Keywords: 250 words in the third grade of Fanxing primary school
Word count: 250 words composition
This article is suitable for: the third grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 250 words in grade three of primary school. The title is Stars. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Looking at the stars in the night sky, I can't help thinking of the swaying moon, just like the distant lights. Under every lamp, there is a bright story: poetry has a bright rhythm, rich images and strong lyrical meaning. Based on the night sky, the poem closely links the three images of the night sky, the moon and the stars, and depicts a picture of meditation on a moonlit night. The description of the stars in the poem is wonderful, "flickering/specious/distant light". The contrast between the stars and the distant light is not very novel, but it is easy to produce rich associations. Where there is light, there will be people and stories, so in the end, the author is even more lyrical and wrote such a wonderful ending as "every lamp has a bright story". It should be pointed out that "bright moon/flickering" lacks a transition here, which may make people misunderstand that the moon is flickering. It is suggested to add "stars in the night sky" before "flicker". (China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang) May 30, 2009 at 20: 12: 00.