-Teaching design of reading Su Shi's poems.

Research on Si Yanping's Homogeneity of Young Chinese and Group Writing (18)—— Teaching Design of Su Shi's Group Poetry Reading

Love Su Dongpo through the ages

-Teaching design of reading Su Shi's poems.

Analysis of group poems:

"When will there be a bright moon?" It was written by the author in the Mid-Autumn Festival in Song Shenzong on 1076 (the ninth year of Xining). Su Shi once asked to be transferred to a place near Su Zhe to be an official. In A.D. 1074 (the seventh year of Xining), Su Shi knew little about Mizhou. After arriving in Michigan, this wish still cannot be realized. On the Mid-Autumn Festival in A.D. 1076, the poet was filled with emotion in the face of a bright moon, so he wrote this famous article with a pen.

The poem "Don't Listen to the Woods and Beat Leaves" was written in the spring of the fifth year of Yuanfeng (1082), which was the third spring when Su Shi was demoted as the deputy envoy of Huangzhou (now Huanggang, Hubei) because of the Wutai poetry case. The poet and his friends went out in the spring when a storm suddenly came. Friends were deeply embarrassed, but the poet didn't care, took it calmly and walked slowly.

"Linjiang Xian Farewell to Qian Mufu" was written by Su Shi in the spring of A.D. 109 1 year (the sixth year of Yuan You, Song Zhezong) to bid farewell to his old friend Qian Mufu who moved northward from Yuezhou (now Shaoxing, Zhejiang) and passed through Hangzhou. The whole poem has changed the sentimental, sad and generous style of farewell poems in the past, and has made some innovations in statutes, resorting to bold, argumentative and frank writing, which has both charm and interest, and fully embodies the author's broad-minded and free-spirited personality.

Target location:

1. Read the correct pronunciation in combination with relevant notes and reference books, pay attention to stop connecting and read with emotion.

2. Through the thinking mode of "comparing and seeking differences", I deeply realized the charm of Dongpo's poems and pinned my feelings on the expression of objects.

3. Listen to Su Shi's life sentiment and feel the great spiritual tension and gorgeous life of Su Shi's poems.

Teaching process:

First, the introduction of new courses.

There is such a man, known as the national male god, and countless women have confessed that they will marry him when they get married. He is an artistic generalist, proficient in poetry, prose, calligraphy, painting and temperament; He is a master of life, cooking all kinds of delicious food and creating yoga fitness; He is a naive boy and sees that there is no one in the world who is not a good person. He can accompany the jade emperor at the top and the peddler at the bottom. Who is he? He is Su Dongpo who has been loved for a long time. In this lesson, let's learn Su Shi's group poem "When will there be a bright moon?" "Set the storm? Don't listen to the sound of beating leaves resounding through the forest? " "Linjiang fairy? Send Qian Mufu? " To listen to Dongpo's lovely and respectable soul echo.

(Design intention: Open the classroom with concrete and sensible evaluation of Su Shi, stimulate students' interest and desire to approach Su Shi, and make the classroom warm up. )

Second, read Dongpo and see how he feels.

Screen display:

When will there be a bright moon?

Chen Bing Mid-Autumn Festival, happily drank the next morning, drunk, wrote this word, and missed my brother Su Zhe.

When did the moon begin to appear? I take my glass from a distance. I don't know the palace in the sky, and I don't know the month and time. I'm willing to ride the wind to the sky, I'm afraid I can't stand the cold for nine days in a pavilion of fine jade. Dance and enjoy the shadow of the moon, which is in the world.

The moon turned into a scarlet pavilion, hanging low on the carved window, shining on the sleepy self. The moon should not have any resentment against people. Why is it round when people are gone? People are sad and happy, and they are separated and reunited. The moon will darken or shine, and it will become round or round. Nothing is perfect, even in the past. I hope people will live for a long time and have a good scenery thousands of miles away.

Don't listen to the sound of knocking leaves through the forest

On March 7th, it was raining on Shahu Road, and all the servants with rain gear left. The same people felt embarrassed, but I didn't think so. The rain gear comes first, and the peers are in chaos. I didn't know it at first, but when I found out, I pretended to use this word.

Don't pay attention to the beating rain in the forest. Mei sings a long whistle and walks leisurely. Bamboo poles and sandals are more dexterous than riding horses. What's to be afraid of? A raincoat and hemp fiber, despite the wind and rain, still live my life.

The coolness of spring breeze awakens my wine, and the cold begins to be cold, and the peak of the sun is the sun, but it is satisfied in time. Looking back at the place where I met the wind and rain, going back, for me, there is no wind and rain, but it is still sunny.

Linjiang Song Xian Qian Mufu

Since we have been in Beijing for three years, far away from the world, you have traveled around the world. When I meet with a smile, it's still warm as spring. Your heart is like an ancient well, not water, and the peak is like a bamboo pole in autumn.

My heart is melancholy, because you want to separate the sails overnight. When you see me off, the clouds are the color of the moon. There is no need for the girls of Pei Jiu to feel too sorry for the glass. Life is a difficult journey, you and I are both passers-by, just like stopping at different hotels.

Student activities:

1. Read aloud, take turns reading, read in competition, read in comparison, dredge poetry and understand poetry.

2. After reading these three words, what do you think are their similarities? From this, what do you think impressed you most about Dongpo's ci?

Clear: * * Similarity lies in that they all come from the emotional foundation of brothers and friends. The first is to miss Yu Zi, the second is to encourage friends, and the third is to say goodbye to friends. The most touching thing in Su Shi's ci lies in his sincere and strong affection for relatives and friends.

* * * is similar in that all three words have a profound understanding of life, a thorough understanding of life, and broad-minded and chic feelings.

People are sad and happy, and they are separated and reunited. The moon will darken or shine, and it will become round or round. Nothing is perfect, even in the past.

I hope people will live for a long time and have a good scenery thousands of miles away.

Looking back at the place where I met the wind and rain, going back, for me, there is no wind and rain, but it is still sunny.

Life is a difficult journey, you and I are both passers-by, just like stopping at different hotels.

If you classify these three words in pairs, how would you classify them?

Clear: the second and third songs can be classified into one category, both related to spring; The first and third songs can be classified into one category, both related to night and moonlight; The first song and the second song can be classified into one category, with a small order before the words.

Design intention: use different forms of reading aloud to understand the meaning of words, and use the way of seeking common ground while reserving differences to pry the classroom, find the fusion point of Su Shi's ci, and perceive the charm of Dongpo's ci as a whole. )

Third, second, read Dongpo and understand its taste.

1. Read aloud "When will there be a bright moon in the head of Fraxinus mandshurica" and "Don't listen to the sound of beating leaves in the forest", find out the poems that you ask yourself and answer, and feel the true taste.

Screen display:

When did the moon begin to appear? I take my glass from a distance.

The moon should not have any resentment against people. Why is it round when people are gone? People are sad and happy, and they are separated and reunited. The moon will darken or shine, and it will become round or round. Nothing is perfect, even in the past.

Bamboo poles and sandals are more dexterous than riding horses. What's to be afraid of? A raincoat and hemp fiber, despite the wind and rain, still live my life.

"When is the bright moon? Ask the sky for wine. " Su Shi asking for the moon, asking extraordinary questions; Su Shi answered the moon in a refined and romantic way.

"There should be no hate, why grow out of round? People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. This matter is ancient and difficult. " Su Shi complains about the moon, sadness and melancholy; Su Shi's interpretation of the moon is reasonable and philosophical.

"Bamboo poles and sandals are lighter than horses. Who's scared? A misty rain is a lifetime. " Facing the bamboo stick mango shoes and working in Dongpo, Su Shi asked himself, is the wind and rain awesome? Su Shi laughed at himself, dressed in hemp fiber, braved the wind and rain, walked calmly, relaxed and cheerful, heroic and detached.

2. Read these three words again, pay attention to those poems that contain the words "nothing" and "nothing", and compare and analyze the poetic flavor.

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I don't know the palace in the sky, and I don't know the month and time.

I'm willing to ride the wind to the sky, I'm afraid I can't stand the cold for nine days in a pavilion of fine jade.

The moon should not have any resentment against people. Why is it round when people are gone?

Looking back at the place where I met the wind and rain, going back, for me, there is no wind and rain, but it is still sunny.

There is no need for the girls of Pei Jiu to feel too sorry for the glass.

The "No" in When is the Moon on the Turn of Water is full of contradictory and complicated emotions, including deep yearning for my younger brother Su Zhe, faint melancholy for my career, faint yearning for the court and fear and worry after yearning, which circulates in the artistic conception.

The "nothing" in Ding Fengbo is free and easy, political turmoil, life gains and losses, career honor and disgrace, all fame and fortune, so why bother? Without wind and rain, life is not afraid, calm and stable, and seek the true self.

The "no" in "Send Qian Mufu to Linjiang Fairy" is clearly written by geisha, not sad for parting; Actually, it means encouraging friends. Parting is normal, don't be sad. Heroic is also, broad-minded is also.

If these three words are put in the same space, which one is the turning point of his life mentality? Why?

Qing: Ding Fengbo can be regarded as a turning point of Dongpo's life mentality. In the misty rain, forget things and forget my life. In the peace of mind, I let myself live in harmony with nature, not deliberately, not persistently and casually. If there is a contradiction between being an official and being an official, a fear of slanders, and an obstacle to personal gains and losses in When there is a bright moon in Fraxinus mandshurica, then in Ding Feng, Su Shi puts aside all the gains and losses of fame and fortune, cares about honor and disgrace, and calmly comes and goes between heaven and earth, and naturally advances and retreats.

(Design intention: read poetry from a middle perspective and taste poems with three words in the same word. This is to analyze the spiritual conversion of "nothing" in Su Shi's life with the thinking of seeking common ground, and then make a deep comparison and trace back to Su Shi's different spiritual world behind the three words. )

Fourth, three readings of Dongpo, micro meaning.

Student activities:

1. Guess the writing background of the three words, and under what circumstances were they created? It happened by accident. What did you see?

Screen display:

"When will there be a bright moon?" It was written by the author in the Mid-Autumn Festival in Song Shenzong on 1076 (the ninth year of Xining). Su Shi once asked to be transferred to a place near Su Zhe to be an official. In A.D. 1074 (the seventh year of Xining), Su Shi knew little about Mizhou. After arriving in Michigan, this wish still cannot be realized. On the Mid-Autumn Festival in A.D. 1076, the poet was filled with emotion in the face of a bright moon, so he wrote this famous article with a pen.

Ding Fengbo, don't listen to the sound of leaves beating in the forest, written in the spring of 1082 (five years in Yuanfeng, Song Shenzong). At that time, it was the third spring when Su Shi was demoted as the deputy envoy of Huangzhou (now Huanggang, Hubei) because of the Wutai Poetry Case, and he was named "Dongpo". The poet and his friends went out in the spring when a storm suddenly came. Friends were deeply embarrassed, but the poet didn't care, took it calmly and walked slowly.

"Linjiang Fairy" was written in 109 1 year (six years in Yuan You, Song Zhezong). Su Shi got to know Hangzhou as he wished and bid farewell to his old friend Qian Mufu (name) who passed through Hangzhou from Yuezhou (now Shaoxing, Zhejiang). The whole poem has changed the sentimental, sad or generous style of farewell poems in the past, and has made some innovations in statutes, putting wonderful reasons outside the bold and unconstrained, arguing vigorously and expressing the temperament directly.

I see, no matter what kind of life experience Su Shi encounters, he can take it in stride.

I understand that Su Shi suddenly became calm after encountering great difficulties in his life.

I understand that Su Shi is calm and calm after going through life and death.

I understand that being demoted to Huanggang is Su Shi's pain and happiness, and Dongpo was born.

2. What words would you choose if you were asked to give a friend the most touching and full of philosophy of life?

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If my friend is thousands of miles away, I will choose "I wish him a long life, and I will enjoy the bright moon with him and send my best wishes and thoughts".

If my friend is at a low ebb of adversity, I will choose to "look back at the bleak place and go home, no rain or shine" and persuade him to look down on the rain and shine, and look down on the bitterness and joy. Looking back, everything is fine;

If I leave my friends, I will choose "Life is like a trip, and I am also a pedestrian". You and I are passers-by between heaven and earth, so why get together in front of me, north of the Yangtze River? Don't be sad, don't be sad, and leave another day.

(design intent: apply what you have learned and connect with life. The function of poetry lies not only in reading, but in that it can help us express our life and help us find opportunities for expression in life. It is necessary to establish students' wandering consciousness of returning to life. )

Five or four thoughts on Dongpo and a close look at his heart.

Do you love this Dongpo?

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Su Shi (1037—110/) was born in Meishan, Meizhou (now Meishan, Sichuan). In the second year of Jiayou (1057), Su Shi was a scholar. Song Shenzong worked in Fengxiang, Hangzhou, Mizhou, Xuzhou and Huzhou. In the third year of Yuanfeng (1080), he was demoted to Huangzhou as Yong Lian's assistant ambassador because of the Wutai Poetry Case. After Song Zhezong acceded to the throne, he was known in Hangzhou, Yingzhou, Yangzhou, Dingzhou and other places. In his later years, he was exiled to Huizhou and Danzhou because of the ruling of the New Party. Song Huizong was granted amnesty and returned to the north, where he died. Song Gaozong posthumously awarded a surname, posthumous title "article". Su Shi is the representative of the highest literary achievement in Song Dynasty, and he has made great achievements in poetry, ci, writing, calligraphy and painting. His poems are broad in subject matter, fresh and healthy, good at exaggeration and metaphor, and unique in style. He is also called "Su Huang" with Huang Tingjian. His words are bold and unconstrained, and they are both bold and unconstrained representatives with Xin Qiji, and they are called "Su Xin"; His prose creation is rich and unrestrained, and he is also called "Ou Su" with Ouyang Xiu, and he is one of the "Eight Masters in Tang and Song Dynasties". Su Shi is also good at books and is one of the "Song Sijia"; He is good at painting, especially at ink bamboo, strange stones and dead wood. There are seven episodes of Dongpo, Yi Zhuan of Dongpo and Yuefu of Dongpo.

Do you love this Dongpo?

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After a long trial, Su Shi was tortured and almost lost his life. Later, due to the active rescue of Empress Dowager Gao and Fan Zhen, 65438 was released from prison in February. After he was released from prison, Su Shi was demoted to be the deputy envoy who should stay in Huangzhou forever. He was not allowed to sign official duties, was not paid, and the court did not provide accommodation. In fact, he is guilty. When Su Shi arrived in Huangzhou, he saw that it was hard for farmers to transplant rice by hand, so he invented a new transplanting tool called "Ma Yang", and Huangzhou people gave it a name, "Sumagong". Without a salary, Su Shi led his family to cultivate land, starting from Tao Yuanming and calling himself Dongpo; Without a house to live in, Su Shi led everyone to build a house and named it "Tang Xue". Seeing the bad habit of abandoning babies in Huangzhou, Su Shi looked in his eyes and was anxious in his heart. He was not allowed to sign official documents and manage political affairs, but the incompetent judge ignored him. In a rage, Su Shi actively advocated the establishment of a children's rescue home. On the one hand, he sells calligraphy and painting to raise money, on the other hand, he widely raises money to save baby girls.

Although Su Shi did not hold an important position in Huangzhou for five years, he still cared about people's livelihood and served the people with the heart of worrying about the country and the people. Dongpo, who is broad-minded and free and easy, has been looking for his own life support. Although he has a lonely and sad sigh, he is more loyal to those who forget himself. During his five years in Huangzhou, he wrote Red Cliff Nostalgia, Red Cliff Poetry and The Tempest. A misty rain makes a lifetime, Linjiang Xianzi drinks Dongpo at night and wakes up drunk, and the fortune teller hangs a tree without a month. He also created Cold Food Sticker, known as the second running script in the world, which established his position as the second calligrapher in the Song Dynasty.

-Si Yanping's tearful laughter

Do you love this Dongpo?

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During his stay in Mizhou, Su Shi wrote "When will there be a bright moon?"? And where will you go in the Ten Years of Jiang. I prefer his song Hunting in Jiangchengzi Mizhou. In the face of the court's re-divided peace, Su Shi hated it, led the officers and men to hunt outside, and wrote an ambitious and heroic "bow like a full moon, look northwest, shoot the wolf"!

In A.D. 1089, Su Shi went to Hangzhou as a university student in Longtuge, and from then on, Hangzhou began a brand-new atmosphere. That year, Hangzhou suffered from plague, severe drought and no harvest for the people. After Su Shi came to power, from the beginning of curing the plague, the government set up an Anlefang to treat the people free of charge and severely crack down on profiteers who hoarded. Open the granary of the government, distribute food for the people and relieve everyone's worries. Su Shi led a crowd to dredge Hangjun Road and manage the West Lake, and built nine pavilions on it. The West Lake, renovated by Su Shi, is even more enchanting with her moving face. Su Causeway on the West Lake was built and named after Su Shi. Even if we go to Hangzhou to play now, Hangzhou people will always praise it. Without Su Dongpo, the West Lake would cease to exist, and Hangzhou would lack a bright pearl!

-Si Yanping's tearful laughter

I love Dongpo, his brilliant and versatile master;

I love Dongpo, love his wandering, anything will do;

I love Dongpo, love his reckless situation, and show myself;

I love Dongpo, his home country and the world, and I can't forget the military camp;

I love Dongpo, I love his free and easy, my love and righteousness.

I love Dongpo, I love his calmness and pragmatism for the people.

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(Design intention: End this class with passionate and high-spirited feeling. This kind of Dongpo deserves our love, description and imitation, so as to respond to the classroom theme "Love Su Dongpo through the ages" and make the classroom form a circular framework. )