design principle
1 text dimension. This word is arranged in the compulsory four-song ci unit of high school Chinese in People's Education Edition. Words have a strong sense of rhythm and musicality, and the language is full of tension. "Drunken Flowers" is filled with deep acacia and deep sadness, and the teacher should lead the students to taste it deeply.
2 student dimension. Nowadays, middle school students like to watch some cultural fast-food works, far away from literary masterpieces, and it is difficult to be moved by ancient poetry. It is difficult to integrate with the thoughts and feelings of the ancients. Chinese teachers have the responsibility to lead students to wander in the beautiful homes of classical poetry, so that their hearts can be nourished and purified.
3 teaching philosophy. According to the concept of real reading. Guide students to get close contact with the language of poetry, feel the inner meaning and charm of poetry, discover the charm of poetry and get lasting touch.
Teaching objectives
1 Repeatedly chanting, I realized the beauty of the melody of the words.
Use association and imagination to understand the artistic conception of seamless blending of scenes.
Taste the language, fully feel the bitterness and beauty of acacia, and appreciate the poet's elegant character and extraordinary courage.
Emphasis and difficulty in teaching
Key points: repeat reading, taste language, and let students enter the country with human feelings.
Difficulties: read the images in the words deeply and understand the artistic conception.
Teaching assumption
1 Course Type: Taste Appreciation Course.
Teaching methods: reading aloud, tasting and instructing.
3 Learning style: independent discovery, independent taste and independent expression.
4. Use multimedia to assist teaching.
Teaching hours 1 class hour
Comment on the Complete Works of Li Qingzhao edited by Xu Beiwen (Jinan Press, 1 Edition, 2005)
Fu Xinglin's "Love is deep and bitter, elegance is high" (Journal of Hanzhong Normal University? Social Science Edition No.2 1996)
People are thinner than yellow flowers when the pottery curtain rolls in the west wind (Knowledge of Classical Literature, No.3, 2008)
teaching process
First, import
Show the first slide:
I haven't seen you all day, Sanqiu. (The Book of Songs)
Red bean shrubs grow in the south. In spring, they sprout many branches. People who miss them hope to collect more. Mix red bean has attracted people's attention. (Wang Wei's Acacia)
I don't regret that my belt is getting wider and wider, which makes people haggard for Iraq. (Liu Yong, "Wu Fengqi")
Which poem do you like best? Please read it first, and then tell me why.
Now, let's enjoy a picture of lovesickness, and read the deep lovesickness that Li Qingzhao sent to her husband Zhao Mingcheng, who is far away in Shandong, alone in an empty boudoir.
Second, one of the activities: reading aloud-feeling the beauty of rhythm
1 Free reading for students.
Pay attention to pronunciation, rhyme and rhythm.
Reading tips:
① Pay attention to the stress. For example, the word "you" in "Double Ninth Festival" should be stressed.
2 pay attention to rhyme. This word uses six rhymes, such as "day", "beast", "transparency" and "thin sleeves", showing a harmonious and unified musical beauty. The words are short and urgent, and from the musical effect, the rhymes are plain and easy to convey sad emotions.
③ Pay attention to the rhythm. For example, the sentence "There is a fragrance full of sleeves" is 1-2-2, which should be read as "There is a fragrance full of sleeves".
4 Pay attention to intonation. Read slowly and deeply, and be angry and flat.
Let one student read and the other student evaluate.
Please read it quietly again.
Third, the second activity: taste-experience the beauty of emotion
1 To understand students' reading feelings, you can choose the emotional tone of "worry".
Student activities: the concrete manifestation of self-discovery and self-taste.
3 Combine reading and taste the language. According to the students' own findings, the camera dials, and teachers, students and students complete the dialogue and exchange. For example:
(1) Fog and Thick Clouds depicts a gloomy weather, which sets off and dyes a gloomy atmosphere. It also sets off the depressed mood of the poetess. Fog and Thick Clouds can be said to be the scene of the lyric hero's emotions filtered and dyed, and it can also be said to be an "illusion" produced by the externalization of gloomy clouds in her heart. In fact, the gloomy natural landscape and lonely and sad feelings have been completely integrated.
"Forever", a day is so long, it's really worrying! The Double Ninth Festival, that is, the ninth day of the ninth lunar month, is already late autumn. According to geographical common sense, the days should be shorter and shorter. How can it be an "eternal day"? It turned out that the melancholy of "cutting without stopping" stretched it into an "eternal day"
The word "pin" says that spices burn slowly and smoke rises slowly: isn't it sadness or bitterness that rises? ! Time goes by quietly, when will the suffering of lovesickness end!
The word "you" means that you have been away from your relatives for a long time, and it is not the time to spend the holidays alone. The Double Ninth Festival is also a time for family reunion, * * * climbing high and looking far, drinking and enjoying chrysanthemums, and "missing relatives twice on holidays". A word "you" contains many beautiful memories, as well as many grievances and helplessness, sadness and sorrow! Some people think that the word "you" can be understood as "but it is", which plays a gradual and emphasized role here. When I was widowed, I met a general festival, such as Dragon Boat Festival, which was just enough, but it happened to be the Double Ninth Festival. The poet intends to highlight the thoughts of his loved ones and the feelings of cherishing people in this festival.
⑤ Thinking of "Midnight" and "Day" and "Dusk" together euphemistically expresses the feelings of missing her husband, which has reached the point of every moment.
⑥ Why does "Mo Dao is not ecstasy, the curtain rolls west wind, and people are thinner than yellow flowers" become a famous sentence through the ages? What kind of emotion does the word "thin" contain?
On the one hand, this song "Sangteng" implies his haggard and expectation in parting, on the other hand, it shows his youth and innocence.
One version is "People are as thin as yellow flowers". Which is better than "comparison" or "similarity"?
The answer is not uniform, just self-explanatory. "than", focusing on the degree, a few more points means one more victory; "Similarity" focuses on the unity of things and me. Pity chrysanthemum means poor people.
Quote famous works (slide 2):
First, Li Qingzhao forgot herself, sympathized with the thinness of Chrysanthemum, then found her thinness, and finally saw her thinness and those who were too chrysanthemum. Her life seems to have long been integrated with chrysanthemums. (Li Changzhi on Li Qingzhao)
The ending sentence is a climax and a famous sentence through the ages. People all think his words are wonderful. First, compared with the jade man in the curtain, the situation of the yellow flower outside the curtain is similar. Similar in form and spirit, the creativity is extremely beautiful; Moreover, because the flowers are fine, I feel my own fineness. Invite guests to accompany the Lord, pity each other with their lives, blend things with me and use new methods; Thirdly, people's thinness is better than flowers' thinness, which deeply and implicitly expresses the importance of the poet's thinking, fits well with the theme of the poem, and gives people a lingering and beautiful feeling. (Appreciation of Liu Naichang Li Qingzhao's Ci)
Let the students read it again.
Japanese writer Daisaku Ikeda said, "Every word is a heart." When reading aloud, please put yourself in the other's shoes.
4. Activity 3: Imagine-feel the beauty of artistic conception
What does the word 1 mainly express sadness?
Images such as "yellow flower", "dusk", "wine" and "west wind" convey the sadness of acacia as much as possible.
Play the background music and ask the students to close their eyes and imagine. After the students fully imagined, the teacher whispered the word to the background music.
Teacher-student communication: What kind of picture did you imagine?
The sentimentality of ancient literati is often expressed through beautiful pictures. Maybe what you are thinking is, thin and foggy, scattered around, thick clouds are dignified, floating in the sky, a talented woman, living alone, affectionate; Perhaps, in the middle of the night, the coolness attacks people, a beautiful woman lives alone in the cupboard, a lonely pillow and a lot of worries; Perhaps, at sunset, under the hedge of Qiuju, in the sleeve of Dimfragrance, a poet, alone, homesick and ready to move; Perhaps, the west wind shutter door, Huang Ju lost weight, a young woman, jade gaunt, delicate and touching. ...
5. Activity 4: Writing-Expressing Poetic Beauty
Write a sentence on the topic of "Acacia". Ask the students to read aloud one by one after writing. Form a modern poem.
Example (Show Slide 3):
Acacia is a kite, flying you, always in my sight.
Acacia is a sleepless lamp in the dark, waking up alone.
Acacia is a red tear quietly flowing from the corner of my eye, which has dyed the western sky red.
Sixth, recite all the words together
7. Summary (Show Slide 4) "The words are exquisite, beautiful and elegant. Deep and bitter. Yuan people's lyrics and songs are often religious. " (Chen Tingzhuo comments on drunken flowers in Qing Dynasty)
Acacia is so beautiful and so sad. However, in today's materialistic era. How much lovesickness is there? If you can't experience lovesickness in reality, please go to The Book of Songs and Nineteen Ancient Poems and look for it in Tang poetry and Song poetry!
Eighth, the teacher revised the poem and sent it to the other party (show slide 5)
Xiang Si
The evening breeze blew the candles.
wake up with a start
Curled up in the cold of dreams
The geese going to the north go to acacia.
How many west winds are sad?
Eyes tied to the window lattice
Yellow floret
The evening alone.
But full of tenderness.
Nine, homework
1 Poems about Acacia collected by extracurricular activities for appreciation.
Rewrite Drunk Flowers into a prose poem or a modern poem.