One sunny day, Su Dongpo and his friends were boating and drinking on the West Lake. Suddenly, dark clouds billowed, heavy rain suddenly came, and thick dark clouds surged. Clouds and rain are more urgent. Dark clouds have not covered the mountain by the lake, and showers have fallen from the sky. Glittering raindrops beat on the lake, splashing like sparkling pearls and jumping into the cabin. Forced by the heavy rain, the poet hurried to shelter from the rain.
As the saying goes: "In summer, children's faces change three times a day." No, the atmosphere was so tense just now. Suddenly a gust of wind swept in and dispersed the dark clouds, and the shower stopped immediately. The poet stood on the railing of Wang Hu Building and looked at it. Downstairs, there is no rain at all, and it is calm. The sky reflects water, and the water reflects the sky. The sky is so clear and blue.
2. How to rewrite ancient poems into articles? The ideological content of ancient poetry is basically unchanged, but the form of ancient poetry is changed into vernacular, the structure is changed and the language is reorganized.
Poetry: Xin Qiji, the author of Qingpingle Village, in the Song Dynasty, the eaves of Mao were low and the streams were covered with green grass. Drunk Wu local drunk, gentle voice, white-haired old man who is it? The eldest son is weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream, and the second son is busy knitting chicken cages.
My favorite is my youngest son, who is lying in the grass, peeling the lotus just picked. Rewrite the article: In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low hut.
Behind the hut are green and straight bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly. The river looks sparkling in the sunlight.
A breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Everything else seems to be put down.
White inside and pink inside, like a shy girl with a veil on her face. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. It is more beautiful and lovely against the backdrop of streams and lotus flowers.
There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. From their red faces, we can see that they are all a little drunk. They are together, talking intimately in Wu dialect, and the second son next to them puts in a few words from time to time! The old couple's eldest son is desperately weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream. How hard he works! The second son is not idle, and is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, very focused. The youngest son, who is not yet an adult, knows nothing. He could only lie on the side of the stream and tease the fish naughtily, peeling the lotus while eating and shaking his feet. Really cute! What a happy family! I was deeply intoxicated. I just stood there, unwilling to leave for a long time ... spread the message:
Rewriting method: 1, style change: the ideological content of the original is basically unchanged, and most of them only focus on changing the form of the original.
For example, ancient poems are rewritten into words, poems are rewritten into narratives, and narratives are rewritten into expository texts; This novel has been adapted into a play. 2. Change the style: change the classical Chinese into vernacular Chinese; Change the structure, change the sequence of flashbacks, and reorganize the material; 3. Change the person: the first person is changed to the third person, and the third person is changed to the first person.
4. Change the sentence pattern: enlarge the sentence. Abbreviations, etc.
References:
Baidu encyclopedia-rewrite.
3. How to change ancient poems into quatrains?
Two orioles sing green willows,
A line of egrets rose into the sky.
The window contains autumn snow in Xiling,
Mambo Wu Dong Wan Li Ship.
Grandpa Dong left slowly, and Teacher Chun came to us with a smile. Willow gives off green buds, and the little buds look at this wonderful world with curious eyes. The poet can't sit still in the room any longer. He looked out of the window and saw two lovely orioles standing on the tree, singing touching songs, and he was very happy for the arrival of Miss Chun.
A row of white-feathered egrets, neatly arranged, spread their big white wings and flashed vigorously, flying to the blue sky, white clouds and hometown.
Through the window, you can see that the opposite Xiling Mountain is covered with a thousand-year-old snow, as if to put a silver shirt on the peak. The scenery is like a Chinese painting embedded in a window frame. It's really spectacular and beautiful.
The poet pushed open the door, and on the pier in front of the door, all kinds of Wan Li ships from Soochow, large and small, were parked. These ships carry goods and give them away. People enjoy the picturesque scenery by boat. Everything looks so comfortable and peaceful.
Shepherd boy
Look! At first glance, the ground seems to be covered with a piece of green grass! The wind is blowing gently, and the sound of "rustling" spreads everywhere.
Listen! The shepherd boy is playing the flute again, and the cheerful tone teases the evening breeze and whispers slowly in his ear.
In the morning, when the sun was half exposed, the shepherd boy took a flute and went up the mountain to herd cattle. He sat on the cow's back, playing the flute and humming a tune. Running happily on the grass, unrestrained, without any troubles. Until I was tired of playing, I lay on the grass and looked at the white clouds and birds in the sky, with a smile floating around my mouth.
After dinner, the sun has set and the bright moon has climbed up. Holding a flute in his hand, the shepherd boy came to the haystack with cheerful steps, lay down without taking off his hemp fiber, listened to the unknown bugs singing beautiful songs in the grass, looked up at the bright moon in the night sky, and came up with pictures in his mind.
Listen to that cheerful tune blowing again, how beautiful it is! Hey! Why did you stop? Oh … so the shepherd boy closed his eyes and fell asleep. Yes! He is really tired, so let him have a good sleep listening to the lullaby of bugs!
Qingpingle village residence (rewriting ancient poems) ..
In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low hut. Behind the hut are green and straight bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly. The river looks sparkling in the sunlight. A breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Everything else seems to be put down. White transparent powder,
Pink, like a shy girl with a veil. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. It is more beautiful and lovely against the backdrop of streams and lotus flowers.
There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. From their red faces, we can see that they are all a little drunk. They are together, talking intimately in Wu dialect, and the second son next to them puts in a few words from time to time!
The old couple's eldest son is desperately weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream. How hard he works! The second son is not idle, and is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, very focused. The youngest son, who is not yet an adult, knows nothing. He could only lie on the side of the stream and tease the fish naughtily, peeling the lotus while eating and shaking his feet. Really cute!
What a happy family! I was deeply intoxicated, just standing there, unwilling to leave for a long time …
4. How to rewrite ancient poems into short essays It is difficult for primary school students to rewrite ancient poems into narratives, but it is also a good way to train writing and broaden their thinking.
Here, I take Su Xinshi Xugong Store as an example to talk about some experiences in guiding rewriting. The poet Yang Wanli was a unique writer in the Southern Song Dynasty. His landscape poems are fresh and lively, full of life breath, and the title is Cheng Zhai Ti.
Written in 1 192, the first two sentences of this poem describe the beautiful countryside at the turn of spring and summer, and the last two sentences describe the scene of children playing with butterflies, which shows the poet's happy mood in spring. On the basis of understanding the thoughts and feelings expressed in ancient poems, let students imagine creatively.
The emphasis of rewriting is on the last two poems, because these two poems create a vivid image of "children flapping butterflies", and the whole picture is dynamic, in contrast to the static description of the first two poems. The appearance of children broke the stillness and made the picture come alive. After the children saved the butterfly, the picture returned to the stillness.
When rewriting, we should follow the order of "static-dynamic-static", grasp the movements, expressions and emotions of children when they jump on the media, and write down the disappointment that children can't find when they see Huang Die flying into the day lily. Please look at a short passage rewritten by a child under the guidance of a teacher.
There is a path outside the fence, with sparse hooves. Although the flowers on the roadside trees have fallen, the leaves have not been shaded. In the fields, the oil flowers are golden.