The first lecture
One of the ways of thinking in children's poetry
Causality method
Children's poetry, including adult creation and children's creation, has popularity, perceptual aura, simple childlike innocence and natural freshness, which embodies childlike innocence, childlike interest and childlike innocence. Some people say that poetry comes from inspiration, and so does writing children's poems. So where did the inspiration come from? Mastering the thinking method of children's poetry can promote the germination of inspiration. Next, I will talk about the improvement of children's poetry inspiration from the way of thinking.
Finding a reason to give an object a reason is realistic, and the reason is illusory and inaccurate, but in children's poems, it is full of aura and childlike interest, innocent and lovely, with a "silly feeling" and a strange and unfamiliar feeling about your "reason".
Such as "Ocean":
The sun is like a giant media cake.
In the melting pot of the mountains,
Baked all night,
The next morning,
I burned my face red.
The red sun in the morning is a fruit, a fact, and why clams are red is a cause. The "cause" that the little author is looking for is a big coal cake, which is baked red in the stove in the mountains. How naive and illusory imagination is. But one thing, both sides are "red", and red connects them. Of course, the red color of the sun can also be associated with other reds, from which many children's poems can be written.
Another example is the thinking star:
At night,
In the dark sky,
The stars twinkle.
This is because,
Mother Moon raised a question.
Ask the star to answer,
The stars are blinking and thinking.
You see, when the stars blink, cause and effect are cause and effect. Why are you blinking? The little author immediately thought that children who can think will blink and blink. The twinkling of the stars is not thinking at all, it shows the childishness and naivety, endows the stars with human aura and makes them alive.
Another example is peach blossom:
Peach blossom likes beautiful girls,
It doesn't like sleeping in Sister Chun's arms.
Get up quietly,
Stealing Chunjie's rouge,
Wipe your face desperately.
Sister chun woke up,
Found that the fat of cigarettes was gone,
Looking forward to coming to earth,
Let everything wake up quickly.
Look, is this the reason why the peach blossom is red? Not at all, but the little author made up a story to tell the reason. How interesting!
Here, when you are looking for the reason, you should first look for the discovery point of connection from the "fruit" itself, and then make up a short story when you are in contact, and write it in a branching way, which becomes a children's poem. Look, is it easy?
But there are two points worth noting: first, in causal connection, sometimes only one percent of the connection is enough, and 99 percent of the connection is far-fetched. If the connection is too real, it will lose childlike interest; Second, the causal link must jump out of the ordinary people's thinking to have a taste. For example, everyone will think of the connection between the rainbow and the bridge, which does not give readers a sense of freshness and does not show the childishness, innocence and aura of children.
The second speech
Thinking method of children's poetry
the association method
Association is to think of one thing from another, and then think of it from another, and expand and imagine it layer by layer.
Such as "Grandpa's Hand":
Grandpa's hands are covered with cocoons,
It seems that,
Like a "hillside";
Seeing this slope,
I remember-
How many harvest songs have been sung on the slope?
You see, at the first level, we think of "hillside" from "cocoon", which is a similar association. The hillside in nature is higher than the flat land, and the calluses in the palm are slightly raised, like the flat land. Of course, "hillside" can also think of greening and other things, because to be related to calluses, you must choose "bumper harvest", so the related association of the second layer is still related to the original (cocoon) of the first layer. Otherwise, there are many associations, which can't be penetrated and can't focus on the theme. This poem shows that labor creates gains.
Another example is Grandpa Shan's beard.
White clouds,
Near the mountainside,
Floating like grandpa shan's beard
Grandpa shan,
Touch it,
Hum, snore, sleep.
The first layer of this poem is similar to association. White clouds are floating around on the mountainside, much like Grandpa Shan's Hu Shun. The second level is still association. Grandpa Shan smoothed his beard and went to sleep. What a serene old man, vivid and lifelike.
Another example is "The Sorrow of Autumn Rain":
Like cow hair, like thin thread,
Autumn rain,
Aunt Qiu, why have you been crying for so long?
My heart is cold and my heart is broken.
The leaves are falling,
I'm worried ... >>
Question 2: Ancient poems written by teachers and pupils themselves, addressed to xxX teachers in XX primary school;
Kindness tempts children, and spring rain moistens things silently.
Shushan is the pioneer and Xuehai is the lighthouse.
There is no reward for carving and repairing, and gratitude is beyond words.
I wish the teacher good health and peaches and plums are everywhere.
-student XXX
Question 3: Complete Poems of Primary School Students 1 "Jiangnan" Yuefu folk song Jiangnan can pick lotus leaves, what about lotus leaves? Fish are frolicking among the lotus leaves. Fish hits the lotus leaf east, fish hits the lotus leaf west, fish hits the lotus leaf south, and fish hits the lotus leaf north.
2 "Chilechuan" is a folk song of the Northern Dynasty, Chilechuan, under the Yinshan Mountain. The sky is like the sky, and the cage covers four fields. The sky is wild, and the wind and grass are moving to see cattle and sheep.
3 "Ode to the Goose" Luo (Tang) Goose, Goose, Goose, White Hair Floating Green Water, Anthurium Playing Clear Waves.
4 "Wind" Li Qiao (Tang) Autumn leaves fall three times and can open in February. Scraping the river surface can set off several huge waves in thousands of feet, and blowing bamboo can make tens of thousands of poles tilt.
5 "Singing Willow" He (Tang Dynasty) is decorated with jasper trees, and thousands of green silk tapestries hang down. I don't know who cut the thin leaves, but the spring breeze in February is like scissors.
6 "Liangzhou Ci" Wang Zhihuan (Tang) The Yellow River is far above the white clouds, with Gucheng Mountain. Why should a strong brother complain about willow? Spring breeze is not enough.
7 "In the Heron Lodge" Wang Zhihuan (Tang) Mountain covers the daytime, and the sea drains the golden river. By going up one flight of stairs, look further.
8 "Chunxiao" Meng Haoran (Tang) I woke up easily in this beautiful spring morning, and birds were singing everywhere. How many flowers fall after a stormy night.
9 "Liangzhou Ci" (Tang) luminous glass of wine, if you want to drink pipa, you should urge it immediately. Don't laugh when you are drunk on the battlefield. How many people fought in ancient times?
10 "Out of the Fortress" Wang Changling (Tang) Pass, the Long March people did not return. If Wei Qing, who attacked Longcheng, and Li Guang, the flying general, were alive today, the Huns would not be allowed to go south to spend their horses in Yinshan.
165438+ friends, if Luoyang friends ask me to come; Just say I'm still Bing Xin Okho, and stick to my faith!
12 there seems to be no one on the empty mountain of Wang Wei (Tang), but I think I heard a voice, returning to the scenery and entering the depths of the forest, shining back to me from the green moss.
13 Wang Wei (Tang dynasty) was lightly rainy and the guest house was green. Sincerely advise friends to drink a glass of wine, and it is difficult to meet their loved ones when they go out to Yang Guan in the west.
14 "I miss my Shandong brothers on vacation in the mountains" Wang Wei (Tang Shi) is in a foreign land and misses his relatives every holiday. When I think of my brothers' bodies climbing high, I will feel a little regret for not being able to reach me.
"Silent Night Thinking" Li Bai (Tang) The foot of my bed is bright, is there frost? . I looked up at the moon and looked down, feeling nostalgic.
16 A Journey to Gulangyu (excerpt) Li Bai didn't know the moon when he was a child, so he was called Bai Panyu. I suspect it is Yao's platform, flying in the sky. Is the fairy in the moon hanging her feet? The white rabbit smashed the medicine and asked who to eat with.
17 "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" Li Bai Rizhao incense burner gave birth to purple smoke, looking at the waterfall hanging in front of the river. On the high cliff, it seems to be thousands of feet high, which makes people think that the Milky Way has fallen from heaven to earth.
18 "A Gift for Wang Lun" Bai was about to go by boat when he suddenly heard singing on the shore. Even if the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as Wang Lun's sending away my love.
19 "Yellow Crane Tower Farewell to Meng Haoran on the way to Yangzhou" Li Bai's old friend left the Yellow Crane Tower in the west, and fireworks went down to Yangzhou in March. My friend's sail shadow faded away and disappeared at the end of the blue sky, only seeing the first line of the Yangtze River and heading for the distant horizon.
20 "Send Bai Di City Early" Li Baichao said goodbye to Bai Di Caiyun, and returned to Jiangling for a day. The cries of apes on both sides of the strait are still unconsciously crowing in their ears, and the canoe has passed the heavy green hills.
2 1 "Looking at Tianmen Mountain" Li Bai Tianmen cut off the Chu River and Higashi Shimizu River. The green hills on both sides are neck and neck, and a boat meets leisurely from the horizon.
22 "Don't Move Big" Gao Shi (Tang) Thousands of miles away, the north wind blows geese and snow. A gentleman is poor, who wants to meet today without paying for drinks?
23 "Jueju" (the third song) Du Fu (Tang) Two orioles sing green willows, and a row of egrets go up to the sky. My window framed the snow-covered western hills. My door often says "goodbye" to ships sailing eastward.
24 "Delighting in Rain on a Spring Night" Du Fu likes the rain and knows the season when spring comes. Sneak into the night with the wind, moisten things silently. The wild path is dark, and the river is bright. Look at the red and wet place, the flowers in Jinguancheng are heavy.
25 "Jueju" (1) Du Fu has beautiful mountains and rivers in the evening, and flowers and plants are fragrant in the spring breeze. Swallows are busy nesting in wet mud and sleeping in pairs on the warm beach.
26 "Looking for Flowers Alone by the Riverside" Du Fu is in front of the Yellowstone Pagoda, and the spring is lazy and sleepy. Peach blossoms have no owner, and lovely deep red loves light red.
27 "Sleeping at the Maple Bridge" (Tang) On a frosty night, Jiang Feng sleeps in the fire. In the lonely Hanshan Temple outside Suzhou, the bell that rang in the middle of the night reached the passenger ship.
28 "Wandering Son" Meng Jiao (Tang Shi) makes clothes for her wayward son with thread in her mother's hand. Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged. Who can say that a filial child like the weak can repay his mother's love like the sunshine in spring?
29 ""Liu Zongyuan (Tang) There are no birds in hundreds of mountains and no footprints in thousands of paths. A boat on the river, a fisherman wearing his webworm moth; Fishing alone is not afraid of snow and ice.
30 "Fishing Songs" Zhang (Tang) Egrets fly in front of the Cisse Mountain, and peach blossoms are flowing. An old man in the bank, wearing a green bamboo hat raincoat and a green raincoat, braved the wind and rain and fished leisurely. He was fascinated by the beautiful spring scenery and didn't even go home in the rain.
3 1 Lulun (Tang Dynasty), the moon is high and faint, the yan zhen is soaring, and the Tatar toast is fleeing in the dark. Want to put Qingqi (>>
Question 4: How do pupils write poems and what they see and hear? They can also express their feelings. Read modern poems, such as Tagore's Birds, which are written from the perspective of children and will be of great help to you in the future. Is there anything you don't understand?
Question 5: How to teach pupils to write poems? At this time, they have many shortcomings in grasping vocabulary and rhythm. Just teach them to imitate the format. There is no need to emphasize melody, the most important thing is to pursue the freedom of imagination, not rigid.
Question 6: Pupils write their own ancient poems and recite the words from their youth.
Colorful,
Youth is everywhere on campus.
Youth is gone forever,
Good days are just around the corner.
Advise father
Unkempt face, red face, dirty feet,
Talking nonsense after drinking makes children worry.
Although I know you drink to go home,
Do not forget that health is more important.
Question 7: How do primary school students write modern poetry? Rosty Yi is in the dark. I shut the door tightly and refused the love of the past. I walked on the path, begging for a living without Zen, crossing the sea and wasteland to bid farewell to the old and welcome the new. ...
Question 8: All the poems and ancient poems learned in primary schools.
Ancient poems describing landscapes in class;
Chuzhou Xijian
wei yingwu
Alone, grass grows by the stream, and orioles sing on the trees. The spring tide brought the rain late and urgent, and there was no boat on the wild crossing.
Ancient poems describing landscapes after class;
Xinyiwutang
Wang Wei
The branches of the topmost hibiscus flowers are full of scarlet calyx in the mountains. The mouth of a stream is silent, without a trace. They open and fall.
Ancient poems describing scenery in class
Quatrain
Du Fu
"Two orioles sing green willows, egrets sky-high." Outside my window is the snowy Western Hills. My door often says "goodbye" to ships sailing eastward.
Zaofa baidicheng
Libaitang
Say goodbye to the colorful clouds in Bai Di. Thousands of miles in Jiangling, one day. Apes on both sides of the Taiwan Strait are crying endlessly. The canoe has crossed Chung Shan Man.
Wanglushan Waterfall
Libaitang
The purple mist is illuminated by sunlight, and the waterfall hangs in front of the mountain. On the high cliff, it seems to be thousands of feet high, which makes people think that the Milky Way has fallen from heaven to earth.
Travel in the mountains
Dondum
As far away as Hanshan, the stone path is oblique, and people are in Bai Yunsheng. Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February flowers.
Hui Chong Chunjiang Night Scene
Song sushi
Two or three peach blossoms outside the bamboo forest and ducks in the water first noticed the warm spring. The Artemisia basket is full of short reed buds, which is when the puffer fish wants to fuck.
Jiangnanchun
Dondum
Jiangnan, the sound of green and red flowers, the waterside village in the foothills. More than 480 ancient temples were left in the Southern Dynasties, and countless pagodas were shrouded in wind and rain.
Four seasons pastoral miscellaneous interest
Fan Song Chengda
Plum golden apricot fat, wheat white, cauliflower thin. No one has ever crossed the fence, only dragonflies and butterflies are flying.
Wangtianmen mountain
Tang Libai
Tianmen interrupted the opening of the Chu River. Higashi Shimizu flow by this time. Green hills on both sides of the strait are opposite. Lonely sails come from the sun.
Topic Xilin wall
Song sushi
Looking at Lushan Mountain from the front and side of peaks and valleys, from far, near, high and low places, Lushan Mountain presents various faces. I can't recognize the true face of Lushan Mountain because I am there.
The hymn of Twilight River
Tang Bai Juyi
A sunset gradually sank into the river, half green and half green. On the third night of September, the dew is like a pearl and the moon is like a bow.
Look at zhongnan Xuefeng
Zuyong
Looking south, the northern mountain is beautiful and snowy, like a cloud. After the snow in Chu Qing, the afterglow of the sun shone from the forest. It was late, and Chang 'an was even more chilly.
Wangdongting
Yuxi Liu Tang
The lake and the moon set each other off, and there is no wind mirror on the pool surface. Looking at Dongting from a distance, there is a green snail in the silver plate.
Ancient poems describing scenery after class:
Quatrain
Du fu in Tang dynasty
Jiangshan bathed in spring, how beautiful, flowers send flowers. Swallows are busy nesting in wet mud and sleeping in pairs on the warm beach.
Homesick ancient poems in class;
Vacation in the mountains reminds me of my brothers in Shandong.
Tangwangxu
I am a lonely stranger in a strange land, and I miss my family more often during the holidays. When I think of my brothers' bodies climbing high, I will feel a little regret for not being able to reach me.
What you read in the night book
Ye Shaoweng
The rustling leaves send the cold sound, and the autumn wind moves the guests on the river. I know that children choose to promote weaving, and a lamp fell on the fence at night.
Berthing Guazhou
Wang Song Anshi
Jingkou and Guazhou are just separated by a water, and Zhongshan has only a few heavy green mountains. The gentle spring breeze turns green again, but, moon in the sky, when can you take me home?
Homesick poems after class;
Quatrain
Du fu in Tang dynasty
The water waves in the river, the white feathers of waterfowl, the green and red flowers on the mountain are in contrast, and you want to burn. I watched it again this spring. When is the year of return?
Farewell poems in class:
A gift for Wang Lun.
Lipper
Li Bai was just about to leave when he heard a farewell song from the shore. Even if the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as Wang Lun's sending away my love.
Yellow Crane Tower —— Meng Haoran's farewell on his way to Yangzhou
Tang Libai
Old friends frequently waved to me, bid farewell to the Yellow Crane Tower, and traveled to Yangzhou in this beautiful spring filled with catkins and flowers. My friend's sail shadow faded away and disappeared at the end of the blue sky, only seeing the first line of the Yangtze River and heading for the distant horizon.
Biedongda
Don
Like a bird, she still flapped her wings and felt sorry for herself, leaving Beijing for more than ten years. A gentleman is poor, who wants to meet today without paying for drinks?
When sending Yuan Er to Anxi
Tangwangxu
Weicheng is sunny and dusty, and the guest house is green and willow. I advise you to drink a glass of wine and go out of Yangguan for no reason.
Poems sent after class:
Farewell Xin Jian at the Lotus Pavilion
Don Wang Changling
It's cold and rainy at night, and it's clear that Chushan is lonely. Relatives and friends in Luoyang asked each other, and there was ice in the jade pot.
Class reunion:
Return young
Tang He Zhang Zhi
Young people leave home, old people return, and the local accent has not changed. When children meet strangers, they will smile and ask where the guests are from.
After-school reunion:
Return young
Tang He Zhang Zhi
I have been away from my hometown for many years, and I have been half-dead recently. Only in front of Jinghu Lake, the spring breeze does not change the waves of the past.
Ancient poetry with mixed scenes in class;
Night berth near Fengqiao
Jill Zhang
Crows fell on the moon, crowed coldly, slept on maple trees, and slept in fishing lanes by the river. In the lonely Hanshan Temple outside Suzhou, the bell that rang in the middle of the night reached the passenger ship.
Ancient poetry of mixed scenes after class;
line
Tangwangxu
You have just come from our hometown, and we must understand the world. When you pass by my window, are plum blossoms blooming?
Ancient poems that recite things and express their feelings in class;
Mo mei
Wang Yuan cotton
The trees in Xiyan Lake near my home are covered with faint ink marks. Don't boast about the good color, just let the air be full of dried Kun.
Takeishi
Qing dynasty ... >>