What is caring
Caring is the deep concern of one heart for another, and it is the bond that connects family, friendship and love. Concern is a family affection, a wisp of acacia, a kind of happiness.
Concern is a life form, a spiritual place and a psychological magnetic field that all people should seek and cherish. The best way to identify the depth of feelings is the length of concern. The beautiful legend of "Peacock flies southeast", the eternal swan song of "Meng Jiangnu cries for the Great Wall", the joys and sorrows of "butterfly lovers" and the wonderful sentence of "Thinking of your husband is like a full moon, and the brightness decreases every night" all describe the story that your face is getting thinner and thinner because of concern, until you pay your life, leaving us with a true and sincere sad beauty. 、?
Caring is a cup of rich emotional nectar, a farewell blessing. Parents' concern for their children is like a cloud, floating around with the birds in the sky, crossing the waters of Qian Shan and lingering in their children's hearts. The concern between brothers and sisters is like a mountain stream, which is clear and transparent. As long as the mountain is not old, it will keep flowing, drinking songs and splashing all the way. The concern between husband and wife is like a graceful word, lingering and distant, and acacia often makes tears touch the towel. There is also the concern between friends that does not contain blood relationship and is not mixed with selfish distractions, which can often give people endless strength and courage. ?
caring is a precious emotion between people. It has no false impurities and no utilitarian color. Caring is generous and selfless dedication, deep blessing and silent prayer. Concern is not an illusory mirage, but a real detail and action. Buying a pill and squeezing a little toothpaste is a sign of concern; Asking "good morning" and saying "good night" are expressions of concern; A greeting card, a letter from home, a phone call, a message ... are the embodiment of caring. ?
caring makes people taste the ups and downs in life, adding a beautiful scenery to life. If there is no concern in the world, it is like a plant lacking sunshine and rain; A person who doesn't care about anything, like a walking corpse, has a life in the air, and it is difficult to glow with the brilliance of life. Life needs warmth, sweetness, spring breeze, and summer rain ... Worrying is a whisper of the soul and a dialogue between the hearts. Caring for others and being cared for by others is a kind of happiness. Let each of us understand caring, taste caring, learn caring, and make life colorful, so that the world of people will become more colorful and enter life. With care, there is emotional sustenance. "the thread in the hands of a fond-hearted mother, makes clothes for the body of her wayward boy" is full of family concerns; "Young people leave home when they are old, and the local accent has not changed." It is a concern that overflows the nostalgia; "I wish people a long time, and thousands of miles of * * * are beautiful" is the concern of wandering love; "It is a pity to know from a distance where brothers climb, and there is one less person in the dogwood"; "take home an armful, for my sake, as a symbol of our love" is the sustenance of caring; "Persuade you to have a glass of wine, and you will leave Yangguan for no reason in the west", which is the implication of concern?
I picked up a kitten, which was abandoned by a big cat and named diu diu. Now it hasn't opened its eyes, and its body is not as big as a mobile phone. It needs to be fed with cat milk powder every two hours, and it has to wipe its ass frequently, because there is no mother cat to take care of it, for fear that it will be suffocated. The temperature must be guaranteed. It's so cold now, so we have to put it in a small box filled with cotton and put it on the heater. ?
But I have to go to work during the day. I am very worried about such a small kitten. My mother can take care of it at home after retirement, but I can't put my heart down.
is this simple and ordinary, but what is it so worrying about? ?
the moon without face?
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the bright moon is flawless and beautiful. ?
from the Shang and Zhou dynasties, Qin and Han dynasties began. ?
in the three waves of history, poets sailed by boat, and with concern for the golden sky, the eternal swan song stood out from the beautiful poems in Kyoto. ?
invite a cup of bright moon? Three people in the opposite film?
If there is no more concern for this secular world, then the invitation of the poet Taibai proves that he still has some nostalgia for the moon. This arrogant and somewhat romantic person has experienced ups and downs, enjoyed luxurious food and suffered from being trapped by fame and fortune. Looking at the clouds above Zhu Ge and thinking about singing, there will be a beautiful sentence that will last forever. ?
This round of the moon without face made the poet fantasize with all his might. ?
The Jade Emperor over nine days, the fragrance of Chang 'e waving sleeves, and the rich secret juice of flat peaches ..., even though he was depressed, he still stood up and sang "I drank alone. There was no one with me" and read "to cheer me through the end of spring". ?
Mizuki Hajime now? Luotuo smile?
If we look into modern times, the definition of a poet may no longer be narrow. For the moon, the poet regards it as a concern. Haizi lies on the track during the day, so presumably he doesn't want the moon to see his sad appearance. In the cold and green night, Haizi was worried about her sister. At the beginning of the full moon, she caught a glimpse of the face of the moon, and her pen was more profound, so she was worried about nothing. ?
This round of the moon without face is my sister's gentle face. ?
a cold moon in a smoke cage? Qinhuai lamp shadow?
"The smoke cage is cold and the moon is full of sand. Park near Qinhuai restaurant at night. Business women don't know how to hate the country, and they still sing backyard flowers across the river. " Du Mu always wanders sadly on the Qinhuai River. ?
"yushu backyard flower" comes to a sombre end, and the tears of the king of national subjugation gently bounce off. Facing this faceless moon, I care about this wisp of moon soul and the survival of the whole world. I have seen many bustling beautiful images and chivalrous and kind-hearted swordsmen. Du Mu is singing about the moon and boating on the blue sky. ?
through the ages, the sound of chanting and worrying about the moon has been circulating intermittently. ?
There is no doubt that the moon should bear the weight of history. The poet's concern endows Chan Juan with unparalleled color, and even if she has no face, she is still moving and beautiful. ?
It is caring that makes the moon look moving, and makes the poet yearn for the light selflessly and fearlessly. ?
Concerned about the moon, how sad the poet looks at people's livelihood. ?
concerned about the moon without face, the poet is concerned about the whole world. ?
Look up at the moon and lower your head to miss your hometown. The moon on fire bears too many unspeakable secrets. ?
people's livelihood depends on the poet's care. Long-term life is not a dream, only those who read it have the heart! ?
Comment: The moon is often synonymous with loneliness and care. The author chose three subheadings, which made the care and faint sadness so calm, and could not help but immerse readers in the artistic conception of poetry. From the perspective of poetry, the author is concerned about handwriting, and uses poems and parallelism in many places, which makes it more beautiful. At the end, it is clear that the article is more complete by focusing on the topic of concern. (Hu Xinyuan, Class 4, Grade 1, Jinhua No.4 Middle School)?
growing up with care?
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Love is the true meaning of life, caring is the source and soul of love, and every caring is the edification and sublimation of emotion. -inscription?
Worrying is like rain, which can help you wash away your irritability and leave you cool. Concern is like the wind, which can help you raise your sails and succeed; Caring about the sun can help you get rid of the cold and feel warm. My father's exquisite movements made me feel the most sincere love in the world. ?
it turns out that I have been growing up with care! ?
is the smoke fragrant?
Since I entered the third grade, I have gone out early and returned late, so I don't have much time to chat with my family. Suddenly one day, I found that my father had smoked. Soon, he smelled of smoke, especially in the evening, and the whole room was filled with smoke. ?
one day, when I came home, I heard my father discussing something with my uncle, so I looked through the door. "Well, my daughter is going to take the senior high school entrance examination. Seeing that she is so busy these two days, will her body be too much?" Dad lit the cigarette in his hand with a lighter. Uncle said deeply, "it's okay, just these days." At this time, my father took a deep breath of cigarette and spit it out gently. "This child will not say anything when she is bitter. If she has any difficulties in her study and life, we can help her." The words sound just fell and my vision was blurred by something ...?
It turns out that my father cares about me day and night, and smoking is just a catharsis of his concern. When I relived the smell of smoke, I found that it had a faint fragrance, which was my father's love and concern for me. ?
is the light warm?
When I entered the third grade, more and more studies made me a little breathless, and I often felt inexplicably agitated. I always closed the door of my study and stayed up late at night alone. ?
My father always walks into the room quietly when I am immersed in my studies. I notice it slightly. I just look up at him, and then I sink myself into many mathematical formulas. Then I seemed to feel a flash of light overhead. I looked up in surprise and saw my father carefully adjusting the illumination angle of the floor lamp until the light dispelled every inch of shadow on the exercise book, which could make my eyes less tired when I looked at the exercise book for a long time. Looking at the bright exercise book, I suddenly felt a warmth in my heart. I looked up and saw my father's kind smile ...?
Only then did I realize that my father's concern for me, just like the faint light, does not need to be as dazzling as sunshine, but always brings me endless warmth in the dark. ?
smile and watch?
Once again, my father sent me to school. When I left, I said goodbye to my father with a bright smile. Father said, "You go in first, and I'm leaving." I am reluctant to walk to school with heavy steps. ?
I suddenly had an idea: look back at my father. Just as I came to the corner, I stopped and looked back. I saw my father still standing at the school gate, and his affectionate eyes were saying goodbye to me. There was a faint smile on my father's face that I had never seen before. In his eyes, I found the most beautiful thing in the world-caring. ?
I will never forget my father's concern and love. ?
Colorful flowers, which have been baptized by sunshine and moistened by drizzle, have given their graceful faces to decorate the world. I accept the watering of my father's love and grow up in his care! ?
comment: this article does not list earth-shattering events to express the topic of "caring", but uses three most ordinary things in life, which are very real and have real feelings. This article reminds people of Zhu Ziqing's prose "The Back". Indeed, there are many similarities between the two, and the description of "father" is very subtle, which makes the image of this loving father seem to really appear in front of us. ?
The article is not long, but it makes people think a lot. For example, "he smells of smoke, especially in the evening" will remind people that "father" is smoking and waiting for "I" to come back in the evening; Another example is that "there is a faint smile on my father's face that I have never seen before", which reminds people that in recent years, "father" is worried about "me" and rarely smiles. The author didn't write all this, but he didn't say anything. ? (Commentator: Class 4, Grade 1, Jinhua No.4 Middle School? Hao Changle)?
Dots are tears?
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when it rains at dawn, where is the past? A pool of broken ping, three points of spring, two points of concern, one miss. It seems that it is not a flower, but a little bit is a tear! ? -inscription?
worried about you on the other side?
more than a hundred years ago, thunderstorms and heavy rain poured down. The raging wind rushed to the boat carrying the child, and the child and the mother on the shore cried bitterly, but to no avail. In this way, the flesh and blood separated. The wind is whistling, and it smiles at this scene, laughing at the thin mother who can't change the fate of separation of flesh and blood. Time goes by, but Wan Li, thousands of miles away, can't stop the mother from thinking about her son. Mother, a great mother, has finally driven away the darkness and ushered in the light through decades of struggle. ?
Finally, on a sunny morning, my mother sailed in a boat to find the child who was separated many years ago. However, the child hesitated. He lingered on the coast and refused to get on the boat ...?
Mother calls again and again: Taiwan Province, Taiwan Province ... The fishing lights on the fishing boat are still on. Through the slight fire, there are mother's hazy tears, and even more, she is worried about you on the other side-Taiwan Province-her dear child! ?
concerned about eternal heroes?
Deep night, heavy dreams, snow falling all over the floor, pale wanderer's dreams; White and heavy, the snow fell on the pole, taking away the bright smiling faces of the electric workers; Passionate and full of meaning, take our care and wish you all the best. ?
Snowstorm, in this war without smoke, in this war between man and nature, storms and severe cold have never frightened Chinese people. They-Luo Wenhai, Luo Changming and Zhou Jinghua, three ordinary and great heroes, worked continuously for six days, and boarded? 59 meters? In the aerial work ... They finally fell down in the white snow. ?
eternal hero, go all the way! The clear sky is our blessing and concern for you, and the continuous drizzle is our tears for seeing you off! ?
concerned about the lost compatriots?
In that ruins, on those lovely schoolbags, we seem to be able to see the warmth and peace of this hot land, and we can also feel the greatness and courage of the people of Sichuan. In order to protect the four students, Mr. Tan, who sheltered the children with his own body, the substitute teacher who was crushed to death to save the children, and the great mother, the short message "I love you forever, my child". The young teachers who held the students' hands tightly and never let go of them gave us too much shock. I can only observe silence, and I can only send a figure that I care about and accompany you to die. ?
Care, a kind of love from the heart, because of care, the wanderer who travels far away comes back with tears; Because of concern, the lost compatriots are no longer lonely; Because of caring, there will be tears flowing quietly in people's eyes! ?
Comments: This article adopts the form of subheadings to organize the full text, which is well-structured and clear. Inscription "When it rains, where is the past?"? A pool of broken ping, three points of spring, two points of concern, one miss. It seems that it is not a flower, but a little bit is a tear! " Rich in poetry, it makes a good opening for the full text, which makes readers shine at the moment and is fascinating, and it is worth learning. ?
the content of the article focuses on three facts: "Taiwan Province, snowstorm and earthquake", which are described delicately and organically combined with facts and feelings. The facts are true and touching, and the feelings are rich and warm. "Deep night, heavy dreams, snow falling all over the floor, pale wanderer's dream; White and heavy, the snow fell on the pole, taking away the bright smiling faces of the electric workers; Passionate, full of meaning, with our concern, I wish you a good journey ",which makes the feelings melt into the scenery, infect people's hearts and is very vivid." ? The only deficiency is that there is only one paragraph in the third subtitle, and a small summary should be added to make the upper and lower structures consistent. In addition, some words and expressions are inappropriate and need to be modified and polished. (Commentator: Jinhua No.4 Middle School? Class 4, Grade 1? Zhang Jingmiao)?
concerned? Some people care about their families, because home is a warm harbor; Some people care about friends, because friends are intimate partners; Some people care about the motherland, because the homeland is the eternal mother ...? ... but have you ever seen anyone who cares about a cup? A broken porcelain cup with a broken handle. ? Last summer vacation, I went to my mother's breakfast shop to help. Every morning when the sun is dim, I make soybean milk for customers, send it to each table cheerfully, and then accept the praise from my uncles and aunts. However, there was an old man who never said much, let alone praised him. Every morning, he beats soybean milk with a broken cup. The cup is quite old, even if it is broken, its body is full of cracks in ceramic glaze. But these are in the elderly