Please write a composition on the topic "We walked together". Requirements: ① Write an article of no less than 600 words and no more than 900 words. Apart from poetry, style is not

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Test analysis: 1. Examination of test questions. 1, "We walked together" is a subject-predicate phrase. 2. "We" means that there must be at least two people in this article, which can be understood as "I" and teachers, classmates and family members. The meaning of "going" is not a day or two, but something that happens within a period of time. These things have become the past. So this article requires writing a retrospective article. "Walking through" also means that it is not easy to walk through, which is worth remembering and cherishing. 4. "Together" is a topic, which means that the past years were spent with teachers, classmates and family members, so the writing center of this proposition is to express the beautiful feelings among teachers, classmates and family members. Second, the concept of material selection. 1, you can walk with specific people: you can feel the teacher's care and teaching when you walk with them; Walking with your classmates, you can feel their sincere and pure friendship; Walking with parents, you can feel the warmth and joy of home; Walking with books has cultivated sentiment and enriched the spiritual world in the process of interacting with books. 2. You can also pick out some silhouettes from the good memories left by classmates, teachers and family members and lay them into articles. 3. Choose a few pieces of your past life that can arouse your feelings the most, around a center, and never record every detail of your past life in the running account.

Comments: First of all, we should carefully read and review the questions, make clear the scope and focus of the questions, and make clear the meaning of the questions. Although the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in recent years has reduced the difficulty of examining the questions, it does not mean that you should not examine the questions. The process of reading a topic is the process of thinking and understanding it. Read the title carefully; Don't be careless, write a composition at first sight. Sometimes if you mispronounce a word or miss a word, the content you write will be far from the requirements of the proposition, or even the opposite. The following contents should be reviewed: 1. The topic of a propositional composition is generally a phrase, a sentence or a word. All the words that make up the topic should be scrutinized, the key words or central words in the topic should be judged, and the "eye of the topic" should be grasped. 2. If there are hints or explanations before and after the topic, we must attach great importance to it to see if it helps to quickly open up writing ideas or broaden the space for material selection. 3. The requirements under the topic usually stipulate the form, content and number of words of the article, so be sure to read the requirements clearly. Secondly, determine the center, select materials, and achieve "abandoning the big and taking the small, and seeing the big with the small". Choose the material that you are most familiar with, feel the deepest, and touch many of your hearts. Only in this way can you convince people with emotion and get the effect of shocking readers' hearts. At the same time, we should also pay attention to the selection of materials that are "in everyone's heart, not in everyone's pen" and write new ideas. Third, the idea should be delicate and ingenious. Express what you want to express in the best form, such as diary, fragment combination, letter, etc. , you can also add inscriptions or postscript. Finally, the language expression is accurate and fluent, which not only meets the requirements of different styles, but also embodies the characteristics of personality.