Ten causes of sick sentences 1
(1) Incomplete components: there are no necessary components in the sentence, and the meaning expression is incomplete and unclear. For example:? I have done a lot of good things for my class. ? It is not clear who has done many good deeds.
⑵ Improper use of words: Due to unclear understanding of the meaning of words, it is easy to use improper words in the scope of meaning, praise and criticism, especially synonyms and related words, resulting in sick sentences. For example:? He acts calmly and arbitrarily. ? Arbitrary? It's a derogatory term. It should be changed to? Decisive? .
(3) Improper collocation of words: In a sentence, some words can't be collocated or collocated unreasonably in meaning, which violates language habits and causes sick sentences. For example:? At the party, we heard sweet songs and beautiful dances. ? Do you hear me? With what? Beautiful dance? Obviously not worthy, it should be changed to? At the get-together, we heard sweet songs and saw beautiful dances. ?
(4) Word order inversion: Under normal circumstances, the word order in a sentence is fixed. If the word order is changed and the position is reversed, the meaning of the sentence will change and even cause a sick sentence. For example:? China people are very interested in me. ? China? And then what? Me? The position of is upside down. It should be changed to? I am very interested in Chinese. ?
5. Inconsistency: In the same sentence, the meanings expressed before and after contradict each other, resulting in ambiguity. For example:? I guess he must have made a mistake on this issue. ? The first half of the sentence is not sure enough, and the second half is sure that he is wrong, so there is a contradiction. What happened? People don't understand. Can you change it to? I guess he made a mistake on this issue. ? Or? I concluded that he had done the problem wrong. ?
[6] Repetition and verbosity: In a sentence, the meanings of the words used are repeated, making them redundant. For example:? He rushed into the classroom and happily announced that he would go for a spring outing tomorrow. ? In the sentence? Excited? And then what? Cheerful? All show that he is happy, but one can be deleted.
(7) Unreasonable: Some words in a sentence are unclear in concept, misused, or have unreasonable meanings, which may easily lead to ill sentences. For example:? When the rice is ripe, the fields are green and there is a harvest scene. ? Rice is golden yellow when it is ripe, but it is unreasonable to use green to describe this sentence.
(8) Unclear concept: refers to the unclear concept, improper attributes and chaotic scope of words in a sentence. Like what? Wan Li Great Wall, Palace Museum and Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are historical sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for. ? Here? Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge? Don't belong? Monument? The concept of ownership is unclear and should be changed to? The Great Wall of Wan Li and the Palace Museum are historical sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for. ?
(9) Ambiguous reference: When there are many people or things in a sentence, the reference is unclear and unclear. Like what? Huang Hong and Zhao Yan went to Dengxian Building together. She climbed faster than her. She climbed to the top of Xianlou first. ? In the sentence? She? There are two. Is Huang Hong climbing fast or Zhao Yan climbing fast? On the contrary, the reference object is unknown. She climbs fast, and she climbs to the top of Xianlou first. ? Or Huang Hong climbed faster than her, and Huang Hongxian climbed to the top of Xianlou Mountain. ?
(10) Misuse of related words: refers to the misuse or improper collocation of related words in sentences. Like what? Huangshan Mountain is not only a beautiful place, but also I really want to visit it. ? This sentence does not constitute a progressive relationship but a causal relationship. So, is it necessary to put related words? Not only that. And change it to? Because? So; Another example? Only by studying hard can you get good grades. ? Only in sentences? Improper collocation of related words should be changed to? Only? Only.
Ten reasons for sick sentences II
1. Throughout the ages, bamboo has attracted countless poets and painters, and bamboo painting has become one of the traditional themes of China's poetry and painting, symbolizing the firm and tenacious spirit of the Chinese nation.
Bamboo painting has become one of the traditional themes of China's poetry and painting, and it is not properly matched;
2. The mayor of Guangzhou, China, was interviewed by reporters on the occasion of the upcoming Asian Games torch relay, hoping that the Asian Games torch, which represents peace, friendship and progress, can convey and promote the human dream and friendship among Asian countries.
Mismatch should be? Pass? Dream? Promotion? Friendship?
3. Digital media art is still relatively unfamiliar to most people; As a new art form, it has been paid more and more attention and developed in China.
Improper collocation, loss? Development? Improper collocation of verbs and objects
4. The artistic charm and exquisite craftsmanship of underglaze colored porcelain have fallen and conquered countless people who love it, and its spread has an enlightening effect on China's porcelain-making art.
Modifier does not match the head word. People? It's collective noun. It doesn't work? Countless revisions, okay? People? Change to? People? .
5. Institutions are mostly service industries, so they should formulate their own professional ethics and codes of conduct to promote employees to develop good professional habits and professionalism.
? Development? With what? Dedicated? Improper collocation
6. When the whole country is immersed in the National Day holiday, China football? Sweep pornography and crack down on criminals? This process is progressing steadily. 65438+10.5, 17, CCTV's "News Live Room" program disclosed the latest progress of the case, and Li Dongsheng and Wei were formally arrested.
Improper collocation, proceed? Change to? Push? ;
7. Whether the school can form a good and promoting campus culture and whether learners can really adapt to and integrate into it plays an important role in the effective development of teaching activities.
? Is it okay? mismatch
8. This link? Challenge Cup? The number of participants and the quality of entries have been significantly improved.
? Number of participants? With what? Improve? Improper collocation
On April 9 14, an earthquake of magnitude 7. 1 occurred in Yushu Prefecture, Qinghai Province, causing a certain number of communication interruptions, house collapses, casualties and serious losses to the people.
Improper collocation, communication? Can't be together? A certain amount? Collocation;
10. London Shanghai Week? This activity will let more British people, especially Londoners, know about China's long-standing urban civilization and etiquette culture. As an opening event, the bronzes and jades of Shanghai Museum are an international exhibition held in the British Museum for two months.
Improper matching of bronzes and jades in Shanghai Museum? After adding? Exhibition? ;
1 1. The sun charcoal carving is exquisite in craftsmanship, colored with pure natural pigments, with elegant, fashionable and individual artistic enjoyment, and can absorb toxic and harmful gases. It is an environmentally-friendly work of art. ..
Improper collocation, is there? And then what? Enjoy? Not good enough, right? Enjoy? Change to? Features? ;
12. The working rules of the State Council clearly point out that the State Council and all departments should improve the decision-making rules and procedures for major issues, and improve the decision-making mechanism combining mass participation, expert consultation and government decision-making.
Improper collocation? Improve? Change to? Sound?
13. After more than ten years' accumulation, Maanshan has developed from scratch, from a single poetry reading to a combination of singing and dancing, poetry reading, economy and trade, and tourism, forming its own characteristics and becoming an influential festival at home and abroad.
? Maanshan? Become? Book celebration activities. ? What should be the main reason for improper collocation? Ma Xieshan China Li Bai Poetry Festival? .
14. the person in charge of the central bank said that the burden of appreciation caused by the excessive growth of foreign exchange reserves can be alleviated by keeping the deposit interest rate unchanged and raising the loan interest rate.
? Reduce the burden? Do not match? Burden? Change to? Stress? .
15. Normal? Shopping basket? The market should be a market to protect producers and consumers, and it should also be a market to eliminate abnormal prices and gain huge profits through manipulation.
Improper collocation, guarantee? The right to fight Israel? Earn huge profits
16. The recently held lawyers' conference in the whole city heard that the relevant departments will take a series of measures to enhance the overall strength and image of the lawyer industry and further strengthen the construction of lawyers.
? A promotion? Strength? Improper collocation;
17. If China cannot reduce the huge burden of population growth on water and soil resources, the deterioration of the environment will endanger the sustainable development of social economy.
? Relieve? Burden? Improper collocation, mitigation? Should be with? Question? deploy
18. Ministry of Human Resources and Social Security is formulating regulations on wage payment, which require? Equal pay for equal work? . In the future, both regular workers and labor dispatch workers should get the same level of wages as long as they are engaged in the same content and pay the same amount of labor.
Improper collocation: What else? It should be changed to? Or?
19. Experts pointed out? Shanxi earthquake rumor? After the incident, the state must speed up relevant legislation and crackdown to effectively curb the spread of rumors on the Internet.
? Accelerate the blow? Improper collocation.
The relevant person in charge of the Ministry of Housing and Urban-Rural Development pointed out that using the idle funds of housing provident fund loans to support the construction of affordable housing is conducive to improving the housing provident fund system and improving the efficiency of housing provident fund use.
Improper collocation of single predicate and double object. Efficiency? Can't use it perfectly? Apply? Improve? .