1. Emotion is integrated into narrative description. Cars rumbled and horses neighed. At the beginning of the poem, we seem to have returned to the years of fighting for many years. Teams of poor people in military uniforms were driven to the front by officials. The parents, wives and children of the "pedestrians" beat their chests and feet, urging and calling for farewell to their loved ones. The rolling dust raised by countless motorcades covered the sun, and even xian yangqiao was submerged. "My parents and wife are going to bid farewell", and the word "go" reflects the poet's strong emotional color. "They ran after you, crying, and they tugged at your sleeve." The cries of thousands of people shook the earth and soared into the sky. What a sad sight! The poet painted a picture of "Where Are You Going" for us by description and rendering, which created a sad atmosphere for the whole poem. In these plain narrative descriptions, every word contains the poet's condemnation of the militancy of the ruling class and infinite sympathy for the broad masses of working people, and always runs through the thoughts and feelings of "worrying about Li Yuan in poor years and sighing in the intestines".
2. Real and natural, vivid and appropriate. After describing what the poet saw with his own eyes, he heard the recruiter's direct conversation. Not only did they cry about their tragic experiences of "guarding the river in the north for fifteen days" and "plowing in the west for forty days", but they also showed us another sad picture: "There are two hundred states in the Han family in Shandong, with thousands of villages and hundreds of miles, and nothing grows? Although the strong woman bent down to plow the land, the furrows in the east and the west were broken? " It reveals the profound disaster brought by the war to the people, which not only shows the breadth of poetry content, but also reflects the depth of poetry conception. The poet adopts the artistic conception of "seeing and hearing", which makes his works real and touching, and enhances his artistic appeal.
3. Interlocking and rigorous structure. In the first paragraph, people mentioned Ma Si, and the noisy atmosphere filled the whole article, which triggered people to explore its reasons. The difficult talk in the second paragraph further deepens the ideological content of the scene description in the first paragraph, and responds to the above truth that "they run with you, cry, and they pull your sleeve", which reflect each other and complement each other. At the end of the poem, "the new ghost is wailing there with the old ghost" also takes care of the first half sentence, "They run with you, cry, and they pull your sleeve", and the combination of reality and fiction increases the artistic effect of the tragedy. Finally, the phrase "the loudest in the dark sky on a stormy day" is both lyrical and lyrical, echoing the beginning "until the dust buried the bridge outside Chang 'an". The narrative levels are patchy, loose and closed, and the changes are orderly, forming an organic and perfect unified whole.