First, scene import.
Play a song: "Only Mom is Good in the World"
Love is the greatest and most selfless feeling in the world, and it is also an eternal theme in the history of Chinese and foreign literature. Tagore's "Golden Flower" created a naughty child image with the help of golden flowers, expressing deep affection for his mother. How is Mother Lotus reflected?
Second, the accumulation of words.
Bindi: A part of melon, fruit, etc. Connected to a trunk or branch.
R: lucky.
Hanba (hàndàn): Lotus.
Páihuái: Go back and forth in one place.
Hey (ask): Tilt.
Shading: Shading.
Blossom: A good omen for flowers.
Lotus: receptacle of lotus after flowering.
Comfortable: comfortable.
Pavilion: ① Describe towering; ② Describe the beauty of people or flowers and trees, which is the same as Tingting.
Blocking: blocking, blocking.
Third, approach the author.
Bing Xin (1900 ~ 1999), formerly known as Xie Wanying, is a modern essayist, poet and children's writer from Changle, Fujian. His representative works include Stars and Springs. A collection of essays for young readers.
Bing Xin's creative contents include maternal love, innocence and nature. It is famous for advocating "philosophy of love", and maternal love is the fundamental starting point of "philosophy of love".
Four, about prose poetry:
Prose poetry is a style with the characteristics of both prose and poetry, which is generally short in length and has the artistic conception of poetry and the expressive force of prose.
The appearance is prose, but the essence is poetry.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) Listen to the text and feel the whole.
1, grasp the main idea of the article. After listening, ask the students to sum up the main idea. )
This essay uses scenery to write people, expresses feelings with objects, writes people with flowers, and evokes natural praise for maternal love and mother-daughter affection. To write about lotus is to write about "I", and to write about lotus leaf is to write about mother, so that "I" is the lotus in the wind and rain, and mother is the lotus leaf that resists the wind and rain for lotus. Yes, even the lotus leaf will consciously protect the lotus, not to mention the mother loves her children. Pure maternal love always comes quietly when we encounter storms, giving us comfort and strength; Selfless maternal love will always protect us and accompany us for life.
2, clarify the structure level
Starting with the lotus in my yard, this paper focuses on the lotus in the rain, and writes the scene of playing red lotus and lotus leaf to protect the lotus in my yard. In the rain, the author found that the lotus leaf covered the lotus flower and touched himself, so he had associations, remembered his mother and the scene of his mother taking care of the children, so he took this opportunity to express his feelings for his mother to protect the growth of the children.
3. In what way does this article evoke memories of family events?
Use the method of touching the scene to draw out the memories of family past events. The lotus sent by my father's friend introduced the red lotus I saw in my yard nine years ago and introduced nature.
Sixth, inquiry reading.
1. Why did the author start with the lotus in his yard? What is the focus of the text? Why did you mention my grandfather and my reward nine years ago?
2. Article 4 Look at Honglian. What was the environment like at that time? Where is Honglian? How did the author's mood change?
3. What role does the writer's emotional change play in the text? What's the role of "raindrops come to my heart, who is my shade under the unobstructed sky except you" at the end of the film?
4. At the end of the paragraph, "Mom! You are a lotus leaf, I am a red lotus, and the raindrops in my heart are coming. Except you, who is my shade under the unobstructed sky? " What kind of feelings does it contain?
There are many lotus flowers in the garden, so only two of them are chosen to write. What expression does the author use here? What's the use?
6. "Raindrops kept beating, and only on the brave and kind lotus leaf, some water drops with weak circulation were gathered. I was deeply touched. " The author saw a big lotus leaf next to the red lotus, slowly tilted over and was deeply moved by it. Why?
Discuss and show in groups, and the teacher makes it clear:
1. Why did the author start with the lotus in his yard? What is the focus of the text? Why did you mention my grandfather and my reward nine years ago?
(1) Because the rain hit the red lotus in my yard, the scene of lotus leaves protecting the lotus touched me and I had an association. "I" is a lotus flower blown by wind and rain, and my mother is a lotus leaf to shelter the lotus flower from the wind and rain. Writing about lotus is about "I", and writing about lotus leaf is about mother. Full of love, naturally associated with mother's care and care, warm and touching. So I take this opportunity to express my feelings for my mother and protect the growth of my children.
(2) Red lotus is the focus of the whole paper. The text is written from the lotus in your own yard, focusing on the lotus in the rain.
(3) Before writing about the rain beating the red lotus and lotus leaves protecting the lotus, the author first wrote about enjoying the lotus with his grandfather nine years ago, and made a plain preparation, putting the flowers in the background of people, knowing that the flowers are auspicious, and the opening of the three-layer lotus shows auspicious signs, closely linking the flowers with people, laying the groundwork for the following metaphor of people with flowers.
2. Article 4 Look at Honglian. What was the environment like at that time? Where is Honglian? How did the author's mood change?
3. What role does the writer's emotional change play in the text? What's the role of "raindrops come to my heart, who is my shade under the unobstructed sky except you" at the end of the film?
In the text, the author's emotions range from "boredom" to "discomfort" and from "discomfort" to "uneasy mood", which shows the author's feelings about the fate of flowers.
The ending is simple, Zhang Xianzhi. Raindrops in nature are visible and tangible, but "raindrops in the heart" are invisible, involving a wide range and complicated contents. Who but mother can hide them? This pushed maternal love to a climax.
4. At the end of the paragraph, "Mom! You are a lotus leaf, I am a red lotus, and the raindrops in my heart are coming. Except you, who is my shade under the unobstructed sky? " What kind of feelings does it contain?
Lotus is "me", lotus leaf is mother, warm and touching, with deep love. Motherly love is boundless and great. "Rain in my heart" refers to the ups and downs on the road of life. Only mother is the one who protects us through the ups and downs of life. Mother is the person who will always shelter us from the wind and rain in our life.
There are many lotus flowers in the garden, so only two of them are chosen to write. What expression does the author use here? What's the use?
Two lotus flowers, two red and one white, one grateful and one serene, with white lining red, under the brave and compassionate lotus leaf, highlight the happiness of red-violet
6. "Raindrops kept beating, and only on the brave and kind lotus leaf, some water drops with weak circulation were gathered. I was deeply touched. " The author saw a big lotus leaf next to the red lotus, slowly tilted over and was deeply moved by it. Why?
Because the lotus leaf leaned over and covered the red lotus, just like the mother sheltered from the wind and rain, she covered the red lotus fearlessly, and the author was moved. Lamenting her mother's devotion to herself means that when she is in trouble, only her mother helps herself selflessly.
Seven, expand training:
( 1)
Xiaohua/also wants to look up/thanks for the love of Chunguang-/However, deep kindness/makes him finally silent/Mom/Are you that Chunguang?
1, obviously want to "thank spring", but "finally silent". Why didn't you say it? What kind of thoughts and feelings are contained in this.
Because he realized that a few words of thanks were not enough to repay Love in Spring, silence contained deeper gratitude and respect.
2. The last sentence implies a special gratitude to your mother. You can supplement this gratitude through the last sentence and use your imagination to supplement it.
I am that little flower.
3. This poem is very close to the idea expressed in Ode to a Wanderer by Meng Jiao in Tang Dynasty. Can you write that poem from memory?
Who can say that a filial child like the weak can repay his mother's love like the sunshine in spring?
(2)
Green shoots and young people say, "develop yourself!" " "
The pale flower and the young man said, "contribute yourself!" " "
Red fruit and youth said, "sacrifice yourself!" "
1. The rhetorical devices used in this poem are parallelism and personification.
2. The words development, contribution and sacrifice are used in the poem, which put forward different requirements for young people in different periods.
3. What is the writing purpose of the author of this poem?
Encourage young people to strive for progress, self-dedication and self-sacrifice.
4, appreciate this poem, the inappropriate one is (c)
The color words such as "light green", "light white" and "deep red" in the poem skillfully point out that time is advancing and things are moving and changing.
B. This poem shows the poet's wishes and ideals when exploring the road of life.
C "bud", "flower" and "fruit" are actually the embodiment of the author.
D. this poem has three paragraphs, and the sentence structure is basically the same.
(3)
1. Word game: Please try to complete the association between "house" and "tea", "moon" and "flower".
House → (owner), (owner) → (guest), (drinking water )→ (drinking water), (drinking water )→ tea.
Moon → (Sun), (Sun) → (Earth), (Earth) → (Garden), (Garden) → Flowers.
2. Imitate examples.
Music, like a clear and sweet spring, flows into people's hearts and washes away the dirt in their hearts.
(1) Winter is like a charitable old man, covering wheat with a thick quilt, so that it can spend its delicate childhood safely.
(2) The teacher's words are like a happy key, which opens the lock of my heart and raises my confident sail again.
(3) I'm soaked to the skin, and I feel like I've fallen into icehouse, and I'm cold from head to toe.
Eight, homework: "guided learning exercise".