After the test papers were handed out, there was a Chinese language test today. In the afternoon, the teacher handed out the test papers. My heart was pounding, fearing that I would do poorly in the exam. A classmate handed the test paper to my desk, and my blood froze at that moment. I blocked the bright red score with my hand and slowly moved away - at this time, a number nine came into view. I moved away suddenly, and a score was right in front of my eyes - ninety-four points. I am extremely happy. I am happy that I got more than 90 points, but I still have to work hard and move towards 95 points.
Comments from famous teachers: The young author truly reproduced the ambivalence of being nervous and a little hopeful after the test papers were handed out. In the third paragraph, he describes the details of blocking the score with his hand and then slowly pushing it away to see the score. It not only further highlights his contradictory psychology, but also makes most readers scream. The disadvantage is that the teacher feels that the description is not detailed enough. It would be better to add more details.