This is a four-line song. I don't know much about the level, phonology and rhythm of the four verses. I just want to talk about the rhetoric and artistic conception of this poem. Two or four sentences in this poem are excellent.
3. I miss Tianya, I am crazy, and the little words of flowers come late. Over the years, the scenery has become a dream, clothes are red, and wine is poetry.
4. These four lines are refined and beautiful, full of sounds and feelings, blending with scenes, faint peace and sadness, which makes people feel embarrassed.
5. The first sentence is about the psychological activity and expression state at that time. I sat quietly at my desk, but my thoughts had already flown far away, but I was unconscious, so I was overwhelmed by my thoughts.
In the second sentence, I have brought a pen and prepared exquisite paper, but I don't know what to write, just want to write something. In this sentence: the delay of falling is the essence, which vividly depicts the subtle expression of uncertainty and complexity.
The third sentence, the past scenes appear in my mind, like a clear and unreachable dream.
The fourth sentence, being in the world of mortals, I can't help myself, and my clothes are covered with smoke unconsciously, just like being drunk, and I can't help but think of the continuous poems written between you and me. The helplessness of life is so much. This whole sentence is an imaginary metaphor, which is extremely elegant but realistic.
6. In the whole story, I became obsessed with my own thoughts, but it was difficult to write a book, recall the past, and then lament the changes of time, the sadness of completely different personnel, and miss the good times of the past infinitely.
7. See the original title. Just personal feelings and opinions. But it should have some similarities with the original author's ideas and artistic conception. I hope it helps you.