If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", the ending is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think again and again." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was spoiled by a bad ending at the end of reading. The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", so
it is more difficult to write the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although it is not necessarily required that the
end of an article is "leopard tail", it is also required that the end be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ①
gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease. He insists on shaking a few words, handing over the whereabouts of people who don't need to be confessed one by one, and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. 2 empty slogans. At the end, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article < P >, which made the theme worse. 3 dragging mud and water. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of the examination composition? The following ending skills,
are commonly used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
1. natural bunching. No matter what style of the article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the ending problems of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, and is simple, bright and plain, which is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so it is impossible to pay too much attention to "form" and "method". It is a good article as long as you are passionate and write freely, and you can express your feelings
. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and sloppy, but ending the whole situation with the natural trend of literary development. In the text learned, there are many such examples, so I won't repeat them here.
2, head-to-tail echo. The ending should echo the beginning, and write a sentence that echoes the beginning and is not simply repeated. This ending method is a very common method of closing all kinds of < P > articles. This method can arouse the reader's psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling that the head and tail are round and integrated. For example,
"A Precious Shirt" begins with the words "In my home, there is a white shirt that is really cool." At the end, I wrote: "For four years, I have carefully collected this precious shirt, and I have never been willing to wear it once." The end and the beginning of Praise of Poplar echoed: "I want to praise the white poplar loudly!" "
3, pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending is to express the theme
clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text, using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly when the full text is about to end, so this way of ending is also called "painting a dragon to make it clear
style". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it is written: "Changing nationality does not mean changing national feelings, and no nation is so attached to its native land as we are < P >." At the end of "Remember a spinning wheel", I wrote: "It is fun to fight against difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. End with famous sayings, police names and poems, with the intention of extending the article and revealing the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in the hearts of
readers and has the effect of "words are exhausted, meaning is endless". At the end of "Pear Blossoms on the Post Road", it reads: "Pears on the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric argument. Closing the article by lyrical discussion can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse the * * * of readers, which has a strong artistic appeal. This ending method is mainly used in narrative writing, but also in expository writing and argumentative writing. There are various forms of lyrical discussion ending, so it is more free to end in this way. A good lyrical discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of realism and sufficiency. For example, at the end of "Flower Market", it says, "She is standing among hundreds of flowers with a smile, and she is < P > like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Remembering My Mother, which is the end of a typical lyrical argument < P >.
the composition should be done in one go, and the end is in line with the previous text, which is indispensable. The ending of a composition, like the beginning, is different, but < P > there are rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so it is forbidden to copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' usual solid training, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic achievements".
Please look at the end of a candidate's composition:
If life is no longer green and we are still searching, why not take action to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green. At that time, green will sing: "I come gently, just as you (the desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life no longer has green")
Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life no longer has green", and the article begins with "past", "today" and "today" Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentences in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which led to thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination. Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing, and which ending method to use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on. It is also necessary for middle school students' friends to train more and experience more in practice, and strive to explore and achieve the effect of drawing inferences from others. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell is ringing, the reverberation will reverberate around the beam".
Migration training
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant teas, which makes people think again and again." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending at the end of reading! How to make the ending deep and powerful, lingering and memorable is the key for us middle school students to practice ending writing. Here are a few training questions for students to learn from.
Piece training questions:
1. Write a composition with "reading" as the topic.
Writing tip: "Books are the nourishment of human beings" and "Books are the ladder of human progress". Masters say that books are the crystallization of human wealth, and they are also our teachers and friends. On this broad topic, we students must have something to say. How to make it better, we should also pay attention to the following points: ① The angle should be new and small, and the story of reading a book and a problem in reading will be written deeply and thoroughly because of the small angle. (2) to write their own experiences and feelings, write the true feelings, don't write the content of the big empty, don't write rhetoric. (3) give priority to with a kind of expression, avoid by all means style is not unified. At the end of this kind of composition, you only need to summarize the full text and ask questions at the end of the article. Example at the end: Life tells me that only those who can really read "extracurricular books" are outstanding children of the times! I seem to feel the wind of the times passing by my ears, leaving a message: Be careful! I would also like to advise thousands of peers in Qian Qian: read more to think carefully, and read carefully to distinguish! For our beautiful tomorrow! ("I watch extracurricular reading")
2. Writing hint of Lyrics in Winter: An article can express strong feelings, soft feelings, deep feelings and light feelings. The key is from what angle the author writes. This lyrical article. When writing, it is necessary to inject the author's true feelings, so that the article has life and vitality. We advocate that students should write stories and express their true feelings, so that the ending can naturally make the finishing point and sublimate their feelings. Otherwise, empty lyricism at the end will only make people feel like posters pasted up indiscriminately, which is very uncoordinated.
Example at the end: "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?" This famous poem has been repeatedly quoted for decades, which is nothing more than a symbol of hope. In this transparent winter, people can clearly understand the road under their feet with a clear head, and walking step by step, lying still or taking detours will delay the realization of hope.
3. Take "window" as the topic, and write a composition from your own angle. Except poetry, the style is not limited, and the topic is self-made.
Writing Tip: There must be a window in a building project, and the human eye is called the window of the soul ... There are too many connotations attached to the window and too many extended meanings worth exploring. As a topic, there are many ideas that can be expounded. We should write from a familiar angle according to our own feelings. At the end of this kind of composition, the finishing touch can be adopted. The ancients compared the ending to a bell, which is to produce the artistic effect of lingering sound. If the ending can leave readers room for imagination, it will be memorable and will undoubtedly add luster to the article.
Not long ago, grandma left, taking away the laughter, the greetings, the window and my heart. I know, that window is the most beautiful memory of my life ... Ah! The old man, the true feelings, the small window ... ("Grandma's Small Window")
Fan Wenxuan's analysis
Ruthless back
When I read Zhu Ziqing's "Back", I think of the back of my parents. But it's not completely different, because Zhu Ziqing's article shows his father's concern for him, and my parents' back leaves me with only ruthless regret. When I was five years old, I was taken to court, and my grandmother held me in a chair. When I saw my parents, I called out to them, but they ignored me. My father and mother argued endlessly in court. Finally, when I heard that I was awarded to my mother, my father left the court. I shouted "Dad-",but the "shadow" left me without looking back. Since then, I have lived with my mother and grandmother.
but a few days later, my heartless mother left me, too. Grandma wanted to leave me, but she couldn't bear it, so she left me, so I was like a child without father and mother, living with her all day.
In the days when my grandmother is with me, I often think of the scenes when I lived with my parents: my father rode a car, took me to play in the street and took me fishing by the river; My mother took me shopping and bought me clothes. I can't stop crying when I think about it.
After that, my grandmother sent me to school, and my uncle provided my tuition. When my classmates invited me to his birthday celebration, I was really envious when I saw other people's parents give their children beautiful gifts to make wishes in front of candles. How much I want to have a birthday. I don't want that sweet and delicious cake or that exquisite gift. I just want my parents to make up and wish me a birthday, but I have been looking forward to it until today, but I haven't.
when I learned from my uncle that my mother remarried and my father got married, I cried bitterly. Grandma came over and said, "Don't cry, son. They are heartless things. They don't deserve your sadness. You should study hard and do something big to show them." At this time, grandma's tears also shed unconsciously.
Mom and Dad, I want to have a home, a warm and happy home, and I want to have the love of my parents, but I can't get it. Dad, mom, do you know that your departure has brought me infinite sadness and resentment, made me suffer the pain of losing my loved ones, and made my child, who has parents but can't get their love, experience many human frustrations! I once again call from the heart: "Dad, Mom, have pity on me, remarry ..." However, all I can answer is those waves of echoes, and the back that is getting farther and farther away from me and getting smaller and smaller in my eyes ...
Conclusion: The divorce of parents has brought indelible trauma to children's hearts. The little author expressed his feelings of missing his parents in the article.
The beginning of the composition
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The beginning of the composition (Shunde Teaching and Research Office)
Jia Baoyu said an insightful remark when commenting on the Grand View Garden: All beauty must be "natural and interesting". The outstanding college entrance examination composition of millions of candidates in the country is inseparable from a "reason" and "interest". College Entrance Examination magazine collected and sorted out the excellent compositions of college entrance examination in recent years, and found that there are many remarkable places, but all of them are full of wit and interest. Just looking at the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and inspired. Let's classify them and dedicate them to you. Maybe you can learn from them.
first, take the lead in reading the opening
The most taboo in the opening is the feeling of digression with a pen, which tells the marking teacher directly that the author has not carefully examined the meaning of the topic, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginning of several compositions in the 24 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.
Example 1 "Remembered by Language and Communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, the clouds are rolling and the clouds are comfortable. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; The lush green clothes in midsummer indicate the harvest in autumn; Fruits in the golden autumn show the bleak winter. Four seasons cycle, autumn goes to winter, and everything in nature is wonderful. If you have not been baptized by the severe winter, how can you expect the hope of early spring? Our human society is also like nature. Without the connection of language and the same lifestyle, how can we connect the world as a whole and build a bridge of communication? " The metaphor at the beginning is inappropriate, and the previous metaphor part has not paved the way for the similarities. Why do you say that? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where is this relationship between "green dress" and "bumper harvest", "fruit" and "bleak"? In particular, the rhetorical question "How can we hope for early spring if we have not been baptized by severe winter" is even more irrelevant to the topic.
Example 2 "Mind Interaction": "The tree never laughs at the weakness of the grass, which, though weak, adds to the green of the grassland; Peony never laughs at the simplicity of wild flowers, which, though simple, bring infinite vitality to the earth. The reason why trees and grasses, peonies and wildflowers can be in harmony is because they have the same language, mutual communication and spiritual interaction. " When this beginning is close to the topic, it also fails to find the similarities, which seems far-fetched.
Example 3 Language and Communication: "Language is a grass, while communication is a shade; Language is a white cloud, while communication is a cloud. Language is a flower.