Year: Tang Dynasty
Author Cen Can
Look, how fast the Benma River runs to Xue Hai! And sand, from the desert, yellow flies to heaven.
On the night of the ninth month, there was a cold wind blowing in the wheel tower and the valley, and the valley was full of broken stones like pecking wood.
Down, forward, with the wind. Although the grass is gray and the Tatar horse is plump,
To the west of Jinshan, smoke is everywhere. General of China Army, start your battle! .
Wear your armor all night and let your soldiers March with rumbling weapons! ,
And the sharp wind tip cuts the face like a knife. Sweat like snow on horseback,
Freeze a five-flowered coin pattern, you come from the challenge of the camp, and you come from the ink bottle of ice.
It has cooled the heart of the barbarian leader, and you will no longer need a real battle! ,
We are waiting for the news of victory in Xiguan! .
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Precautions:
Zoumachuan: Also known as Zuomo River, it is now the Cher River in Xinjiang. Luntai: In today's Miquan County, Xinjiang. Military adviser: It seems to be a mechanic. Hengtang retired as a military adviser. The automobile market is the seat of Tang Anxi Duhu House, now Turpan County, Xinjiang.
1, Jinshan: Altai Mountain.
2. Han family: this refers to the Tang Dynasty through the Han Dynasty.
3, even money: the markings on the horse.
Brief analysis:
In the poem, we grasp the scenery with frontier characteristics and describe the dangers of the environment, thus setting off the dauntless heroism of the foot soldiers. The use of metaphor, exaggeration and other artistic techniques is thrilling, vivid and enthusiastic. The rhyme of the whole verse sentence is rare in seven-character ancient poems. Except for the first two sentences, three sentences have become rhymes.
Rhyme translation:
Don't you see,
The vast Zoumachuan, near the snowy seaside,
The vast desert, yellow sand rolling into the blue sky.
The autumn wind roared day and night on the platform in September.
The rubble in Zoumachuan is as big as a bucket.
The wind swept away and the stone flew away.
The grassland of Xiongnu turned yellow precisely because the horse gained weight in autumn.
On the west side of Jinshan, there is chaos and smoke flying everywhere.
The Han family will be ordered to lead troops to the west.
The general wears armor, which he keeps on taking off day and night.
Marching in the middle of the night, the soldiers hit each other with spears.
When the cold wind blows, my face cuts like a knife.
Snowflakes on horseback are evaporated by sweat,
The striped horse's stripes soon turned into ice,
In Chancellesville, the water that drafted the campaign also froze.
Takan, everyone is scared,
I knew they wouldn't dare to fight each other.
Only the car driver in the west gate is waiting for the prisoner to report the good news.
Comments:
Cen Can's frontier fortress is poetic, fresh and elegant, or magnificent. This poem is magnificent.
At first, I tried my best to render the environment bad and the wind and sand covered the sky. Then write that the Huns were invaded by Huang Cao and Ma Zhuang and sealed off.
The general braved the cold and stood ready. Finally, write that the enemy is afraid and hopes to return home in triumph.
Although the poem describes the battle, it mainly describes the cold, suggesting the great achievements of fighting in the snow. The statement is straightforward, like the wind,
Real and touching. The whole poem uses rhyme, three turns, rapid and powerful rhythm, vigorous and heroic. Cen Can's unique poems are characterized by strange words, especially frontier fortress works, which are full of strange feelings and interests. A song "Farewell to the Snow in the Field-Clerk Wu Going Home" is graceful and graceful, focusing on the beautiful scenery of the frontier fortress, giving people a fresh and elegant feeling; This poem is strange and strong, and the violent sandstorm and heroic characters give people a magnificent feeling. When the poet was appointed as the judge of the Northwest An court, Feng Changqing sent troops to collect immortals, so he wrote this poem to see Feng off.
In order to show the high patriotism of the border guards, the poet tried to exaggerate and exaggerate the harsh environment by means of comparison, so as to highlight the fearless spirit of the characters.
First of all, around the word "wind", describe the natural environment of exploration. The expedition will go through Xue Hai and go deep into the Gobi Desert. "And the sand, coming from the desert, is thriving", which is a typical and unique sandstorm scene. The wind is raging, the yellow sand is flying, the sky is covered, and it is a blur. The first three sentences do not have the word "wind", but they capture the "color" of the wind and vividly write the violence of the wind. This is the scene during the day.
"This September night blows cold in the wheel tower and the valley, and the valley is full of broken boulders like pecking rice, which go down and forward with the wind." Writing the wind changed from darkness to light, from day to night, and the "color" of the wind disappeared, so I turned to writing the wind. The wind is like a crazy beast, growling and growling. The word "roar" vividly shows the fierceness and strength of the wind. Then write stone and wind. The bucket of stones was actually swept all over the floor by the wind, and then the word "chaos" was written, which shows the fury of the wind. In a few words, write the phrase "flat sand is boundless" in the sky, and write the phrase "stones wander around" in the ground, so as to outline the sinister environment vividly.
It says that the Huns took advantage of grass and yellow horse fertilizer to launch an attack. Words such as "West of Jinshan, smoke gathers" and "Smoke flies" describe the warning beacon smoke flying with the dust rolled up by Xiongnu fighters, which not only shows the momentum of Xiongnu troops, but also shows that Tang Jun has long been prepared. Next, the poem changed from creating environment to writing people, and the hero in the poem, Tang Junbing, braved the cold wind and marched, appeared. The poet is very good at grasping the typical environment and details to describe the heroic and invincible heroism of Tang Junbing. If the environment is night, "don't take off your armor all night", take off your armor at night, and write that the general shoulders heavy responsibilities and sets an example. "Let your soldiers advance with rumbling weapons!" It says marching in the middle of the night. From the details of Ge Xiangbo, we can imagine that the night was deep, the army was scurrying and the military was well dressed. Writing about the cold in the frontier is not a few hard ice in thousands of feet, but a few details. "and the sharp wind tip cuts the face like a knife" echoes the description of the front wind; It is also the truest feeling of marching in the desert.
It costs five dollars to sweat on horseback. "。 "The horse galloped in the cold wind, and the transpiration sweat immediately condensed into ice on the horse hair. The poet seized the condensed, melted and condensed sweat on the horse and made a detailed description, which fully rendered the cold weather, the hardship of the environment and the tense atmosphere of war. " Your challenge comes from the camp, from the ice of an ink bottle. "When drafting the military curtain of a campaign, I found that even the inkstone water was frozen. The poet skillfully grasped this detail, and his pen and ink vividly showed the soldiers' fighting pride against the snow. Who can match such an army? This leads to the last three sentences, expecting that the enemy will be frightened, hoping to return home in triumph, and the writing will come naturally.
The whole poem is heroic and passionate. Because the poet has personal experience of frontier life, this poem can be "strange and reasonable", "strange and true" and true and moving.
The whole poem uses rhyme, with three turns, dense rhyme positions, frequent rhyme changes, rapid and powerful rhythm, flexible and smooth rhyme feet and bold tone, just like a March in music.