The whole poem is as follows: the setting sun is far away, the weather is freezing and the house is poor. Chai Men heard dogs barking and went home on a snowy night.
When dusk falls on the mountain, it becomes farther and farther away. When the weather is colder, the thatched cottage becomes more lonely. There was a sudden barking outside Chai Men. It turns out that someone braved the heavy snow to go home.
Appreciate:
At the beginning of the poem, the words "the setting sun is far away" are used to outline a picture of the twilight and the long mountain road. There are no characters in the poem, which is lyrical, but the feelings emerge on the paper. Here, it is a word "far" that gives a vivid picture and expresses a poetic scene. From this word, we can infer the lonely and tired traveling situation and the desire to stay when travelers travel on the mountain road at dusk. Next, the second sentence of the poem asks the reader to follow the pedestrian's line of sight, along this mountain road, and invest in the home for the night. "Cold weather and poor house" is a portrayal of this family; And the word "poor" should be the impression formed after seeing the hut from a distance to knocking at the door. Writing "sunset" before the previous sentence "Cangshan is far away" and writing "cold weather" before this sentence "Baijia is poor" are all ways to increase the level and weight of the poem. The long mountain road has made people feel that the road is far away, and it is even farther to see the sunset; The humble hut has made people feel poor, and it is even poorer in winter. Judging from the context, the word "cold weather" in this sentence has its connecting link. Inheritance is to further render the color of sunset road; Revelation is the foreshadowing of a snowstorm at night. These first two poems, which add up to only 10, have already written scenes on foot and in the house.
The last two poems, "Chai Men smells dogs barking, and the snow returns to people at night", were written after spending the night in the mountain. In terms of words, "Chai Men" is connected with "White House", "snow" is connected with "cold" and "night" is connected with "sunset". In this way, from the perspective of the whole poem, although the second half of the poem has opened up another poetic realm, it is closely connected with the first half. But here, the cause has made a leap. It seems that "smelling dogs barking" is at night, and most travelers who are tired of hiking have already slept; There is a period between dusk and night, from the invasion of cold current to the exchange of snow, from entering the hut to going to bed, which should be described, but the pen skips this period and omits some plots, making the poem more refined and compact. The poet thought carefully between his choices. If this effort is not made, perhaps the second half of the poem should further describe the depression of people living in houses, write about the desolation of mountain houses and the silence of the environment, or write about the coming of snow at night. Otherwise, you can also write about your own travel and your thoughts after staying overnight. But the poet put these things aside and didn't write. Unexpectedly, he saw a noisy dog barking in the silence. This shows the change of scale, giving people the feeling that a strange peak suddenly appeared on the flat ground.