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Analysis:
Qilu Long March
The Red Army is not afraid of the difficulty of the expedition,
Thousands of rivers and mountains Just wait and see.
The five ridges are meandering and the waves are flowing,
The Wumeng is majestic and muddy.
The golden sand and water beat against the clouds and the cliffs are warm,
The iron cables across the Dadu Bridge are cold.
I am even more happy about the thousands of miles of snow in Minshan Mountain.
The three armies are all happy after the passing.
This poem was first published in the January 1957 issue of "Poetry Magazine".
Notes
[Qilu] The abbreviation of seven-character poem. Qilu is a type of rhymed poetry. Each poem is generally eight sentences, each sentence has seven characters; the last word of the even sentence rhymes with a flat tone, and the last word of the first sentence may or may not rhyme. It must rhyme to the end; there must be some emphasis within and between sentences. Ping and tong, the middle four sentences should use antithesis as usual.
[Long March] In October 1934, the main force of the Central Red Army started from the Central Revolutionary Base Area and made a strategic shift, passing through Fujian, Jiangxi, Guangdong, Hunan, Guangxi, Guizhou, Sichuan, Yunnan, and Xikang , Gansu, Shaanxi and other 11 provinces, defeated many enemy pursuits and interceptions, overcame countless military, political and natural difficulties and dangers, marched 25,000 miles, and finally arrived in October 1935 Northern Shaanxi revolutionary base area. This poem, "Niannujiao·Kunlun" and "Qingpingle·Liupanshan" were all written when the Long March was victorious.
[五ridge meandering (wēiyíweiyi) Teng Xilang] Dayu (yǔyu), Qitian, Mengzhu (zhǔboil), Dupang, Yuecheng and other five ridges, stretch ("winding") Between the four provinces of Jiangxi, Hunan, Guangdong and Guangxi. In October 1934, the Central Red Army set out from Fujian and Jiangxi, crossed the enemy's blockade line along the Wuling Mountain Road on the border of these four provinces, and marched westward. "Teng Xilang" means that the steep five ridges are rolling and undulating, and in the eyes of the Red Army, they are just like small waves blowing from the water.
[Wumeng majestic mud pill] Wumeng Mountain stretches between Guizhou and Yunnan provinces. It is majestic ("majestic") and looks like a rolling mud pill to the Red Army. .
[Jinsha Water Shoots Clouds and Cliffs Warmly] The Jinsha River is the section of the upper reaches of the Yangtze River from Yushu County in Qinghai Province to Yibin County in Sichuan Province. On both sides of the river are towering cliffs ("cloud cliffs"). It was May 1935 when the Central Red Army crossed the Jinsha River at the Winch Ferry (also known as Jiaoping Ferry) in the northwest of Luquan County, Yunnan Province, so it was said to be "Yunya Nuan".
The original meaning of "Shui Pai" in this sentence is "Lang Pai". Author's note: "Shui Pai: changed to Lang Pai. This was suggested by a friend I don't know. He said it's OK not to have two characters in one article." "Poetry Magazine" 1957 When the January issue was published, it had been changed to "Water Photography".
[The iron cables across the Dadu Bridge are cold] The source of the Dadu River comes from the Guoluo Mountain at the junction of Qinghai and Sichuan provinces. There are high mountains on both sides of the bank, and the water is steep and rapid. It flows to Leshan County in Sichuan Province and enters the Minjiang River. The bridge refers to the Luding Bridge on the Dadu River. It is in a dangerous situation in Luding County, Sichuan Province. The bridge is about thirty feet long, composed of thirteen iron cables and covered with wooden boards. The Central Red Army arrived at Luding Bridge in late May 1935. At that time, the bridge deck had been demolished by the enemy. The heroic soldiers of the Red Army's vanguard troops climbed over the iron cables of the bridge and captured the bridge under the enemy's fire from the other side. .
[Minshan Mountain] is in the northern part of Sichuan Province, stretching on the border of Sichuan and Gansu provinces. On the southern and northern branches of Minshan Mountain, there are dozens of peaks with an altitude of over 4,500 meters. The tops of the mountains are covered with snow all year round, and are called the Snow Mountains.
[Three Armies] In ancient times, the army was divided into three armies: middle, upper and lower, or middle, left and right. Later, it generally referred to the entire army
"The Long March" was the Red Army's 20,000-strong army. A glorious portrayal and passionate ode to the strategic shift of five thousand miles and the great march to the anti-Japanese battlefield. It vividly describes the dangerous and magnificent scenes of the Long March, deeply portrays the psychological state of the Red Army who is not afraid of difficulties, and concentratedly expresses the heroic spirit of the Red Army. As an immortal epic of the Chinese revolution, "The Long March" is an outstanding example of the combination of revolutionary romanticism and revolutionary realism, and an immortal work of revolutionary optimism.
The first couplet, with its straightforward vocabulary and heroic tone, leads the whole poem from a high position and highly summarizes the heroic spirit of the Red Army in defying difficulties and obstacles and marching forward courageously during the Long March. With the spirit of revolutionary optimism and the style of revolutionary romanticism, it has become the outline of the entire article. The word "not afraid", the answer is resounding, and the writing is very critical. It uses a firm tone to show that the Red Army faced the difficulties caused by military, political, natural and other aspects during the Long March, as well as the internal left-leaning opportunism line of Wang Ming and the separatism of Zhang Guotao. Faced with thousands of difficulties and dangers, he has no fear at all and stands firm on the ground. The word "easily" briefly glances at the difficulties, deepens the expression of "not afraid", and shows the Red Army's pride in despising difficulties and taking it easy. "Ten Thousands of Rivers and Thousands of Mountains" uses stillness and movement, with hardships and dangers as the main subject, showing an overview that condenses the magnificent course of the Red Army's Long March.
Taking over "Thousands of Mountains", Zhan Lian followed the route of the Red Army's Long March, overlooking Wuling and Wumeng Mountains, two typical high mountains, and depicted a set of aerial bird's-eye view of the difficulties point by point: in the heroic and incomparable In front of the Red Army, the steep Wuling Mountains stretching for several provinces were just like tiny waves rising slightly on the water; the vast and boundless Wumeng Mountain was just like a small rolling mud ball.
The author first uses the exaggeration of "winding" and "majestic" to express the majesty of the mountain, using the "raising" method, and then uses the metaphors of "thin waves" and "niwan" to express its insignificance. It is a "suppression" technique, and the suppression and uplifting further shows the greatness of the Red Army. The anthropomorphic dynamic description of "soaring" and "walking" turns the static mountain into an animal form, and both the mountain and the Red Army are animated. This couplet can be said to have extraordinary imagination, novel language, broad realm, and myriad atmospheres.
The neck joint takes over "Wanshui". A close look at the two sides of the Jinsha River and the cable bridge on the Dadu River depicts a set of enlarged close-ups: the Red Army is crossing the river in hot weather, and the waves of the Jinsha River are crashing. The steep banks give people a warm feeling; the iron cables of the Luding Bridge, which the Red Army seized in the cold weather, hang across the fast-flowing river, giving people a cold feeling. One "warm" and one "cold" not only describe the weather conditions, but also describe the psychological feelings. The author contrasts two feelings with each other, not only expressing the joy of the Red Army after crossing the Jinsha River, but also the thrilling capture of Luding Bridge, which shows the incomparable bravery of the Red Army. One "shoot" and one "horizontal" are also methods of describing stillness with movement. This couplet contrasts with nature and neatness, using the natural environment to express infinite emotions and is very powerful.
The last couplet describes the final course of the Long March. Climbing the "Thousands of Miles of Snow" Min Mountain is actually more difficult than the "winding" Wuling Mountains and the "majestic" Wumeng Mountain, but at this time because victory is in sight, I feel comfortable, "joy" comes from my heart, and my eyes look The windy and snowy road becomes extremely beautiful. Finally, the chapter ends with "Kai Yan", which describes the jubilant joy of the Red Army after crossing the snow-capped mountains, and at the same time heralds the complete victory of the Long March.
Throughout the whole poem, it is majestic, magnificent, high-spirited and vigorous. Not only is it vigorous and rhythmic, but it is also subtle and rhythmic. The antithesis in the poem is very neat and the words used are very precise.
Say nothing and turn a blind eye to the vicious and vicious enemy. ——This kind of seductive spirit that looks down upon the mountains and rivers cannot be possessed by a great man like the commander-in-chief of the three armed forces who is victorious in every battle and has overall overall control. The poem "Long March" cannot have such a mind and cannot be said like this. This is *** The artistic style, this is the charm of *** poetry art!
Qilu·To Shaoshan ***
Farewell dream vaguely cursed the death of Sichuan, my hometown thirty-two years ago.
The red flag rolls up the serf's halberd, and the black hand hangs the overlord's whip.
For the sake of sacrifice, I dare to make the sun and moon change the sky.
I like to watch thousands of waves of rice bean sprouts, and heroes everywhere are setting off the sunset smoke.
Qilu · Diao Luo Ronghuan ***
I remember that when the grass was flying, every contradiction in the Red Army was violated.
The Long March is not an embarrassing day, the victory is a big problem.
Every time I hear a rooster bullying a big bird, the rooster laughs and the eagle laughs.
Unfortunately, you have passed away now. Who can you ask if you have any questions about the state?
Qilu·Answer to a Friend ***
White clouds are flying on Jiuyi Mountain, and the emperor's son is riding the wind and flying down the green sky.
A branch of mottled bamboo sheds a thousand tears, and a branch of red clouds sheds a thousand layers of clothing.
The waves in Dongting are covered with snow, and the people of Changdao are singing poems.
The dream I want to have is so small that the country of Furong is full of sunshine.
Qilu · Comrade Guo Moruo ***
As soon as wind and thunder rise from the earth, there will be piles of bones and spirits.
If the monk is a fool, he can still be taught; if the monster is a ghost, he will definitely cause disaster.
The golden monkey rises with great strength, and the jade moon clarifies thousands of miles.
Today I am cheering for Sun Dasheng, but the evil mist has returned.
Qilu · Climbing Mount Lushan ***
A mountain flies to the edge of the river, leaping four hundred times into the lush greenery.
Looking at the world with cold eyes, the hot wind blows and rains on the river sky.
There are nine floating yellow cranes in the clouds, and white smoke rises from three Wus below the waves.
Tao Ling doesn’t know where to go. Is there plowable land in the Peach Blossom Spring?
Qilu·He Liu Yazi ***
I will never forget drinking tea in the Guangdong Sea, and I will tell you that the leaves in Yuzhou are yellow.
Returning to the old country in thirty-one years, reading the beautiful chapter when the flowers are falling.
Complaining too much will prevent heartbreak. It is advisable to take a broad view of the long-term scenery.
Mo Dao Kunming Pond is shallow, and watching fish is better than Fuchun River.
Qilu · People *** Occupy Nanjing ***
Zhongshan turned yellow due to wind and rain, and millions of troops crossed the river.
The tiger sitting on the dragon's plate is better than the past, and the world is turned upside down.
It is better to use the remaining brave men to chase the poor bandits, and not to pretend to be the academic overlord.
If heaven is sentimental, heaven will also grow old, and the right path in the world will be vicissitudes of life.
Qilu·Hongdu ***
It’s been another year since I arrived in Hongdu, and my ancestors struck the stick and it has been passed down to this day.
After hearing the chicken for a long time and hearing the rain from the south, I immediately waved the whip from the north.
The snow on the temples flies away and turns into scraps, but the colorful clouds grow into a new sky.
Every year the waves behind push the waves ahead, and the river grass and flowers are fresh everywhere.
Qilu · Winter Clouds ***
The winter clouds are covered with snow and white catkins fly, and thousands of flowers fade for a while.
The cold current is rolling high in the sky, and the earth is slightly warm.
Only a hero can drive away tigers and leopards, and no hero is afraid of bears.
It is not surprising that the plum blossoms are filled with joy and the snow is all over the sky, but the flies are frozen to death.
Qilu · and Comrade Zhou Shizhao ***
The mighty spring breeze lingered for a while, and I stepped on the top of the mountain to open my eyes again.
The wind blows the waves away from the oasis, and the rain comes up the mountain from the green fields.
The people who talk and laugh in front of me are still the same, but it is sad to see chickens and insects outside the territory.
Don’t lament that time flies by easily, and you are still at Hexitai in thirty years.
Qilu·Recalling the Negotiations in Chongqing ***
Everyone who owns land is my master, lawlessness is for the people.
There are officials in Chongqing who are all bureaucrats, and there is no shit or gold in Yan'an.
Blowing up bridges and digging roads is unity, while seizing land and fighting for cities is struggle.
The whole city is filled with mourning and blood. It is just a thought to save the common people.
One of the Seven Rhythms·Reading Poems ***
Recalling the past, the anti-Soviet movement stirred up a lot of frogs, and today I am happy to see the great anti-China movement.
The evil spirits are eager to preach, and the fierce gods open their mouths and spit out smoke.
There are not only thousands of evils in China, but thousands of evils are hidden in Chi County.
Searching for invaders all over the world, only one lone family remains here.
Qilu·Thinking ***
It was just when the gods were busy that they came to the southern country to step on the fragrant branches.
The green pine shoots its anger to the sky, and the fallen leaves follow the clear water.
A gust of wind and thunder shocked the world, and the streets were full of red and green flags.
Listening quietly to the rain, the people of the motherland are thinking.
Qilu · Yong Jia Yi ***
It is a shame that the young man is a handsome man and a talented man, but his ambition has not been fulfilled.
The chest is filled with articles and soldiers, and the courage shines on thousands of trees.
The hero fell in love with the Holy Lord without any plan, but Gao Jie was eventually suspected.
Throughout the ages, we cherish Changsha together, and the empty Miluo steps into the dust.
Two poems of seven rhymes·Farewell to the God of Plague ***
Read the People's Daily on June 30, Yujiang County has eliminated schistosomiasis. Thoughts
I can’t sleep at night because of my thoughts. The breeze is dawning, the rising sun is facing the window, looking at the south sky, happily
The pen of fate.
There are so many green waters and green mountains in vain, Hua Tuo is so helpless, what an insect!
Thousands of villages are left with dead people, and tens of thousands of households are deserted and ghosts are singing.
Sitting on the ground and traveling eighty thousand miles a day, surveying the sky and looking at a thousand rivers in the distance.
The Cowherd wanted to ask about the plague god, but his joys and sorrows were all gone.
Thousands of willows bloom in the spring breeze, and the 600 million Chinese states are filled with Shun and Yao.
The red rain turns into waves at will, and the green mountains turn into bridges deliberately.
The five ridges in the sky are covered with silver hoes, and the earth is shaking and the iron arms of three rivers are shaking.
May I ask where King Wen wants to go? The paper boat is burning with candles shining in the sky.
Qilu · Scenery of Study Tour (disabled) ***
The east wind blows to the far bay and reaches Shilong Pass in the distance.
There are green pines and ancient trees in the wild, broken bridges and flowing water.
Which way does the traveler go here? Sit down and look at the long pavilion and feel relaxed.