1. Knowledge and ability: Be sure to understand the betting words in the text and master their meanings. Understand the application and function of rhetorical methods such as parallelism, repetition and contrast in poetry; Learn to describe and express feelings in the form of poetry. Learn and master the rhythm and melody of poetry, experience the poet's sincere and warm feelings for the working people and his hatred and curse for the old world, and improve his aesthetic ability.
2. Process and methods: 1. Understand poetry through repeated reading, and understand the relationship between emotional changes of poetry and rhythm and melody.
Then analyze the rhetorical devices and key paragraphs of this poem in detail, and finally guide students to analyze another poem to cultivate students' appreciation of poetry.
3. Emotion, attitude and values: Understanding the poet's praise and nostalgia for the Dayan River through the thoughts and passions throughout the poem is essentially a tribute to the working women in old China.
Teaching focus
1. Learn the application and function of rhetorical devices such as parallelism, repetition and contrast in poetry.
2. Understand and learn the lyric methods used in poetry. Difficulties enable students to perceive the author's true feelings contained in poems and understand the methods and importance of the author's writing poems with emotion.
Teaching preparation
Teacher staffing: 1. Prepare another famous ulanova by Ai Qing and design some exercises. 2. Understand the life of the poet Ai Qing and the creative background of this poem.
Students' preparation: preview the text, read the poem carefully and emotionally many times, and be sure to read the notes below the text and list the words after class.
Teaching time
2 class hours
first kind
First, import the text.
1, teacher: the genre of poetry is no stranger to us, and we have been exposed to it in previous studies.
There are many types of poetry. Today we are going to appreciate contemporary poets? Ai Qing's masterpiece. Who can tell me about the author Ai Qing?
Ai Qing, formerly known as Jiang Haicheng, was born in Guitianjiang Village, Jinhua County, Zhejiang Province in 19 10. He is a famous poet in modern China. 1929 went to France to work and study, majoring in painting. 1932 returned to China, joined the China Left-wing Artists Union, was arrested for engaging in patriotic movements, and began to write poems in prison. 1935 10 was released from prison, and the first book of poetry, Dayan River, was published the following year, which was highly valued by the literary world.
Teacher: Ai Qing's major works include Cheers, Gem Red Star, Black Eel, On the Cape, etc. His poems express thoughts and feelings in plain language and depict artistic images, with simple and fresh language, harmonious rhythm and unique artistic style.
3. Teacher: 1933, Ai Qing was arrested and imprisoned for participating in progressive patriotic activities. In the cold prison, the poet wrote this famous poem looking at the snowflakes flying all over the sky and thinking about people? "Dayan River? My nanny. Write on the blackboard. 3. Listen to the teacher introduce the author's writing background and reasons, so as to understand the feelings to be expressed in poetry.
Second, word practice.
1, Teacher: Everyone previewed this text before class. There are some new words in this paper that must be mastered first to understand the meaning better.
2. Check the students' preview. With the help of reference books or related materials, complete the exercises in class and master the new words in the text.
Third, read the poem aloud and feel the meaning of the text.
1, recording and reading poems. Pay attention to the rhythm when reading aloud, divide the sentence rhythm of this poem into meaning units, and read aloud with emotion.
2. Extract students' initial impressions of this poem from what they read and summarize them.
Health: The hero described in the poem is the poet's wet nurse. She is an ordinary and humble professional woman who doesn't even have her own name. She is hardworking, simple and kind, but her life has always been poor and difficult.
Teacher: Through the memory of the wet nurse, the poet expressed sincere nostalgia and deep praise for the wet nurse, and then expressed his love for working women and even working people. An unfair world? Curses and accusations of love.
Fourth, divide the levels and summarize the significance.
1, guide students to read the text, summarize the levels of poetry, and summarize the thoughts and feelings expressed at each level.
Teacher: Good. Now let's look at the first part. The first part is the first four paragraphs of this poem. What does it mainly talk about and express? Clue: In the fourth paragraph of the poem, the poet saw the snow, remembered the nanny Dayan River, and painted a set of desolate pictures with imagination and association: desolate graves, deserted former residences, pawn gardens and mossy stone chairs. Through a series of comparisons, in the rendering of a strong tragic atmosphere, the poet deeply expressed his thoughts and condolences to the nanny Dayan River, which triggered memories of Dayan River's tragic life.
3. Teacher: What did the second part tell you?
Health: The second part, from the fifth paragraph to the eighth paragraph, focuses on the description of Dayan and her hard-working and kind character, and expresses the poet's deep attachment and respect for her.
4. Teacher: In the third part of the poem, I wrote about Dayan and the desolation after death and the tragic experience of my family. In fact, I was accusing the darkness of social reality. What sentences can be expressed in the text?
Health: Paragraph 10 describes the funeral of Dayan River. Before use? Forty years of bullying? 、? The sufferings of countless slaves? What about after death A four-dollar coffin and some straws? 、? How many feet of land does it take to bury a coffin? In contrast, it profoundly and vividly reveals the darkness of the old society.
5. Teacher: What did the Fourth Teacher of Poetry say? Write an outline of the above contents on the blackboard.
Health: The fourth part is the elegy and hymn dedicated by the poet to the Dayan River, which expresses the poet's deep nostalgia and heartfelt praise for the Dayan River.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) is the summary of this lesson.
This lesson is mainly to have a general understanding of the author Ai Qing, a preliminary understanding of the rhythm and rhythm of poetry, and a preliminary contact with the feelings expressed in poetry. Through repeated reading, I have a basic understanding of the level and significance of poetry and a clear structure of poetry.
Blackboard writing:
5. Daxie River? My nanny
The first floor (1 ~ 4): Explain the tragic life experience of Dayan River and its relationship with? Me? Relationship? Nostalgia and mourning
Second floor (paragraphs 5-8): Memories of the hard and miserable life of Dayan River? Attachment and gratitude
The third floor (9 ~ 1L): Write about the desolation after the death of Dayan River and the tragic experiences of family members? Sympathy and blame
Fourth floor (12 ~ 13): elegies and hymns dedicated by the poet to Dayan River? Eulogize and praise
Second lesson
First, read together.
Second, analyze and discuss writing skills.
1, Teacher: Poetry is different from ordinary narratives and expositions. Its form is not only special, but also uses a variety of writing techniques to express content and express emotions. In addition to using association, imagination and contrast in many places, this paper also uses parallelism many times to make the content concise, the form neat, the rhythm clear and the momentum vigorous. In addition, in order to strengthen the emotion and the melody of syllables, the rhetorical method of repetition is widely used in poetry. What is the function of this technology?
Health: This poem expresses deep affection for the Wild Goose River through repeated recitation. Many stanzas use the repetition of the first and last two sentences, which makes the poem sigh tactfully and enhances the lyrical effect of the poem.
2. Ask students to find and read sentences with various rhetorical devices in poetry and analyze their functions. Guide the completion of after-class thinking and exercise 4.
3. Teacher: In terms of conception, what are the first four verses of the whole poem? Today? Write? Think of people when you see snow? ; The last two sentences can be traced back to? Today? To praise Dayan River. There is a sentence in the fourth quarter? Dayanhe, seeing the snow today reminds me of you? 12 There is a sentence in the poem? Dayanhe, today, is your baby in prison? What role do these two sentences play in the structure of the whole poem?
In paragraph 4? Dayanhe, seeing the snow today reminds me of you? Seeing the snow from the prison reminds me of the snowy grave of the Wild Goose River, reminds me of the wet nurse, and then recalls her hard work and silent dedication. 12? Dayanhe, is your son in prison today? Are you online? Today? In the fourth paragraph? Today? Echoing each other, from memory to reality, makes the time clue clearer.
Third, learn key paragraphs. Deep understanding
1, Teacher: We read and analyzed the whole poem earlier. Now we choose several key chapters to study. Who wants to read the seventh and eighth paragraphs to you?
2. Teacher: The seventh paragraph compares the poet's own superior conditions with the harsh conditions of the Dayan River, but under such superior conditions, my mood is uneasy. ? Uneasy? What does this word mean? Me? I'm used to living in a nanny's house, that is to say? Me? Alienation and alienation from the landlord family. Please find the same sentence in the poem to prove it, and analyze what they express. 2. Follow the teacher to explain and understand the key paragraphs, and try to analyze and grasp the author's thoughts and feelings. Health:? I'm a new guest at my parents' house? . You are a member of this family, but you say you are? New guests? It shows deep affection for Dayan River and strangeness to biological parents.
3. Teacher: The eighth paragraph of the poem says? Dayan River for a living? You started working with your arms around me? . The Dayan River described in this poem doesn't work for itself as in paragraph 5, but goes to the landlord's house. Me? Work, so as to get paid to support their families. Labor is heavy and varied, but she always? With a smile? What does this say about her quality? 3. Health: It shows the diligence and kindness of Dayanhe and a positive and optimistic attitude towards life.
4. Teacher: What does the sixth paragraph say? Me? What happened to her when she left Dayan and her home? Cry? And then write about her again and again in paragraph 8? Laugh? There is a deeper meaning. What do you mean? 4. Health: It reflects Dayan's deep love for infants, in order to be with infants? Laugh? . This is the real maternal love! It is love that transcends all utilitarian relationships.
Third, enjoy "To ulanova"
1, Teacher: I got a preliminary impression of Ai Qing's poems through the study of poems selected from textbooks. In order to deepen our understanding of his style and thoughts and improve our reading ability, I chose one of his poems for everyone to enjoy. Write down the poem "To ulanova" on the blackboard and let the students read it aloud. Understand the meaning of poetry and feel the artistic beauty of poetry.
2, guide the completion of in-class exercises 2.
Fourth, the summary of this lesson
Through the study of key paragraphs, this lesson further understands the author's thoughts and feelings, and analyzes the author's creative techniques and artistic characteristics of the poem. In order to improve students' ability to read and appreciate poems, this class also guides students to analyze another famous poem written by Ai Qing for ulanova.
For ulanova.
? After watching the ballet (serenade)
Soft as a cloud. As light as the wind, brighter than the moon and quieter than the night? The human body traveling in space is not a fairy in the sky, but a goddess on earth, more beautiful than a dream and more moving than a fantasy? It is the crystallization of labor creation.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) problem inquiry and expansion activities
The poet poured out his love for Dayan River, which is the same as his love for the dark society. This unfair world? ) hate together. Please find out this poem that shows the poet's hatred of the dark society and talk about its function.
Sixth, practical design
1. Put phonetic symbols on the following words and use them to make sentences.
The pawnbroker wandered in the ice, cursing and wandering.
2. Read the poem "To ulanova" and complete the following questions.
(1) Find the figurative sentences that best reflect the ballet posture in the poem.
(2) Let's talk about the functions and benefits of dashes.
(3) The language of this poem is vivid. Try to analyze the artistic effect of comparing the dancer's dance with the clouds and winds in nature in the first two sentences.
(4) in poetry? No? Is it? What does it matter? What is the poet's intention in writing like this?
Seven, personality exercise design
Try to praise the image of the workers around you with a short paragraph or a few lines of poetry.