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To get to the platform over there, you have to cross the railway, jump down and climb up. Father is a fat man, so it is naturally more troublesome to walk there. I was going to go, but he refused, so I had to let him go. It was not difficult to see him limping to the railway and leaning down slowly, wearing a small black hat, a big black jacket and a dark blue cotton robe. But it is not easy for him to climb the platform over there when he crosses the railway. He climbed up with both hands, and his feet shrank again; His fat body leans slightly to the left, showing signs of hard work. Then I saw his back, and my tears soon flowed down. I quickly dried my tears. I'm afraid he will see it, and I'm afraid others will see it. When I looked out again, he had come back with the bright red orange in his arms. When crossing the railway, he first scattered oranges on the ground, climbed down slowly, then picked them up and left. When I arrived here, I hurried to help him. He and I walked to the front of the car and put oranges on my fur coat. So I dived into the dirt on my clothes and felt very relaxed.
Comments:
This essay is characterized by grasping the characteristics of the character's "back" proposition, organizing materials, and expressing the deep affection between father and son in narrative.
"Back" appeared four times in the article, each time the situation was different, but the thoughts and feelings came down in one continuous line.
The first time is the beginning of the article, the title is "Hui", and there is a strong emotional atmosphere hanging over the whole article.
The second time was at the farewell scene of the station. The author gives a detailed description of his father's "back", which is the focus of his writing. Father's chubby body, wearing a big black jacket and a dark blue cotton robe, trudged across the railway to buy oranges for his son. This shot shows the father's deep affection for his son, which moved his son to tears.
The third time, after the father and son said goodbye, the son watched his father's "back" disappear in the crowd, leaving his feelings and making people cry.
The fourth time was at the end of the article. When my son read his father's letter, his father's "back" reappeared with tears. He couldn't miss himself and echoed the beginning of the article.
This work shows the sincere feelings between father and son incisively and vividly, but it is different from the description of portraits in general works, focusing on the description of expressions, voices, smiles and appearances, but grasping a feature of the figure's "back" and sparing no expense in making concrete and detailed descriptions.
Author:
Zhu Ziqing (1898 ~ 1948) is a famous poet, modern essayist, Chinese educator, writer, scholar and democracy fighter in China. Originally known as Huazi (because there is a saying that "there is poetry in the belly, self-sufficiency"), Qiushi is called Qiushi, and the word is attached to the string. The pen names are Yujie, Baixiang, Baishui, Baizhi and so on. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, 1898 was born in Donghai, Jiangsu Province, and lived in Yangzhou for a long time. 1948 died of poverty in Peiping. 19 16 entered the preparatory course of Peking university and entered the philosophy department the following year. He participated in the May 4th Movement and was an early member of the Literature Research Association. He also participated in launching the first poetry group in the history of new literature, the China New Poetry Society, and began to publish new poems. 1920 After graduating from university, I taught in many middle schools in Jiangsu and Zhejiang provinces and wrote novels and essays. 1920 graduated from Peking University and later came to Tsinghua University to teach. Because three generations have settled in Yangzhou, he graduated from Jiangsu No.8 Middle School (now Yangzhou Middle School) and worked as a teacher in Yangzhou, so he called himself "Yangzhou native". He also taught at Taizhou Middle School in Zhejiang Province, planted wisteria by himself, and later became the school flower of Taizhou Middle School. Since 1925, Zhu Ziqing has served as Professor Tsinghua University and Head of the Chinese Department. During this period, he 193 1 went to study in Britain and roamed several European countries. After the outbreak of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, he went to National Southwest Associated University as the head of Chinese Department, engaged in academic research and thesis writing. After the victory of the Anti-Japanese War, he joined the patriotic and democratic movement. When he was seriously ill, he still signed the "Declaration on Protesting American Aid Policy to Japan and Refusing to Accept American Aid for Flour". He is poor and ill, and is known as a patriotic cultural person with backbone. His works were included in The Complete Works of Zhu Ziqing. The main articles are Spring, Back, Hurriedly, Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, etc.
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