took "change" as the topic, and put forward the topic of "ear picky eaters" in his composition.
By analogy, I wrote three major changes in ears: eating soft but not hard, eating hemp but not spicy, and eating fat but not thin. Then I ended up like this: "If my ears become more picky about food, I'm afraid the truth will disappear!" "
Reversal method or accident method
The key is to take a sudden turn.
In the composition "Thanksgiving", a candidate wrote a touching life story between an terminally ill uncle and aunt.
In the narrator, there was a teasing remark made by my aunt before my uncle fell ill: "Your uncle knew that he was a loquacious and empty talker. He hasn't written a word, and he hasn't even read a love letter when he is old. "
At the end, my uncle finally passed away. The author did not stop there, but unexpectedly "pointed out" the following:
"On the morning paper on the third day after my uncle's death, we saw my uncle's' love letter' and put it in the column of' personals'.
Bold words: "My wife is 32 years old. I lived with her as a witness for five years. She is the best companion and the treasure I have encountered in my life. I want to cherish it all my life.
Unfortunately, I will die before her. Who can cherish it for me? I will be grateful in heaven! My aunt took this love letter and burst into tears. "
Response title
The article "Walking with Poets" chooses the poems and life stories of three poets, Tao Yuanming, Li Bai and Su Shi, as its own writing materials, thus showing its own extracurricular reading achievements and highlighting the theme of "more gains from extracurricular reading". All three fragments are well written, so there is no need to go into details at the end. So he shouted with a call: "Poet! I am willing to walk with you! " .
Leave a blank
"Xiangming" expresses the theme that "the weak always make excuses for themselves" by drinking tea and listening to the dialogue between father and daughter across the hall. At the end of the article, I wrote: "The conversation through the door made me think a lot.
I took another sip of green tea, which was really bitter, but soon I tasted a heartfelt fragrance, which made me very comfortable. I suddenly remembered something, turned around and took out a bottle of green tea from the refrigerator and walked across the hall ... "
Clever use of postscript
You can quote poems, provoke discussions and express your feelings; It has the function of strengthening expression and deepening theme.
For example, "Fish in the Water" uses anthropomorphic techniques to write the story that fish are ungrateful, always want to jump out of the sea, be free, and regret leaving the sea. At the end of the story, add the following words: "The sea creates life and protects life, so there will be happiness when fish get water."
Philosopher says: Fish know that water is the source of happiness. "Clearly stating the theme, highlighting the topic of' gratitude' and changing the writing object with postscript are really wonderful, free and flexible, appropriate and natural, and deepen the theme.
Clever use of rhetoric
Clever use of rhetorical devices, especially parallelism, metaphor, personification, antithesis and quotation.
For example, at the end of Looking at the Mountain and Becoming a Peak: "Innovation is a stone that sparks a single spark; Innovation is fire, lighting the lamp of hope; Innovation is a lamp that illuminates the way forward; Innovation is the way, guiding us forward! "
The famous example is behind.
For example, at the end of Kiss and Understanding, "Plato betrayed his teacher and said,' I love my teacher, especially the truth'." When Brutu pierced Caesar's last sword, he said,' It's not that I love Caesar less, but that I love Rome more. '
How admirable their words and actions are when emotional intimacy conflicts with the truth of the matter! "。
Comprehensive expression
Comprehensive use of narrative, description, lyricism, discussion and other expressions, the ending can also be boldly used.
For example, at the end of "Communication": "So a picture came to my eyes: my mother walked carefully step by step in the sunset glow, walking steadily and comfortably. The wind is blowing gently, beating a place with Phnom Penh in Ye Er. The water gleamed and looked into the distance. Birds frolicking in the air ... Walking is the communication of love. -I firmly told my mother that we would come for a walk tomorrow. "
In the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good motto of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. ("Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season")
First, "Feng Tou" won "Bai Mei Sheng"
As the saying goes, "everything is difficult at the beginning." Isn't the composition the same? Many students don't know where to start when they start writing, and they try their best to start, but they still have no purpose and are not satisfactory. Mr. Ye Shengtao once said: "The beginning of the article is like a scene at the beginning of a play. If you choose it properly, it will be enough to lay the artistic conception of the whole scene, cover the air of the whole scene, and let people immediately put down their chaotic thoughts and focus on the following development. " A good beginning is half the battle of an article. The ancients compared the beginning of the article to a "phoenix head"
It is intended to emphasize the importance of the opening, especially the composition in the examination room. If you can have an ingenious, refreshing and love at first sight opening, it will certainly add a lot of color to your article, stand out from many compositions, win the favor of marking teachers and leave a good impression. The so-called "phoenix head" is "charming", which is why. Here are some novel and exquisite ways to start.
1, open the pen to reveal the purport
Purpose refers to the central meaning of the article. Revealing the theme at the beginning is the way to clearly reveal the theme of this article at the beginning. The advantage of this opening method is that the article is clear and the theme is clear, giving people a relaxed and refreshing feeling. For example, at the beginning of the article "Little Things at Home":
Home is the harbor of love. In the harbor of love, there will be ripples of life from time to time-
At the beginning of the article, we took us to "home", a "harbor of love" to appreciate that love and love. The article quickly enters the theme, with quick thinking, and the following articles will closely focus on this center.
Another example is the "interest" at the beginning of the article:
The faint music and tea fragrance are filled with endless reverie and distant vision. Yes, my interest is tea tasting.
As soon as I started writing, I went straight to the point. Poetic language is emotional and warm, and faint tea fragrance comes to my face. It feels so good!
2. Lyric argumentation method
This kind of beginning guides people with reason and emotion, which makes readers and authors feel excited and enhances the appeal of the article. For example, the article "The Tree on the Cliff" begins like this:
Declined the invitation of Woye, avoided the pursuit of the stream, and a seed climbed the steep stone wall without hesitation in the eyes of surprise, regret and disdain.
At the beginning of the article, the image of "the strong man of life" was displayed in a lyrical and argumentative style.
Another example is the beginning of the article "A message from my heart to the teacher":
I gather in the garden of words to construct the most beautiful poems in my heart; I swim in the ocean of music, looking for the most beautiful rhythm in my heart. Ah, dear teacher, I dedicate my words to you!
At the beginning of the article, with poetic language and fire-like enthusiasm, I strongly expressed my infinite love for the teacher. I don't know how many times better than that kind of "Dear teacher, I have something to say to you …".
3. Scenery description method
Describing the scenery and environment in which the narrative object is located can highlight the specific scenes of the characters' activities and quickly bring the readers into the created artistic conception. Such as "mother's encouragement" begins:
In the early morning, the river is foggy, the willows on the shore hang down their branches, and the river bank extends into the fog in a smooth curve. Several old people are fishing leisurely, and from time to time, several young people come running from the fog. My mother and I are walking by the river.
At the beginning of this article, I described the morning fog, willow trees, river banks, anglers and young people, which set a fresh and smooth environment for writing about the encouragement of mothers, and also showed that mothers had a good education for their children. For this kind of article, you can write about the relationship between the environment and the characters, grasp the development of the situation through the environment, and understand the character of the characters.
4. Contrast and contrast method
At the beginning, the contrast technique is used to directly compare the main object, highlight the charm of the main object, make the beginning of the text like a faucet, and affect the whole text. Such as the article at the beginning of the man next door:
My grandmother always gives a thumbs-up when she mentions Niu Niu across the hall: "That's a good boy!" When neighbor Wang Yi heard the name Niu Niu, he would blow his beard and stare: "He is not a good thing! I will beat him up tomorrow! "
What kind of person is Niu Niu? Come on, let's see the little boy who jumped over!
Before Niu Niu appeared, Grandma "I" and Wang made diametrically opposite comments, so a big question mark was engraved in the reader's mind. When he jumps on the stage, we must look at him with our own eyes. In this way, the image of this clever little man has a distinct performance stage.
5, close-up method
Shoot a specific scene and show the characters. This method avoids the straightforward description of the structure, makes the article ups and downs, deepens the reader's impression and induces the reader's interest in reading.
For example, the article "I can do it" begins like this:
At a general meeting of the whole school, in front of more than 0/000 teachers and students in the audience, a girl stood on the podium in panic, holding a speech in her wordy hands and unable to say a word. Then, with a sigh, he slipped off the stage with a red face.
At the beginning of the article, I wrote a close-up of "I" who was the first representative of the class, highlighting the embarrassing state and helplessness of the characters. Later, he wrote in another speech that winning the championship through hard work made the article ups and downs.
6, teasing humor method
From the beginning, the article attracts readers with teasing brushwork and humorous language. For example, at the beginning of the article, "Wow, there is no homework today":
Time flies, the sun and the moon fly like a shuttle. In a blink of an eye, I was promoted to Grade Three. Homework, but also with the improvement of my level and gradually upgrade. No, the most crucial year of junior high school has arrived. Thanks to the special "care" of teachers in various subjects to increase "nutrition", our homework has become more unbearable like a flood of water. Even when I came home at the weekend, my schoolbag was "full" and carried on my back like a mountain, which made me breathless. Don't watch Little Confused God. Aladdin and God Ding is "goodbye" for us. Instead, it is a snowflake-like test paper and a floor-high exercise paper!
"The more you reduce the burden." In the humorous words, the pressure and troubles of middle school students are revealed and the desire to reduce the burden is expressed.
7. Point-surface combination method
Point is the material that can best express the theme, need to be focused and written in detail, reflect the part of things and express the depth of the article; Face is a general material that can express the theme, but it only summarizes the general material described, reflects the whole picture of things and shows the breadth of the article. Only when the points and surfaces cooperate with each other and set off each other can the objects be colored.
For example, at the beginning of my junior high school life;
In junior high school for three years, classmates get along and are close. In the past three years, my classmates' friendly concern for me is endless and unforgettable. I can't forget my roommate who carried me to the hospital when I was sick. Never forget to send hand-woven gloves to the frostbite-proof deskmate; I can't forget the class cadres who taught me to overcome difficulties again and again; I can't forget the secretary of the League branch who often talks with me and inspires me to be highly motivated; I can't forget the whole class who held a birthday party for my orphan.
At the beginning of the article, I use the parallelism sentence of "I can't forget …" to summarize five touching things that students care about and help me from three aspects: speaking, learning and thinking. It not only outlines the "face" with thick lines, but also naturally leads to the "point" to be written below-birthday party. Enrich the content of the article.
8. Clever use of citation method
Quote: Famous sayings, aphorisms, proverbs and the first fable of folk songs can not only make the article lively, but also play a clear role in opening. For example, the beginning of Wild Fun:
"The endless grass on the plain comes and goes with each season. Wildfire never completely devoured them, and they grew taller again in the spring breeze. " Every time I recite this poem by Bai Juyi, I can't help adding two sentences: "Who knows that there are countless insects hidden in the grass; Dancing with grass makes children happy. " Then I will have such an interesting picture in my mind. When I was a child, I was deeply addicted to exotic flowers and plants.
At the beginning of the article, ancient poetry is quoted, which is novel, unique and ingenious, adding charm to the article.
9 Look at things and think about the past.
The article begins with a description of a special event, then writes about the memories and nostalgia of the past caused by this event, and then writes about the whole process of the event. Rich in writing and realistic. For example, "Remember the old man in the photo" at the beginning of the article:
I have always treasured a photo of me and an old man. The old man is about sixty years old, with a few wisps of silver looming in his thick curly hair, and a pair of gold-rimmed glasses under his heavy eyebrows. His eyes in the glasses are squinting and looking forward. What impressed me most was her wrinkles, which were deeply imprinted on her forehead. Just like my memories of her, they were deeply engraved in my mind, and no matter how washed away by the torrent of time, they would never be erased. This old man is my grandmother.
The article puts pen to paper from the photo, opens the sealed and buried memories, sees things and thinks feelings, and leads to concrete examples of grandma's love for "me" and has real feelings.
10, which generalizes the first suppression method.
Sometimes in order to express an idea, put the pen away first. It's more powerful to collect it first and then release it. For example, the article "Dad in My Eyes" begins like this:
I would rather be my father's student than his daughter! Who in the world doesn't love his daughter, but my father doesn't love me.
In order to express "the spirit of my father's selfless work", I first said "who doesn't love my daughter in the world, only my father doesn't love me in my eyes", laying out the spirit of my father's selfless work, putting it aside first, and making the center more prominent.
Another example is the beginning of my deskmate:
The deskmate is five feet high and three feet wide, with a squat back. She has the charm of Sun Erniang the Raptor and the demeanor of Gu Dasao the female blade. Therefore, people nicknamed her "disaster". !
The opening is unconventional, and the deskmate is unique, especially the nickname from "disaster", which is refreshing. The main part of the article describes the personality characteristics of the deskmate, such as generosity, masculinity, cheerfulness and madness, unique opinions, etc., and vividly depicts the deskmate.
1 1, a metaphor for paving L-shaped arrangement.
This method is to use multiple metaphors to form a parallelism sentence in one go, which makes the article more literary, impactful and infectious. Such as the beginning of "this is life":
Some people say that life is like a cup of mellow wine; Some people say that life is like a bitter fruit that is hard to swallow;
Some people say that life is like an immature sour fruit. I said, life is a five-flavor bottle with everything in it.
The opening of the article focuses on "five flavors bottle" and "bittersweet", revealing the true meaning of life with continuous metaphors and beautiful brushstrokes, laying the foundation for the following development.
12, surprise method
"Odd" means unusual, and "odd" means unique. Attract readers with its novel charm. For example, the homework at the beginning of the article:
What you can't finish reading is books.
All I can hear is nagging,
I'm afraid of the report card.
What you can't do is homework in all subjects.
From the content point of view, this beginning points directly to the theme, indicating that there are many homework and heavy burdens, not only at hand, but also ideologically; From a formal point of view, it is even more ingenious. This arrangement is like a mountain, which makes people breathless.
13, image superposition method
The originator of using image superposition method is Ma Zhiyuan, a master of Yuan Dynasty. The eternal quatrain, "The old vine is faint, and the small bridge is flowing with water," is as simple as 12, which vividly shows the sad and distant artistic conception. This method of arranging words about people, things, things and scenery together almost without modification can often make the language of the article have tension and elasticity, which plays an important role. Such as the beginning of the article "Our Aria":
Dormitories, restaurants and classrooms
Classrooms, restaurants and dormitories.
Short 12 words, using circular and repetitive rhetoric, the monotonous and endless campus life is vividly, accurately, truly and thought-provoking.
14, set the inscription method.
That is, quote a concise famous saying before the text, or write a few philosophical words, which are divided into paragraphs separately as the inscription of the full text. Or show the main content, or reveal the connotation of the article, or highlight the center of the full text, or explain the reasons for writing, so that readers can see the highlights of the work, touch the pulse of emotion and arouse their interest in reading.
For example, the article "Learn to Be Strong" uses such an inscription:
Girl, you seem to be born weak: tears are your twin sisters, a sad face is your faithful companion, and yelling is your inseparable friend. Girl, actually, you have to understand: your name is not weak.
Without reading the text, the parallelism in the inscription fully demonstrates the learners' language skills and highlights the uniqueness of the learners' conception.
Another example is the inscription at the beginning of the article Honesty-the Key to Success:
"Honesty is a stone, knocking out a single spark: honesty is a fire, illuminating the road at night; Integrity is the way to lead you to the light. "
With neat sentence patterns, harmonious rhythm, beautiful implication and profound philosophy, the magnetic force generated by the inscription can stick to readers at once. You don't have to read the text, but you can also roughly understand the main content of the article and feel the author's emotional pulse at the same time.
15, new wine in old bottles
In order to express the needs of the center, it is often interesting to fill in the ready-made poems and pop songs in memory, which is amazing. For example, "I am really tired" begins:
When is the homework exam and how much the teacher knows. I didn't fall asleep while reading last night. When I was young, I couldn't bear to look back. Tears are salty. Cart toys should still exist, but childlike innocence is not lost. How much sorrow to ask heaven is like a headless book with mountains and seas.
Adapted from Little Beauty, the author points out the heavy schoolwork burden under exam-oriented education, and calls for "reducing the burden", "crossing Yumenguan" and "green Jiang Nanan".
Of course, there are many ways to start writing, as long as we read more, think more and write more, your "wonderful"
You can draw a beautiful and elegant "phoenix head" with a pen!