Human feelings include: smell-nose, sight-eyes, taste-mouth and tongue, hearing-ears, touch-many parts of the body. In this way, in addition to the horizon, there are many insights, and you can also write wonderful articles. For example, Liu Zongyuan's Ode to Autumn Sound basically relies on hearing to describe the scenery. Li Zhao's "Li Mou plays the flute at night" "Li Mou plays the flute in Guazhou at autumn night, and the boat is very narrow. At the beginning of the tune, the masses are resting. A few minutes later, the breeze came quietly. After a while, the boatman Jia Ke complained about the sound of crying. " The scenery here is in the sense of hearing.
Zhou Jiadi, a blind poet, lost his bright eyes, but saw the world more thoroughly.
In literary creation, the thinking of writers and poets is extremely active. The feelings between people are borrowed and communicated with each other. Poets' sensory organs should communicate openly with each other in their poems. Just as Liu Xie said, "Poets have a sense of things and endless associations". When the poet's feelings surge, his hearing, smell, vision, taste and touch become very close and sensitive. Thus, in the poet's wandering world, the sound has a shape, the flowers have a song, and the fragrance has a color. ...
Rhetorically, it is called "telepathy" or "synaesthesia". For example, the spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan (Wang Anshi: boating in Guazhou). The author turns the tactile spring breeze into a visual "green" image, which makes people feel the charm of the spring breeze strongly.
"It sounds like a cicada sitting on a tree in the forest/watering lilies." (Homer's epic) The sound is transformed into a flowing liquid with the fragrance of lilies, and the poet uses visual images to describe the beauty of the sound. If the image of poetry is not deformed by other senses, the sound is indescribable.
2. Write the word 150 with multiple meanings. Time kept flowing forward, and the weather gradually cooled down. Noisy cicadas are blown away by autumn, replaced by the whining of crickets in the cracks in the slate at night. Ah! That lovely autumn has finally come.
Autumn is more prosperous than spring. Spring with flowers and trees is beautiful, but the fruitful autumn colors reveal the joy of harvest. Autumn is more colorful than summer. Although the summer with dense branches and leaves is charming, the autumn colors of golden leaves and green trees are even more refreshing. Autumn is more energetic than winter. Snow-capped winter is lovely, but the golden autumn with fragrant melons and fruits is more colorful. Autumn came to the Woods. From a distance, yellow leaves fall in pairs like golden butterflies. Tired of flying, they landed on my shoulders, head and feet. Brought my thoughts from green summer to golden autumn. As soon as I turned around, another peach leaf fell beside me. I bent down to pick it up and held it in my hand to study it carefully. What a special autumn leaf! It hasn't come yet, it has completely faded, and it still exudes a strong aroma. Autumn came to the orchard, persimmon bent down, bent down, and the branches were about to break. Sister litchi was so fat that she broke her clothes and showed her bulging white belly. Huge apples are covered with branches, showing sweet smiles, or shy or bold. The girl in autumn came to the farmland, and the corn was very happy. It specially changed into a new golden dress, grinning and showing golden teeth. In order to make themselves more beautiful, tomatoes put lipstick on their faces; The potato may have been too excited to break its green mouth and show its yellow tongue. Autumn has come, and the garden has become a paradise for chrysanthemums. They may like this heavy gold, so they choose to bloom their beauty in autumn. Chrysanthemums come in many colors: yellow, pink and white. . Big flowers and curly petals are like a little girl with curly hair. Wandering in the chrysanthemum garden or enjoying a pot of colorful chrysanthemums alone, slowly intoxicated by that fragrance. Autumn brings gold to the earth and cotton-like clouds to the blue sky. Autumn wind, as cool as water, dyed the world yellow with chill.
I like this crisp autumn season!
I like autumn with flowers and leaves and flat chrysanthemums.
I like this unique and splendid autumn scenery.
Autumn is really a harvest season. The sound of lawn mower, children's laughter and adults' laughter are combined into a symphony in autumn. Miss Qiu came quietly, and the golden rice in the field danced in the autumn wind like her long hair. And the green grass, blown yellow by teacher Qiu, put on a golden dress on the earth.
Teacher Qiu also came to the river, and the river was sparkling. Fish play in the water, and sometimes they surface, as if welcoming Miss Qiu. Miss Qiu also came to the orchard, and the fruit trees gave off a burst of fragrance, which made people drool. You see, apples are covered with branches like little red lanterns. Several maple trees beside the fruit trees were blushed by the autumn girl, and the red maple leaves danced in the air like butterflies, as if to say, "Autumn is coming, autumn is coming."
The mountains in the distance were also dyed yellow by Miss Qiu, and at first glance they looked like golden waves.
As the sun sets, the whole earth seems to be painted with colorful pigments, like a huge picture scroll.
Teacher Qiu brought harvest, joy and happiness.
3. The composition of each feeling often gives people a dry sense of emptiness. So the teacher asked them to read more books and practice more, but these two points are not easy to do. Pupils have the nature that children should have, and their minds are difficult for adults to understand. In addition to reading and writing training, teachers should also teach children to use some writing skills to increase the observability of compositions on the basis of existing knowledge. It can increase children's interest in writing and reduce the pain in the writing process. Ordinary people have five ways of feeling: seeing, hearing, smelling, touching and smelling. Students will write with these five feelings, which will have better results. Most primary school compositions are propositional compositions, which are nothing more than three categories: taking notes, writing people and writing landscapes. Take the composition Autumn Tour as an example. Pupils like to play, like new things, and like things that are rarely seen at ordinary times. Seeing with your eyes, listening with your ears, smelling with your nose, and picking with your hands will certainly make you feel flattered. The teacher only needs to teach them to arrange the composition structure. The composition begins with vision: look at the sky, the autumn is crisp, the sun is warm and bright, the sky is blue, some clouds are fluttering, some are like ... and then use hearing: listen to the wind in the wild, listen to the sound of the wind blowing through the Woods, and listen to the leaves blown by the wind. Listen to the sound of little feet stepping on hay and fallen leaves, listen to everyone's laughter ... Then touch: the autumn wind is refreshing, hair and clothes are fluttering, pick up a fallen leaf, touch the veins on it, gently brush the rough trunk, find a meadow to sit down for a picnic, and feel the warmth and sureness brought by the sun and the earth ... There is not much sense of smell and taste in the text, and the timing of appearance is also very free. Look at the weather You can smell the fragrance of wild flowers on the grass. When you walk in the forest covered with fallen leaves, you can vaguely smell the fragrance of the soil. When you sit on the grass and eat, delicious food will definitely tempt your nose deeply and satisfy your taste. Senses are also very useful in taking notes and writing articles. "Listening to people, watching people walk, saying their own words and thinking about their own affairs" all need to mobilize the five senses of young authors. Documentary articles should use vision and hearing. Eyes should witness the development of things, ears should record other people's words, and psychological activities should be described, so the composition will not be too stiff. Writers should pay attention to the details, and observe the details themselves. See with your eyes, listen with your ears, feel with your heart, and think about what kind of person this is. To sum up, not every article should use all the five senses. The order in which the five senses appear is not fixed, and the senses can be real or illusory (psychological works produced by brain processing, such as smelling the fragrance of sunshine with the nose). Teaching pupils to write with their senses will reduce their resistance. One more skill, one more wonderful.
4. About the benefits of writing People perceive external things through various organs such as vision, hearing, touch, taste and smell. Under normal circumstances, they cannot cross each other.
However, under special circumstances, the effects felt by the five senses can be transformed and communicated with each other, and transferred from one sensory feeling to another without boundaries. This rhetorical device is called "synaesthesia" or "empathy" in Chinese rhetoric.
For example, "the wind comes to the bottom of the flower, the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant", which transforms the auditory sound into the smell of smell; "The wind turns green with the willow", that is, the auditory sound is transformed into the visual color; "Birds throw soft words, pills fall", that is, transforming auditory sounds into visual images. Synaesthesia is based on sensory transmission or strange imagination, which strengthens people's feelings and expresses and transmits thoughts and feelings.
Synaesthesia can make readers feel life and aesthetic objects wholeheartedly, and capture a complete artistic image from the text. In that flute, there is the smell of grass on the green plain in my hometown, the smell of dzi in April, and the brilliance of the sun.
Listen, there is the fragrance of grass, the fragrance of flowers and the bright sunshine in that flute! Hearing, smell and vision blend together, how melodious and provocative the flute is! The touching singing left a long memory. No matter which exciting song, the place where you first heard it, the scene there will remain deeply in your memory.
Environment, weather, people, colors, and even the feelings when listening to songs will be branded in the depths of memory, just like a movie with sound recorded in memory. This film is purely drawn by sound, which draws colors, images and feelings.
Every time you hear that song again, movies with that sound will be released one after another. (Wu Boxiao's Song) Songs are invisible, colorless and tasteless. It can only be recognized by hearing, not by sight, smell and taste.
The author compares singing to tangible things, which can be photographed, photographed and displayed scene by scene. It is with the help of synaesthesia that "singing" is portrayed so concretely and vividly, so vividly.
(3) "what children's language, bear grudges with you. Like the wind, who is singing the flag? A soldier likes to fight the king with his sword.
Eee logo turned into a floating cloud, you don't have to wander around the endless road. Hovering over Bai Niao, I suddenly saw a lonely phoenix.
The cliffs pressed people to climb, and the dark valley collapsed under the thunderous sound of collapse. "(Han Yu's" Listening to the Skillful Teacher Playing the Piano ") At the beginning, the piano sounded soft, like boys and girls whispering and laughing; Suddenly sonorous and loud, like a warrior galloping on the battlefield, invincible; Then it is foggy, like floating clouds and catkins floating in the wind between the vast heaven and earth; Then the sound of the piano was mixed, such as birds singing, and suddenly I saw an isolated and silent phoenix. Finally, the strongest sound is played, and it is even more difficult to climb a dangerous peak like a dream; The radio suddenly fell down and stopped abruptly, such as climbing up and down, and plummeted.
In bold and novel imagination and association, the poet turned the auditory image into a visual and tactile image that can be seen and touched. So that readers can truly feel the subtle, gentle and vigorous timbre of the piano, feel elegant and melodious, patchwork, independent and lonely, and feel the rhythmic beauty and harmonious beauty of strong notes and sudden bass.
Synaesthesia is generally expressed by means of metaphor, personification and exaggeration, which stimulates people's reasonable imagination. How sad can I be if I ask you? Like a river flowing eastward. "
"Sorrow" is an abstract emotion, and "spring water" is a concrete thing. There seems to be no connection between the two. Once conveyed, it truly and vividly expressed the deep, heavy and endless grief of the monarch who died in the country, which was visible to people. (2) "then teach the spring thoughts to be chaotic like a cloud, regardless of the world, things are as light as floc" (Yan Shu's "Jade House Spring"). In spring, people's thoughts are like flying clouds, and human feelings are as light as floc. Here, the poet makes subjective feelings visual and tactile, as if they can be seen and touched by people.
The sea is at our feet thoughtfully, like a poet. The voice seemed as gentle as the dim moonlight and the morning mist of roses; It is as fragrant as a lover's honeyed words; Low and gentle, like a breeze blowing the strings, like falling flowers floating on the water.
(Yan Lu's Listening to the Tide) When describing the seascape at low tide, the author focuses on "sound". When describing "that voice", we also use metaphors to describe it from various senses: "tenderness" is about touch, "mellow" is about smell and taste, "breeze blowing strings" is about hearing, and "falling flowers on the water" is about vision.
"That sound" originally appealed to hearing, but the author described it from five senses: tenderness of touch, fragrance of smell, mellow taste, cool breeze of hearing and falling flowers on the water, which made its aesthetic image extremely beautiful and bright. (4) When Fang Hung-chien saw that Miss Tang was not smiling, she still had a smile on her face, like the sound in the air after the music stopped.
Many women will smile so sweetly, but their smiles are only the soft exercise of facial muscles ... (Fortress Besieged by Qian Zhongshu) The "smile" that doesn't smile is vision, the "lingering sound" is hearing, and the "sweetness" is taste. This is a description of Miss Tang's smile through vision, hearing and taste, which makes many women smile sweetly and express their feelings more accurately.
Thirdly, the ingenious use of synaesthesia rhetoric by nature can produce special artistic charm. Such as: ① "The moonlight in the pond is uneven; But light and shadow have a harmonious melody, such as a famous song played by Van Gogh. "
(Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond) The flowing light and shadow, originally silent, is portrayed as beautiful music, giving people visual and auditory enjoyment. It is reasonable to say that light and shadow have nothing in common with singing and piano sound, but the author uses the artistic technique of synaesthesia to transform the visual image into the auditory image, imitating the intermittent and seemingly absent form of light and shadow, so that the indescribable feeling can be reflected through another sensible image.
In addition, in this case, it is easy to think of famous songs such as "Serenade" when talking about Van Gogh's spirit. The harmonious distribution of light and shadow has something in common with the beautiful melody of famous songs, and it is also the sublimation of images, which brings warmth and tranquility to the original artistic conception.