The second sentence is well written and the other three sentences are not well written. I feel that there is no artistic conception, the level is not consistent, and the cohesion of the full text is also messy. If what you say is wrong, I hope the landlord will not take it amiss.
I'd like to try to figure out the meaning of the landlord, and modify it slightly as follows:
Wan Li is clear and white clouds are floating.
The crisp autumn leaves are shaking high and dry.
Who will you talk to about this?
Beautiful soft eyes are enchanting.
It's just a minor adjustment. For peaceful confrontation, for example, the order of "this feeling is so long" is reversed, and "ten thousand feet" is changed to "sunny day", which corresponds to "crisp autumn" in two sentences. Secondly, change is a subtle deepening, which facilitates the cohesion of the upper and lower sentences. For example, "sunny" is changed to "sunny", "this feeling" is changed to "this meaning", "I didn't know why" is changed to "who can speak" and "looking back and smiling" is changed to "several enchanting". In fact, every sentence should basically be the original intention of the landlord, but it is slightly processed.
If there is something wrong with the change, please tell me from the gentleman downstairs ~ ~ Thank you ~!