Keywords: Sister, Grade Three, 250 words
Word count: 250 words composition
This article is suitable for: the third grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 250 words in grade three of primary school. The title is Sister Wind. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Xifeng gently blew into my little cotton-padded jacket, blowing and blowing, refreshing and comfortable. Me!
Me!
Happy because I love her!
Teacher's comment: This poem by the little author has a cheerful tone and a distinct rhythm, and it is catchy to read. The poem describes the lovely "Xifeng", and the little author uses anthropomorphic rhetoric to endow Xifeng with human characteristics and describe her feelings about the wind. But the poem is a little short, and it doesn't show all the characteristics of the wind. With the help of foreign objects, the author can clearly present the trace of Xifeng to readers, such as what will happen when Xifeng comes to the forest; When Xifeng comes to the garden, will the flowers give off fragrance? It is suggested that young writers write from multiple angles, so that the poems will be more vivid. The word "cotton" in "Blowing into my little cotton-padded jacket" was changed to "cotton". (China famous teacher: Teacher Wang) 2009-11-2218: 53: 00