"My hair barely covers my forehead. I pick flowers by the door and pay. When you, my love, ride a bamboo horse, run in circles and throw your childhood. We live together in an alley in Changgan, and we are all young and happy. " These six sentences are like a group of folk children's genre paintings. A little girl with bangs on her forehead stood in front of the door with a flower in her hand. A little boy with a girl's horn on his head jumped on the horse and jumped and ran on the path ... These ordinary "children's play", after being screened and refined by the poet, suddenly became dazzling and became the idiom "childhood friends, two children have no guess", which has been passed down to this day. Then the poet described the scene of the couple getting married, vividly depicting the delicate modality of the 14-year-old bride, as if it were a close-up of a movie. The little bride finally came of age. The word "show eyebrows" is not only a description of appearance, but also a portrayal of psychology. Knowing that no dust can seal our love vows is the main reason for her "eyebrows".
"The ancient road in front of the door is hidden, and everyone is covered with moss" is the only scenery of a water town in the south of the Yangtze River like Chang Gan. "Hiding under the moss is too deep to sweep away" contains the psychological state that I was reluctant to sweep away at the beginning and can't sweep away now. "The first autumn wind with fallen leaves" is not only about festivals, but also about people's emotions, because only those who are deeply involved in parting are so sensitive to the seasons. Holding the poet and flying with the butterfly to foil the loneliness of the boudoir. The last sentence, "I won't mind the distance when I meet you, until the wind blows", is a romantic idea, because she can't run 700 miles to see her husband alone, but she is infatuated and particularly touching.
This poem describes the story of a young woman's love and parting, expresses the young woman's yearning for her husband who went out to do business, and blends lyric and narrative well. It is delicate and vivid in characterization, especially in writing the young woman's thoughts.