I only come to the mountains occasionally.
Most of the time, I am busy carrying food.
Sometimes, I get into trouble and sadness.
Insects sing all over the mountain, like welcoming me home.
Cool nights surround me.
And none of this can make me want to stay.
After all, I am a light-oriented creature.
I turned around and walked towards the dim fireworks.
* * * The magnolia on the Lu Qing is fragrant.
Endless darkness can't swallow me up
I still love hard life.
I still love the world that gives me pain.
Expert review
On Tashan Road is both realistic and metaphorical, and there is a huge gap between them, from which poetry comes into being. People toss and turn between being born and joining the WTO, hesitating, life is hard and gloomy, but it also has its addiction and hard to give up; Although it is easy to let go of the world of mortals, it is inevitable to be lonely and bored. From another perspective, it is not necessarily an exile of responsibility. "On Tashan Road" describes the author's attitude and position under the entanglement of birth and WTO entry.
I only come to the mountains occasionally/most of the time, I am busy carrying food/sometimes, I get into trouble and sadness. "Coming to the mountain" means coming out of my daily life, changing a state and coming to another world, and daily life needs to "carry food" and "work for firewood", which will inevitably lead to fatigue, triviality and sadness. Bugs on the Mountain and Cold Night both belong to this "other world" and tempt me, but my position is very clear, and it is clear that I can't completely belong here. These "can't make me linger."
After all, "I" still belongs to "a creature facing the light". I love the fireworks on earth and miss the "fragrance" of flowers: "I still love the hard life/I still love the world that gives me pain". Although there are too many imperfections and disappointments in the world, it is still worth paying, looking forward to and fighting for. Romain rolland said that there is only one kind of heroism in the world, and that is to love life after knowing the truth of life. Everyone, every poet, must be bright, must fight against the darkness, and must be a "hero" for life.
Specially invited comments: Wang Shiqiang
Brief introduction of poet
Dadada's horseshoe: Zhang Xiaoming, 1974 was born on an island in Xiapu County, Fujian Province. Now she is a primary school teacher and likes to write branches. Most of his poems are published on the Chinese Poetry Network.
Expert introduction
Wang Shiqiang: Born in Linyi, Shandong Province, 1979, doctor of literature, mainly engaged in the research and criticism of China's contemporary poetry. Associate researcher, Institute of Literature, Tianjin Academy of Social Sciences; Postdoctoral fellow, International Writing Center, Beijing Normal University; Visiting researcher at China Museum of Modern Literature. He published Candle and Starlight, Poetry and Freedom in the Consumption Age-A Survey of Poetry in the New Century, and won the China Contemporary Poetry Criticism Award and the Chengmai Poetry Exploration Award for Theoretical Criticism.
Expert comments
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One-key conclusion
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