Text discussion
Jinhua
First, the overall grasp
This prose poem makes us feel the deep affection between mother and son, the love between mother and son, such intimacy and intimacy. Why are children so happy, so naive, so lively and so cute? Because he was bathed in maternal love. Love is communication. The child receives maternal love and thinks about how to repay it. He wants to become a golden flower, so that his mother can smell the flowers and read without hurting her eyes. From children's love for their mothers, we can think of mothers' love for their children.
Second, the problem research
1. Why does the author imagine the child as a golden flower?
We in China like to compare children to flowers, and so do Indians. Tagore imagined the child as a golden flower, the most beautiful flower on the holy tree, praising the child's loveliness. Golden yellow reflects the brilliance of maternal love. People love flowers, and flowers also benefit people. This is a symbol that children want to repay their maternal love. Tagore's imagination is really novel and wonderful.
2. Why does the child turn into a golden flower and hide it from his mother again and again?
Look at what the child has done for his mother and you will understand his wishes. Children always want to do something for their mother and become a golden flower. They can watch their mother work, let their mother smell the flowers and project them to the place where their mother reads. Children know that maternal love is selfless, and the return of maternal love should also be selfless. He didn't want his mother to praise him, but asked her to live a warmer life. So he spoiled, that is, kept it from his mother.
Why did mom say "you bad boy" at the meeting?
As mentioned above, my mother cried and said, "Son, where are you?" You can imagine how anxious the mother who lost her child is. This kind of anxiety must be increasing with time. Once she sees her, she is surprised and happy, and naturally blames the child.
A paper boat for mom
First, the overall perception
This is an affectionate call from a wanderer who is far away from home to his mother who misses him day and night, and an affectionate ode to his dear mother.
The waves are rough and the wind is strong, and the cruise ship sails to a strange country in the bumps. How long will it take to get back to my mother's arms after leaving Wan Li? Although the beautiful and magnificent Pacific Ocean is outside the ship, the lonely and melancholy poet has no intention of enjoying the wonders in front of him. With tears in his eyes, he is concentrating on folding paper boats and throwing them into the sea one by one. Although the wind is high and the waves are urgent, the paper boat is wet and stuck to the bow, but she still won't give up and keeps folding every day, hoping that one will wander to her mother who misses her day and night forever.
There are many poems expressing maternal love in ancient and modern China and abroad, but this poem has its own uniqueness. With childlike innocence and innocence, the poet found an intermediary from children's game world-a paper boat, and used it to expand his feelings. In the first and second verses of the poem, I wrote "origami boat, throwing paper boat": "I never refuse to throw away a piece of paper,/I always keep it-keep it", which shows that the poet did this only when he went out for a long trip, but missed his mother for a long time. Folding into a Tiny Boat shows the number of stacked paper boats and deep thoughts for mother. After the poet "threw the paper boat from the ship into the sea", "some were blown to the window of the ship by the wind,/some were wet by the waves and stuck to the bow", and after throwing the carefully folded paper boat into the sea, he immediately wrote a heartbreaking result, suggesting that it is actually impossible for readers to cross the ocean to reach their mother, giving people a feeling of pessimism and despair; But the poet is still "not discouraged and superimposed every day, always hoping that one can only flow where I want it to go", which is convenient for my mother! As the saying goes, "Sincerity makes the stone open", can the poet's wish come true? In fact, this question is no longer important. Most importantly, this is the only way for poets to express their thoughts. Only in this way can the poet dispel his sadness and fully express his unforgettable thoughts. In the third verse, the poet misses him so much that he imagines: "Mother, if you see a very small white boat in your dream,/don't be surprised that it dreams for no reason." If the paper boat can't float to mother's side, enter her dream! "This is your beloved daughter with tears in her eyes. /Wanshui Qian Shan, please carry her love and sorrow home. " Point out the theme, and the feelings reach the strongest state, which makes people feel disappointed. This is the most wonderful stroke in the whole poem.
In this poem, the poet takes the paper boat as the topic and expresses his feelings with things, which gives the paper boat a special meaning. The paper boat symbolizes the loneliness of wandering, the heart of missing mother and motherland, and the poet's pure and beautiful wish.
Second, the problem research
1. Why are you in tears and heartbroken?
If a person has had the emotional experience of leaving his mother for a long time, he can deeply understand the feelings of this little poem. I've been by my mother's side, I'm used to it, and my feelings are passivated. Once I left, I was far away from my mother in Qian Shan, and the taste of missing my mother was the worst. With this experience, we can understand her "sadness" and her tears.
2. What are the advantages of expressing feelings with paper boats?
Poetry lyricism always depends on some kind of image. The author can't communicate with his mother on a boat in the Pacific Ocean, but the imaginary paper boat can carry her love and sadness home. Paper boats are naive and suitable for expressing children's mentality.
Practice note
Read these two poems carefully until you can recite them. Then a recitation contest was held to judge the winner.
Read aloud with careful and repeated instructions, such as "Where have you been, you bad boy" and "I won't tell you, Mom". It is not easy to read this dialogue well, and it needs to be taught repeatedly, just like singing.
Understand the thoughts and feelings contained in the following poems.
1. "Where have you been, you bad boy?"
"I won't tell you, mom." That's what you and I were trying to say.
Mom, if you see a small white boat in your dream,
Don't be surprised that it dreams for no reason.
This is your beloved daughter Wan Shui Qian Shan who folded it with tears.
Begging him to bring her love and sadness home.
This topic requires students to understand their thoughts and feelings about the relatively implicit verses in the two poems. Guiding problem solving should mobilize students' life experience and emotional experience, and guide students to deeply understand image and artistic conception, emotion and meaning.
1. My mother has been looking for the child for a long time, and she is very anxious and worried. When she saw the child, she was surprised and happy. She scolded the child and left without saying anything, which made her very anxious.
As for me, I am so charming that I am happy to do something good for my mother, and I have to hide it from my mother, so that she can't figure it out.
2. These poems express the daughter's deep love for her mother, the pain and sadness of missing her mother, and call her on the Pacific boat. I hope her mother can think of how she felt after she left home.
Three △ These two poems express their love for their mother with the help of a concrete image. Please write a paragraph or a poem in this way to express your love for your parents.
In order to make students understand the requirements of this practice, they must express their feelings with the help of images. What image should I use? This should pay attention to the imagination in two poems. Tagore imagined "I became a golden flower", Bing Xin imagined a paper boat crossing the ocean to send affection, and both of them imagined a way to express their love for their mother. We can also imagine another way to express our love for our parents.
Fourth, after class, read Bing Xin's stars and springs, and recite poems expressing maternal love.
You can read the Introduction to Literary Masterpieces first, and then find a book to read.
Teaching suggestion
First, guide students to read "Golden Flower" by themselves and grasp children's wishes.
Thought-provoking questions can be designed as:
-Why should I be a golden flower? For fun? Playing hide-and-seek with mom? In order to realize my little wish and bring some happiness to my mother?
-"Look at your work", "You will smell the flowers" and "Throw my little shadow on your page, where you study", all for the sake of what?
Second, guide students to read "Golden Flower" by themselves, focusing on the implicit poems at the end of the text.
It can be discussed: why does the mother blame the child instead? Still called "you bad boy"? What tone? Why didn't the child tell his mother that he had done many good things?
Third, guide students to read Paper Boat by themselves, with emphasis on "tears" and "sadness".
Mothers love their daughters, and daughters love their mothers. It's easy to understand, but "tears" and "sadness" are the difficulties. If you understand them, you can understand the feeling and pain of missing. From this, we can understand why the poet is whimsical and wants to put a paper boat in the Pacific Ocean, "begging him to bring her love and sadness home".
Fourthly, teaching design.
Literacy and writing
Hide: Don't let anyone know.
Pray for God's blessing.
Yan (y m 4 n)
② "Golden Flower"
1. Read.
2. Talk about the overall feeling.
3. Content discussion.
(1) Why does the author imagine the child as a golden flower?
(2) Why do children make a golden flower? Why did you keep it from mom?
(3) Why does the mother say "you bad boy" when she sees the child? What's that tone?
4. Read it again.
(3) Paper boats
1. Read.
2. Talk about the overall feeling.
3. Content discussion.
(1) Why is the origami boat crying? Why is there sadness besides love?
(2) Why use paper boats to express feelings?
(4) Reading contest
(5) homework
"Discussion and Practice" (2) and (3) are optional.
related data
I. Introduction to the author
Tagore (1861-1941) is an Indian writer, poet and social activist. Born into a landlord family. Studying in England. 192 1 year, an international university was established in santini gaden. Writing in Bengali is rich in creation all his life. His early works include poetry collection Twilight, Morning Song and plays Monk and King and Queen. Since 1903, he has published novels such as Little Sand, Shipwreck, Gora, plays such as Mojidotara, Post Office, Oleander, and many poems such as Jitangjiali, Crescent Moon, Gardener's Collection and Birds Collection. He expressed sympathy for the miserable life of the lower classes and the miserable situation of women under British colonial rule, condemned feudalism and caste system, described the arbitrariness of imperialism and bureaucrats, and also reflected the conflict between bourgeois democratic thought and orthodox Hinduism. Poetry has a fresh style, a national style, but it is mysterious and sentimental. He is also good at composing music and painting. The song "The Will of the People", 1950, was designated as the national anthem of India. His creation has a great influence on the development of Indian literature. 19 13 was awarded Nobel Prize in Literature. (selected from the revised edition of Ci Hai 1999)
Two. Before Bingxin 1923 (Li Cunguang)
Bing Xin (1900— 1999) is a modern essayist, novelist, poet and writer of children's literature. Formerly known as Xie Wanying. Originally from Changle, Fujian,/kloc-0 was born in Fuzhou on June 5, 900.
Bing Xin's father is an open-minded naval officer. When she was a child, she stayed in Yantai, Shandong Province for seven or eight years. Bing Xin was impressed by the sea. In her early works, she often described the sea affectionately. When Bing Xin was young, she read China's classical novels and translated a lot of foreign works. When she was seven or eight years old, she tried to write novels in vernacular and classical Chinese. 19 1 1 year, the whole family returned to Fuzhou in the south; The following year, she was admitted to Fuzhou Women's Teachers College. 19 13. I went to Beijing with my family, and entered the Beiman Girls' Middle School, a missionary school, the following autumn. I learned some new knowledge here. "At the same time, due to the influence of Christianity, I formed my own philosophy of' love'" (preface to the Complete Works of Bing Xin). 19 18, Bing Xin was admitted to the preparatory course of Concord Women's University for the purpose of studying medicine (the school was merged into yenching university the following year); Later he changed his mind and turned to literature. He graduated from yenching university Art Department with a score of 1923.
Bing Xin belongs to the first batch of modern writers who emerged in the May 4th New Literature Movement. She is one of the most famous female writers and an important member of the literary research society.
The wave of the May 4th Movement swept Bing Xin out of the narrow family and church schools. She participated in strikes, marches, rallies and street propaganda activities, enthusiastically read magazines such as New Youth and Trendy, and published some propaganda articles. Encouraged by the new ideological trend,1965438+published the first novel Two Families under the pseudonym of Bing Xin in September 2009. The novel depicts the different lifestyles of two families by contrast, which shows the necessity of improving family life for career. Since then, she has published "problem novels" that expose social, family and women's life problems, such as When You Are Lonely, Helpless and Poor, Going to China and Sister Zhuang Hong. These novels show Bing Xin's dissatisfaction with feudal forces and social status quo, but most of the protagonists in the works are weak and haggard. When the immediate problem was finished, Bing Xin grasped the active things in her memory and wrote novels describing the lives of lower-level officers and men, such as Fish and An unimportant soldier. After the climax of the May 4th Movement, Bing Xin "retreated to the narrow family circle to describe and praise the" love of mankind "that is impossible in class society" (preface to Selected Novels of Bing Xin). Superman, Wu, etc. They are all works that take "love" as the philosophy to understand life.
At the same time, she writes prose. Laughter, published in 192 1, euphemistically expressed its love for life and was regarded as a "beautiful article" with exemplary significance in the early days of the New Literature Movement. 1922, released in the past. This set of essays describes some deep and clear impressions left by childhood. From the winter of 19 19, influenced by Tagore's Birds, she recorded her "fragmentary thoughts" in a few words from time to time. Later, it was published in the "New Literature and Art" column of the Morning Post, and 1923 was published as "Stars and Springs". These more than 300 free poems with untitled aphorisms and aphorisms express the author's feelings about natural scenery and thoughts on life philosophy in a natural and harmonious style, praising maternal love, human love and nature. They are short in length, beautiful in writing and profound in meaning, which show the unique thoughts, feelings and aesthetic consciousness of female writers and have a unique style and great influence in the May 4th new poetry circle. /kloc-in the autumn of 0/923, Bing Xin went to Wellesley Women's University to study English literature.
(Li Cunguang, Encyclopedia of China, China Literature, Encyclopedia of China Press, 1986).
Third, the double interpretation of the Golden Flower (Liu)
The Golden Flower is short and rich in meaning, and it is the representative work of Tagore's collection of prose poems, The Crescent Moon. What is written is an imagination-"if I become a golden flower" (the first sentence), which gives birth to imagination-a magical child and his mother "hide and seek", forming an intriguing picture, showing family affection and showing the beauty and sacredness of human nature. Such pictures can be viewed from various angles and try to find out various meanings.
At first glance, what we see is a picture of children playing. The central figure in the picture is "me"-a clever and lovely child. On a whim, "I" became a golden flower and played with my mother three times a day. The first time I played, when my mother prayed, I quietly opened the petals to give off fragrance; The second time I played, when my mother read Ramayana, I cast my shadow on the page my mother read. The third time, when my mother went to the bullpen with a lamp, I suddenly jumped in front of my mother and returned to my original shape. "I" disappeared for a day, but I have been with my mother. "I" was naive, but I kept my secret, but his mother didn't know. Finally, her mother asked "where have I been", and he said "I won't tell you", which is a proud and well-meaning "lie". In detail, the strange behavior of "I" hides my attachment to my mother: emitting fragrance is a secret expression of my attachment to my mother; Casting a shadow on the page my mother read is a cover for my mother and a secret expression of my attachment to my mother. In short, "I" is expressing my feelings for my mother in a unique way for children.
Although the work is short, the plot is complete and there are waves in the plot development. The characters are shown in the development of the plot: "I" is naive and lively, clever and cunning, and kind in nature; Mother is quiet, pious, kind and loving. Kindness and kindness are the main melody melody of mother and son's character, but the "cunning" of "me" and the "deception" of mother are not harmonious with the main melody melody, resulting in some subtle changes and strong interest.
At this point, we have appreciated the rich and interesting poetry of this poem. However, if Tagore's poetry creation is limited to this, it is not a great writer Tagore; Tagore is superior to ordinary poets in that he can go further and deeper where the feelings and thoughts of ordinary poets stop, and enter the realm of wonderful enlightenment and "forgetting me". "Poetry is absorbed in the spirit, which will dry up and increase contempt" (Yan Yu's Poems on Canglang). If we go deeper and deeper into the golden flower, we will find something even more surprising.
In front of us, it turned out to be another picture of a fairy. The center of the picture is still "I"-a lively and lovely elf. This elf has omnipotent divinity. When it moves its mind, it becomes a golden flower; Golden flowers are in full bloom in the sacred trees of India. The poet chants this flower, which contains his devotion to God and creates a religious atmosphere. In addition, my mother is a devout religious person and keeps a calm and serene character, which also brings a little religious flavor to her poems. Elves can go up and down, swing at will, dance at will, blossom at will and give off fragrance at will. Finally, I moved my heart and became a person again. What it does has infinite freedom, which is by no means comparable to any human body. Of course, it not only has the ability of God, but also has the character of God-that is, the kindness and love mentioned above. Since this kind of kindness and love comes from a little god-a little god from the windy and dusty heaven, it is mysterious and noble. From this perspective, we can understand the theme of this poem and the poet's thoughts and feelings more deeply, which is to praise God. It turns out that the poet preaches love with religious significance-the noblest and purest love. Religious feelings enhance the feelings of poetry, and religious thoughts enhance the theme of poetry.
The significance of the latter picture deserves more attention. Most people can only really write about children's playfulness and intimacy with their mothers; Only Tagore can write the traces and psychology of the personified gods, and it is as light, ingenious and natural as running water. He writes oriental poetry and the mystery and implication of oriental culture. At this point, his poetry is also very different from western poetry. Although the western poetry world was influenced by religious thoughts and emotions in history, these thoughts and emotions gradually faded and alienated after entering the modern society. No famous poet has ever seen such an obsessive belief in God as Tagore, and praised God as the theme of his poetry creation. Because Tagore lives in a country where Buddhism is the state religion, he is a poet trained by oriental culture. Throughout Tagore's prose poems, we can feel a strong mysterious religious atmosphere everywhere. There are often immortal "scales and claws" in poems. Although the name of God is not specified, demonstrative pronouns such as "you", "he" and "she" usually indicate or imply the God to be praised. Therefore, it can be said that praising God is the basic motif of Tagore's poetry creation and the deep theme of Golden Flower.
Of course, we can interpret this poem only from the secular and secular theme, but it is superficial after all and does not meet the original expectation of Tagore's poetry; If we interpret it with the help of our understanding of religious feelings and thoughts (although we don't preach religion by this), the meaning of the work will become profound and profound, and we can almost grasp the feelings and thoughts of the poet.
(From Textbook Teaching for Primary and Secondary Schools, No.9, 200 1)
Fourth, the creative background of Bing Xin's Mother of Paper Delivery Boat (Fan Boqun, Zeng Huapeng)
1923 In the early summer, Bing Xin graduated from yenching university with excellent results and received the golden key of the honorary degree of "Feifei". And accepted a scholarship from Wellesley Women's University, a sister school of Yanjing Women's University, and prepared to study in the United States. This student and writer who diligently explores life is now standing at the starting point of a new voyage in life. She said: "For the sake of life, I have volunteered to make this' weak swim' with tears! ..... I want to embark on the great road of life from now on! ..... so don't be sad, my dear mother! I opened the mysterious door of life with blood and tears. Because of the huge price, I will accept life and enjoy life from now on. " Bing Xin's long journey away from his hometown and his "weak journey" are to explore the treasure house of literature and open the door to the mystery of life with the golden key in his hand. However, for this female writer, the price she paid for this study tour is also huge: she bears an unbearable burden on her delicate and keen nerves-enduring the pain of parting that makes her soul tremble. Therefore, the feelings of parting expressed in Bing Xin's prose and poems at that time left us with the most detailed, true and sad chapter describing the pain of parting. During this time, this family, which combines music and beauty, made a "most natural" forced smile between parents and brothers. They were all so "deceiving themselves, comforting each other and swallowing countless tears ..." It was only an accidental opportunity that I heard a whisper between my brother and my child: "My sister left, and our family is like losing a pearl!" The sigh behind my father, the tears my mother choked back, I delayed my time with my friends in the name of farewell. Because I feel sad when I first started, my brothers and sisters dare not sit together silently. Sometimes they run around the big lotus jar, splashing water on each other for fun, and hide their inner pain with this age-inappropriate carnival. In short, parting makes everything in this family abnormal. "In the past few months, we have been bright for each other, but we are soft-hearted and sad, and we dare not reveal this layer of paper." But when it comes to parting, I abnormally pretend that nothing happened: "I actually laughed! I said, "Let's go!" Just like talking to the air, the sound seems to come from the air. I was shocked to hear that. I opened the curtain and went out without looking at anyone. ""it's just such a faint and hasty farewell, which is neither touching nor tragic, and it's a waste of effort these days! "Bing Xin left her family after living such a" dishonest "life for a long time. It was August 3rd, 1923, and she went south by Putin train. It wasn't until the train started slowly that I saw the History of China Literature on the train, only to see a few big characters written in the margin of the page: "Don't forget Xiaoxiao", which is the handwriting of her youngest brother Bing Ji. This exposed a thin piece of paper, which made her dead heavy heart feel very sad.
Bing Xin arrived in Shanghai on August 5, took a short break and set off for the United States on August 17. She told her dear children in "Sending Little Readers to Communication 7":
/kloc-one afternoon in August of 0/7, colorful paper tapes flew out of numerous windows of Yorkshire mail ship and were thrown to the shore far away. How my heart flies and mourns when the farewell people hold them!
Countless people who bid farewell, on the farthest river bank, just held the last cut-off note and floated away this behemoth, carrying the heaviest sadness!
/kloc-0 arrived in Kobe, Japan on August 9th, and visited Yokohama on August 2nd/kloc-0. This short and long life on the ship makes Bing Xin wander in the arms of the goddess of the sea day and night. She often stood by the fence and watched: "Blue is extremely green, and it is condensed into one. The golden light of the setting sun, like a snake, goes directly from the horizon to the place where others stand. From the sky to the water in front of the ship, from light red to dark green, it has become dozens of colors, one layer after another. -Kids, I hate that I can't draw. Words are the most useless things in the world, and I can't write such an ethereal and wonderful scene! " The sparkling waves evoked memories of Bing Xin's childhood. In the tide, cherished childlike innocence and former playmates are active in her brain center. So, on the boat, Bing Xin "has completely returned to her childhood situation, throwing sandbags in circles and enjoying it …" Among the three pillars of this "philosophy of love"-maternal love, childlike innocence and nature, only "childlike innocence" and "nature" stand tall in front of him, and the "maternal love" in these three pillars has been taken away from her life away from home. Without this important pillar, Bing Xin felt that the whole soul had an uncontrollable tilt. In order to get rid of this distressed state, even if it is to reduce the load by one tenth, she wrote poems such as Melancholy and Paper Boat on the boat. Visiting Yokohama in the rain, coupled with the unbalanced inclination of her soul, made her ill on the boat. She wrote in "Melancholy":
Mother in the dream
Comfort me when I'm sick,
Pour out the love words of geothermal people-
Woke up a few times,
I don't have the medicine cup
The sea breeze is unstoppable,
The light is still on,
my heart
How melancholy-nothing!
Melancholy is based on a dream: "I dreamed that my mother came that night and touched my forehead and said,' It's very hot-take some medicine. "She let me take a medicine cup to drink. I think the medicine is yellow water. I drank it all at once, but I thought it was orange juice in my dream. When I woke up, I heard the sea breeze whistling outside the round window, turned over and fell asleep again. The fever subsided the next day. " This missing mother is ill, because her dream of recovery has become a poem. These sentimental poems were built into a temporary scaffold to replace the extracted beams and columns to maintain the balance of the soul. Paper Boat-For Mother was also written on a boat in the Pacific Ocean. The idea of the poem is to pin her thoughts on her mother's childlike innocence: she folded into many small paper boats and threw them into the sea, some were blown into the boat by the wind, some were wet by the waves and stuck to the bow, but she happily folded them into paper boats and threw them away:
Mom, if you see a small white boat in your dream,
Don't be surprised that it dreams for no reason.
This was folded by your beloved daughter in tears.
Wanshui Qian Shan, please bring her love and sorrow home.
Bing Xin spent three years abroad, because she was far away from her mother, she was often immersed in the memory of maternal love. Therefore, she sang for maternal love in these three years, which occupied a large space in her works during this period, making Bing Xin one of the most successful and touching writers in world literature. Of course, Bing Xin not only eulogized maternal love with beautiful words, but also wrote the story of her daughter as a navigator struggling with the wind and waves in the sea, and proudly said with the pride of the winner: "The sea proves that I am indeed my father's daughter." These words also reveal the heroism of a fighter who "sharpened his knife to the enemy". Before going to the country, her father said to her, "If you get seasick when crossing the Pacific Ocean, you are not worthy to be my daughter!" " Therefore, when she heard that the storm was coming, she felt a kind of "nameless joy", just like a fledgling confident soldier, eager to try. When she saw her companions leaning against each other on the swaying ship; When her mouth was silent, her face was cold and cheerless, and her thoughts flew by, she boarded the top deck of the ship like a banquet at the Dragon Palace under the sword. Bing Xin said: "It's like a goddess calling a banquet in the sea; It's also like sharpening a sword for the enemy. The opponent is a well-known healthy person, but he has some chances of winning. "Although this kind of writing is rare in the chapters she wrote in China, it is also unique. It reveals a kind of heroic spirit in the charm of women, which is slightly different from the literary talent of maternal love and has a harmonious style.
(From The Story of Bing Xin, People's Literature Publishing House 1983)
Appreciation of verb (abbreviation of verb) Mother of Paper Delivery Boat (Pan Songde)
1923 In early summer, Bing Xin graduated from yenching university. In August 17 of the same year, she went to study in the United States by mail ship Yorkshire from Shanghai. Arrived in Kobe, Japan on August 19, and visited Yokohama on August 2 1. Judging from the writing time, this poem was written by the poet on a seagoing ship that continued to sail to the other side of the ocean on the sixth day after his visit to Yokohama.
The sparkling waves and surging tides revived the poet's childlike innocence of loving the sea; Green sea water and flying seagulls make the poet close to nature again. In the sea life about ten days after starting from Wusongkou, the three pillars of Bingxin's early philosophy of "love"-maternal love, childlike innocence and nature, only "childlike innocence" and "nature" can be revived and reappeared at this time, while "maternal love" can't be close because it is far away from her mother. Therefore, the poet especially misses his mother, and even gets sick because he misses his mother, and recovers because he sees his mother in his dream. This poem expresses the poet's deep affection for his mother.
The first verse of the poem begins with his childish behavior-folding paper into a boat, saying that he refused to abandon a piece of paper on a seagoing ship and kept folding it into a boat and throwing it into the sea. Seemingly dull quatrains pave the way for the outbreak of feelings. The second section describes the whereabouts of the paper boat thrown from the ship. "Some were blown into the window of the ship by the wind, and some were wet by the waves and stuck to the bow." All these destinations are not in line with the poet's sincere wishes. She "always wants a place that can only flow where I want it to go." To this end, she "is still not discouraged and folds every day." This shows the intensity and sincerity of her desire. As for where the paper boat is expected to flow, the poet did not make it clear in this section, which caused suspense and thought-provoking. The poet naturally understood that the paper boat could not flow to his mother, so the third verse of the poem turned out new ideas. The poet dreamed of seeing a white boat in his mother's dream. If this kind of imagination is still general, "don't wonder that it dreams for no reason" shows the strangeness of the poet's imagination. So, why not let mom be surprised by the dream of the boat? Poets use the method of "dying to show their will". At the end of the poem, he pointed out that the imaginary paper boat that entered his mother's dream was folded by her with tears. She prayed that the paper boat would bring her love for her mother and the sadness caused by being away from her mother to her side. This ending is the climax of the whole poem.
Missing my mother's feelings is abstract and easy to be vague. This poem is novel in conception, and the poet uses the technique of expressing emotion by supporting things, so the expression of feelings is vivid, concrete, implicit and profound. In addition, the lines of this poem are very long, and the intonation is slow, which echoes the long-standing yearning for the mother.
(Selected from the Dictionary of Appreciation of New Poetry, Shanghai Dictionary Publishing House, 199 1 edition)