2009 Shanxi senior high school entrance examination composition topic: _ _ _ _ _ _, great!
Playing tennis, great!
On weekends, my parents and I drove dozens of miles to a big tennis court in the northern suburbs, for nothing but playing a good tennis game.
I only played tennis last year. Although I am a "novice", I am fascinated by this sport.
The tennis court is very beautiful. There are several white lines on the ground of green fungi. Although I can't name it correctly, I know it is a "border". There is a net half a person high hanging in the middle of the venue, even if it is the "center line".
Look! A lithe and vigorous figure ran onto the stage. I saw the man holding three tennis balls in his left hand, a racket in his right hand, a tight sweater on his upper body and jeans on his lower body. That handsome man is not a tennis star! That person is me! It's my mother who competes with me. I saw her step onto the court steadily, and I knew at a glance that she was an experienced veteran. Dad naturally became a referee and cheerleader.
The game has already started. At first, I was able to parry a few balls, even making my mother miss them. But how could she be defeated by me? So, she took out a trump card-"sneak hit", beat me all over the court and waved my tennis racket wildly, but I couldn't catch a ball for a long time. Even threw the racket out. When my father saw it, he quickly picked up the racket and came to "help out". Someone fought with me, and my confidence naturally recovered a lot. Dad really lived up to my expectations, and a few seconds killed my mother's aggressive momentum. But mom can't give up! The more you hit the ball, the harder it is to hit it. Dad is not the kui is an extraordinary skill, not only not afraid, but more and more brave. I saw a small tennis ball flying back and forth like a green meteor. It's hard for me to stand in the audience. I can't catch my mother's ball, and I have to avoid my father's ball. Tennis balls as big as fists are flying around my head, and I can't help screaming. Finally, I ran with my head in my arms.
Playing tennis is really great for me. It not only adds fun to the boring study life, but also exercises the body. It is more enjoyable for a family to exercise together, and I look forward to the next time.
Mark simple approval
"XX .............................................................................................................................................................................. At the beginning, the appearance of the tennis court and the dress of the characters are briefly introduced. In the middle, it describes the process of the game in detail, describes his lucky psychology in the game and the happy scene of a family of three, and describes the favorable factors that a happy family brings to children's physical and mental health, which has become a beautiful example of flaunting modern family education. It has a positive aesthetic atmosphere, concise and fluent language, elegant and calm structure, clear center, healthy and clear thinking, and gives people a fresh and elegant aesthetic feeling.
In 2009, Taiyuan's "different" was different. There are always some people who bring us different feelings; There are always some scenes that bring us different feelings; There are always some things that bring us different feelings; There is always a period of life that brings us different experiences. ...
Please write an article of not less than 6 words on the topic of "Other things".
Requirements: (1) Style is not limited, try to express your true feelings.
(2) Don't appear real place names and school names in the text.
Problem-solving and Selected Essays of Shanxi Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2008 (I)
[composition questions]
Choose a composition from the following two topics.
Topic 1: Please write a composition on the topic of "for".
Topic 2: Read the following materials and write a composition.
Willow has its free and easy, pine has its magnificence. Born on earth, living in the universe, sharing the same sun, * * * Mu Yuehui, every life shines with unique brilliance and shows infinite charm.
Requirements: ① semi-propositional composition, complete the topic first; ② Material composition, self-selected angle and self-made topic; (3) The style is not limited (except poetry and drama); ④ The number of words is between 500 and 800; ⑤ Avoid using real names of people, schools and places.
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2007 Senior High School Entrance Examination in Shaanxi Province: Zhang Jianjun Update Date: 2007- 10-3 1 hits: 175 1 score: test playback.
Choose a composition from the following two topics.
Requirements: the number of words is between 500 and 800; Don't appear real names, school names and place names in the text.
Topic 1: Write a narrative on the topic "I really want to say I'm sorry".
Topic 2: Read the following materials, write your own topic, write your own style (except poetry) and write an article. Or tell stories, or comment, or express feelings.
Many years ago, the British "Times" published a topic, asking for an answer publicly. The topic is: What is the shortest way from London to Rome?
Many people looked for answers from geographical location and lost the election. Only one answer won the prize, and that is: good friends. Having a good friend, talking and laughing all the way, not only won't be too long, but even sigh that the road is too short.
(2007 Shanxi College Entrance Examination Composition Test)
Thinking guidance
Topic 1: This propositional composition is obviously a continuation of the understanding of the modern reading topic "Children". After answering the reading questions, the examinee has a lingering fear, and then writing an essay topic like "I really want to say sorry" is more likely to stimulate the examinee's interest in writing, so that the examinee can have something to say and write a narrative full of true feelings.
To do this well, we must have an accurate grasp of the topic. When reviewing the questions, we should consider the topics "I really want to say I'm sorry" (it can be different people) and "What" to say I'm sorry (there are various reasons: I didn't listen to advice, I was impulsive, or I was confused by foreign things for a while and did something wrong; It can also be because one's own mistakes hurt a friendship, or hurt others, misunderstand others, be rude, and not be a man.
This essay requires a narrative, so when writing, we should pay attention to the psychological and cognitive process of "thinking", thus showing our correct outlook on life and values.
Topic 2: This is a self-propositional composition question for materials. The proposer's original intention is to let candidates choose their own angles and write their own compositions by reading, understanding and analyzing materials. The material in this composition topic is very close to students' life, and the life enlightenment obtained is easy to make students produce * * * sounds, which is easy to open students' writing ideas. There are no obstacles to examination, no stylistic restrictions, etc. Let students feel that they have something to say and it is easy to show their talents. Reflecting on the reform of composition proposition is a good topic.
To write this kind of composition questions well, we must pay attention to the following points:
First of all, read the materials and examine the questions accurately.
The characteristic of this composition is the combination of reading and writing. It is necessary to read and analyze the given materials, and then refine, associate and express them, so as to complete the writing task. If you want to write a composition with materials, you must first understand the materials, grasp the meaning of the materials, and use them to refine and generate topics. Facing a material, from different angles, you will have different feelings and find different topics. Through reading, understanding and analyzing the above materials, the topic of "having a good friend" or "friendship" can be generated from the results of the activities; In the process of seeking the answer, the topic of "thinking from another angle" or "thinking from another angle" arises.
Second, broaden your perspective and have profound ideas.
We should start with the topic, such as "having a good friend", which can express the importance of having a good friend from the positive side and reveal the difficulties and helplessness of not having a good friend from the negative side; From the topic of divergent thinking, it can be expressed as follows: when encountering problems, we should think from multiple angles, break the mindset, and have the spirit of innovation.
Third, choose good writing and exquisite language.
As a self-defined style, candidates should choose the style they are good at, such as narrative, argumentative, philosophical prose, fable, story, dialogue and interview, as long as they like and are good at it. As for the requirements of language, content and structure, I won't explain them one by one.
Full marks masterpiece one
I really want to say sorry.
Shanxi examinee
Son, you are about to enter high school. As a mother, I really want to say sorry at this time.
I have always believed that pearl mussels can only breed dazzling pearls after enduring the pain of sand and stone; Only when the sword has experienced the pain of fire sharpening can it achieve a bright and sharp blade
So, sometimes in order to make you successful, regardless of your feelings, I arrange everything for you and let you do everything your mother has arranged.
After you entered the third grade, you said to me, "mom, the pressure of studying is really too great." Can you let me relax? " I only remember being very excited and saying some angry words. You didn't refute anything, just silently took the reference book I just brought back and went back to my room. At that time, I felt very guilty. I know you've always been a good boy and never rebelled against anything I asked you to do, but you also have your own ideas, ideas and things you want to do!
After dinner, you are busy in the bedroom quietly, and your little figure looks so tired.
My heart is restless again.
Cut the fruit for you in the kitchen, pour a cup of hot milk, then gently push open your door and put it on the corner of the table.
You raised your tired eyes and smiled and said, "Mom, you haven't slept yet. Go to sleep! " ""then eat something and go to bed early. Don't be too tired. " "Well, I see. "You answered softly, buried in the pile of books, and didn't complain about my attitude in the morning.
Son, you don't have to tell me, and I know I'm a little out of line. Everyone understands the truth, but how many can really do it? It is human nature to make mistakes, not to mention for your own good. Can you understand your mother's pains?
In today's social situation, you can only rely on your own talents and knowledge to survive in society. No matter how much your parents miss you, it is only temporary, and you have to rely on yourself in the future.
By chance, I read some educational magazines and books, one of which, "If you want to be an adult, don't become a dragon", which made me suddenly enlightened and deeply inspired.
In the future, I will change the way of educating you, let you grow and study happily, and let us be elders to reduce some psychological guilt.
Finally, I sincerely apologize to you. I hope you forgive me for being arbitrary and rude to you in the past, and I hope you have a colorful high school life.
[Brief Comment] The greatest feature of this composition is its unique perspective and novel conception. Combine the reality of excessive study pressure with mother's feelings and write in the tone of mother's narrative. Whether it is the mother's testimony or the care for the children, it is full of real maternal love and affection. Eloquence makes the article very long and has a natural and homely feeling. As a child, it is a unique way of writing to think from the mother's point of view and reflect the bad influence of exam-oriented education.
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[Original title playback] Choose a composition from the following two topics. Requirements: ① The number of words is between 500 and 800; ② There should be no real names of people, schools and places in the text. Topic 1: Write a narrative on the topic "The story happened in the third grade". Style 2: I learn from (life, mother, books) ...) Please complete the topic according to the tips in brackets and write an article with any style. The propositions that explain these two composition topics are based on the examinee's study and real life. No matter which topic you choose, candidates have something to say and feelings to express, which reduces the difficulty of examination, but "easy writing" does not necessarily mean "good writing". To write well, there must be a unique skill of "no one has me, no one has me, no one has me, no one is better than me". Topic 1: The Story Occurred in Grade Three, written as a complicated narrative, will undoubtedly make the article more readable by means of plot foreshadowing, care and suspension. Before you start writing, you should list the most touching examples one by one, choose the best from the best, arrange and combine them into "spare materials", and then draw clues from them to refine the theme and write the whole book accordingly. Topic 2: Set the theme according to the amount of accumulated materials, fill in the topic, what kind of people and things in "life", what "I" learned from it, that is, what inspiration these people and things gave me. This is the theme, which varies from person to person and from material to material. Set the style according to your usual training. "Unlimited style" provides a broad space for candidates' personalized expression, but "unlimited style" does not mean that they don't want style. Once a candidate chooses a certain style, it must conform to the characteristics of the style and cannot be written as "four unlike". Judging from the topic, writing narrative or lyric prose is the mainstream, while diaries, short stories, fables, fairy tales, poems, plays and other styles are more attractive to examiners. The key is whether to strengthen the training of these styles in peacetime. What I learned from my life is that a candidate in Shanxi lives in the magnetic field of life and moves at a high speed. After countless seasons of reincarnation, young people have learned a lot, and all four seasons are playing their own life marches on the natural stage. We also grow up day by day, in which we feel the baptism of life. Flowers bloom-spring breeze gently brings spring. This season, flowers are blooming, grass has just emerged from the ground, and wicker has pulled out green buds. Is this a competitive season? Teachers often say that we are flowers in spring and grow in the sun. In school and life, we strive for our own achievements and different goals in our hearts. There is also fierce competition in our study and life, just as we strive to be the first blooming flower in spring. I learned about competition here. Green grassland-I saw the flowers blooming in summer and looked down at the green grassland. It didn't bow its head in the storm that just passed. Although the rain beads are still hanging on the grass's head, trying to make it yield, the grass still insists on waiting for help-the sun. It knows that when the sun meets again, it will not be oppressed by others. Can the indomitable spirit of the grass not touch you? Do you also deeply feel the greatness of life? Here, I learned to have hope and never give up. Fruits abound-looking around in autumn, golden fruits in the fields are waiting for farmers to harvest. Are farmers happy at this moment? A year's hard work has paid off, not only a bumper harvest of grain, but also a bumper harvest of spirit for me. Looking at the beaming face of the farmer with a comforting smile, Miss Qiu left a golden dress and retired from the stage. Here, I learned that only pay can be rewarded. Silver makeup wrapped-in the whistling wind in winter, snowflakes gently fall to the ground, and in a short time, the earth is covered with white gauze, which is so beautiful! I can't help sighing. Is it for its purity? The light snow reminds me of the Red Army's Long March and the eight-year Anti-Japanese War. How many revolutionary martyrs' blood spilled on this piece of snow. Here I learned not to forget history and cherish the present. Stop on the stage of life, experience spring, summer, autumn and winter, and feel the passion and surge of life. The famous teacher commented that this article is novel in conception. At the beginning, we "feel the baptism of life" in the Four Seasons, and the following paragraphs begin. The subtitle of the main part is "Four Seasons", and at the end of each paragraph there is "Here, I have learned ……", which explains the specific content of "feeling the baptism of life". At the end, three short sentences are used to summarize the full text, which is coordinated with the opening and has a rigorous structure. The language of the article contains philosophy and is impressive.
Solutions and examples of composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province in 2006 (imaginary composition examples)
[July 2006-1914:11:00 | Author: Diao Youfeng]
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The beauty of life is that we have the opportunity to accept the nourishment of love, feel its warmth and spread its fragrance. Therefore, we fall in love with masterpieces and feel the charm of literature; Fall in love with the scenery and experience the taste of nature; Fall in love with color and discover the beauty of art; Fall in love with life and make every ordinary bit full of poetry.
Please write an article of no less than 600 words on the topic of "Love".
Requirements: (1) Style is not limited, try to express your true feelings.
(2) There should be no real place names, school names and names in the text.
[hint]
In the face of this open topic, we should first let go of association and look for the materials accumulated in life and reading, and then choose the style according to the materials we have and our own specialties.
When writing a narrative, we should first pay attention to the selection of materials. When you choose an event from your personal experience to describe it, you can associate it with other similar events nearby and enrich and perfect the content of your composition with the details of other events. Or use the opposite events to compare and strengthen the expressive force of the article. Secondly, we should pay attention to the arrangement of the structure. You can just write one thing and advance the story according to the development of the plot; You can also capture some events and express the theme of "love" in the form of fragment combination. In writing argumentative essays, apart from clear arguments, typical arguments and clear argumentation ideas, it is best to have a certain literary talent.
Qingxin Ai Yi
During her three years in Bao Tong, Anhua was as brave as a war. In the moonlight, a thin figure, holding a glass of wine in his left hand and a wolf hair in his right hand.
"How can you enjoy such a good wine?" A majestic voice came from behind the drinker, with a hint of irresistible poetry.
"Du Fu brothers."
"Brother Li Bai."
"Would you like to have a drink with me tonight?"
That night, the two men drank wine and wrote poems under the moon, and they were both amazed by each other's talents. When they were drunk, Du Fu said to Li Bai,' Next month, you and I will be an official in the DPRK. Tonight is the last time you and I fell in love with wine.
Only the country can let us fall in love in the future. "
......
In the twelfth year of Bao Tong, Chang 'an Imperial City was brightly lit and crowed.
John young, An Lushan and Shi Siming launched a rebellion. John young was occupied, and all the battle flags in the city turned to the north in the wind.
Imperial capital "Newspapers. The rebels have occupied Fanyang and are heading for Chang 'an. "Song and dance pavilion because of a report, suddenly a mess. The emperor was frightened and hid behind the dragon chair. Li Bai knelt before the emperor and asked for troops to fight. The emperor agreed, and then the emperor fled to Sichuan.
Li Bai followed Wang Yong Li Lin to the east with the army, and the horses' hooves raised dust all the way. In the face of the rebels who attacked like wildfire, Li Lin and Li Bai and their troops were fearless. The battlefield was a mess, flags fell to the ground, bodies were everywhere, and the grass was dyed red with blood. But in the end, they lost the battle. Li Bai was put in a rebel prison. One night, when Li Bai couldn't sleep watching the stars in the sky, the prison door opened faintly. "Brother Li" Li Bai knows who is coming. "Brother Du" and "Brother Li", it is not advisable to stay here for a long time. I have bribed the prison officer to run. " Li Bai and Du Fu rushed out.
Prison, turn over and get on the horse, and head for Sichuan.
In winter in Sichuan, the coolness bursts. The sun shines on people, not only not warm, but also has the illusion of colder. Before Li Bai and Du Fu entered the emperor's newly-built palace, it began to snow and the sun gradually approached the horizon. Li Bai and Du Fu saw the dazzling lights in the palace, heard the wind music still playing in the palace, and thought that the emperor still didn't ask about state affairs, and he was still bohemian during the war. The table is full of food. ......
In this situation, Li Bai knelt down and sighed angrily: "When can a monarch love his country?"
Comments:
This Taiyuan senior high school entrance examination broke the style of proposition in recent years, aiming at enabling candidates to write what they like in the examination room.
I found this article in the verdict. It was unanimously affirmed by the marking group of the senior high school entrance examination, giving full marks. This article has a unique style and gives people a refreshing feeling. With the epic as the background, he reasonably imagined and revealed the profound theme. That is the love of the country. In modern times, that is patriotism. The author's brushwork is beautiful, gorgeous and slightly domineering. It is a rare narrative prose in recent years. It can be seen that this middle school student has a profound cultural foundation. As well as the understanding of history and proficiency in writing.