Pupils write compositions for ci.

1. Pupils imitate the sentences and complete the sentences: the sky is full of red clouds, the sea is full of golden waves, the red sun is like a melting pot of boiling molten steel, and generate shines with dazzling golden light.

In the morning, the sun is like a new wife who just went out, showing half her face shyly. The sun went down, and its exceptionally bright light came out from the treetops, dyeing white clouds and green hills red.

Slowly, the sun shone through the clouds, revealing a face that had already swelled red, like a shy little girl looking at the earth. Brilliant sunshine permeates through the gaps between leaves, through the fog in the morning, and continuously spreads all over the campus.

The sun is lower and red as blood. On the surface of the water, a striking broad light wave extends from the edge of the ocean to the side of the ship. The sky was dyed blood red by the sunset, pink clouds were reflected on the flowing water, the whole river turned purple, and the horizon seemed to light a fire.

In spring, the sunshine is warm, and a warm hand is extended, which makes people feel comfortable all over. The spring breeze blew away the dark clouds, and the sun smiled happily, spreading warmth and brilliance all over the lake.

The scorching sun hung high in the sky, red light hit the ground like a rocket, and the ground caught fire, reflecting the flame when the oil boiled. I dare not look up at the sun, but I feel dazzling everywhere. The air, the roof and the ground are all white and bright, with a little red in white. From top to bottom, it looks like a huge fire mirror, each of which is the focus of the fire mirror, as if everything were going to burn.

It's late autumn, and the sun is lazily hanging in the sky, like an old man with a smiling face taking a nap. The sunshine in late autumn is like the orange lampshade on the quilt, which gives off soft light and shines on the body and face, which is warm.

As soon as the sun comes to autumn, it scatters all the light to the world. Look, the fields are golden, the fields are golden, and the mountains are golden.

The sun in winter is as pale as the moon. The sun was entangled in thin clouds and gave off a faint dazzling white light.

The sun works hard all year round, and when it is busy in winter, it is already exhausted and can hardly release heat. Warm sunshine, through the dense leaves, fell and became golden dots.

The towering mountains in the distance, covered with golden coats in the sun, are particularly beautiful. Sunlight was filtered by layers of leaves and leaked to him, turning into a faint, round and gently swaying halo.

It was already eight or nine o'clock in the morning, and the bright sunshine drew circles of gold and silver on the leaves. Sunlight shines on the white earth through weak clouds, reflecting silver light and dazzling.

The golden sunshine poured down and poured into the blue waves, making the monotonous and calm sea surface somewhat colorful. When the bright red sun shines on the top of the mountain, the fog spreads like a curtain, and the city gradually appears in the golden sun.

The sunlight penetrating through the clouds is like a golden thread, criss-crossing, splicing light gray and blue gray clouds into beautiful patterns. The sun has just risen to the top of the mountain, covered by the bright red morning glow, and the sun shines through the cracks in the clouds, like countless dragons spouting golden waterfalls.

Golden sunlight shone through the cracks and sprinkled on the grass growing on the brown land. The sky is as blue as washing, and the bright sunshine shoots down from the dense gaps of pine needles, forming a thick beam of light, which casts a veil-like mist on the tree-lined trees.

The smiling face of the sun is red, which makes the hazy campus suddenly enlightened. A purple glow appeared in the sky, like a red rose in full bloom.

The newly rising sun is full of energy and red light, illuminating the whole world. The fiery red rising sun has just penetrated the sea level, adding a touch of rose to the beautiful and quiet sea.

The morning light shines on the lake, and the breeze rises at the beginning, and the fine waves jump, stirring the lake to pieces of gold. Suddenly, a red sun rose head-on, emitting golden light, like golden stripes, driving away clouds.

A red sun jumped out of the sea, bright and dazzling. The sea water and air immediately filled with Hui Jin, and the sea water changed from dark blue to blue. The golden morning sun gradually dyed the eastern sky red, and the peak of Huangshan Mountain was dyed deep red by brilliant clouds.

The morning glow faces the sun, revealing a red face. In an instant, ten thousand golden lights dyed the water surface with a layer of carmine through the treetops. Good words, good sentences, good paragraphs and good words describe the mountains, mountains, strange mountains, barren hills, hillsides, forests, mountains, mountains, brave mountains, clear water, beautiful mountains, green water, beautiful mountains, barren grass, clouds, clouds, winding peaks and towering mountains in Qinghai Province.

The surrounding mountains are like a colorful cloth. The mountains and waves are stacked on top of each other.

The mountains are dark and boundless, and the knives and axes are indomitable. The undulating loess hills are really like the waves of a big flood.

Longshan is like a big grave, standing in the night. The mountains on both sides of the Xiajiang River go straight up and down, which makes people dizzy.

The deep valley is strangely quiet and cold. The ravine is full of snow, as high as the back of the mountain, and it has become a flat snow paved square.

At the beginning of the morning, the mountains are like shy girls, looming and the sun is setting. It is strange to stand here for a long time. The mountains have completely changed. Their shapes are very different from those seen from the plains or mid-levels. They become very layered, messy, majestic and strange.

Look up, the mountain is the sky, and the sky is also the mountain. It seems that your nose can touch the mountain at any time. I saw a misty giant peak protruding in the distance, surrounded by dozens of small stone peaks.

A closer look shows that the giant peak is like the Monkey King holding a golden hoop, and those small peaks are like monkeys scratching their ears and cheeks. Look, the Monkey King is taking his children to kill the worse.

Under the pale sky, the mountains are as black as iron and solemn. The red sun rises.

2. How to teach pupils to write a composition with good words and sentences 1? Ask students to read more synchronous compositions and extracurricular books, and ask students to form a good habit of not writing or reading. When you see good words and sentences while reading a book, you are required to draw them or copy them down. Use it when writing a composition.

2. Don't use good words and sentences in writing. Ask students to develop the good habit of keeping a diary and practice using good words and sentences. degree

Usually, after school, students play more word solitaire games, which not only enriches their vocabulary, but also stimulates their interest.

4, pay attention to let students really understand the meaning of words, don't blindly pursue gorgeous words. Actually, it's more important to use words appropriately.

5, avoid the whole composition is good words, good sentences. You can't use too much, it will appear flashy. Just in the right place.

I hope it works for you!

Pupils always feel that the time when they leave is very short, and even a thousand words can't express their nostalgia. For you, there are only vague memories. Cultural Road-a familiar and pleasant name, has been lingering in my ears for a long time. Play on the playground, the sound of books in the classroom, and your heart-to-heart conversation. . . .. leave me a smiling memory.

In the past six years, we have experienced many storms and tasted many ups and downs. What are the memories of six years? There are happiness, tears and sadness. . . See chicks emerge from their shells and become eagles fighting in the sky; See the young trees that have just sprouted and grown into the pillars of the motherland; Seeing an ignorant child turn into a knowledgeable teenager and enter a new hall of knowledge. Six years of primary school life is coming to an end, and tears of parting are essential. But in the dripping tears, we saw excitement, excitement and a trace of sadness.

I hope you pursue warm and bright spring scenery; Pursuing a bright and beautiful sun; Pursue tomorrow, pursue golden ideal! !

4. Words to be used in writing composition The image of the sun in late autumn is covered with an orange lampshade, emitting soft light; Br> radiant, radiant, radiant, radiant, radiant, radiant, radiant, radiant, colorful, a ray of sunshine, a red light, a golden plate rolling a good sentence, dazzling people's eyes, pink clouds reflected on the running water, the whole river turned purple, and the horizon seemed to ignite a fire.

The fiery red rising sun has just penetrated the sea level, adding a touch of rose to the beautiful and quiet sea. The morning light shines on the lake, and the breeze rises at the beginning, and the fine waves jump, stirring the lake to pieces of gold.

Suddenly, a red sun rose head-on, emitting golden light, like golden stripes, driving away clouds. A red sun jumped out of the sea, bright and dazzling. The sea water and air immediately filled with Hui Jin, and the sea water changed from dark blue to blue.

The golden morning sun gradually dyed the eastern sky red, and the peak of Huangshan Mountain was dyed deep red by brilliant clouds. The morning glow faces the sun, revealing a red face. In an instant, ten thousand golden lights dyed the water surface with a layer of carmine through the treetops.

Good words, good sentences, good paragraphs and good words describe the mountains, mountains, strange mountains, barren hills, hillsides, forests, mountains, mountains, brave mountains, clear water, beautiful mountains, green water, beautiful mountains, barren grass, clouds, clouds, winding peaks and towering mountains in Qinghai Province. The surrounding mountains are like a colorful cloth.

The mountains and waves are stacked on top of each other. The mountains are dark and boundless, and the knives and axes are indomitable.

The undulating loess hills are really like the waves of a big flood. Longshan is like a big grave, standing in the night.

The mountains on both sides of the Xiajiang River go straight up and down, which makes people dizzy. The deep valley is strangely quiet and cold.

The ravine is full of snow, as high as the back of the mountain, and it has become a flat snow paved square. At the beginning of the morning, the mountains are like shy girls, looming and the sun is setting.

It is strange to stand here for a long time. The mountains have completely changed. Their shapes are very different from those seen from the plains or mid-levels. They become very layered, messy, majestic and strange. Look up, the mountain is the sky, and the sky is also the mountain. It seems that your nose can touch the mountain at any time.

I saw a misty giant peak protruding in the distance, surrounded by dozens of small stone peaks. A closer look shows that the giant peak is like the Monkey King holding a golden hoop, and those small peaks are like monkeys scratching their ears and cheeks.

Look, the Monkey King is taking his children to kill the worse. Under the pale sky, the mountains are as black as iron and solemn.

The red sun rises and the peaks are deep blue. Then, the mist appeared, and the milky white yarn separated the heavy mountains, leaving only the blue peaks, which really looked like a refreshing landscape painting.

After a while, the fog cleared again, and the * * * rock wall, the steep stone, was dyed deep red by the glow, and gradually turned into a bronze color, which set each other off with the green trees and green fields, which was particularly magnificent. There are no villages and rice fields in the overlapping mountains. These mountains are like some drunken old people who have been sleeping for tens of millions of years. No one dares to go deep into their hearts, even adventurous hunters just go to their feet to chase goats, wild boar and birds running down the mountain, and never climb to its peak.

Nothing is more charming than the green hills bathed in the spring rain. The whole hillside is lush. Endless mist is like flowing silk, wrapped around the waist. Sunlight turns raindrops on every leaf into colorful pearls. On the knife-shaped hill, there are wisps of milky white fog, and a slender line is faintly visible in the fog.

This stone wall is like a skyscraper on its back, so high that it will collapse and be aggressive. On the top of the mountain, the dense forest seems to be a huge black felt hat buckled on the cliff, and clusters of unknown wild flowers leap from the stone wall.

The rain changed the atmosphere of the park. In the sea of clouds in the northwest, there are distant mountains like ink paintings, which are quite praised as "borrowing scenery" in garden architecture. A good word, a good word, a good word describes interesting things, naive, carefree, free, naive, ridiculous, holding your chest, iodine belly, making baby, laughing, laughing, running after me, running after me, at sixes and sevens, thinking that you are holding your breath, screaming, and screaming. Pretend as if nothing has happened, be naughty, be covered in mud, chase me, lose my temper, make noise, dance with knives and stick, catch turtles in a jar, and be handy. I immediately got excited, willy-nilly, took off my shoes, grabbed the lifebuoy from my mother and jumped into the embrace of the sea with cheers.

"plop!" "plop!" Everyone "regardless of their own health" plunged into the clear river. Some of them flopped in the water with their hands and feet, some floated on the water with their bellies down, and some dived into the water like loaches. The river, which was quiet just now, suddenly became noisy: shouts and laughter came one after another, splashing water, hitting water and splashing water, and you ran after me, which was a mess.

Good joke: We threw our clothes by the river, plunged into the river, and immediately began to have a water fight and chase and play. You see, we are divided into two teams, one is the "enemy" and the other is the "Red Army".

A pair of small palms splashed water on each other, and everyone's face was covered with crystal beads. The water blurred our eyes, so we all stepped aside, wiped them off with our hands, and then "attacked" violently.

The whole river suddenly became noisy, shouting and laughing, and merged into a cheerful symphony. Tired of playing with water fights, I chased after them in the river.

One chased, the other ran, and crossed the water. A small body is as slippery as a loach and can't be caught. The songs and laughter on the river are now far away from the two sides.

We naughty boys will come to Xiaoshiwan in small groups, take off our pants and go into the water naked, regardless of their parents' repeated advice. Another plunge, another dragonfly, another water fight, another.

5. Pupils' composition giving and getting are twin brothers, and everything in the world is given and got. The sun gave the earth energy and won the worship of the public; Autumn wind gives people a refreshing feeling and wins numerous praises. The sea confessed to the sky and got beautiful blue; Stamens provide honey for bees and get their own reproduction ... it is this countless efforts and receptions that bring a vibrant world.

Give love and get love; Pay hard and get hard; Pay sweat and get fruit; Give laziness and reap emptiness. The world is so fair, only by giving precious things to others can we get more precious things.

Poet Li Bai ran away from home when he was young, and traveled around the world with his sword, so he had a sigh that "Shu Dao is difficult to pass and the clear sky is difficult to understand"; He gave his sincere enthusiasm to his friends, so he had the chant "Peach Blossom Pond is deeper than thousands of feet, not as good as Wang Lun"; He despises rulers, so he has a feeling that "Oh, how can I seriously bow and scrape to those people with high positions? They will never stand being shown an honest face". It is this kind of hard work that can make us full of poetry and become epoch-making poets.

Xu Xiake gave the earth endless footprints and gained precious travel notes. Darwin gave great enthusiasm to nature and won the Origin of Species, which is still immortal. Lei * * * gave the people full enthusiasm and won the love of hundreds of millions of people.

There are many things to give in the world-I believe what you give must be the best. Life is the most precious thing for people, and life is made up of time. In the final analysis, Xu Xiake, Darwin, Lei * * and countless celebrities paid time; But what they get is the eternity of living in the long river of human history.

Time is fair to everyone, if you don't want to give it to society and others; Then you will get nothing. Celebrities who have made great achievements at all times and all over the world are remembered because they have contributed time to the world-of course, there are many ways to contribute time: energy, true feelings, wealth, honor ... Similarly, there are many ways for him to get more. The most important thing is: you have to pay to get it.

The ancients said, "If you want it, you must give it first.". Giving and receiving are mutually causal and complementary. Only by dedicating one's experience, time and life to the world can one obtain eternity and win the praise of history, so his life can be immortal in eternity and praise!

Friend, if you want it, please pay first!

6. How to treat the catchwords of primary school students? Serina Liu, a trainee reporter, reported that these nondescript word games and buzzwords full of Hong Kong flavor appeared in the composition of primary school students. Yesterday, Mr. Yang, the fourth-grade head teacher of a primary school in Heping District, showed the reporters the compositions of several students in the class, and the immature writing was mixed with such "trendy" terms.

Teacher Yang told reporters that students often tamper with idioms and buzzwords in their compositions, such as "I shape myself" and "I shape myself"

Cool "and so on. Sometimes she doesn't know what it means until she asks the students. For example, "286" means that people are slow to respond.

But students are indifferent to the typos in idioms. "It's all written on TV. It can't be wrong. " It turns out that "my sister is infinite" is the propaganda language of singer May in an advertisement, and "I shape me" is the signboard of a fashion shop. Pupils have been studying for a long time, but they have confused the right and wrong writing. Words like "Wow" and "286" are words that students often talk about.

Teachers hold different views on the phenomenon of "trendy" vocabulary in primary school students' compositions. Some people think that some advertisements use word games as a means of promotion, which exceeds the acceptance limit of the audience. Primary school students account for a large proportion of the advertising audience, and their life experience is not much, so it is still difficult to distinguish between good and bad. Others think that Chinese is developing, and some words we use now have never been used before, so it is not worth making a fuss to let children write some new words.

7. Ask primary school students for a 300-word composition 12 1 Happy weekend. My mother is resting and wants to take me to the science and technology museum, but she can't take me until she does her homework.

In the morning, I finished all my homework, had lunch and set off. When you come to the Science and Technology Museum, you will see a sea of people as soon as you enter the lobby on the first floor.

What you see are two tall dinosaur skeletons, as high as two floors. It turns out that the dinosaur fossils exhibited here are from Zigong, Sichuan.

With the crowd, my mother and I came to the "disappearing dinosaur kingdom? d? D Zigong dinosaur fossil national treasure exhibition "The world-famous hometown of dinosaurs" is exhibited here? d? D A large number of fossil treasures were found in Zigong, Sichuan, including the most complete preserved skull of carnivorous dinosaurs in the world, the extremely rare skin fossils of Mamen Xilong, and the Emei Dragon, which is more than 20 meters long.

Later, my mother and I watched the return of dinosaurs by maximizing stereoscopic images, and learned why the Big Mac, which had been orbiting the earth for 65.438+0.8 billion years, suddenly disappeared 65 million years ago. It turned out that because a meteorite bigger than the moon fell on the earth, the environment on the earth changed and dinosaurs became extinct.

The Science and Technology Museum also has seven exhibition areas, including exploration of the earth's crust, biological Vientiane, light of wisdom, audio-visual paradise, designer's cradle, children's science park and natural museum. Everything is so interesting that I can't see everything. I just complain that there is too little time to visit and I can't finish it at once.

Through this visit, I learned a lot of knowledge and gained a lot of knowledge. More importantly, I understand a truth: in fact, science is around us. As long as we find and feel with our heart, we will understand the scientific knowledge that exists in our lives and serve mankind.

Since ancient times, poets have praised the grass, leaving behind an eternal story of "wildfire never quite consumes them, the spring breeze blows high". I like this poem very much, and I prefer the indomitable grass.

Although the grass is not as strong as a tree or as beautiful as a flower, it is always watery and green. How cute! Spring breeze is blowing, and the grass is scrambling to stick out its pointed head, looking at this wonderful world curiously and reporting the good news of spring to people. With the return of swallows, the grass becomes greener. From a distance, it looks like a green ocean, with waves from time to time, which is exciting.

The summer heat wave came, and the sun strengthened its strength. Trees and flowers bowed their heads in despair, only the grass did not yield, but bent more straight.

It looks at trees and flowers, as if laughing at them: "Look! Although I am not as strong and beautiful as you, how tenacious my vitality is! " Grass, I think you have a heart: a heart that is not afraid of difficulties. A heart that makes the earth green.

Although you are so insignificant, you have a warm heart. One hot summer night, the power suddenly went out. Sweat rolled on my head, so I lay on the mat and gradually fell asleep.

After a while, I dreamed that a beautiful fairy touched my head gently with a walking stick. I grew a pair of wings as white as jade and flew into the sky. I saw many birds singing happily around me. The plane flew over my head and there were countless white clouds around me. Finally, I came to a beautiful world, where it is spring all year round, the sun shines everywhere, flowers are blooming everywhere, and bees are busy. Somehow, I woke up from my dream and saw my mother fanning me. Her clothes were soaked with sweat, but she looked at me kindly and asked, "Is it hot?" I quickly said, "Not hot, not hot, please go to sleep."

I closed my eyes when I said this, but my mother was still looking at me, and the cool breeze kept coming. The next day, the teacher asked me to make sentences with the word "most". Recalling the scene last night, I said affectionately, "I love my mother the most!" " 4 Persimmons in Grandpa's house There are two persimmon trees in front of Grandpa's house, which are covered with big and red persimmons.

The oval red persimmon is like a small lantern, covered with branches. Mature persimmons are soft and sweet.

The color of persimmon gradually changed from turquoise to orange with the passage of time, and finally became big red; The taste also gradually changed from astringency to sweetness. Grandpa said: In the past, as long as there were two persimmon trees at home, you could support the elderly by selling persimmons, so the persimmon trees in rural areas were also called "old trees".

I asked my grandfather, "Do you have two persimmon trees, which can be used to support the elderly?" Grandpa shook his head and said, "No." I asked again, "Why?" Grandpa said: "Because there were no fruit trees in the past, there were no fruit seedlings on the street, and persimmons were rare and expensive;" Now all kinds of fruit seedlings are sold, and many people have planted persimmon trees. There are too many persimmons, which are worthless. "

I feel very lucky. If I had been born in those days, it might have been difficult to eat so many persimmons. Although there are many persimmons in the street now, and they are very cheap, I still like to eat persimmons from my grandfather's house because they are big, sweet and seedless.

5 July Qiaoxi Today, my parents and I went back to our hometown. On the way home, the road was bumpy and we finally reached our destination.

I see a stream and a bridge. Seen from a distance, the river sparkled in the sun. So I decided to have a look.

After I got off the bus, I ran and stood on the bridge. The breeze on my face is cool and fresh. The water is so green that it seems to have been dyed by the surrounding flowers and trees; The water is so clear that you can see blue-brown stones and fine sand deposited on the bottom of the water.

Unfortunately, there are no fish, probably because the water is too clear and cold! Looking at this beautiful green stream, I was intoxicated. There are dazzling ferns growing on both sides of the stream, and the quietly blooming flowers make a simple garland for the stream ... The sun shines through the dense leaves and scatters bundles of golden light on the water until it shines on the blue-brown stones at the bottom of the water.

The water surface and the bottom, gold dots and silver dots crisscross. I found a downward path, so I walked down carefully. In front of my eyes, there is a crystal clear stream, which is more beautiful than it looks, so I touched it with my hand. Ah! That's so cool. I have never seen such cool water. It's so cool.

Unfortunately, dad wants it.

8. How to write at the beginning of the encyclopedia of primary school students' poetry composition? Is it a poem written by a pupil?

Poems written by primary school students are generally childlike and written in children's language.

So primary school students should remember that poetry is difficult to understand or uses too abstruse words.

It is better to write poems by yourself. Here are the skills of writing poems.

Decide the content. What poem are you going to write? Is it about father's love for mother's love or scenery?

We can give an example. For example, let you write the topic of fatherly love and maternal love. So what will the children think?

I guess it's just going home, dad taking me home, mom cooking, mom and dad nagging. Those who have learned a little will say that mountains and seas contain us and so on.

Then, we can start with the daily chores and describe the father's love and maternal love with the sea and mountains.

My father

In the morning, he woke up from a dream.

Wake me up.

Made a dish.

Watch me eat.

Eyes as black as pandas.

Then take me to school.

The tall figure watching him leave.

My eyes are moist.

I know

Love is small and big.

Around me, around me.

The above poem is just written casually by an individual according to daily chores. LZ can write it himself if he has his own ideas. It's simple.

It is enough to get to the point when writing poetry.

The first point is the theme. What's your theme? You must write around it. If it is abstruse and difficult to understand, you should also point out the topic, otherwise it will not be a primary school poem.

Second, think about the content of the theme, such as the poem above, which was written by my father himself to send me to school. It is written that my father loves me very little and is surrounded by me.

The third is the refinement of language. What primary schools require more in language is true feelings, and the truest feelings are written in simple words. It's better to use it sparingly if it's confidential. Of course, beautiful words are also needed in language, and various rhetoric can be used. You can use anthropomorphic metaphor, and landscape poems are more vivid and vivid. However, when using it, there are high requirements for the user's language level.

Poetry is inseparable from language. If LZ has a profound language level, I personally have no objection to expressing my inner feelings in more beautiful and poetic language. But if not, I personally hope that the poem reveals profound emotional feelings. See the big from the small, start from the small, and sincerely describe your inner feelings. The latter point is more important to primary school poetry.

The above is my personal writing experience.