Seek to write an expanded composition

The branches are graceful, and the flowers and leaves are fragrant —— Huang Fuzhong of Tonggu Middle School in Jiangxi Province explains the spring garden with 3362 techniques, and all kinds of flowers and trees are graceful, and the flowers and leaves are fragrant, which is pleasing to the eye; In winter, only bare branches are left, and you feel dull. In the same way as writing an article, "stem" refers to the main idea of the article, while "branch" refers to the story plot and shelf structure; "Mosaic" refers to various specific descriptions of works, such as scenery description, psychological description and so on. To make a work "full of flowers and leaves" is a process of expanding writing. How to add "flowers and leaves" to the "branches" to form the spring garden of our article? First, grasp the prompt, if you don't leave the branches, the flowers will fly and the leaves will fail; If the article is off the center, it is unintelligible. Therefore, we should fully understand the center of the essay and put pen to paper around it. This requires grasping the suggestive sentences in the topic. For example, there is a passage that says: "My parents are not at home, and I am very scared. The home is very quiet, there is no one, it is dark everywhere, and I am always worried that someone will come. " How do you write if you want to expand it into an article? You have to know what to write first. This paragraph is written as "fear", so the following is expanded from "fear" to the following form: "My parents are not at home, and I am alone in the whole house, and I dare not sleep for a long time. I lay in bed and turned the volume of the TV to the maximum, hoping that the noisy sound in the TV would drive away the drowsiness for me. Eyes fixed on the window, my room is just a window, the door has been locked by me, and I moved a table behind it. Only this window, I can't take it. This window is made of wood. What if the bad guys saw it with a silent saw while I was asleep and sneaked into the room? What if those ghosts turn into a smoke and sneak in? What if there is a wolf hiding in the window? ..... I was so scared. Sleepy didn't crawl into my nose and eyes silently, and climbed onto my eyelids. I had to open my eyelids with the most tenacious will, but in the end, I didn't close them, and I fell asleep with high vigilance. In the gloom, I heard the sound of the key opening the door. Suddenly, my heart was like a rabbit, plopping and jumping. I pulled a quilt corner and covered my head, trying to make that sound disappear from my ears. " Close to "fear", from the two tips of "quietness" and "darkness", the pen and ink are expanded, and details such as "turning on the TV", "staring at the window" and "imagining terrible" are added, so as to achieve the purpose of expanding writing. Its basis is "fear" which is "dry". No matter how you imagine it, it is close to its "dry". Second, the five senses add leaves, modify the flowers to make the article concrete and vivid, it is necessary to add flowers and leaves. Leaves, from the five senses; Flowers come from decoration. If the article is leafy, it is necessary to fully mobilize one's senses. What the eyes feel, what the ears hear, what the nose smells, what the tongue tastes and what the body touches are the sources of angles. No matter what article you write, you must come from these five senses. If you add embellishment, appropriate metaphor, exaggeration, personification, etc., it will add flowers to the article. For example, a student wrote, "Military training is really hard. It's very hot, and my face is dripping with sweat." The extension reads as follows: "The sun is slowly getting up, and the light shines on my face, just like being next to a soldering iron. Every second is a long process in my heart. At this point, my legs are no longer listening to me. We have to wash our faces with sweat. The sweat originates from our foreheads, then goes south, joins with the "tributaries" of sweat gushing out halfway, passes through the temples, flows to the flat face "plain", rushes through the valley of "corners of the mouth", and then rushes to the neck along the chin "waterfall", where it is absorbed by clothes. I want to wipe the sweat and "cut off the river", but I can't move in a military posture, and the military orders are like mountains! " The angle is the feeling of touching, but it is vivid because of the use of personification (the sun "rises"), exaggeration ("every second" is a "long" and "interception") and metaphor ("flat face plain" and "mouth valley"), which makes me feel the pain of military training and the beauty of words. Third, associative imagination, the feeling of the five senses with twists and turns in the plot is ordinary, while the play of imagination and association is creative. Let the irrelevant become relevant, let the ordinary become tortuous and moving, which will give play to our subjective initiative on the basis of sticking to the tree. It's not surprising that crabs walk sideways, but putting a "Fahai monk" in it leads to rampage, which makes animals associated with myths and greatly enriches the content of the article. Then we can also use this method in our writing. Seeing that there is a corner missing from the table, it seems that there is nothing to write, but it is linked with Sun Quan's decision to resist Cao Cao, and this corner missing has become a symbol of the decision. The same topic: "Military training is really bitter, it is very hot, and my face is dripping with sweat." It is written as follows: one piece, two pieces, three pieces ... No, this is the first time in my life that I count leaves so boring. "Keep your head straight and look straight ahead." Oh, my God, instructor, can you say something new? It's too difficult to kill time under his nose. That leaf that I have counted thousands of times should be pierced, because my eyes have been staring at it without moving, and the rope saw is still broken, let alone the "laser" in my eyes. The sun shows its energy to the fullest. Usually, many thick clouds don't know where to lie. The melanin of the skin is expanding on the body. H2O molecules are unwilling to be lonely, and they are in cahoots with NaCl molecules, and they are freely on my face and body. The hot sand on the soles of your feet robbed while it was hot, burning the earth mercilessly, making your feet like stepping on fire. I don't know if Zhou Wang also stood in the sand and knew how his feet felt, so he invented the torture of "branding". This passage can be described as rich in associations: imagine eyes piercing leaves, think of chemical biology, and think of the punishment of "branding". The following paragraph of the title of the composition is Liu Qi's plan in the romance of the Three Kingdoms: "Liu Qi is not satisfied with his stepmother, but seeks his plan in Kong Ming;" Kong Ming repeatedly evaded, and later saw that Liu Qi was very sincere, so he designed it for him. " Please expand it into an article. Requirements: ① Except poetry, the style is not limited. ② No less than 5 words. ③ Do not copy. Liu Qi asked Liu Qi to invite Kong Ming into the backyard. After drinking tea, Liu Qi said, "I am not accepted by my stepmother. I hope you can try to save me." Kong Ming said: "I live here, how dare I do something that makes my family hostile?" If it is leaked, it will do me a lot of harm. " Say that finish, got up to leave. Liu Qi said, "Since you have come, how can you leave?" So he asked Kong Ming to enter the secret room to drink. During the drinking, Liu Qi said, "My stepmother won't let me. Please think of a way for me." Kong Ming said, "I didn't dare to come up with this idea." Say that finish, want to leave again. Liu Qi said, "Sir, if you don't say forget it, why should you leave?" Kong Mingcai sat down again. Liu Qi said, "I have an ancient book that I want you to read." So he took Kong Ming to a small attic. Kong Ming said, "Where are the books?" Liu Qi cried and bowed down and said, "My stepmother won't let me, and my life will be in danger. Can my husband bear not to think for me and save me?" Kongming's face changed greatly, and he stood up to leave, but the stairs had already been withdrawn. Liu Qi told me, "I can't get to the sky today, but I can't get to the ground. Say it from your mouth and put it in my ear. Don't worry about leakage. Can you teach me how to save my life?" Kong Ming said, "I can't alienate other people's relatives. How can I give you advice?" Liu Qi said, "Sir, are you really unwilling to teach me? Anyway, my life will be over sooner or later. Let me die in front of you, sir? " So he picked up his sword and tried to commit suicide. Only then did Kong Ming stop helplessly and said, "Well, don't commit suicide. I have a good idea for you." The characteristic analysis article is originally from Luo Guanzhong's Romance of the Three Kingdoms, which conforms to the three methods of expansion. 1, closely linked to "ask plan" this center to expand writing. This can be seen from grasping the prompt sentence in the topic ("seeking the plan", "repeatedly evading" and "very earnestly"), and the expanded content is inseparable from the prompt sentence, which can be said to be inseparable from the branches. 2, Lenovo imagination, plot twists and turns. Liu Qi tried again and again, and Kongming tried again and again, but Liu Qi kept it politely. He tricked Kongming into the secret room from the back hall and into the small building, and removed the ladder. Finally, he threatened to commit suicide. Only then did Kongming express his willingness to design. In this way, Liu Qi's sincerity and Kong Ming's caution are vividly depicted. This is the essence of expansion. Exercise 1. According to the following materials, write a narrative with a self-made topic of not less than 5 words. Summer night, in the yard, under the buttonwood ... Bang! With a subtle and clear burst, an old skin of the buttonwood peeled off, revealing a fresh new skin. My daughter gave a string of praises to the old bark ... My son gave a string of praises to the new bark ... My father listened, watched and said with deep feelings, "I hope everything on earth can be like what you said ..." Requirements: (1) Describe the environment and atmosphere in detail. (2) Write the specific words of the daughter and son and the unfinished words of the father, and write the expression of the characters. [Cue prompt] (1) Stick to the trunk: This article will expand three ellipsis points, but which two points in the second paragraph must be used as the prompt points for these three expansion points? (2) The description of the environmental atmosphere in the first paragraph should not be too much, and its atmosphere is quiet? Busy? You can see it from the second paragraph of the title. (3) Why is the old bark amazing and what does it symbolize? Why is the new bark worthy of praise and what does it symbolize? What is the internal relationship between "everything in the world" and the object of admiration and praise? Prompt answer: (1) The peeling of old bark and the exposure of new bark (2) Quiet, which can be seen from the second paragraph "with a small and clear explosion", because the peeling sound of bark is very small, but it can be heard, indicating quiet. The environmental description of the first paragraph should serve the lofty expression of bark in the back. (3) Tip: Old bark gives way actively, and new bark comes out actively. 2. Read the outline of the following story and expand it into a narrative as required. In ancient times, there was a young beggar begging in front of an old lady. The old lady looked at him and threw half a bun to the dog very angrily. The young beggar was humiliated and went to join the army as soon as he was cruel. He was brave in the battlefield, and became a general several years later. One day, he led his troops and horses to March past the village where the old lady lived, and he found the old lady again ... Requirements: to expand imagination and write the story completely and reasonably. It is necessary to properly use psychological behavior, speech action description and other methods to expand and make the characters vivid. No less than 6 words. For the innovative test questions, please expand "an apricot comes out of the wall" from the perspectives of apricot and wall respectively. Require different central ideas. 1. From the perspective of apricot, to express apricot, expand an article of about 4 words. 2. From the perspective of the wall, to express the wall, expand an article of about 4 words. Writing guidance 1. The new point of this topic is not only to expand writing, but also to pay attention to writing angle. Let's look at the following two sentences: A man was walking, and when he reached the river, he was knocked down by a stone. In this passage, people are the main body, and this person is not careful. A stone by the river knocked the people who were walking down. (In this passage, the stone is the main body, and this stone is not placed in the right place.) The emphasis of expansion is different from different angles. Therefore, when expanding the writing, it is necessary to make clear the angle, and whoever writes from it will be the subject. 2. From the perspective of Apricot, the reason why Apricot goes out of the wall should be expanded: Apricot should not be satisfied with the small world in the garden and dare to break through the obstacles, not only let the people in the garden feel the spring, but also let the outsiders feel the spring. When expanding writing, we can use psychological description, action description and other scenery to express apricot. From the perspective of the wall, you should take the wall as the subject. The wall protects apricots from being picked when they are small, just as parents protect them from being hurt by foreign objects when they are young; The wall surrounds the apricot, which is the tempering of the apricot, so that the red apricot can experience the joy of success in climbing. We can find that the angle of expansion is different from different angles, especially the subject has changed.