Appreciation of Three Poems for Women

These three poems are all about Qin Jia leaving his hometown for military service and wanting to leave his wife, who was unable to come back to see him because of illness. It was sad to be away from service, and it was even more sad not to be able to leave my beloved wife. Therefore, I wrote three poems to express my farewell to my wife and my thoughts about her.

The first poem begins with a discussion. First of all, it expresses deep feelings about life: "Is life like morning dew?" Happy parties are often bitter and late. "Poetry depends on thinking in images, but these four sentences are logical thinking, which is generally easy to destroy poetry. However, replacing it here enhances the artistic effect of this poem. The reason is that there is a strong emotion in the discussion, and the words are meticulous and touching. The emotional atmosphere was enriched by these four sentences, showing a straightforward discussion. Moreover, the four sentences sum up the shortness and hardships of life on a large scale, which makes the whole poem mention an important height to understand what the poet and his wife can't face and create a lofty realm for the whole poem. The poem goes from emptiness to reality, from argument to narration, and then tells the story of his failure to say goodbye to his wife. I want to tell the time, I want to stay away from my wife every day, and I want my wife to come back and say goodbye. Who knows that my wife can't come back? When I saw her letter, I was sad. "I can't eat without food." I sat in an empty room and stayed up all night. This narrative is not false, not a metaphor, but a story about Chen Qi. But because the narrative is full of emotion, every word is full of emotion and profound meaning. In addition, because we can choose distinctive things in the narrative, such as writing about the car's "empty return", reading the letter's "sadness" and "unable to eat" when eating, no one in the empty room "comforted" to be sad and tearful, and it is self-evident without emotion.

The second song was abrupt, in order to ask questions to the emperor's spirit, and suddenly pushed the mood to the peak. When people are sad, they often complain about others. Qu Yuan was demoted to write Tian Wen and put forward 170 reasons for going to heaven in one breath. In "Eighteen Beats of Hu Jia", Cai Wenji also shouted "Heaven is ruthless, I am chaotic, and I am ruthless, so I met you this time." "Why don't you see me drifting alone?" Qin Jia put forward the same view at the beginning of this poem. He thought, since "the emperor's spirit is selfless, it is good for the lotus", then why "it hurts me and the children are lonely" and why "it has a sense of justice, but it is not happy enough", the author's anger and dissatisfaction suddenly reached a peak, which set the emotional tone for the whole poem. Let's relax and express our parting feelings in a gentle tone such as crying and complaining. Or through metaphor: "There is no boat beam in the river, and the road is near the hilly land." No matter how far the road is, there are all kinds of obstacles in the middle, which makes it difficult for him and his wife to meet each other. Or love in the scenery: "Clouds rise from the mountains, and hate Taiwan to shock the deep valley." I felt that the mountains at that time were like gloomy clouds, and even the deep valleys were like a platform, creating a sad atmosphere. Or love, that the horse doesn't listen to you and the car doesn't move on the road. All kinds of subjective feelings have stained everything around us with the emotional color of parting. The last four sentences express one's mind directly, and let the emotion arouse the climax. "Acupuncture can be used repeatedly", but constant worry is unbearable, and then it shows that you are firm in love. Therefore, the farewell feeling of the whole poem is consistent with the previous performance, forming a harmonious unity.

The third song created a parting atmosphere from the beginning. Outside, the driver has arrived and the car bell rings. The overlapping words "Su Su" and "Tang Qiang" are used to describe the speed of driving, the sound of ringing the bell and the feeling of being in a hurry. The interior is another scene: the poet is dressed up and ready to leave, and then looks back at the empty room. He can only vaguely see his wife's appearance and figure in his imagination. He can't see his wife when he is on a long trip. The poet is restless, indoor and outdoor, with different situations, but all of them are unified in "parting", which makes the atmosphere of parting strong. The poet also expressed his deep affection for his wife with gifts. Baochai, Spiegel, Aromatherapy and Su Qin were all left to his wife by Qin Jia before he left. Qin Jia has a sentence in "Re-reporting Wife's Letter": "I am very happy to get this mirror suddenly, which is both bright and good. Therefore, a pair of precious treasure chai, made by the phase, the dragon and tiger group stretch fragrance. A piano often plays by itself. The mirror can identify the shape, Baochai can shine on the head, the fragrance can be fragrant and smelly, the musk can dispel evil spirits, and the pipa can entertain the ears. " This shows the preciousness of these four things. Because it is precious, it naturally expresses the author's voice. However, the author still laments that The Book of Songs Papaya should repay the other party with better things, and modestly thinks that what his wife gave him in the past is very precious, and many things he gave his wife are still very few and worthless now, so he can't repay his wife's deep affection for himself, but what is valuable is that he can use it to express his little heart. Only when it is precious but inferior can it show that the poet's love is selfless and profound. This deep expression is better than the book of songs and papaya, and has achieved more ideal artistic effects.