Although you don't like writing very much, you keep writing like a snail every step, and never stop writing. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
We seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life in peacetime, and it can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the fields and forests, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter.
4, such as beautiful handwriting, clear and neat structure, can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, this teacher really should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
5. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are an enterprising young man. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
6. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
7. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "You can appreciate the sea as much as you appreciate it." You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
8. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
9. Caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. From the article Accident, we can see that in your heart, there are not only childlike innocence, books and schools, but also endless concern for social worries. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
10, deepen the theme by contrast; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
1 1, the author has a strong ability to control "scattered in form, gathered in spirit", and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling!
12, the author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
13, careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
14, it is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
15, exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Striving for progress steadily and being down-to-earth is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
16, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
17, the full text is lively, the language is fresh, always full of humor, and it is very interesting to read.
18, although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions and interesting reading.
19, ... is practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, which is refreshing and exciting.
20. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
2 1. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
22, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but can be detailed and focused.
23. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.
24. Wen Neng Yi Qing. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
25. You are a very independent and knowledgeable student. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
26. As a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
27. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
30. The full text quotes some common sayings just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
3 1, snow can be associated with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
32. The introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
33. The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which is a relatively successful work.
34. Your article is very creative-complete the idea in the form of geometric proof questions. The full text is very literary!
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
36. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
37. The language is appropriate, full of romance, and the context is smooth, showing the image of a bookworm's bosom friend and the affection between "I" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.
38. I think this article reflects your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
40. The narrative of the case is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.