Who can help me comment on Gomez's modern poem "Stars for the Evening", not too long?

"Poetry should be an axe of language, which can cut open the glacier of the soul. In the creation of intersection, fusion, decomposition and confrontation between words, the sharp and eye-catching light of language will surely illuminate people's survival. " -Gomez

This poem "A Star for the Evening" better explains Gomez's poetic concept, and carries the poet's consciousness flow in the blending and collision of words. At the same time, it is also the reconstruction of the poet's mental image world. The world, the last thing, the evening star ...

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A Star for the Dusk

Author: Gomel

The star at dusk rises from the earth and sea

I stand at the end of the night

I see the dusk like a white nude

I am the only shining star in the sky

At this difficult time

I seem to see another kind of human being's yesterday

three people killing each other. It's the daughter of the night's bed sheet.

I'm the boundless darkness in my life.

At this last moment, I can dream of

this barren land, the last seed

this drooping time, the last voice

this world, the last thing, and the evening star.