The manuscript should be invited for book appreciation and gold medal couplet creation.

Appreciation and creation of gold medal couplets

1, titled Guangzhou Asian Games Chess and Card Culture Federation:

In the first game, there was a fairy family's disposal, and the national scholar made an article, admiring the hammer mountain and the firewood lake;

Charm for thousands of years, the wise still have a soft spot, and the talented people love it even more. Throughout today's Asian Games, the whole world is focusing on it.

Evaluation of joint production:

In 20 10, this couplet won the first prize of "Conghua Bank Cup" to welcome the Asian Games in China.

Since ancient times, China literati have loved chess, and countless legends, legends and stories are closely related to chess. The first couplet recounts the past, focusing on the history of chess culture. The author chose two representative allusions. In front of the firewood hammer mountain: the king of the Jin Dynasty went up the mountain to cut firewood and met two immortals playing chess. He was fascinated. As a result, "one day in the mountains, the world has been thousands of years." Before the game was over, he looked back and found that his firewood and axe handle were rotten. "Lake Junchen" tells the story of Zhu Yuanzhang and Xu Da playing chess in Nanjing Mochou Lake Sacred Building. The second part focuses on the influence of chess on human life: it has never been far away, and it has always existed, and now it is more extensive. Couplets are also closely related to the Guangzhou Asian Games, timely and to the point. Both the upper and lower couplets adopt this method of sentence self-alignment, and the rigorous sentence pattern is full of changes. The allusions in couplets are particularly heavy and elegant; The bottom line is simple and vigorous. The All-China Federation blends ancient and modern times, interweaves warp and weft, advances layer by layer, achieves a smooth reading atmosphere in one go, and is filled with lofty sentiments.

Creative experience:

20 10 16 At the Guangzhou Asian Games, Go and China Chess entered the Asian Games for the first time. Although the chess world in China has been very active, the tendency of "emphasizing competition over culture" is even more serious. This competition is the first national competition in China with chess culture as the theme of couplets. Considering the rich connotation of chess, my creation decided to start with excavating its culture. It is very important to find the breakthrough point whether the short two lines can carry the chess culture of China. So I conceived two lines that combine historical allusions with real events, so that these two lines are intertwined, complement each other and reflect each other, thus enhancing the appeal.

Fortunately, the work was favored by the judges. For this competition, Sohu Sports website commented: "The work is of high level and highly praised by experts in couplet and chess culture. The competition is also an important measure of the' Cultural Asian Games', which has played a positive role in promoting the Guangzhou Asian Games and promoted the development of chess culture in China. "

2. Zhou Chu reads Taiwan Federation:

Reading in spring and autumn, shame is the same as a tiger;

When I heard the news, I was glad to think of a saint in the pavilion.

Evaluation of joint production:

On 20 12, our association won the first prize of "Leon Cup" in Nanmen East District of Nanjing Old Town.

History: At the beginning of Zhou Dynasty, when he was young, he was stubborn and abnormal, and was listed as "three evils" by fellow villagers Jiao and Hu. Later, he was inspired by "listening early and dying late", turned over a new leaf and became a famous minister.

Writing couplets on reading desks naturally begins with reading and writing. It was the youth at the beginning of the week who made the first couplet, saying that he realized his own problems, and the word "shame" vividly expressed the feeling after reading it at the beginning of the week. The second couplet is the final comment on Zhou Chu, focusing on "hearing in the morning and dying at dusk", focusing on "reading" and "reading desk", showing Zhou Chu's future actions in the form of historical pens. The Federation of Literary and Art Circles chose words accurately, mastered them freely and put pen to paper everywhere. In particular, the theory of "three evils and one saint" has its origin, and its tone is solemn and elegant, warning the world.

Creative experience:

Zhou Chu is a historical figure that everyone is familiar with. I remember reading the article "Early Weeks" in middle school, and I was deeply impressed. Of course, there is a certain foundation for the establishment of the weekly reading desk. There are many materials available at the beginning of the week, but the stubbornness of teenagers and their future achievements are two completely different and inseparable stages. I intercepted these two stages and connected the two stages of his life with a colorful line of "reading", because "reading" revealed the causal relationship between the two. Because reading is rational, "harm" is shameful; Learn because of reading, and take pleasure in "pavilion celebrities" This is a small cause and effect in the context. Because of reading, he finally changed from "three evils" to "one saint", which is the big cause and effect in the whole sentence. In this way, the size of the causal relationship, interlocking, hierarchical, coupled with the use of refined words and numbers, so as to achieve a unique creative effect.

3. China Jade Culture Association:

Tender as water, warm as wind, become the dream of warm days;

A gentleman is broad-minded, a beautiful woman is elegant, and writing poems contains stars and washing the moon.

Evaluation of joint production:

In 20 10, this couplet won the first prize in the "Golden Cup" jade culture poetry couplet contest.

Chinese jade culture has always been extensive and profound. As the "beauty of stone" selected by the ancestors of the Chinese nation from all kinds of stones, it has moist and shiny aesthetic feeling and practical function. China people regard jade as the crystallization of the essence of heaven and earth, and jade is an important part of China traditional culture. Jade culture with jade as the center carrier not only deeply influenced the ideas of ancient people in China, but also became an indispensable part of China culture. As the old saying goes, a modest gentleman is as gentle as jade. He also said: a gentleman is better than jade; Beautiful as jade. This couplet skillfully uses some of the above sentences and metaphors. A warm day gave birth to a dream: from Li Shangyin's untitled poem, "Mermaids shed pearl-like tears on the moon-green sea, and blue fields breathed their emeralds on the sun". Another feature of this couplet is that it is skillfully refined and unconventional. The All-China Federation has gathered rich and extensive knowledge in one place and interpreted the Chinese jade culture in previous lives in poetic language. It is wonderful to read, just like a beautiful jade, loud and melodious, like a song!

Creative experience:

China is a country that loves and worships jade. Needham once said: The love for jade can be said to be one of the cultural characteristics of China. For more than 3000 years, the texture, shape and color of jade have inspired sculptors, painters and poets. Jade gives a warm and wonderful image, while jade is reserved and restrained. Therefore, the guiding ideology when conceiving this couplet is: when reflecting the culture of jade, we must write the beauty of jade, the profound beauty of jade and the mysterious beauty of jade. Facts have proved that the atmosphere created by these four words, such as water, wind, dreams and poems, makes people unconsciously intoxicated and deeply intoxicated in the past events that belong to jade. I think this may be the reason why the judges appreciate it.

4, the construction of a clean government project topics:

Chen Mo is like a bubble. If he encounters a vast wind, his reputation will burst.

Honest people, like lotus, have their own English and pure spirit, and heaven and earth are in the same spring.

Evaluation of joint production:

In 20 12, this couplet won the first prize of "Qixia Qingfeng Cup" national anti-corruption couplet poetry competition.

The Federation mainly shows three characteristics: first, the metaphor is novel and appropriate. Comparing corrupt officials to bubbles is disdainful between the lines; Comparing honest officials to lotus flowers, the writing is full of reverence. Second, the clever use of homophony and reduplication makes people unforgettable. Ink, foam, honesty, lotus, vastness and Yingying are all very clever and appropriate. Third, the use of positive and negative contrast techniques gives people a clear sense of black and white, which is shocking. The first part explains the shameful end of corruption from the opposite side. The first part also set up a scene, taking "if everything happens" as the guide, pointing out that since it is a bubble, it will definitely disperse with the wind and disappear into the smoke. The second part eulogizes the quality of honest people from the front, which is as clear as lotus and fills the world with pure air. Finally, it is concluded that their reputation and conduct will be "spring with the world" A right and a wrong, its meaning is self-evident! Based on the above characteristics, the All-China Federation is pleasing to the eye and convincing, which can not only cleanse the soul, but also avoid empty preaching.

Creative experience:

Building a clean government is an eternal topic with a long way to go. Corruption and bribery, misunderstanding of the country, misunderstanding of the people, self-realization, everyone hates; If you are honest and clean, diligent and love the people, everyone will respect you. Throughout the ages, there are countless poems, couplets and aphorisms about clean government!

How can we break through and find another way? How can we be vivid, intuitive and beautiful? At the time of conception, I thought of comparing the conduct of two people, and then comparing their fate and ending, and established the basic framework of this couplet. With the structure, without excellent words, it is still unable to attract people's popularity and shock people's hearts, so I thought of using homophones and overlapping words to strengthen the tone. If it is not too strange to say that "an honest man is like a lotus", the expression "Mo Chen is like foam" is still relatively novel. After such conception and careful carving, the praise and praise of the whole couplet fell to the ground, which sounded like gold and jade.

5. Call for the title of "Torch Cup":

What do you want and wish for? If the mountain is long, the chest is as wide as water;

20 years of great love, but also for the country, but also for the home, work in the present, benefit in the future.

Evaluation of joint production:

Our association won the first prize of "Torch Cup" national competition in Shanxi Province on 20 12.

The so-called "torch cup" is to show the "five elders" who are engaged in caring for the next generation. "Five Old People" refers to old party member, old experts, old teachers, veterans and old models. This couplet is a portrayal of the "five olds" caring for the next generation.

After affirming the purpose and effect of their work, they raised a question. I am afraid this question is also a question in readers' minds: what is their selfless dedication for? What is the picture? This question caught the reader's heart. Next, the author did not answer immediately, but put pen to paper to praise their long-term feelings and broad-minded mind. The real answer lies in the bottom line. It turns out that they don't care about fame and fortune, not only for the country's successors, but also for the cause of thousands of families in Qian Qian. Such a cause is naturally "existing now and benefiting the future". This answer really has the effect of finals and hitting the floor! Among them, "20 years of great love" refers to the 20th anniversary of the establishment of Shanxi Wenxiguan Working Committee. The All-China Federation also has the characteristics of appropriate metaphor, clever use of the middle two sentences, flexible and changeable conjunctions, forceful reading, cadence and strong appeal.

Creative experience:

There are such a group of "five olds" who have long been committed to caring for the next generation. They don't seek fame or profit, but they are selfless and contribute silently to the healthy growth of teenagers. Because of my working relationship, I have a certain contact and understanding of caring for the next generation of work and the "five olds", and the idea of writing couplets for them has sprouted very early. Taking part in the "Torch Cup" national recruitment competition this time can be regarded as fulfilling one of my wishes. With this idea, I am more motivated to think positively. The words "what you want, what you want" flow naturally through your mind like running water. Then I thought of the appropriate answer: for the country and for the home. Along this line of thinking, we can broaden our horizons, divergent thinking, and finally connect words into sentences and articles. Here, I would like to extend my deep blessing to Qian Qian's ten thousand "five old people" who are still quietly dedicating themselves!