When I saw several big white geese on the river bank, I remembered a poem written by Luo when he was 7 years old, "Goose, Goose, Goose, and the white hair floats green water, and the red palm plays clear waves." This big white goose is white all over and has no hair. A red tumor on its head looks like a ruby and a plum blossom printed on the snow. A pair of flexible little eyes are embedded in the little head. Its neck is thin and long, its mouth is flat and wide, its tail is upturned, its feet are red and it is as flexible as two paddles. Its wings are big and its fat body is like a boat. It walks with its head held high, like a general. Great white goose likes water best: as soon as it sees water, it opens its throat and sings loudly again. It is really a tenor. They sometimes swim in groups on the green water, and a pair of red palms stir the water and spread out microwaves. They sometimes craned their necks to play in the water. Sometimes shoulder to shoulder, making out like brothers. Sometimes they are still playing hide and seek. They suddenly hid in the river and then surfaced. When they were hungry, they swam to the shore and saw a large green meadow in front of them. They rushed over, pecked east and west, and began to eat the draft with relish. I was full, then stretched my neck and went back to the river to play happily with my partner. Ah! The big white goose is so cute. I like big white goose. Teacher's evaluation: excellent
The lovely big white goose Ying Chenyu has 400 -500 words.