2011 Guilin High School Entrance Exam Chinese Language Test Questions and Answers
1. Basic knowledge and application (2 points for each question, ***10 points)
1. Which of the following highlighted words has a completely correct pronunciation? (2 points)
A. Generosity (ɡǎi) vicissitudes of life (cānɡ) brewing (niànɡ) once and for all (yí)
B. Conquer (zhé) Charm (mèi) Nickname (chuò) Hardworking (yuàn)
C． surging (bài) insult (wǔ) respond (hé) rising tide lifts all boats (zhǎnɡ)
D. Precipitation (dìnɡ) solemnity (mù) degradation (duò) polite (shān)
2. Among the following groups of words, the one with no typos is . (2 points)
A. Loud, contrasting, harmonious and fascinating
B. Puzzled, face pinched, boasted, excited
C． Comfort, love, Qingzhe, Hanma's contribution
D. Momentum, shocking, exhausted, blooming
3. One of the following sentences is an inappropriate use of dotted idioms. (2 points)
A. Those chapters that are full of true feelings and very simple and simple often make me moved and unable to control myself.
B． There is endless happiness in life, it depends on whether you know how to look for it.
C. Although the grass is an insignificant character, it is admired by the world for its tenacious vitality.
D. Guilin's ingenious mountain scenery attracts countless tourists to come and enjoy it.
4． One of the following literary and cultural common sense statements is incorrect. (2 points)
A. People often use "Tang poems, Song lyrics, Yuan operas, and Ming and Qing novels" to summarize the prominent literary forms of the Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming, and Qing periods.
B． In "I heard that Wang Changling moved to the left, Long Biaoyuan wrote this", "moving to the left" refers to demotion, because in ancient China, "right" was respected.
C. "Ling" is a respectful term. Therefore, when we introduce our parents to others, we can use titles such as "father" and "father".
D. Among the "hundred schools of thought", the schools that have had a significant impact on later generations include Confucianism, Taoism, Legalism, Mohism, etc.
5. Someone drew up a couplet. The first couplet is based on "Journey to the West", and the second couplet is based on "Water Margin". Please choose the most appropriate corresponding second couplet based on the first couplet "Conquering demons and subjugating demons, Sun Xingzhe shows his power and leads the way". (2 points)
A. To punish evil and eliminate evil, King Chao Tian gathered in Liangshan Park B. Seeing injustice on the road, Lu Tiha beat Guanxi with punches
C． Revenge, the black whirlwind vents its anger at the Mountain Temple D. One wrong move, and the green-faced beast loses his birth date
2. Reading comprehension (I) (20 points)
(1) Appreciation of poetry. Read the following sentence and complete questions 6 to 7. (***5 points)
Break time? Write a poem for Chen Tongfu as a tribute
Xin Qiji
Watching the sword while drunk, I dreamed of blowing the trumpet. camp. Eight hundred miles away, the troops under his command are burning, the sound of fifty-stringed strings turning outside the Great Wall, and the troops on the battlefield being ordered in autumn. The horse moves very fast, and the bow is as frightening as a thunderbolt. Finish the affairs of the king and the world, and win the reputation during and after death. Misfortune happens in vain!
6． One of the improper understandings of the content of this poem is. (2 points)
A. The sentence "Eight hundred miles under the command" in the upper column describes the lively scene of the soldiers feasting on roast beef.
B． The sentence "Lu Fei Kuai on horseback" in the lower column expresses the courageous and unstoppable spirit of the soldiers.
C. The whole poem depicts the image of a hero who, although he is in his old age, is still majestic and heroic, personally leading troops into battle to kill the enemy.
D. The whole poem reflects the author's desire to complete the great cause of fighting against the Jin Dynasty, but his ambition is difficult to achieve.
7． One of the improper appreciations of this poem is. (3 points)
A. The sentence "Autumn on the battlefield" describes the military parade scene, and the word "autumn" adds a sense of sadness to the military parade scene.
B． "Finish the affairs of the king and win the world's reputation before and after death" echoes the title and is the most encouraging words between the author and Chen Tongfu.
C. Generally speaking, the upper and lower parts of a word "change meaning", but this poem breaks through the tradition and connects the meaning of the word up and down, showing a war scene, which is very unique.
D. The word "pitiful" highlights the emotional changes of the characters in the poem. From the strong and intense mood in the first nine sentences to the sadness in the last sentence, the ups and downs, the words are close and the meaning is far-reaching, are really written by everyone.
(2) Modern literature reading. Read the following and answer questions 8 to 12. (Each question is 3 points, ***15 points)
Craftsman and Master
Liang Heng
① It is often heard in society that someone is called " Master", sometimes it is respect, sometimes it is flattery. They are often dissatisfied with a certain work, saying it has "craftsmanship". What is the difference between a craftsman and a master?
②The craftsman is repeating, and the master is creating. A craftsman, such as a carpenter, always makes the same style of furniture over and over again. The only difference between him and her is his proficiency and technical precision. For example, an average carpenter can make one chair a day, while a good carpenter can make three or five chairs a day. In addition, the planed surface will be smoother, the joints will be tighter, and so on. But even if you can do 100 in a day, you are still a carpenter.
A master never repeats himself. If he designs one kind of furniture, the next one will definitely be completely new. The judge of his level is whether he has breakthroughs and innovations. Craftsmen are always thinking about how to make the things in their hands more, faster, and more perfect; masters have long since ceased to care about this thing, and are constantly thinking of new things.
③The craftsman is at the practical level, and the master is at the theoretical level. The upper limit of a craftsman's ability to engage in specific operations is rich experience, but he has not yet risen from experience to theory. Although these experiences embody and verify the law, they are not the law itself. The master stands on the theoretical level and operates by laws. Facing a melon field, the craftsman is busy picking melons one by one, and the master only lifts a melon vine; facing a large number of numbers, the craftsman is sweating profusely, counting one after another, and the master only needs to give out the numbers gently A formula. A craftsman always maintains his own skills and shows off his skills. Occasionally, he will achieve something, and stick to it. A master regards flowers and applause as passing smoke, and he keeps making progress, but his heart is still uneasy.
④The craftsman is relatively single, but the master is good at synthesis. We often say that a skill, a fresh move, can be used all over the world. This refers to a craftsman, but a master does not rely on this. Because all innovation and creation only appear after a comprehensive synthesis of introduction, absorption, comparison, hybridization, reconstruction, etc. When a craftsman relies on a skill and enjoys a profit, taking a handful of others and overpowering others, the master will use this skill to make just a grain of sand in the Ganges River, and then add bricks, tiles, soil, stones, and mud to create a new structure. A tall building. Newton and Einstein became masters of physics not only because of physics, but also more importantly, mathematics, philosophy, etc. The requirements for becoming a master in social sciences are even higher. Marx and Engels were encyclopedias of their time, and Mao Zedong was a treasure book of Chinese politics, military, and literature at that time.
⑤This is the difference between a master and a craftsman. Studying this distinction has no intention of disparaging the craftsmen. Masters are glorious milestones, and craftsmen are valuable paving stones. The world is colorful and needs both masters and craftsmen, just as it needs generals and soldiers. But we must admit that the world needs people to have a higher pursuit of goals. Napoleon said that a soldier who did not want to be a general was not a good soldier. Generals always grow up among good soldiers. He becomes a general when he is no longer satisfied with the repetition of shooting and dropping bombs, but moves from singleness to synthesis, from experience to rationality, and reaches the level of battle and strategy. a Although there are always a few who become masters from craftsmen, this enterprising spirit is the driving force for human progress and social development. As the old saying goes, if the Dharma is above, you can find it among them; if the Dharma is among you, you can find it below. What if everyone is the same? This society is unimaginable.
⑥We may not be able to reach the level of masters in actual performance, but at least we must follow the masters' thinking methods, such as striving for innovation, not repeating, and not being complacent about small tricks. We must identify, have goals, and pursue things. Although I can't reach it, my heart yearns for it. If an individual has such a mentality, he will make progress; if a nation has such a quality, it will be full of vitality; if there is such an atmosphere in society, it will be an innovative society.
(with deletions)
8. An incorrect summary of the content and interrelationships between the various parts of the article is. (3 points)
A. Paragraph 1 raises the topic of "What is the difference between a craftsman and a master", which leads to the following.
B． Paragraphs ② to ④ explain the differences between craftsmen and masters in three aspects. There is a progressive relationship between the three paragraphs.
C. Paragraph 5 points out that the enterprising spirit of pursuing mastery is the driving force for human progress and social development, following the in-depth discussion above.
D. Paragraph 6 shows that following the master’s ideas in thinking methods is helpful to individuals, the nation and society, and concludes the full text.
9. Judging from the context, the argument underlined a in paragraph ⑤ should be inserted. (3 points)
A. Luban was originally an ordinary carpenter. When he became technically proficient and was no longer satisfied with the repetition of axes and saws, but entered into architectural design and construction principles, he became a master of architecture.
B． When a painter becomes a master of painting, the key role in his artistic life is no longer painting, but science, literature, philosophy, etc.
C. Marie Curie gave her Nobel medal to her little daughter as a toy, but then she won another Nobel Prize.
D. Mr. Ji Xianlin's academic achievements have long been recognized by the academic community, but he continued to write in his later years and created a new world in prose writing.
10. Based on the information provided in the article, which of the following judgments about "master" is incorrect? (3 points)
A. Masters need to have a creative spirit, break through the original knowledge, experience and skills, and constantly conceive new things.
B． Between the "practical level" and the "theoretical level", the master stands on the "theoretical level" and operates by laws.
C. In terms of comprehensive application of disciplines, masters engaged in natural science research have higher requirements than masters engaged in social science research.
D. The master does not maintain his own skills or show off his skills. He regards flowers and applause as passing smoke and keeps making progress.
11. The following analysis of the underlined sentence in paragraph ⑤ is incorrect. (3 points)
A. The underlined sentences quote "ancient sayings" to prove the point, making the reasoning well-sourced, well-founded and more convincing.
B． The underlined sentence proves the view that "the world is colorful and needs both masters and craftsmen."
C. This paragraph quotes the underlined sentence "ancient saying" and Napoleon's famous reasoning. It can be seen that this paragraph mainly uses the method of reasoning.
D. The sentence "The law is above it, and what you get is within it" not only summarizes the argument in paragraph 5, but also links with the argument in paragraph 6.
12. Which of the following is an incorrect summary of the language characteristics of the selected text? (3 points)
A. The third paragraph of the article mostly uses metaphors, personification and other rhetorical methods to reason, which is humorous and vivid.
B． The sentence patterns of the article are varied, with both short and long sentences used, and they are well-proportioned, which enhances the expressiveness of the article, such as paragraph ④.
C. The wording of the article is accurate, such as the dotted word "possible" in paragraph 6, which not only emphasizes the performance gap between "us" and the master, but also takes into account special circumstances.
D. The article skillfully uses classical Chinese, such as "Although the power is not enough, the heart yearns for it" and other sentences, which are full of literary grace yet concise and clear.
Volume II: Non-choice questions (***90 points, please write the answers in the corresponding positions on the answer sheet)
3. Poetry dictation and extracurricular accumulation (13 points)
13. Fill in the blanks silently (1 point for each blank, no points for typos, omissions, or added words)
① Suddenly, like a spring breeze, . (Cen Shen's "Bai Xuege Sends Judge Wu Back to the Capital")
② The flowers fell helplessly. (Yan Shu's "Huanxi Sand")
③ Spring silkworms will not run out of silk until they are dead. (Li Shangyin's "Untitled")
④ Thousands of sails passed by the side of the sunken boat. (Liu Yuxi's "Rewarding Lotte at the First Banquet in Yangzhou")
⑤ Falling red is not a heartless thing. (Gong Zizhen's "Miscellaneous Poems of Jihai")
⑥ The courtyard is empty and clear like accumulated water, covered with bamboo and cypress shadows. (Su Shi's "Night Tour of Chengtian Temple")
⑦ Spring is like a strong young man, leading us forward. (Zhu Ziqing's "Spring")
⑧ In "Three Gorges", the sentence that uses fast horses and strong wind to describe the speed of the boat is " , ."
⑨ "Ten Chapters of "The Analects of Confucius"" Among them, another meaning similar to "choose the good ones and follow them, and change the bad ones" is " , ."
⑩ The song never leaves the mouth, (folk proverb)
Sesame blossoms——(Xiehouyu)
IV. Reading comprehension (II) (27 points)
(1) Classical Chinese reading. Read the article "Manjing Travels" (excerpt) and complete questions 14 to 18. (***12 points)
On the twenty-second day, the weather was slightly peaceful, so I went out to Dongzhi with a few friends to Manjing. There are high willows on the embankment, and the soil is slightly moist. The sky is vast and spacious, like a swan that has escaped from its cage. At that time, the ice skin began to dissolve, and the color of the waves suddenly became bright, and the scales were layered, so clear that the bottom could be seen. The crystals were like a newly opened mirror and the cold light suddenly emerged from the box. The mountains are washed by the clear snow, and the beauty is like wiping, and the fresh beauty is bright, like the face of a beautiful girl with her hair in a bun and her hair is beginning to sweep. The wicker will be comfortable, the soft tip of the mantle will be soft, and the wheat field will be lightly covered with hair. Although there are not many tourists, there are always people drinking tea from the spring, singing songs and people wearing red clothes. Although the wind is strong, walking makes you sweat profusely. All birds exposed to the sand, sipping the scales of the waves, are leisurely and contented, and there is joy among the feathers and scales. It turns out that there is no spring outside the countryside, and those who live in the city don't know it.
This is the only official who can wander among mountains, rocks, grass and trees without falling into trouble. And this place is suitable for Yu, and Yu's journey will start from here. How can evil be undisciplined? It is also the second month of Jihai.
14． Explain the meaning of the punctuated words in the following sentences. (2 points)
① The sky is slightly peaceful on the twenty-second day ② Tea from the spring
③ The wicker will not be comfortable ④ The scales of the waves
15. Find a sentence in the passage that has exactly the same meaning and usage as the following sentence with the added words. (2 points)
① If the bird escapes from the cage
② As beautiful as a swan
16. Translate the underlined sentence into modern Chinese. (3 points)
Translation:
17. The scenery described in the article "The crystal is like a newly opened mirror and the cold light has just emerged from the box" is,
The characteristics are (summarize in your own words). (2 points)
18. In the last paragraph of the selected article, the author said that he "can wander among the mountains, rocks and trees without wandering." "Xiao" means "free and unrestrained". What do you think are the places in the article that reflect the author's "Xiao Ran"? Trial analysis. (3 points)
(2) Modern text reading. Read the following and answer questions 19-23.
(***15 points)
Old villages and old houses
Wang Zhaosheng
①Every person who moves from a mountain village to a city probably has a dream like The illusory village memory also has a deep complex about the "old house". Because they not only wrap up our childhood, youth and even youth, but also become the root system of life for us wanderers who have traveled far and wide.
②Every time I return to the village where I was born and raised, there is an inexplicable sadness and guilt in my heart. The original villages and old houses in my memory were gradually replaced by new ones, and the rest were mostly decayed and withered, just like the remaining lotuses and fallen leaves after autumn, swaying tragically in the wind. I can no longer find my roots, nor can I save the passing years! Although the winding alley that I had to pass through when I was in elementary school is still there, it has changed beyond recognition. The decadence and filth can be seen at a glance. It has forever lost its original neatness, cleanliness, simplicity and mystery. Now not even a magical story can be hidden.
③There are also childhood wells, childhood rivers, childhood trees, childhood geese, childhood wheat fields and childhood vegetable gardens, all of which have now disappeared. I remember that there used to be a big river bend beside the village, which was a paradise for ducks and geese in the whole village. Whenever the sun shines in the village in the early morning, lovely chickens, ducks, geese and dogs swarm out. The chickens are looking for their playmates or fly up to the haystacks to sing loudly. The dogs are chasing their friends or barking at the sky. The ducks and geese They all ran towards Chiwan with proud steps. Ducks sway from side to side, have a clumsy gait, and often knock themselves over due to eagerness; but geese are quite different. They have high necks, light steps, and clear voices. They are gentlemen among animals. They are really majestic, beautiful, and extraordinary. The otherworldly appearance is breathtaking! Nowadays, the river bend in the village has dried up, and the ducks and geese are no longer visible, leaving only the restlessness of chickens and dogs day and night.
④My old house has long been demolished and a new house built. Now we can no longer find its original image. Due to lack of foresight, not even a single photo was left at that time. This has always made me heartbroken, because the old house entrusted my childhood, youth, and youth life, and also wrapped up my grandfather, grandmother, father, mother, and brothers. The years when sisters lived together, I am afraid that if I accidentally lose these memories, I will never be able to find the old house again. I once wanted to paint a painting of the "old house" by myself, but I was slow to start painting because of my poor painting skills. I once hoped that my son would learn to paint well and one day he would paint my memories. But that is something that is far away and cannot be expected, because no matter how good my son’s painting skills are, can he paint the deep and affectionate sea water in my memory? So, I decided to use an article to describe the old house, even a simple outline!
⑤My mother once told us brothers and sisters: "In the future, please don't forget my uncle. He helped our family build the south house brick by brick and wood by donkey." Mother. My uncle and I have passed away long ago, but my mother’s words and my uncle’s figure still live in my heart. During the four years of college entrance examination from 1979 to 1982, I lived alone in this south room during the holidays. Although the whole room was messy at that time, I used white paper to paper the broken mat on the earthen kang, sat on a tall bamboo cage filled with grass, leaned on a large high table, and reviewed the course facing the south window. Although the voice of reciting books is a bit sad, the wind from the south and the fragrance of the vegetable garden outside the window are refreshing! After failing the college entrance examination three times, I finally succeeded in the fourth year. What this south house has given me is not only a peaceful time and space, but also the character and determination to endure loneliness and loneliness, as well as the warm wind and the fragrance of flowers from the south!
⑥To this day, I don’t have any objects of the old village or old house in my hands, all I have is the yellowed memory! Moreover, in recent years, there are fewer and fewer old things in old villages and hometowns. This is a frustrating thing! Fortunately, many memories are still fresh in the negative film of my soul, just like the dew-covered flowers in the vegetable garden after the rain. I want to keep them with my pen earlier, especially those that have touched me and are beneficial to my growth and soul. People and things!
⑦ As time goes by, the old village and old houses fall like withered petals, but I think of it like a deceased relative during the Qingming Festival, and give it a warm and plain feeling. , exciting yet calm, close yet distant memorial ceremony, with my sincere heart and a clear night's dream as a wanderer from far away.
19. Throughout the text, why does the author feel "sad and guilty" every time he returns to the village where he was born and raised? (3 points)
20. Analyze the expressive effect of the underlined sentence in paragraph ③. (3 points)
21. Summarize the events written in paragraph 5 and analyze the author’s purpose of writing these events. (4 points)
22. Imitate a wavy sentence in paragraph 7, requiring similar sentence patterns, using metaphorical rhetorical techniques, and connections between clauses. (2 points)
23. The article describes various changes in old villages and old houses. This phenomenon is very common in real life. Please share your views based on the original article. (3 points)
5. Composition (50 points)
24. Please modify the following paragraph as required. (Each question is worth 2 points, ***10 points)
A The 2010 Shanghai World Expo attracted 70 million visitors from all over the world. For hundreds of years, the discussion of the "harmonious city" model has never stopped. China's hosting of the World Expo is a good opportunity to showcase its national strength. C From "Utopia" to "Ideal City" to "Pastoral City", people have been exploring how to establish balance and harmony in the city.
The World Expo is not only a stage for people to display their innovative achievements, but also a platform for people to exchange urban development models.
① Sentence A has inappropriate word order, the correct expression is: (2 points)
② Sentence B has incomplete sentence components, the revised sentence should be: (2 points)
③ There is a punctuation error in sentence C, which should be changed to (2 points)
④ The related words in sentence D are not properly matched. The revised sentence should be: (2 points)
< p>⑤ There is a sentence in the article that does not connect well with the context and should be deleted. This sentence is: (2 points)25. Essay (40 points) Choose one of the following two essay questions to write an essay.
(1) "My teacher", you can fill in the subject names such as "Chinese", "Mathematics", "English"... etc. in the horizontal line.
Requirements: 1. Choose one of your subject teachers to write and complete the question.
2. Real names and school names are not allowed.
3. Write a narrative of more than 600 words.
4. Stylistic standards.
(2) The ancients said: "It is better to retreat and build a net if you are looking for a fish in the abyss." In life, we have many expectations and goals, but what we lack is often perseverance and hard work. What's your opinion on this? Please draft your own topic and write an argumentative essay.
Requirements: 1. Clear views and sufficient reasoning.
2. More than 600 words.
3. Stylistic standards.
2011 Guilin Junior High School Graduation Entrance Examination Chinese Language Reference Answers and Scoring Criteria
1. Basic knowledge and application (2 points for each question, ***10 points)
1. B 2. A 3. D 4. C 5. A
2. Reading Comprehension (I) (20 points)
(1) Read "Broken" Zhenzi? Write a poem for Chen Tongfu to send it to.” Complete questions 6 to 7. (***5 points)
6. C (2 points) 7. A (3 points)
(2) Modern text reading. Read the following and answer questions 8 to 12. (Each question is 3 points, ***15 points)
8. B 9. A 10. C 11. B 12. A
3. Ancient poetry dictation and extracurricular accumulation ( 13 points)
13. Fill in the blanks silently (1 point for each blank, no points for typos, omissions, or added words)
① Thousands of pear trees bloom ② Deja vu returns, the swallow returns ③ The wax torch turns to ashes and tears begin to dry ④ In front of the diseased tree Wan Muchun
⑤ Turns into spring mud to protect flowers ⑥ Algae and water plants are crisscrossed in the water ⑦ It has iron-like arms, waist and feet ⑧ Although it rides on the wind,
It is not a disease ⑨ When you see a good person, you think about it, and when you see an unworthy person, you have to introspect yourself. ⑩ Keep your fists in your hands and keep improving
IV. Reading Comprehension (Ⅱ) (27 points)
(1) Classical Chinese read. Read the article "Manjing Travels" (excerpt) and complete questions 14 to 18. (***12 points)
14. ① Warmth ② Drink tea ③ Stretch ④ Fish (0.5 points for each question, ***2 points)
15. ① "A bird exposed to the sand"; "The scales of the sipping waves"; "Between the hairy and scaly hyenas"; "Beyond the suburban fields"; "Between the rocks, grass and trees"
(1 point, answer one example That’s it)
② “Jingjing is like a mirror”; “Carefree and contented”; “Small among the mountains, rocks, grass and trees” (1 point, any answer is enough)
16 ． Only then did I realize that there may not be (not even) spring in the fields in the suburbs, it’s just that people living in the city don’t know that there are such changes. 1 point, ***3 points).
17． Water (spring water) (1 point) The clarity of frozen water when it first melts (1 point) (***2 points)
18. Find the corresponding content (1 point) and analyze how to reflect it (2 points). (***3 points)
Example: "If a bird escapes from its cage" can reflect "xiaoran", because this sentence shows that the author is in a happy mood after seeing the beautiful scenery, and behaves as freely as a bird escaped from its cage. It matches the word "Xiaoran" very well.
The content that embodies "Xiaoran" includes: tourists' activities, animals leisurely, "only this official", "the rest of the tour will start from here, can evil be without discipline?"
(2) Modern literature reading. Read the following and answer questions 19-23. (***15 points)
19. "Bitterness" is because the scenes of villages and old houses in my memory no longer exist (1 point); I can no longer find my roots (1 point) ); "Guilt" is because there are no commemorative objects or photos of the old house (1 point). (***3 points)
20. The author uses personification and parallelism to describe the free and happy living conditions of the chickens, ducks, geese and dogs in the village (1 point), and expresses the old village and old houses. The vitality and vitality (1 point) reflect the author's love and nostalgia for the old village (1 point).
(***3 points)
21. My mother’s earnest teachings (1 point) and my unremitting efforts in South House (1 point). The purpose of the author writing this is to express his infinite nostalgia for his hometown (1 point) and to explain that his hometown is the root of the life of a wanderer who has traveled far away (1 point). (***4 points)
22. The sentence patterns are similar and there are connections between clauses (1 point); the metaphor is appropriate (1 point) (***2 points)
Example: As the curtain slowly opens, the graceful dancers stand in the center of the stage like hibiscus emerging from water.
23. The disappearance (change) of old villages and old houses is inevitable due to social development (1 point). Old villages and old houses (hometowns) entrust people with memories of their past lives. They are the roots of people who are far away from their homeland and should be cherished (1 point). The disappearance of old villages and old houses has caused the loss of simplicity, tranquility and warmth contained in them, causing irreparable regrets. Therefore, we should work hard to find the combination of development and cultural protection so that society can develop harmoniously. (1 point) (***3 points)
When answering the question, you must stick to the original text and answer as close to the meaning as possible.
5. Composition (50 points)
24. Please modify the following paragraph as required. (10 points)
①...Attracted 70 million people from all over the world to visit (2 points)
②For hundreds of years, people (us) have been interested in the "harmonious city" model The discussion has never stopped (2 points)
③ "," (1 point) changed to "," (1 point) (***2 points)
④ It is not only a stage for people to display their innovative achievements, but also (more importantly, still) a platform for people to exchange urban development models. (2 points)
⑤China’s hosting of the World Expo is a good opportunity to showcase its national strength. (2 points)
25. (40 points) Essay scoring requirements and instructions (see table below)
Requirements
Items
Level
One (good)
40~36 points two (better)
35~32 points three (medium)
31~28 points four (poor)
27~24 points five (very poor)
15~0 points
Content
(16 points) To the point, with a prominent focus, substantial content, and novel and profound ideas. It is to the point, the center is prominent, the content is substantial, and the intention is correct. It is basically to the point, the center is basically clear, and the content is substantial. Basically to the point, the center is not clear. Seriously deviates from the meaning of the question.
Language
(19 points) The writing is fluent, the language is vivid and accurate, and the expression is good. The text is written in order, the language is basically accurate, and the expression is good. The language is basically fluent, with a few speech defects. The sentences are not fluent and there are many language errors. Irrational.
Structure
(10 points) The structure is rigorous, the levels are clear, and the ideas are novel and ingenious. The structure is compact, the layers are clear, and the concept is novel. The structure is complete and the layers are clear. The structure level is confusing. The structure is incomplete and the levels are confusing.
Written writing (5 points) The fonts are neat and beautiful, the writing, punctuation and format are correct, and the paper is neat and tidy. The font is correct, the writing, punctuation, and formatting are correct, and the roll surface is clean. The handwriting is clear, with a few typos and punctuation errors, and a few corrections. The handwriting is illegible, with many typos and punctuation errors, and many erasures. The font is difficult to read, there are many typos and punctuation errors, and there are many corrections on the page.
Instructions: ① 1 point will be deducted for every 3 wrong words in the text. Repeats will not be recorded, and a maximum of 3 points will be deducted.
② If the number of words is less than 600 words, points will be deducted as appropriate.
③ If the candidate’s real place name, school name, and person’s name appear in the article, 3 points will be deducted once verified.