"Familiar places also have (no) scenery"
Examples of essay writing
Tao Yongbiao, No. 1 Middle School of Suining County, Hunan Province
●Title design
Write an article of no less than 800 words with the title "Familiar places also have (not) scenery". Requirements: You can choose your own angle, your own conception, and your own choice of style except poetry.
●Writing guidance
"Familiar places also have scenery" is completely in line with this orientation: college entrance examination essays should write about your own life and the scenery around you!
The catchphrase "familiar place" brings students back to familiar places and scenes that they have not seen for a long time. It may be the village where they grew up, or it may be the river they walk through every day, and they may even feel a little disgusted. campus and so on. Guide students to pay attention to life, the people and things around them, and their own spiritual world.
The meaning of "landscape" should have two levels. One is the natural scenery, such as pastoral scenery, campus beauty, scenery of the four seasons, etc.; the other is the spiritual scenery, that is, a good fashion. , a spirit, quality, etc. When writing, you can choose one or both.
"There are" means that unfamiliar places, places that attract everyone's attention and expectations, such as scenic spots, certainly have "scenery", but there are also scenery in ordinary and ordinary places around you, but you may be in a hurry, Maybe you don’t pay attention and often ignore it, but it also reminds people to pay attention to what is in front of you and pay attention to your feet: it is not that there is a lack of beauty in life, but that there is a lack of eyes to discover beauty.
●Example of excellent work 1 (argumentative essay)
Familiar places also have scenery
Hong Yanhua, senior high school student in the No. 1 Middle School of Suining County, Hunan Province (275)
Some people say that familiar places have no scenery. But I said that familiar places also have scenery.
It is said that there are no scenery in familiar places because the understanding of the word "landscape" is relatively one-sided. Some people always regard unfamiliar scenery that they have never seen before as scenery, but common scenery is not scenery. Therefore, the familiar lone pine leaning on the cliff, willows brushing on the bank, dragonflies touching the water, and wild geese flying in the sky are just like them in his eyes. Not the scenery. People who were born in mountainous areas always yearn for the majesty of the sea and the vastness of the plains. They think that the scenery is there only because it is a strange place. There is no scenery in a familiar place. This is because there is a problem with our understanding of the scenery, not because there is no scenery.
It is said that there is no scenery in a familiar place because the understanding of scenery is too superficial. We only regard natural scenery as scenery and ignore the people who make up the scenery. The old mother was knitting a sweater for her son to keep out the cold late at night under the dim light; the white-flowered old father stood at the entrance of the village and looked into the distance to see his children returning; the young wife who was taking care of the children and doing housework at home leaned against the door and missed her husband who was working in a foreign land. Aren't these beautiful and touching scenery?
It is said that familiar places have no scenery because they cannot discover the beauty that exists in familiar places. Russell said that it is not that there is no beauty in life, but that there is a lack of eyes to discover beauty. Look at what Tao Yuanming wrote: "Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the Nanshan Mountains, the mountain air is getting better day by day, and the birds are returning to each other." Is this beautiful scenery? Of course it's beautiful. However, for rural people, who has never seen chrysanthemums? Fence, who is not familiar with it? There is no Nanshan Mountain in your hometown, there should be Dongshan Mountain or Western Mountain; flying birds are even more common, but why do many of us always complain that there are no scenery in familiar places? Tao Yuanming, a poet of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, had a pair of eyes that discovered beauty, so he discovered beauty in familiar places and left us extremely beautiful poems.
It is said that there is no scenery in a familiar place because it lacks enough love for life. Tao Yuanming was tired of officialdom and loved rural life. Therefore, in his eyes, there appeared "a square house with more than ten acres and eight or nine thatched houses. The elms and willows are shaded behind the starlings, and the peach and plum trees are in front of the hall. The distant village is warm, and the smoke is in the ruins. The dog is barking. In the deep alley, the rooster crows and the mulberry trees top each other." Such a beautiful scenery. If we love life, care about others, and be grateful to society, we will find that farmers plowing fields, workers making steel, teachers giving classes, police standing guard, etc., are all beautiful scenery.
Familiar places also have scenery.
Brief Comment
This article is cleverly conceived. By refuting the common saying that "familiar places have no scenery", it demonstrates the central argument in depth. The beginning is concise and not verbose, and the beginning and end are well integrated. Since I have a deep understanding of the landscape, I have good intentions. The use of parallel sentences and quotations from poetry make the language appear beautiful, and the reading does not feel boring and boring that is common in argumentative essays. (Instructor Tao Yongbiao)
● Example 2 of excellent works (narrative)
Familiar places also have scenery
Lu Yanping, senior year of No. 1 Middle School in Suining County, Hunan Province (275)
Last spring, when the school was on monthly vacation, I returned to my hometown. The sky was overcast and my heart was heavy. It was for no other reason than the Nth monthly exam before I returned home. The results were still lingering in place, and I felt a huge boulder weighing heavily on my heart. I didn’t dare to see my childhood friends, I didn’t dare to see my grandfather who cared about me, and I didn’t dare to face the eyes of the villagers. In order to get rid of the depression and relieve the pressure in my heart, I walked into the familiar bamboo forest behind the house.
There is an unknown bird singing in the bamboo forest. It is so clear and sweet. It is the singer in the forest, calling for the awakening of flowers, plants and trees. I carefully watched the tall and green bamboos and the silver-bell-like singing of the birds. Suddenly, I accidentally tripped on a stone and almost fell down. I looked down and saw a bamboo shoot sticking out from under the big stone. It was like a sharp knife piercing the solid ground and stubbornly pushing up the big stone. I looked around carefully for their figures, and was surprised to find that some emerged from the grass, some squeezed out of the tree pockets, and some struggled out of the rock crevices. I was stunned by this sight: so tenacious, So persistent, so confident. Suddenly there was a strong smell hitting his nose.
Yes, when the spring breeze gently wakes up the bamboo forest and the spring rain tenderly moistens the bamboo forest, the entire bamboo forest seems to be under magic. Countless bamboo shoots break through the heavy earth, one by one. A man stubbornly drilled out of the surface, so full of vitality! There are water droplets on the tips of their leaves, soaking up the sweet rain, and they keep chasing me up. If you listen carefully, you will hear the intermittent sound of bamboo shoots being lifted up or taken off from the bamboo forest. That is the cry of the new bamboo: I want to grow up, I want to grow up!
Standing in the bamboo forest, I seem to see the bamboo shoots that have not yet broken through the ground, gathering their final strength and trying to break through the weight of the earth and darkness. At this time, the heavy stone in my heart slowly disappeared.
When I returned to school, I no longer worried about my temporary grades, or worried about failing the test because of the concern of my relatives. I regarded the eyes of my classmates, teachers, and others, no matter whether they were true feelings or not. The attention or ridicule of others is regarded as a kind of motivation for me. I want to go on the path I have determined. No matter whether it is sunny or stormy, I have to get through it. Because, in my heart, I have the most beautiful scenery in the world, the scenery of bamboo shoots growing tenaciously.
That bamboo forest is indeed a place that I am very familiar with. When I was young, I dug out bird's nests there, and when I was young, I collected firewood there. But last spring, I discovered the touching beauty of the bamboo forest. Scenery, realize that familiar places also have scenery!
Brief Comment
The topic "Familiar places also have (no) scenery" is not easy to write, whether it is an argumentative essay or a narrative essay, but the author of this article sticks closely to the title. It vividly describes the process of psychological changes under the pressure of studying in the third year of high school, which can educate and inspire people, and the content is substantial but not empty. The article uses emotional changes as clues. Although the plot is not tortuous, it has twists and turns, which reflects the author's strong creative ability. (Instructor Tao Yongbiao)
The beauty of neglect
Hunan Lixian No. 1 Middle School Mo Juanjuan Fu Jiaming
Bland daily life contains the beauty of life.
The Alpine Valley has beautiful scenery, and there is a highway passing through it. There are placards on the road: "Walk slowly, please enjoy!" Unfortunately, many pedestrians rushed by and had no time to linger around the charming scenery. scenery. Fast-paced and efficient modern urbanites no longer have this leisurely mind, so this rich and gorgeous world seems to have turned into a lifeless prison.
When Su Dongpo lived in Xiyou Temple, he once visited Songfeng Pavilion. He was extremely tired along the way and the destination was still far away. When will it arrive? Suddenly, Dongpo changed his mind and thought: "Where can't I rest here?" Just nine words, like a wake-up call, the journey is difficult, where can't I rest?
Everything happens in one thought, and life without direction is confusing; however, life trapped in planning is also boring. We are often restricted by our fixed thinking. Our destination is that refreshing pavilion, and we want to rest our legs there only. However, being tired at this time and resting here is actually quite natural, because my mind is confused by the strong utilitarian purpose.
There was a water bearer who had to go to a creek far away to carry water every day. Of his two buckets, one had a crack and the other was intact. The intact bucket always brought home a full bucket of water, while the broken bucket always had only half a bucket of water left in it. After two years of this day after day, the intact bucket couldn't help but feel proud of its achievements, while the cracked bucket felt very ashamed. One day, it said to the water carrier by the stream: "I want to apologize to you." The master asked: "Why?" "In the past two years, on your way home, water seeped out of my cracks. , I can only carry half a bucket of water. You tried your best, but you didn't get the reward you deserve." The water carrier said: "On our way home, I hope you will pay attention to the beautiful flowers along the path."
When they went up the mountain, the broken bucket saw the sun shining on the flowers on the path. This beautiful sight made him feel a little happy. But at the end of the path he was still sad because he had lost another half of the water. So he apologized to the water bearer again. But the water bearer said: "Didn't you notice? Those beautiful flowers just grew only on your side. That's because I knew you had a crack and took advantage of it. I planted flowers on your side Plant, and you watered them every day when we came back from the stream. For two years, I often picked these beautiful flowers and put them in the vase.
Without you, how could we enjoy the beautiful flowers every day? ”
If we lose the sun, we can enjoy the stars in the sky; if we lose the green, we gain the fruitful golden autumn; if we lose our youth, we enter a mature life... In life, we need to enjoy the joy of harvest, However, the joy of life is also at this moment.
There must be something available
A business friend of mine immigrated to the United States when he was 45 years old. >
Everyone who goes to the United States wants to get a green card as early as possible. Three months after he arrived in the United States, he went to the Immigration Bureau to apply for a green card. A friend who came to the United States before him kindly reminded him: "You have to." Be patient and wait. It’s been almost a year since I applied and I haven’t been approved yet. ”
He smiled and said, “It doesn’t take that long, just three months.” "His friend looked at him with doubtful eyes, thinking he was joking.
Three months later, he went to the immigration bureau and was approved. He filled out the form and got it stamped. Soon, the postman sent him a
When his friend found out, he was very puzzled: "You are older than me, don't have as much money as me, and applied later than me. Why did you get the green card before me?" He smiled slightly. Said: "Because of money. "How much did you bring to the United States?" "$100,000." ""But I brought 1 million US dollars, why didn't you approve it for me instead of you?" "In the three months since I arrived in the United States, part of my 100,000 US dollars was used for consumption and part for investment. In use and flow. This is already shown on the tax form I submitted to the Immigration Bureau. And your $1 million has been sitting in the bank with no consumption changes, so they will not approve your application. "That's it.
This friend also told me something he witnessed at the US Immigration Service.
When he applied for a green card at the US Immigration Service, he encountered I met a middle-aged woman. After asking, I found out that she was from a rural area in northern China, and she only applied to come to the United States because her daughter was in the United States. She had only finished elementary school, and she couldn't speak Chinese well.
But that's it. A Chinese rural woman who only speaks "Hello" and "Goodbye" in English is also applying for a green card. The reason for her application is "technical expertise."
The immigration officer looked at her application form. Ask her: "What can you do?" She replied: "I can cut paper and draw. "As she said that, she took out a pair of scissors from her bag and flew lightly on a piece of brightly colored paper. In less than three minutes, she cut out various lifelike animal patterns.
U.S. Immigration Officer Her eyes widened, her fingers raised, and she praised repeatedly. At this time, she took out a newspaper from her bag and said, "This is my paper-cut painting published in China's Farmers Daily. "
The U.S. immigration officer nodded repeatedly and said, "OK." ”
This is the United States. You may not know management, you may not understand finance, you may not know computers, or even English. However, you cannot know nothing! You must have It will be the same, you have to do your best to push it to the limit, and you will always be OK.