357 words/autumn wind words
Autumn wind is clear, autumn moon is bright,
When the fallen leaves are scattered, the habitat in western Western jackdaw is full of surprises.
The leaves in the wind gather when they gather. Western jackdaw has settled and the moon rises. Friends are looking forward to meeting, but I don't know where. At this time, on such a night, it is difficult to miss each other.
When you enter the door of lovesickness, you will know the suffering of lovesickness.
Eternal love, eternal memories, and short-term lovesickness have no end.
If I had known that acacia was tied in my heart like this, it would not be like you didn't know.
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The autumn wind is clear and the autumn moon is bright.
When the leaves in the wind gather and disperse, the western Western jackdaw has already inhabited and was awakened by the bright moon.
Friends are looking forward to meeting each other, but I don't know when, at this time and on such a night, it's hard not to miss each other.
Walk into the door of lovesickness and know the pain of lovesickness.
Forever lovesickness, forever memories, short-lived lovesickness is endless.
If I had known that acacia was so entangled in my heart, I might as well have never met each other.
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This poem was written on a late autumn night. The poet saw the bright moon hanging in the sky, and Western jackdaw in the west perched on a deciduous tree. Perhaps at this time, the poet is missing an old lover. This situation makes the poet sad and helpless. This is a typical sad autumn work. Autumn wind, autumn moon, fallen leaves and Western jackdaw in the west set off a sad atmosphere. The poet's wonderful imagination and perfect portrayal of his own heart make the whole poem sad and moving.
This poem, even if it is not a 357-word creation, is Li Bai's final establishment of the "335577" format as a unique genre, even as a fashionable poetic style. This is not only because he learned from and summarized many people's experience in using the 357 sentence pattern, but also because of his practical experience in using this format flexibly in his own lyrics creation, so his 357 sentence pattern can show "mourning to promote the festival, sorrow is like a complicated string" (Volume 8 of Poetry Alcohol in Tang and Song Dynasties).
Sigh on the jade steps
Her white stairs are cold with dew,
Her silk soles are wet, and she stayed there for so long.
Behind her closed window, why is she still waiting?
Looking at the glory of the autumn moon through crystal glass? .
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The jade steps gave birth to dew, which stood at night and soaked the socks. I had to hang down the crystal curtains and look up at the delicate autumn moon through them alone.
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See Guo Maoqian's Poems of Yuefu of Jade Family. It belongs to the tune of Xianghe Gechu, and other songs, such as Jieyufen and Changxinfen, are dedicated to Gongfen from the perspective of ancient songs.
Although the title of Li Bai's Yu Jiefen is marked with the word "fen", the poem is only painted on the back, and the word "fen" is not seen at all. Silent step by step independence, let the cold dew soak the stockings; It depends on the darkness, the persistence, and the deep resentment. "Luo socks", depending on people's manners and status, some people have gods. The night is cold and heavy, socks know the cold, don't talk about people, see people complain. The word "realism" is practical in Cao Zijian's artistic conception of "one small step makes socks dust".
Deep resentment, late at night, can not help but feel lonely, from outside the curtain to inside, behind the curtain, but can not bear to make the moon lonely. Like the moon has pity on people, like people have pity on the moon; If people don't accompany the moon, what else can they accompany? The moon is silent and people are speechless. However, readers know that people have infinite words, and the moon can also solve this infinite word, just looking at the moon blindly when writing. This resentment is deeper than resentment.
The word "lack of summer", vividly expressed by function words, is the most profound among poets. This turning point seems to have been broken; It seems that I want to swing away and turn my sadness away, but in fact, after this turn, I have less words and more feelings, and I have directly entered obscurity. However, it seems that it has no intention of falling behind the scenes, but it has infinite grievances in it. Ben entered the room in the middle of the night with deep resentment and helplessness. After entering the room, I was afraid that the bright moon would shine through the window, so I closed the curtains. Now that the curtains are down, it's even harder to bear this miserable sleepless night, and even more helpless, it's even harder to see the moon through the curtains. At this time, I am worrying about it, just like Li Qingzhao's "looking for it, cold and clear, sad and miserable." Such feelings are expressed by the word "desperation". The word "que" runs through the next sentence, meaning "why is she still waiting behind her closed window sash" and "but watching the autumn moon" Between these two actions, there are many twists and turns of sadness. The so-called words are not full, but empty words are vivid. In ancient China, there was a method of "transmitting sound in an empty valley", which seems to be the case. The word "exquisite" seems to be a casual stroke, but it is actually very skillful. The moon is exquisite, people's grievances are lined up, the pen is written from the opposite side, and the victory is smeared on the front.
There is no physical appearance and psychological state of the characters in the poem, and the author seems indifferent. He only takes the actions of the characters to see the meaning, and leads the readers into the most subtle places of poetry, so he can leave the readers with room for imagination and make the poetry infinitely distant and profound. In this way, we can see the true meaning of the poet's "nothing, everything is romantic" Lyrical, constant and easy to use the pen of Syrian personnel; It is very rare and difficult to write a person with lyrical pen.
Chekhov has the theory of "reserve" and often hears the so-called "distance". The two are quite similar and should be combined. In other words, the author should keep a certain distance from the writing object, and maintain a certain "reserve" and calmness. In this way, there is no danger of screaming, but there is profound beauty, feelings and unspeakable secrets are difficult to write, making readers feel that poetry floats in the sky, but it can't be grasped between the lines. This poem "Jade Family" is such a masterpiece because of its ingenuity and charm. (Sun) According to
Brief introduction of the author
Li Bai (70 1 ~ 762) was a poet in the Tang Dynasty. The word Taibai,No. Qinglian lay, was originally from Ji Cheng, Longxi (now near Tianshui, Gansu). Live less in Shu and learn Taoism. The 25-year-old escort comes from Sichuan and lives in Luxian County. You traveled to Chang 'an, got an official position, but returned to the East penniless. At the beginning of Tianbao, Zhao Chun went to Beijing to worship the Hanlin. Before long, he was exiled to Beijing and traveled around. An Shi Rebellion entered the military curtain of Li Lin in Wang Yong; And Wang Yong was killed by Su Zong, who was imprisoned and exiled Yelang because of his collective punishment. Later, when he was pardoned and returned to the East, he died and was ordered by Li. Bai Juyi, another poet in the Tang Dynasty, wrote a poem "However, the poet is the most evil, so he is reduced to Mo Ruojun", which is a portrayal of his lonely and sad life experience. However, he reflected the facts with romantic poems, described mountains and rivers, expressed his ambitions, sang images and feelings, and changed the great poet who passed away.