What if I am a composition evaluation?

If I were a magic pen, I would use my magic pen to benefit many people.

I walked and walked and came to Algeria. What I saw was a tragic scene: houses collapsed, people lost their loved ones, children were crying, and the air was filled with the stench of rotting bodies. After the collapse, most houses became "pancake-shaped" and aftershocks continued. I immediately picked up the magic pen, dipped it in ink, picked up the paper, and carefully drew buildings, rows of neat street trees, wide asphalt roads ... just after painting, I saw those collapsed buildings "stand up" and the cracked ground overlapped. I am very happy. Those people thanked them again and again and said "thank you, thank you".

I am very happy to leave Algeria and come to Somalia again. People here have no food, water and medicine. Many people were ill, but they didn't have medicine and finally died. I immediately picked up the magic pen and waved it. I took out food, medicine and water and distributed them to the poor. Seeing them happy, I also smiled happily.

If I were a genius, I would do more good things to make the world more peaceful and people happier and healthier.

Teacher's comment: You have turned yourself into a magic pen, and Liang, you use the magic pen in your hand to help those who are in trouble. Finally, you expressed your best wishes.

If I were a composition critic, I would use my magic pen to benefit many people.

I walked and walked and came to Algeria. What I saw was a tragic scene: houses collapsed, people lost their loved ones, children were crying, and the air was filled with the stench of rotting bodies.

After the collapse, most houses became "pancake-shaped" and aftershocks continued.

I immediately picked up the magic pen, dipped it in ink, picked up the paper, and carefully drew buildings, rows of neat street trees, wide asphalt roads ... just after painting, I saw those collapsed buildings "stand up" and the cracked ground overlapped. I am very happy.

Those people thanked them again and again and said "thank you, thank you".

I am very happy to leave Algeria and come to Somalia again.

People here have no food, water and medicine.

Many people were ill, but they didn't have medicine and finally died.

I immediately picked up the magic pen and waved it. I took out food, medicine and water and distributed them to the poor.

Seeing them happy, I also smiled happily.

If I were a genius, I would do more good things to make the world more peaceful and people happier and healthier.

Teacher's comment: You have turned yourself into a magic pen, and Liang, you use the magic pen in your hand to help those who are in trouble. Finally, you expressed your best wishes.

If I were. If I were a fish, a small fish in a pond, I would never be caught ashore.

I want to play freely with my best friend, get into a crack in the rock, have a good sleep, and then find a place to enjoy microbes and bask in the sun.

Be a free fish.

If I were a fish, a fish in a small river, I would never go to the table in a daze.

I want to play with Sister Shrimp.

If there are children swimming in the river, I will peck their little feet gently, watch them scream and flee ashore, then flick their tails and swim happily.

Be a naughty fish.

If I were a fish, a big fish in the lake, I would never be caught in the net.

It's a pity that I was caught in the net. I will lead you big fish and small fish to bite the human net with small and windy teeth.

Or drill under the stone with the fish and let humans eat an "empty city plan."

Then I watched people's feet and broken nets move to the shore, laughing and spitting out a few bubbles.

Be a resourceful fish.

If I were a fish, a small fish in the sea.

I will never be a big stupid fish that has been bitten by a big fish and even has a small crack in its teeth.

I want to get into my dear coral sister's arms and watch the big fish swim past me stupidly. I am so proud that I think Coral sister is a trampoline and jump up and down.

Then travel around with brothers and sisters, settle down at will, and then hide in new coral to avoid the big mouth of big fish.

Be a brave fish.

If I were a fish, a goldfish in a fish tank.

I don't need a dining table anymore, and I don't have to hide danger everywhere.

Looking at a few familiar faces all day, I can't see the sun, dirt and family anymore.

If the owner is in a bad mood and doesn't feed for a few days, even his life is out of his control.

Be a lazy, stupid and charming goldfish? Don't! I don't want to be such a aimless fish.

Composition, if I am ... if I am a teacher, if I am a teacher, I will make students happy and make them think I am a good teacher.

If I were a teacher, I would implement the rule of "increasing the amount of entertainment and reducing the amount of homework".

Actually let them learn from entertainment.

Now teachers have a lot of homework, which makes students feel very boring and boring. They wish they were a robot or had a working machine.

For example, my classmate Cheng Zhichao! On Monday, he may have forgotten to write wonderful fragments and feelings, and was scolded by the teacher, which was very sad.

That homework was really quite a lot and varied, so it was hard to remember. Just remember a few in a daze! What's more, remember everything? So I will definitely reduce my homework and spare my classmates the pain.

If I were a teacher, I wouldn't limit what and how much students write in their diaries.

That little number of words may be an essence! For those students who don't write well, I will say, "You write very well. Just use some good words and sentences in moderation and modify them!" "Then give him an encouraging smile.

If I were a teacher, I would try my best to improve students' quality in all aspects, putting students' quality first and grades second.

Use some interesting methods to make students easily remember some important and difficult points instead of memorizing them by rote.

I will also use my spare time to read more books. Only when I have rich knowledge can I teach my students well.

If I were a teacher, I would let every student have a happy student time.

If I were a grass, I would be a grass without colorful clothes and colorful hats on my head.

When Miss Chun came quietly, she gave me a green skirt to enjoy the warmth of spring in this mythical environment.

I am a grass. When Grandpa Sun first appeared from the East, I was hung with sparkling pearls.

At this time, the industrious little bee hummed and flew to my side and said, "Hello, Grass!" " "After a pause, the beautiful little butterfly danced and flew to my side, saying," Grass! Hello.

"I am a grass. When the heavy rain comes, I close my eyes and wait patiently for the heavy rain to give me a good bath.

After the heavy rain, my body is spotless, how relaxed and comfortable! At this moment, a group of naughty children came and stepped on me, but I didn't care at all.

Only one child said, "How beautiful it is to walk on this grass!" Hearing this sentence, I want to laugh with joy.

One day, a farmer's uncle was driving a flock of sheep. When the sheep saw me, they scrambled to eat.

At first, I felt very painful, and I thought, this is over.

But another thought, grass is for cattle and sheep, why are you still afraid of pain? So I was eaten.

After a few days, I suddenly felt a little taller. I couldn't believe my eyes when I looked at it. I have grown up again, taller than before.

I just know that as long as my roots are still there, I can still live.

Suddenly, I saw the farmer's uncle driving the sheep. Those sheep seem to be fatter than before.

I am a grass. After several autumn winds, the leaves slowly fall and I gradually turn yellow. An old woman gathered me and my companions to bask in the sun in the yard.

A few days later, grandma put me in a laundry basket and poured me into the kitchen.

I know my last moment is coming, and I wait silently … I am a grass, but how happy I am! Sacrifice yourself and bring benefits to others.

I am proud of my ability to serve the public and contribute to the people.

If I were a tree, I would intercept the yellow water of Nahong on the embankment of the Yellow River, because if I didn't intercept the yellow water of Nahong, it would bring floods to the residents living around the Yellow River.

I know that if I do this, Sister Huang will scold me or even hit me, but my determination will not decrease.

I also know that my strength is insignificant, but my brothers and sisters will also help me, and my uncle and sister Hua will also help me. Unity is strength, and we will certainly accomplish this arduous task.

In this way, residents living near the Yellow River can live and work in peace and contentment.

If I were a tree, I would come to the western development zone of the motherland.

Hold the naughty sand tightly with my vigorous body.

I know Sister Sha will hate me because she can no longer dance in the air with Sister Feng.

I know Sister Sha will call Sister Feng to attack me, blowing me hard and trying to uproot me.

But I won't give up, because only in this way can the development team of the motherland successfully develop the western region into a beautiful and rich town.

If I were a tree, I would swallow all the waste gas in the world, release oxygen and let people breathe fresh air.

If I were a tree, I would not hesitate to dedicate all the parts to people so that they could make notebooks, books, paper and wooden furniture, and so on.

If I were a tree, I would cover the hot sun with my thick branches and leaves in summer and let people enjoy the cool and rest in my shade.

If I were a tree, how wonderful the world would be! If I were a song, I would cry when I was in love.

Songs, like flowing springs, wash your heart; Songs, like a ray of soft sunshine, illuminate your vision; Songs, like gentle spring breeze, sweep away your sadness ... If I were a song, I would ring gently by candlelight at night.

There are no words, only light and rippling melodies.

I would like to turn into a song that rings quietly in my mother's ear, turning words into jumping notes, driving away my mother's fatigue and smoothing her frowning brows.

My mother is the embodiment of the sea, and she accepted my dribs and drabs with a broad mind.

Mother is the embodiment of the flower sea, decorating my dream with clusters of flowers.

Mother is the embodiment of sunshine, weaving my life with light hands, and building a brilliant layer for the blue sky powder I grew up in.

If I were a song, I would ring it gently in the quiet morning.

I want to spin my happy notes for those children who have lost their parents, let them feel the touch of life in sweet songs, let them burn their dreams in a beautiful morning, let them stop crying and feeling inferior, let them pick up their wings and fly in the blue sky again, and let them say with a happy smile every morning: "I am very happy!" Poor child, God has given you such a rough fate that you can't live in love like other children.

Children without mothers are like grass? No, life didn't abandon you.

Look up at the sky, the sun how bright! Far away, happiness is waving to you! If I were a song, I would play it gently in hot summer.

I want to play all over the stadium and every corner.

I want to use my cheerful dance to make farmers' uncles stop cursing the summer heat, let their sweat melt in the joy of a bumper harvest, let their mood fly after the sweat dries up, and let them stretch their frowning brows.

A wisp of fragrant rice, a handful of Huang Chengcheng ears of rice, and a bag of glistening rice. How much sweat and pain does all this involve? Let me gently ring, bring happiness and happiness to their hearts, and let all this settle quietly in their hearts forever.

If I were a song, I would like to sing every corner, so that the planet we live in is full of smiles and happiness, loneliness and sadness will disappear forever, and happiness and happiness will last forever.

If I am a dear classmate of the headmaster, you must have many beautiful wishes and dreams since you were a child! For example, become a scientist and make contributions to the construction of the motherland and people's lives; Or become a doctor, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, and relieve the pain for patients; Or become an architect and build all kinds of buildings ... Let me tell you, I want to be a principal and do something for my children ... Dear students, you must have many beautiful wishes and dreams since you were young! For example, become a scientist and make contributions to the construction of the motherland and people's lives; Or become a doctor, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, and relieve the pain for patients; Or become an architect and build many kinds of buildings … Let me tell you, I want to be a principal and do something for my children … If I am a principal, the first thing I do when I take office is to change my school uniform.

I want to tailor a new school uniform for my students, which can better reflect their youthful vitality and mental outlook.

I believe that as long as my students wear the school uniforms I made for them, they will be full of vitality and wisdom.

I think my students will also like it.

If I were the principal, I would also give a love passing prize to those students who do good things for the school, teachers, parents and classmates every semester, so that they would be as happy and envious as getting 100.

At the same time, this award should also be awarded to a good teacher in the eyes of students.

I want to give those students who are evaluated by their teachers all day a chance to evaluate their teachers.

Don't think that they are wet behind the ears and don't know anything. They have their own standards of judgment.

Is a teacher with high scores in class exams a good teacher? Parents think that Teacher Yan is a good teacher? No! No! No! In their eyes, a good teacher should be someone who can make them stare at the blackboard in class and have no time to be distracted.

What about class? I can talk with them about topics of interest and play games with them.

The most important thing is to love your students and be proud of them. This is a good teacher in the eyes of students! If I were the principal, I would also build a large animal and plant experimental park in my school to create a beautiful home for the birds who said "I want to have a home" in tears on TV, and also create an environment for my students to know small animals, get close to nature, be kind to life and care for human friends.

I can assure you, if it is built, ...

If I were an inventor, I would create a new world. Now, whether in the air or on the ground, whether outside the window or indoors, whether on the left or on the right, it is a world that makes people feel dirty and evil. The main reason is "it". If I were an inventor, I would create a "new world" and make our world look brand-new.

People already have their own means of transportation.

"How strange! Why are they walking, but teaching does not occupy land? " That's right! It is one of my inventions to change the world, and it is called "concentric".

It's like a pair of shoes. When you put it on, the nervous system of your feet will automatically connect, and then you can control it at will.

When flying, the maximum height is only 50 cm and the fastest speed is only 9 meters per second.

It has little effect, but it can carry a person and make tiny oxygen by absorbing a lot of carbon dioxide in the air.

Although its function is very small, when we work together, it will change our dirty world and make the air fresh, so I call it "concentric".

I want to invent the darkest tool for our world, which can change a person's character and thought and completely change his inner world, so I call it "changing his mind".

In today's world, the appearance is friendly to the mirror, the inner intrigue, and the smile hides the knife.

It can be described as "knowing the population, not knowing the people's hearts."

"ah! Therefore, I want to use it to change people, to become what they look like, broad-minded, full of peace and mutual assistance, to make the world full of laughter, to make shy birds sing for change, to make shy fish dance for change, to make scarce oxygen happy for change, to make derailed people laugh for change and to make great mothers happy for change.

What I changed was "it", the terrible "human heart".

Let's connect our hearts and change the world together.

If I am an inventor, when it comes true, I will name this era "New World".

I hope it helps you.

If I were a grass, how small, how ordinary, how humble.

However, thousands of grasses in Qian Qian can decorate the vast land and give infinite vitality to nature.

If I were a member of nature, I would never envy gorgeous flowers or be afraid of tall and straight trees.

I'd rather be an ordinary grass.

Bring infinite vitality to nature with your meager strength.

If I were a grass, I would stand shoulder to shoulder with my companions, holding hands, growing in barren wilderness and in the streets and parks of the city.

Even in the crevices of rocks, I can survive tenaciously as long as there is a little nutrition and water.

I want to dress the earth in green clothes, beautify the environment, purify the air, provide people with enough oxygen and make people feel comfortable every day.

If I were a grass, I would go to the arid desert without fear of difficulties, take root there and grow with tenacious vitality.

Even if we can't make it an oasis, we should at least do our part to send a little green to the desert.

Send a glimmer of comfort and hope to the people there.

If I were a grass, when people step on me, I can still stand up straight and greet the sunrise tomorrow with a smile.

I can hold my head high proudly and never flinch, whether it is a snowstorm or a rainstorm.

I want to tell the world with tenacity: although I am small, I am not afraid of any difficulties and obstacles.

If I were a grass, I would dedicate it to those disabled people who are fearless in the face of difficulties and cheer for their spirit of self-improvement and tenacious struggle.

If I were a grass, I must let the literati of all ages fall for me and write a touching poem for me with their beautiful style of writing.

Leave a beautiful feeling for the world, and at the same time, gain a full satisfaction.

If I had a pair of wings and a kite, the birds would sing freely in the blue sky. Under the breeze, the flowers exude a faint scent; Looking up at the vast blue sky, I want to spread my wings and fly I saved all my strength and aimed at the direction I yearned for. I want to fly. What's the matter? What happened? Why can't I fly? I looked back anxiously, only to find that a thread was tightly wrapped around me, and a slight struggle was accompanied by bursts of pain. No, I want to fly. How can I be bound? Let go of me, I want to fly! "There are endless dangers on the endless horizon. Strong winds will make you lose your balance, heavy rains will make you lose your direction, and lightning will break your delicate wings, so you won't get hurt under my influence. " Line said softly. Without you, I will lose my way; Without you, I would hesitate; How can I be strong without you! However, please don't pull me too tight, just let me fly freely under your influence! The butterfly's wings spit silk gently, and then tie itself tightly. The bright sky suddenly darkened and I became a pupa. The dark days may be long, and the feeling of being bound may be painful, but after waiting alone, it will be infinitely brilliant. I want to be a beautiful butterfly, and I'm looking forward to it. Suddenly, a pair of scissors touched my world, and the tight shackles around me began to loosen slowly, and a ray of light gradually emerged in the darkness! No, please don't touch me. I want to be a beautiful butterfly. "Don't scream, I can't stand your pain. Too tight a tie will hurt your young wings. Let me help you get rid of these unnecessary troubles and take you to the bright world! " But this is the pain I have to experience, so let me bear it alone! How can I see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain? Please put down your scissors! At this time, I don't need your help, I have to rely on myself! Children's tears, a bright moon, slowly through the clouds, a touch of bright light gently sprinkled on the earth. In the middle of the night, the light in a small room was on, and a child was sitting alone in front of the window, with crystal tears swirling in his eyes. "How I long for the endless green field, and my dream is wrapped in the rolling football. I want to play football, gallop in a wonderful stadium and become the king of the ball! " His eyes sparkled. "However, my parents won't let me go out to play football. They are afraid that I will fall and get hurt. The teacher forbade us to play football. He said it would affect our study. What is even more tragic is that they all said that * * * will not hold a court session for children. " The light in his eyes suddenly disappeared and his eyes became dim again. "Please let me play football! Thank you for your concern and care. Without you, I will not grow up healthily, but I also need to decide my own life! Love me, please don't hold me too tightly. " A gust of wind is blowing, conveying the children's voices: thank you for your love, please relax your hands gently and let us fly freely under the influence of love! If you give me a seven-color flower, I will make a wish with her fiery petals. I took off my petals and shouted, "fly, fly, my little petals, please send warmth to the little match girl!" " Let her get care and blessing! "Small petals didn't let me down. She flew into the sky and disintegrated in the air. At this time, the ending of the story changed. The little girl ate a hearty dinner, put on warm clothes, got her father's understanding and lived happily with her father. If I were given a seven-color flower, I would make a wish with her yellow petals. I picked her up, scattered it in the air and shouted, "fly, fly!" "Petals flying in the air, I looked up at the sky, as if I saw Sandy's bright smile and the happy figure of two brothers. If I had a seven-color flower, I would take off her petals one by one, and then shout loudly, "Petals, petals, please use your magic to help all the people in need in the world, all the poor people!" "All the petals of the seven-color flower flew into the sky. I seem to see children sitting in the classroom, each with a brand-new textbook in his hand, reading the text carefully; And those disabled people have received donations from many enthusiastic people, and they have enough funds to get further treatment ... I smiled happily after reading all this. If I had a magic pen from Ma Liang, I would draw a warm home for this lonely little girl, so that she would never cry in a dark corner again. If I had a magic pen of Ma Liang, I would draw a pair of bright eyes for my brother who lost his light, so that he would never use it again. Can't see the wonderful world. If I have a magic pen of Ma Liang, I will draw a beautiful school for the children in the disaster area, so that the children will never learn rich knowledge again. If I had a magic pen of Ma Liang, I would draw a very capable robot for my hard-working mother, so that her mother would never have to worry about housework again. If I had a pen by Ma Liang, I would paint beautiful rivers and mountains to my heart's content. If I had the voice of a lark, I would dress up spring more beautifully. If I had an axe from Li Kui jy, I would smash all the injustices in the world. If I had a jar of Liu Ling wine, I would intoxicate the industrious poor. If I had a magic pen of Ma Liang, I would paint the mountains and rivers in China more beautifully. If I had a dragon sword, I would cut off all the injustice in the world. If I had a pair of clever hands of Lu Ban,

If I were a teacher, I would walk into the bright classroom with a sunny smile and a brand-new textbook in my hand, and step onto the long-awaited platform to face a group of lively and lovely students. How happy it would be! If I were a teacher, I would spread all my enthusiasm, face my students with a smiling face every day and try to be their friends and bosom friends.

After class, we play ball games, chat and go shopping together. I can even take them to my dormitory and cook for them myself-cooking for friends is a very happy thing.

Seventeen-and eighteen-year-olds are very curious. They want to know their teachers and be understood by them.

I don't want to wear the solemn veil of "teacher" and stand on a high place looking down at my students. I am equal to them.

I want them to share my happiness and sadness; I am also willing to listen to the secrets in their hearts.

I hope I am transparent to them; They are clearer to me.

Maybe someone will ask: won't this affect their study? I firmly believe: no! Looking at my heart, I believe that my sincerity can be exchanged for their love for me and the active atmosphere in class.

If you study with enthusiasm, are you afraid that you won't learn well? If I were a teacher, I would take every class seriously with a rigorous academic attitude, follow good advice, stimulate students' thinking and pass on what I have learned to them without reservation.

And I will learn from them, learn from their bright spots, improve my professional level, and really learn from each other.

If I were a teacher, I wouldn't be partial to my students.

Even the worst student has his shining side.

Open classes and competition classes are very important for a teacher's personal future, but what is more important is his enthusiasm for students.

I will give every class I teach a chance to show, and I don't want them to feel inferior.

I will have enough confidence in them and myself, and with the concerted efforts of everyone's Qi Xin, everything will be solved.

Don't worry about failure. How do you know if you haven't tried? Even if we really fail, we have a clear conscience, because we all tried our best.

If I am a teacher, I will make sure that I will always make progress, not lag behind the times, not lag behind the society, and always stand at the forefront of thought and technology. In this way, I can set an example for students, influence them with my own strength and study hard.

If I were a teacher, I would be such a teacher.

Maybe this is too idealistic, but I will try to get close to this standard.

These are just my imagination and dreams now.

I will use my efforts to get rid of the word "if" and become a veritable teacher to fulfill my dream.

If I were a teacher, I would take every class seriously with a rigorous academic attitude, follow good advice, stimulate students' thinking and pass on what I have learned to them without reservation.

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If I were a teacher, I would give all my enthusiasm and face my students with a smile every day.

After class, I will be their friend.

Playing ball and chatting is a very happy thing.

I don't want to wear the solemn veil of "teacher" and stand on a high place looking down at my students. I am equal to them.

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I hope I am transparent to them; They are very clear to me.

Maybe someone will ask: won't this affect their study? I firmly believe: no! Looking at my heart, I believe that my sincerity can be exchanged for their love for me and the active atmosphere in class.

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If I were a teacher, I wouldn't be partial to my students.

Even the worst student has his shining side.

I will give every class I teach a chance to show, and I don't want them to feel inferior to other classes.

We should have enough confidence in them and ourselves. With the concerted efforts of Qi Xin, everything will be solved.

Don't worry about failure. How do you know if you haven't tried? Even if we really fail, we have a clear conscience, because we all tried our best.

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If I were a teacher, I would be such a teacher.

Maybe this is too idealistic, but I will try to get close to this standard.

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If I were a teacher-a hypothesis.

Can't the hypothesis be realized? Yes, I will rely on my confidence and perseverance to get rid of the word "if" and become a veritable teacher. ...

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