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Taishan sunrise
Zhenduo wrote to ask me to say a few words in Tagore of Novel Monthly. I said yes, but this time.
I was very happy to go to Jinan, Mount Tai and Kong Ling. There was a time when I couldn't concentrate on writing the whole article until now.
Sit down as soon as you arrive and write irregularly what you want to write.
We can see the sun from the top of Mount Tai. It is not a miracle for those who have crossed the sea to watch the sun rise below the horizon;
Personally, I enjoyed the unparalleled sunshine in the rivers, seas and Indian Ocean. But watch the sunrise at the top of the mountain, especially Mount Tai.
At the top, we don't have awkward curiosity, but we also expect a special realm, which is different from the plain and the sea. Sure enough, I
When we first got up, it was still dark, the west was livid, the east was slightly white, and the universe was just-if used.
Old word description-a body is huge and gray. But this is Han Xiao. He feels very strong. I'm not very awake when I sleep.
A concise impression. When I looked back carefully, I couldn't help screaming-because I had just seen something I had never seen before.
Field. It turns out that last night's storm project was built into a sea of clouds. Except for Sun Guanfeng and us.
Beyond the Jade Emperor Peak, there are only clouds in the east, west, north and south, which are like countless thick wool before Xu Chao is exposed.
Sheep, sleeping neck to neck, curled ears and corners are faintly discernible. At that time, I was the only one in this vast sea of clouds.
Ever since I stood on a foggy island, I have had a strange fantasy-
My body grows infinitely, and the mountain under my feet is just a fist-sized stone relative to my body shape; The giant is covered in hair,
Long hair is like an inky flag in the wind, whispering. The giant stood on his back at the top of the earth.
In the east, a pair of long arms are stretched out, silently waiting, welcoming, urging and calling; In worship, in prayer,
Tears-tears I haven't seen for a long time, you will see the interaction of sadness and joy. ...
This tear is not empty, and this silent prayer is not without response.
The giant's hand points to the east-
What's in the East and what's on display?
There are magnificent colors in the East, and there are great shining lights in the East. Here we are, here we are. ...
Rose juice, grape pulp, bauhinia juice, agate essence, frosted maple leaves-a large number of dyers, working under tired clouds;
Numerous winding ichthyosaurs climbed up the pale clouds.
The extraordinary splendour on one side removes the drowsiness all over the sky and awakens the Ming Xia in all directions-
Bright pony, run ...
The sea of clouds is also alive; Lan Tao fell asleep in the form of a beast, and he began to shout again, shaking his head and tail at us.
The washing of the green steamed bun-shaped island aroused foam waves in all directions, shaking the floating reef of life, as if to report the light and peace.
Joy is coming. ...
Look at the east again-Hercules has swept away his obstacles, and the golden light like a bird screen emerges from the boundless shoulders.
Scattered on the edge of the earth. Get up ... get up ... push, push. The round skull of pure flame jumped out of the horizon after exploration.
Climb to the back of the cloud and shine in the sky. ...
Singing and praising, this is the resurrection of the East, and this is the victory of light. ...
The giant who prayed, whose body color spans the boundless sea of clouds, has gradually disappeared into general joy;
Now, his magnificent song of praise has spread in all directions and corners in the changing clouds. ...
Listen, Puxie cheers; Look, this shining light!
This is my fantasy of recalling the sunrise on Mount Tai at this time, and it is also my eulogy to let Tagore come to China.
(Original issue1September 1923 Novel Monthly 14 Volume 9)
Note (1) Zhen Duo, namely Zheng Zhenduo (1898— 1958), is a writer, editor and literary activist. He is a literary research society.
One of the founders is editing a monthly novel.
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Genius writers are a little different from ordinary writers, even if they order, even if they are in a hurry.
As a chapter, there are always some claws of genius.
It goes without saying that Sunrise on Mount Tai is an orderly work, which has been explained in the preface of the article (the first paragraph is the preface).
More importantly, Tagore, as a master of oriental literature, not only has the reputation of "Tianzhu sage", but also won the Nobel Prize.
The first world poet to win a scholarship. On the eve of 1924' s visit to China, "Tagore fever" raged.
It is not easy to write a eulogy for Tagore's special issue. Xu Zhimo compared Tagore with "sunrise on Mount Tai".
His literary creation and his trip to China express the admiration of China poets for Tagore, which is really a wonderful metaphor.
What a heartfelt hope, what a warm welcome and what a wonderful visit! The poet used his rich imagination.
Language, depicting an unforgettable picture of welcoming the sun:
My body grows infinitely, and the mountain under my feet is just a fist-sized stone relative to my body shape; The giant is covered in hair,
Long hair is like an inky flag in the wind, whispering. The giant stood on his back at the top of the earth.
In the east, a pair of long arms are stretched out, silently waiting, welcoming, urging and calling; In worship, in prayer,
Tears-tears I haven't seen for a long time, you will see the interaction of sadness and joy. ...
This tear is not empty, and this silent prayer is not without response.
The giant's hand points to the east-
What's in the East and what's on display?
There are many magnificent colors in the East, and there are many great flashes in the East-it appeared and arrived, right here.
In ... ...
The imagination and composition here are extraordinary. It is particularly noteworthy that the article only describes Mount Tai.
Watching the sunrise scene and fantasy, welcoming Tagore to China is just mentioned at the end. The poet's talent is reflected in his chic.
Here: Xu Zhimo didn't regard the great event of writing a eulogy for Tagore in China as a mental burden, but still traveled around.
I'm glad I forgot to come back. He didn't want to bemoan the words, but he was inspired by what he wanted. But he can mobilize his own personal experience.
Get together into a more meaningful and tense artistic creation, even if you are lazy and slippery, you will show your talent for being lazy and slippery.
Without losing the basic artistic charm and ingenuity. Because of this, this song "Sunrise on Mount Tai" is more important than the general eulogy.
Ten times smarter. This is not only reflected in the author's brushwork closely following the spectacular scenery of Mount Tai sunrise, but also contains a welcome Thai language in each stroke.
Gore's emotion and praise; It is also reflected in the integration of unique personal experience and universal emotion. Especially before.
The description of the giant who prayed in the face of Changfeng, and the way of writing that the giant disappeared in general joy at the end, made people produce.
Many imaginations and associations can best reflect Xu Zhimo's talent and creativity.
However, this is a hasty work, and the poet's talent failed to cover up the artistic roughness. First, this article.
The style of the article is not strong. The first paragraph is prose writing, which is the actual writing of detailed experiences and feelings, while the latter is
The tone of the text is obviously prose poetry, lyrical, imaginative and suggestive. Although both styles of writing are beautiful,
But put together, it is very disharmonious. It doesn't matter that the traditional and experienced style is not strong. Great writers often
He is the creator of the new style. As long as he is self-contained, he has his own spirit and charm. Artistic creation is
Good thing. But the problem is that this "Taishan Sunrise" is just not coherent enough, has no muddy realm, and cannot be self-contained
Form a grid. After all, artistic creation is not a job that can impress people with talent. It takes not only talent, but also concentration.
Concentrated spirit, hard art management. Perfect works are always the balance between talent and conscious art management.