Writing Suzhou's composition "Su"

On Suzhou's Comfortable Composition "Su"

Yi Wang

2 15000 Class 5, Grade 2, Suzhou Foreign Language School, Jiangsu Province

The hedge is sparse, and it is clear after the rain. Boating thousands of Baidu, Qingming Bridge goes up.

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Hua tea language

During the rebellious period, I accidentally fell into the forest of jasper. I like to be sad in front of the piano, reminisce in the street, watch at night, and be melodramatic in the garden-folding a wild flower will sing "Flowers can be folded straight, don't wait for no flowers to be folded", and sipping green tea can taste "dragons cover the smoke, and the world sacrifices tea fairy" ...

In the garden of a good woman, watch the flowers bloom and fall, and smell the richness of peach blossoms under the moon, the elegance of lotus flowers, the indifference of chrysanthemums and the loneliness of winter plums alone. I don't like to follow the "big stream", whether it is "outdated" or "arrogant", just like Zhou Dunyi's love for lotus is different. I only love the unknown white wildflowers on the roadside and often lament that she "sits leisurely on earth and monopolizes the spirit of heaven and earth". There are three or five groups of people, some stand out from the crowd, some are in pairs, and some are alone-taking the essence of heaven and earth, condensing the spirit of all things, not greedy for anyone's pity, and not caring about anything. Only in the storm, frost and snow, leisurely, when it is time to open, is it brilliant; When it is time to thank, it is also calm. There seems to be an elegant realm of "going or staying unintentionally, looking up at the clouds in the sky". When I tried to fold the fragrance, I saw that the petals were still delicate in the early morning rain and dew, stained with a little dust, but still quiet, which increased the beauty and elegance of "standing in the world of mortals and smiling at hundreds of surnames".

Make a pot of tea, but don't worry. This tea needs washing. It may not be a "plum blossom three lanes" boutique tea set; You don't need the delicate hands of "Gusu Tea Niang", just a few simple teas, such as meaningless Longjing, fried green, Robbie, Pu 'er, and even old osmanthus flowers and fresh chrysanthemums. Just wash them and the tea will be fragrant. The unwashed tea is also fragrant, but it will be light and refreshing after a pot, which will inevitably be contaminated with "worldly atmosphere". A pot of jasmine tea is naturally comfortable. Although the elegant tea fragrance is not as delicate as the snail and the chrysanthemum is fresh, it has produced the garden beauty of "the mountain flowers are blooming and the willow leaves are new, and the Iraqi people on the riverside are low-browed", which makes people unable to give up.

The most sporadic rain, in that early spring, gave people a fresh and natural, detached and extraordinary "grass color." It is amazing that it will clear up soon after the rain, and the sunshine is still very long, so there is a unique atmosphere of "everyone is awake and I am drunk alone" in the country.

That's it-"Sit with tea lace and feel homesick after the rain. Others chase the world, and I stay alone. "

Zhoushui bridge

Rowing on the lake. The boat rocked gently, like the cradle of childhood, leisurely and carefree. The warm wind blows gently, and the face is like gauze, with a slight fragrance. Bosun's songs are naturally soft words of Wu Nong, which are refreshing; The boatman's paddle is beating the waves again to keep the boat moving smoothly.

Suzhou little girl fish looks delicate, but this boatwoman is different. They are brave, firm, decisive, sophisticated, and have a kind of heroic spirit of "women don't let men", and naturally there is no lack of femininity in the south of the Yangtze River. As beautiful as water, as beautiful as singing. A song of water gives people an elegant feeling that "this song should only exist in the sky and can be heard on earth several times"; A burst of laughter made people sigh, "suddenly looking back, the man was in the dim light." Romantic photos. The tea on this ship is the most suitable. Don't worry about the wind and waves, just "lean" on the boatman's strong and dark shoulders and broad and heavy back, and you can rest easy. Let you "gently shake the thin feather fan" and watch "red flowers win the fire at sunrise" If you are interested, you can rest assured to look at the scenery along the coast, sigh "where the petals once shed tears, where the lonely birds once sang their grief", chant "tears brush the grass, black tea sets the sun", and see how the boatman smiles and says, "What a wonderful thing!"

When you get off the boat, you can take a walk on the bridge: this water town in the south of the Yangtze River can be said to be a painting connected by bridges: there is a small pocket bridge, which "lifts the skirt and floats lightly, and then enters other scenery"; There is a magnificent bridge, "crossing the river to get the moon to the sky, and the waves wash away the sediment", but I don't like to see this prospect, and I prefer to walk on the small bridge. This new bridge is not very interesting, but the old bridge as old as baodai bridge is full of charm: the summer rain has just stopped and the air is humid, so you can be bold and sad: hold a paper umbrella and draw a plum blossom; Wear a cheongsam and light a bunch of peony flowers.

Walking on the bridge, listening to the old man telling young stories and ancient and modern legends, every bluestone brick has moving gossip. If you write down these old sayings, you can write a book collection for future generations to pass on.

That's it-"The boatman sits and sings, and the old saying in the bluestone book. Enjoy the ancient feelings and remember the feelings of parting. "Life will also live in several blessings-"seclusion in the world of mortals, camellia is full of fragrance. " Pleasant as silk, singing smartly. "

Comments:

The little author is a native of Suzhou. She grasps the unique things in the south of the Yangtze River, such as flowers, tea, rain, boats, water and bridges, to express an ancient rhyme, and to render a comfortable and refreshing feeling under the influence of culture, closely following the theme. The article seems to be fragmented, but in fact it implies the author's behavior track; At the same time, the plates are clear and coherent. The little author's ancient poems are profound and famous works are handy, which further adds to the ancient style of the article. Language forms have the flavor of integration and dispersion, and have unique beauty of phonology and harmony.

(Instructor: Bao Ying)