You wear your hometown on your head.
Everywhere you go, there are mushrooms in your hometown.
Mom can see your unwavering figure in her dreams.
Son, put on this hat,
There is a bird song I made up in my hat.
Wherever you go, you can hear the voice of your hometown.
On a quiet night, birds will sneak into your dreams.
Son, put on this hat,
Let this hometown be close to your heart.
Wherever you go, you can feel the warmth of your hometown.
Even on a cold winter night, you will feel the warmth of spring.
Son, put on this hat,
Let this hometown flower accompany you through the downtown area.
Wherever you go, you can smell the fragrance of your hometown.
Let the fragrance of the earth beat against every window lattice of the city.
Son, put on this hat,
You put the moon on your head.
(This article was selected into the second lesson of the first volume of Chinese reading in fifth grade primary schools of People's Education Publishing House), (1946—), male, Han nationality, from Dongping County, Shandong Province, member of the Chinese Writers Association, member of the Children's Literature Committee of the Chinese Writers Association, 1966 graduated from middle school, and 1968 returned to work in his hometown. 1970 worked as a teacher in Huanglong county, Shaanxi province. Later, he served as secretary of the commune party Committee and minister of the propaganda department of the county party Committee. From 65438 to 0978, he was the editor of Shaanxi Youth Magazine, and now he is the editor-in-chief of the magazine (renamed Youth Monthly).
He has published more than 20 books, such as The Story of Wang Di, Colorful Fairy Tales of China, 2 1 century campus recitation poems and 2 1 century campus lyric poems.
Published works 65438 to 0975. Mainly writing children's poems, but also writing fairy tales and children's stories. He has published children's songs, children's poems, autumn wind dolls, a bunch of poems by middle school students, poems by boys and girls, etc. Wang Yizhen is a famous contemporary children's poet in China. Over the past 30 years, he has created many beautiful poems for children, and his works have won many national awards, and have been incorporated into various versions of Chinese and Chinese reading textbooks for primary and secondary schools. He is the third artistic peak of contemporary children's poetry in China after poets such as Ke Yan and Jin Bo, and is praised by children's literature critics as "the king of the northwest flute" and "the important town of children's poetry". Wang Yizhen's creation of children's poems can be roughly divided into three periods: the first period is the initial stage of creation, that is, the 1970s; The second period was the 1980s, which was the period when his children's poems made important achievements, and his masterpiece was Autumn Wind Doll. The third period is from the 1990s to the present. During this period, his children's poetry creation has matured into art, and the representative collection of poems is The Story of Wang Di. At the end of 2002, Hubei Children's Society published Wang Yizhen's "2 1 Century Campus Recitation Poetry". This collection of poems, with its high artistic taste and ideological taste, has aroused great social repercussions and won the welcome of readers. The first edition of this book exceeded 10000 copies. In recent years, the publication of children's literature is in the doldrums, especially the publication of children's poems, which is really worthy of attention. Some critics believe that this is an important symbol of Wang Yizhen's artistic exploration in the new century and an important achievement of China's children's literature creation in recent years. China Press and Publication, China Book and Business Daily and other media also published some related commentary articles to affirm it. In 2003, Hubei Children's Society published the sister collection "2 1 Century Campus Lyrics", which included the new children's lyric poems by the poet Wang Yizhen. The artistic quality is quite high, which will have a great impact on the creation of children's poetry in China, and may also cause children's poetry circles to think about the present situation and future development of contemporary children's poetry after publication. This book was selected as one hundred patriotic education books jointly recommended by the Propaganda Department of the CPC Central Committee, the Central Civilization Office, the Ministry of Education, the Ministry of Culture, the State Administration of Radio, Film and Television, the General Administration of Press and Publication and the Central Committee of the Communist Youth League.
He has published more than 2,000 poems and more than 500,000 fairy tales in more than 0/00 domestic periodicals such as People's Daily, People's Literature and Poetry Magazine. He has successively won more than ten literary book awards, such as China Book Award, National Excellent Children's Literature Award of Chinese Writers Association, Soong Ching Ling Children's Literature Award, Dandelion Award of Ministry of Culture, First Prize of National Excellent Children's Book, Bingxin Book Award, and Shaanxi Five One Project Award. The poem "Dai Li" is not long, only five sentences and twenty lines. Its content is not complicated. It is said that when her son left his hometown, the mother didn't give him any good gifts, only told him to wear a hat. Then, starting from "Li", she combined the feelings of home and country with maternal love, wrote a mother's lofty and great mind, and showed a mother's noble ideological realm.
In the first section, it is written that children in hats are mushrooms in their hometown. This passage begins with the kind word "child", opens the floodgate of the author's emotion, and then sheds the sincere love of the mother with an imperative sentence "put on this hat". Why do you want to put a hat on your child? This has to start with the image of the hat, which is a tool to shelter from the wind and rain in rural areas. It has a strong flavor of hometown and is the best carrier to entrust the feelings of hometown. Wearing a hat means wearing your hometown. From the image of hat, the author derives another image, that is, mushroom. Comparing children to mushrooms is not only a formal representation, but also an emotional one. Imagine that a child in a hat looks like a mushroom from a distance, but the author's intention is not so profound. "Mushroom" is something from my hometown, a kind of delicious food for my mother and a carrier of my mother's feelings. Whenever a mother sees mushrooms, she will think of her children. Or, children who miss her can be dispelled by mushrooms. In these two senses, there is no better carrier than "mushroom". In addition, the "non-oblique shape" in this paragraph is the mother's earnest expectation for her child, hoping that the child will be an upright person outside. Because, as long as children wear hats, they will not forget their hometown and the simple and honest character of their hometown people.
In the second section, I wrote that birds are singing in their hats, which is the voice from their hometown. The image of "birdsong" is worth pondering. "Bird singing" actually refers to the mother's exhortation to her children. So why did the author choose the carrier of "birdsong"? Because birds can fly freely, not limited by time and space, children can hear them anytime and anywhere, and the bird's song itself is beautiful, so mother says it is the voice of hometown. This kind of sound will "slip" into children's dreams on a quiet night. A word "slippery" in the poem makes the love contained in mother's gentle exhortation flexible and round.
In the third section, it is written that hats are the hot land of hometown. In this section, the author compares the hat to the hot land of hometown, because the hat is made of bamboo, and bamboo is rooted in the hot land of hometown. Wearing a hat is equivalent to putting the hot land of my hometown close to my heart. What is worth pondering is the word "Cai" in this paragraph. "Warmth" is a feeling and intangible, while "picking" is an entity's action, and its object should also be an entity. The sentence "Pick up the warmth of hometown" seems counterintuitive, but it makes sense to think about it carefully. Imagine that the "warmth" of my hometown is intangible, so it will pervade the world. You can grab whatever you want, and what you catch is the warmth of your hometown. Be sure to "pick" because warmth is invisible. Only when you have hometown in your heart and homesickness can you "pick". This is Wang Yizhen's best "abstract figurative" technique.
In the fourth part, write down that this hat is a flower. The appearance of the image of "Hua 'er" is synonymous with hometown. Flowers are fragrant with the earth in their hometown, which is a kind of fragrant and mellow rural beauty. Mother uses flowers to describe her hometown because she wants to tell her children that her hometown is the most beautiful. No matter what downtown you walk through, what dazzles you is not as beautiful as your hometown. The fragrant smell of the earth always beats the window lattice of the child and the heart of the wanderer. Through this verse, feelings have reached a high level, because maternal love has reached the hearts of wanderers.
In the fifth section, it is written that the hat is the bright moon. In this section, the author uses the metaphor of "the moon", which is undoubtedly to show the theme to readers. Because the "moon" has a strong cultural flavor, it is the carrier of China people's homesickness. This starts with "The road is white tonight, and the moonlight at home is how bright!"! ""Looking up, I found it was moonlight, sinking again, and I suddenly thought of home. " "Mingyue should know me and meet each other in other places every year." You can see it in poetry. As a metaphor of a hat, the moon is a thirst-quenching thing for children to miss their mother and hometown, and it is also a mother's hope for children. The phrase "that point in my mother's heart lights up" is the reason why my mother compares her hat to the moon. It is this kind of lighting that has become a "lamp" and a "lamp that will never go out". The carrier of the moon is derived from the hat, and then the carrier of the lamp is derived from the moon, so the poem comes to an abrupt end. What is the emotional sustenance of An Endless Lamp? It is the lamp that mothers miss their children, the lamp of hope, the lamp that children miss their mothers and hometown, and the lamp that guides their life. Whatever it is, this lamp is "endless". In this paragraph, the emotion reached the extreme, the theme was clearly visible and became eternal.
This poem has the following characteristics:
1, orderly structure and harmonious rhythm. The whole poem consists of five sections, each with four lines and two sentences, and the first sentence of each section is the same. The first four sections are similar in structure, but the last section is slightly different, which may be specially set up to highlight the theme. In addition, this poem has a harmonious rhythm, and every sentence rhymes with even sentences, which makes it catchy to read.
2. The idea is strange and the metaphor is novel. In order to express the plot of hometown and the theme of maternal love, the whole poem uses the carrier of hat, and then derives a series of small carriers such as mushrooms, birds singing, hot land, flowers, moon, lights and so on. These novel metaphors with local characteristics have played a very good role in expressing the theme.
3. Simple language and sincere feelings. The language of this poem is simple, but it contains the author's deep love for his hometown and praise for his mother's great love. The whole poem is full of true feelings, and the reader seems to be in the persuasion and persuasion of a mother to a child who is about to leave, and also in the persuasion and persuasion of a child who is about to leave in a dream.
In a word, this poem is about true feelings, and it is a natural expression of feelings to the depths, which is undoubtedly a guide for beginners to write poems, and there is no doubt about it.