A. Influenza A virus that has attracted worldwide attention is not fatal, but it spreads quickly. If we don't try to understand its evolutionary principle, it will spread quickly and pose a great threat to human health.
On March 5th, ten thousand young volunteers in our city took to the streets to learn from Lei Feng. The general slogan of this activity is "carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng, participate in voluntary action, serve youth entrepreneurship and build a harmonious city together".
C. In an interview, the community director said that everyone did a lot of adjustment work last year, and this year will provide more help to people who are troubled by emotions and life, so that they are no longer so painful and overwhelmed.
This development forum was held in Shanghai. During the two-day forum, people from all walks of life at home and abroad expressed their opinions and exchanged views on many topics, such as environmental protection, personnel training and universal education.
Answer c
The test center examines the ability to distinguish speech disorders, and the ability level is D.
Item A analysis "The disease is easy to spread rapidly" leads to improper collocation. The original subject is "influenza A virus", and we can add it before the related word "if" in the latter sentence "I don't want to find its evolutionary principle, and the disease is easy to spread rapidly". The absence of the predicate in item B leads to the mismatch between "learning" and "activity", which should be "learning from Lei Feng". If the word order of item D is disordered or the sentence patterns are mixed, add "two days" before "this time" as the attribute, or change "two days to express opinions and conduct various exchanges" to "two days to exchange opinions".
Besides mastering the six kinds of ill sentences stipulated in the examination syllabus, we should also pay attention to the possible markers in the sentences: double-sided words, negative words, quantifiers, pronouns, related words and coordinate phrases. Candidates can use the trunk extraction method (such as item B) and the language sense reading method (such as item D) to make a preliminary judgment.
2. (National Volume 2, 2009) Among the following sentences, the one that is well chosen is
A. According to the company's strategic development plan, it is necessary to introduce a large number of outstanding talents, including clothing surveyors, group purchase salesmen, technical directors, senior design managers and many other grassroots and high-level positions.
B. After a period of rescue, they turned their focus to caring for survivors, and now they are busy avoiding the possible disasters caused by the 35 dammed lakes formed by the earthquake landslide, and they can't stop for a moment.
C. The hesitant units gradually lost their advantages, and the children of the employees of the Eighth Hydropower Bureau in the hinterland began to choose the city as the goal of realizing their lives, especially the generation born after 8 eager to integrate into the city.
D. Our works in last year's contest were well received, and this year's contest was assigned to participate in the whole process from proposition, final, sea election to award. We must attach great importance to it and cannot ignore it.
Answer b
The test center examines the ability to correctly distinguish and modify sick sentences, and the ability level is expression application D.
Analysis A. The improper position of preposition leads to the loss of subject, and "according to" is placed after "company"; Improper collocation, "including a large number of grass-roots and high-level positions such as fashion stylist, group purchase salesman, technical director and senior design manager" is inconsistent, but it should be "including a large number of grass-roots positions such as fashion stylist and group purchase salesman and high-level positions such as technical director and senior design manager". C. the composition is incomplete, lacking "starting to choose a city as the goal of realizing life", and adding "where" after "goal" D. It is illogical and should be "proposition". Auditions. Final decision "; Sentences are mixed together or subjects are switched. "We are assigned to participate in the whole process of the activity" should be "We will participate in the whole process of the activity".
Thinking and analytical thinking of language disorders: sorting out the trunk and branches of sentences to see if the components are incomplete or redundant; See whether the main components of the sentence are subject, predicate and object, and whether the branches and leaves of the sentence are collocated with the head; Read silently in your mind to see if there are different sentence patterns mixed together and whether the word order is appropriate; Comprehensive thinking, whether it conforms to logical thinking and whether the meaning is clear.
Ill sentences can also be identified according to their linguistic markers: the preposition "according to" at the beginning of item A may lead to incomplete subject, and the conjunction "he" may be a sign of improper response; Item D: Pause may be a sign of improper juxtaposition.
3.(09 Beijing Volume) Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is
In Yangshan, a suburb of Nanjing, there are three 40-meter-long boulders, all carved by hand. Experts believe that this is the memorial material Judy chose to build Zhu Yuanzhang's sacred monument.
Most of the group's funds are raised from outside, and the interest rate is unimaginable. However, the high interest rate makes the Group face more and more pressure on capital operation.
The research and development of vaccine is a huge project, which requires years of painstaking research. It is by no means a battle of one person, but a battle of all mankind.
No one can get along with each other day and night, but when there is a contradiction, they disagree, quarrel endlessly and don't give in to each other. This is actually the stupidest opinion.
Answer a
Examination and analysis of ill sentences in test sites.
There is ambiguity in the analysis of item B: the meaning of "interest" is not clear, so it can be changed to "loan interest"; "The interest rate is unimaginable" is repeated with the following article and can be deleted. The clause after item C is secretly changed into the subject or the predicate head is incomplete. You can add "need" before "time consuming" and remove "essential". The meaning of item D is unclear: the meaning of "this" is unclear. If it is acceptable to say "no contradiction", it is inappropriate to say "disagreement after contradiction".
Thinking analysis, analyzing and modifying sick sentences is a chicken rib for candidates. In addition to the usual special training, candidates also need to use language sense reading, sentence analogy, compression trunk method and comprehensive analysis from grammar, rhetoric, logic and semantics.
4. (Jiangsu Volume 2009) Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (3 points).
A. With the global temperature rising, the frequency and intensity of extreme meteorological events such as hurricanes, floods and droughts are increasing, and climate warming has become a challenge that all mankind must face together. 2 1 Century Education Network 2 1 Century Education Network. com
B. For post-80s writers, the biggest problem is to overcome their homogenization tendency, and publicizing their artistic individuality is their development path.
C although the impact of the international financial crisis is still spreading, with the gradual implementation of a series of economic stimulus plans, China's economy shows signs of recovery, and people's confidence in economic recovery begins to rise.
D. Because teenagers are immature, curious and lack of resolution, they are easily induced by bad information in the mass media, resulting in ideological and behavioral deviations.
The lack of "occurrence" after "extreme meteorological events" in the reference answer C A leads to improper collocation; Item b is illogical, and the meaning of "the biggest problem is to overcome the homogenization tendency between each other" is puzzling; Item d is the abuse of the preposition "because", which leads to the loss of the subject.
Discrimination and Modification of Ill Sentences in Test Sites
Types of ill sentences: improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components and chaotic structure; The meaning is not clear. This is illogical.
Objective test questions are mainly used to distinguish and modify sick sentences, while subjective test questions are mainly used to modify sick sentences.
The proposer left the second question to the sick sentence, which is different from the positioning of many model essays published before. The idioms that can be tested seem to "run out of ammunition", and the simulation volume keeps "chasing"; Fresh corpus can be used flexibly in sick sentences, and the test of students' expressive ability is also harsh. The proposition of "removing idioms and leaving ill sentences" is reasonable. The lack of component "occurrence" after item A "extreme meteorological event" leads to improper collocation; Item b is illogical, and the meaning of "the biggest problem is to overcome the homogenization tendency between each other" is puzzling; Item d is the abuse of the preposition "because", which leads to the loss of the subject.
5. (Hubei Volume, 2009) Among the following items, which one is not bad?
A. Whether many high school graduates give priority to majors or schools when filling in their volunteers is largely influenced by market demand, social orientation, parents' wishes, people's preferences and other factors.
B. On May 4th, a large-scale poetry recital of Red Proverbs was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre. Through the perfect recitation art of many famous performing artists, the college students present were excited and deeply shocked.
C. The tourist souvenir shopping mall in Grand View Garden is full of famous calligraphy and painting, root carving works, guide maps, antiques, ornaments and other handicrafts, which are dazzling and beautiful. Tourists are busy choosing and bargaining.
D The days in winter are very short. When I come back from work, the sun is setting, and the mist covers the village with a hazy veil. As usual, my mother brought out hot meals from the kitchen and told us to eat quickly.
Answer d
Discrimination of ill sentences in test sites.
A. Analyze the mixed repetition of the expressions "influenced by factors such as ……" and "caused by ……"; B. "Performance without real objects" after "Perfect recitation art of many famous performing artists"; C. "Celebrity calligraphy and painting, root carving works, guide maps, antiques, ornaments, etc." It does not belong to the category of "handicrafts" and should be changed to "commodities".
Thinking analysis candidates should be familiar with six kinds of sick sentences. For sentence collocation (such as item A) and improper collocation, most of them can be judged by language sense. Grammatical analysis is sometimes needed for improper word order, improper collocation, incompleteness or redundancy (for example, item B "Through the perfect recitation art of many famous performing artists" is reduced to "Through the recitation art of artists", and the object prefix can be found to be incomplete). In addition, it is not enough to analyze semantic errors and logical errors only by language sense and grammar.
6. (Tianjin Volume, 2009) Among the following sentences, the sentence with clear meaning is not ill-chosen.
A.90 The online bidding for the special number "Olympic Games" ended in Beijing, with a total price of 6,543,802,836,500 yuan, and the average price of each Olympic Games exceeded 6,543,804 yuan.
B. Although every effort was made to promote sales during the May Day holiday last year, during the Mother's Day holiday, merchants still made every effort, causing another wave of promotional activities.
C. Plant nutrition is to study how to increase crop yield and improve the quality of agricultural products through fertilization and other measures, so plant nutrition is very important not only for food quality and safety, but also for food quantity safety.
D. Whether the school can form a good and promoting campus culture and whether learners can really adapt to and integrate into it plays an important role in the effective development of teaching activities.
Answer b
Examination and analysis of language diseases in test sites.
It is ideologically redundant to analyze "Ge" and "Average Price" and "Du" in item A, because "Average Price" is the price of each item, which is repeated with "Ge" and only "Average Price" is reserved. The misuse of C related words, logically speaking, "so" means causality, and the logical relationship before and after C sentence is that "cause is cause" should be "because"; D "whether" represents two aspects of things, so the corresponding conclusion should also be two aspects, while "effective development" only represents positive aspects, which is obviously not corresponding.
Candidates should be familiar with six kinds of sick sentences. Each category can record several typical examples. Most illogical errors and semantic errors can be identified by sentence analogy and language sense reading.
7. (Chongqing Volume 2009) Among the following options, the one that is well chosen is
A. Modern medicine has repeatedly proved that when a person's energy drops and he lacks curiosity and interest in things, the function of the circulatory system will also deteriorate.
B More than 800 Fujian business elites from more than 40 countries and regions at home and abroad, 3/kloc-0 provinces, municipalities directly under the central government and autonomous regions gathered in Fuzhou.
C Yesterday, the Municipal Cultural Relics Bureau organized 39 experts to rush to the rebuilt Gongtan Ancient Town and passed the completion acceptance.
D. Walking along the path, the wind brought a fragrant smell. Looking around, I saw a Chimonanthus praecox sticking out of the high wall, releasing its fragrance.
Answer A(B) The words "at home and abroad" and "country, region and country" are repetitive and ambiguous. Delete "more than 40 countries and regions, 3 1 province and city". C the word "adoption" was improperly used and changed to "implementation". D is a verb-object collocation, and "look" and "fragrance" cannot be collocated. The last sentence was changed to "Looking around, I saw a Chimonanthus praecox sticking out of the high wall, from which the aroma was originally released")
Problem-solving guidance This question examines the ability to distinguish and analyze language diseases, and the level of ability is D. The key to the sick sentences is to start from two aspects: First, read textbooks and extracurricular books carefully to cultivate a sense of language; The second is to be familiar with the six kinds of ill sentences required to be mastered in the examination syllabus. The content of this question is a common and typical ill sentence. When you see a sentence, you must first arouse your sense of language and perceive the fault of the sentence from a perceptual point of view, that is, according to the customary saying, is it awkward? If it is awkward, the sentence may be a sick sentence. Then, by means of grammatical analysis, the additional components (attributive, adverbial and complement) in the sentence are removed, and the trunk is streamlined to check whether there is any problem; If the trunk is all right, check the part again to see if there are any problems with modifiers and headwords. In these two steps, language diseases such as improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components, chaotic structure and unclear meaning can often be found. Some sentences are not easy to find faults in grammar, so we can analyze them with logical meaning to see if they are reasonable.
8. (Anhui Volume 2009) The following sentences are not ill-chosen. The sentence with clear meaning is (3 points)
A. When a strong typhoon hit this coastal city, the roaring wind roared down with dense raindrops. An hour later, the water in some areas was as deep as 60 cm, and the traffic was once paralyzed.
B at the end of April this year, influenza a (H 1N 1) broke out in parts of Mexico and the United States. The World Health Organization attached great importance to this and quickly adopted a series of emergency measures.
C. This work report not only comprehensively summarizes the continuous reform and development of medical and health undertakings in our county in the past 30 years of reform and opening up, but also points out the direction for the construction of medical and health security system in our county.
D. Our Hi-tech Zone has continuously improved the technological innovation system which is market-oriented, enterprise-oriented, and combined with Industry-University-Research, and actively participated in the construction of "Hefei-Wuhu-Bengbu Independent Innovation Comprehensive Supporting Experimental Zone".
Answer d
The analysis of item A, "the wind ... came down", is not right. The ambiguity of item B "Mexico and parts of the United States". Item C "Summarizing the continuous reform and development of medical and health undertakings in our county in the past 30 years of reform and opening up" lacks an object. However, the juxtaposition of "market orientation, enterprise orientation and Industry-University-Research combination" in item D is really rare in the current language use. Grammatically speaking, if there are multiple "take" as ",you can use a" take "at the beginning and omit the" take "after it. For example, "agriculture-based, industry-oriented" or "agriculture-based, industry-oriented", but I think they are all "take" in the coordinate format. The problem is that the first two prepositional structures are suddenly followed by a subject-predicate structure, and then the three are juxtaposed. At least the structure is irregular. Whether it is a language barrier or not, we have to ask experts to explain. As a college entrance examination question, is this not rigorous enough? Or misleading?
9. (Liaoning Volume, 2009) Among the following sentences, there is no language barrier (3 points).
A. The badminton invitational tournament was held in the newly-built Hejiashan Gymnasium. After fierce competition in the group stage and semi-final, Zhang Bijiang and Deng Danjie won the championship and runner-up respectively.
B. Establishing a patient-centered service concept and providing high-quality services for patients can give patients more psychological comfort and help improve the social reputation and economic benefits of the hospital.
C. Due to careful planning and full preparation, the 29th Olympic Games held in Beijing last year became a grand event with the largest number of participating countries and the most wonderful opening ceremony, which received rave reviews.
D In China, although dinosaur fossils have long been regarded as "keels" and used as traditional Chinese medicine, they were not discovered and studied scientifically until the 20th century.
Answer b
Examination and analysis of language diseases in test sites.
It is illogical to analyze item A. In the second sentence, "the contestants passed" and "entered the competition" are in contradiction with "Zhang Bijiang and Deng Danjie won the championship and runner-up respectively" in the third sentence, so the word "passed" should be changed to "passed".
C is out of order. "Previous Olympic Games" should be "previous Olympic Games".
Improper word order. The coordinate phrase "discovery and research", the two verbs in the phrase, contains the order, which should be "research and discovery"
Candidates should be familiar with six kinds of sick sentences for judging language diseases. Each category can record several typical examples. Most illogical errors and semantic errors can be identified by sentence analogy and language sense reading.
10. (Jiangxi Volume, 2009) Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is
A. Chinese classroom is actually a miniature social verbal communication field, where students learn the verbal communication skills and literacy they need to enter the broad society in the future.
Mrs. Wang finally had a son after losing her son. No matter from maternal instinct or from her own rights and interests, Mrs. Wang is precious to Baoyu.
C a few days ago, he just received a group of provincial and municipal leaders, including the secretary of the provincial party Committee, to the county to investigate the problem of returning migrant workers.
D. Modern science and technology are changing with each passing day, and the research field is constantly expanding; There is no forbidden area in science, but it is not without scientific ethics.
Answer d
Discrimination of ill sentences in test sites
Analysis of A. Improper collocation of "learning" and "literacy". B. "Mrs. Wang" and "Baoyu" are reversed. C. the ambiguity of "a group of provincial and municipal leaders".
In addition to knowing "six kinds of ill sentences", the author also sums up the linguistic signs of ill sentences as "nine looks": a look at coordinate phrases (whose sign is pause. Words that indicate juxtaposition, such as a "and", may be improperly collocated), second, negative words, and third, quantitative phrases (marked by quantitative phrases, such as "a batch" in C multiple items). It may cause ambiguity with unclear scope). Fourth, look at double-sided words. Fifth, look at function words or prepositional phrases (prepositions or prepositional phrases (the preposition "dui" in item B is prone to subject-object inversion). Sixth, look at special sentence patterns. Seventh, look at the subject of the clause. Eighth, look at redundant words. Ninth, look at multiple modifiers.