I entered the misty rain website very late last night, and I was surprised and uneasy for a long time when I saw the poem "Twenty-four filial piety poems" recommended by my brother! Tossing and turning all night, I think it's better to tell you my personal thoughts. When it is right or wrong, my brother will consider it himself.
The first time I came into contact with you was because of your novel, and I paid attention to your poem China Ci Pai. I thought you were an old friend because of your writing style. I have been browsing prose reading, so I won't talk about it today.
Some of your poems are exquisite and graceful, some are warm and affectionate, and some are warm and restrained. You can see that you are learning and exploring at this stage. I don't say exploration because your poetry creation can't maintain an overall stable level.
The language and skills of poetry are particularly important because of the length of poetry. Language can be tempered in life, and reading is also very helpful. For example, in a specific context, specific lexical meanings can be volatilized to the peak, and Mo Yan's works can be read; Under the plain and clean language, the undercurrent of sadness and vicissitudes surges, and Yu Hua's Xu Sanguan Selling Blood is a model of language. Skills are even more gratifying. You need to keep learning-trying to figure out-understanding-practicing.
I sometimes like to use this word to create the artistic conception of poetry, which represents more than just the meaning of scene blending. Poetry comes from the secret language of the soul, nothingness is the symbol of spiritual needs, and poetry is something close to faith. In the creation of poetry, the thinking of poetry can be embodied as comprehension and epiphany, which can not only reflect one's ultimate humanistic concern for humanity, life and society, but also best safeguard and eulogize one's spiritual dignity, from which the beauty of poetry can be sublimated. -This is the bottom line of my poetry writing, and my brother can refer to it.
Let's start with the poem "Interpretation of Twenty-four Filial Pieties and Righteousness Poems", which is a bit out of my expectation.
Let's start with the theme. Regarding the twenty-four filial piety, Mr. Lu Xun thinks-"I never deliberately failed to be filial when I was young, but I am very willing to be filial to my parents." But I am young and ignorant, and I only explain the practice of "filial piety" with my personal opinions, thinking that it is nothing more than "obedience" and "obedience", and I will take good care of my elderly parents when I grow up. Since I had this textbook for dutiful sons, I know it's not, it's more difficult. Naturally, some of them can be imitated, such as' Luzi Negative Rice' and' Huang Xiang Fan Pillow'. It is not difficult to conceive oranges, as long as rich people invite me to dinner. Mr. Lu Xun is a guest and pregnant with oranges? I knelt down and answered,' A mother's love wants to return to her mother. Rich people admire him, so the dutiful son is steady and easy to talk to. Crying bamboo shoots is suspicious, fearing that my sincerity may not touch the world like this. But if you can't cry out bamboo shoots, it's just a slap in the face. If you go' lying on the ice looking for carp', your life will be in danger. The weather in my hometown is very mild. In severe winter, there is only a thin layer of ice on the water. Even if the child is lying down, it will definitely crash, the ice will break into the water, and the carp can't swim. Naturally, I have to risk my life. This is the only way to show filial piety, and there will be unexpected miracles, but I was still young and really didn't understand these.
Among them, the two things that puzzled me most, even made me sick, were "Lao Lai entertaining relatives" and "Guo Ju burying children". "
When writing this article, I looked through the relevant materials to see what stories the picture of Twenty-four Filial Pieties tells. Let's briefly analyze the problems in Twenty-four Filial Pieties-
First, Xiaogan moves the sky. A dutiful son was murdered many times by his stepmother and others, but he was not killed. After the son learned, he was still very filial to his stepmother, so he moved the cat. This is tantamount to encouraging such bad parents, which is not desirable.
Second, taste the soup. There was an emperor who was very filial to his mother and served her when she was ill. Every time he tasted the soup himself, he let her eat it. Although a little hypocritical, but because the emperor's mother didn't know how many people to serve, the emperor didn't need to taste the medicine, so the performance was more than the actual need. Of course, as a child, it is still worth promoting to be able to serve tea and water to sick parents for a long time, and you can basically learn.
Third, toothache. When a guest came home, mother was at a loss, so she bit her finger. My son in the mountains felt his finger hurt and ran home to entertain guests. Unscientific lies are not advisable.
Four, subtract one meter from a hundred miles. On the days of famine, the son ate wild vegetables by himself and took rice from hundreds of miles away home for his mother to eat. You can learn.
5. Lu Yishun's mother. The stepmother abused her children and made them wear velvet clothes in winter. The father found out that he wanted to divorce his stepmother, and the children pleaded for her. Stepmothers, children and fathers all adopted the wrong method. Not desirable.
Sixth, deer milk serves relatives. A man in deerskin sneaked into the deer herd, milked the deer and went home to worship his mother. One day, the hunter wanted to shoot deer. He ran out to dissuade the hunter from shooting deer, lest he could not be milked to worship his mother in the future. This is an unreasonable request to others and is not desirable.
Seven, play color to entertain relatives. There is a 70-year-old man who plays like a child to please his parents. Such filial piety is really hypocritical. Can't learn.
Eight, sell yourself to bury your father. After his father died, he sold himself into slavery to bury his father. This is a violation of personal dignity and reflects the coldness of society. Not desirable.
Nine, wood carving matters. A man's mother died, and he carved a wooden statue for his mother to worship at home. Every time something happens, he always reports to Muxiang before making a decision. His wife has a different view on this, and he actually divorced her. Can't learn.
Ten, the maid is the mother. A man supports his mother by being a servant. This can be learned.
Xi. Huai Ju sends relatives. A child went to someone else's house to be a guest, and when he left, he stole oranges served by others. As a result, when he went out, the orange fell and was found, so he explained that he secretly took it back to his mother because his mother liked oranges. Strictly speaking, it is not advisable to steal in the name of filial piety.
Twelve, buried the child to serve the mother. A couple lived with their mother, were poor, and gave birth to a child. They were worried that they could not provide enough living expenses for their mother, so they decided to bury their children alive to save money. As a result, when the child was buried alive, the gold nugget was dug out, so the child did not have to be buried alive and could continue to support his mother. Where is this advocating filial piety? It is simply encouraging crime!
Thirteen, the pillow is warm. A nine-year-old child who has lost his mother will not only get enough family warmth, but also fan his sleeping father in summer and warm the quilt for his sleeping father in winter, that is, warm the quilt first and then let his father sleep late. Does a father who accepts filial piety so frankly still have a conscience?
Fourteen, pick up different musical instruments. There is a poor child and his mother who live in mulberry trees. In order to be filial to her mother, the child put the picked mulberries in different baskets according to different colors, saying that it was to let her eat softer mulberries. For an extremely poor person, will he still care about the hardness of mulberries? So this story makes people feel hypocritical, but it doesn't have much practical significance.
Fifteen, spring is full of fish. There is a mother-in-law who likes to drink river water a few miles away and eat fish. Her daughter-in-law walks miles every day to fetch water for her mother-in-law, and often cooks fish for her mother-in-law. One day there was a strong wind, and my daughter-in-law came back late to fetch water. My mother-in-law actually kicked her daughter-in-law out of the house. The daughter-in-law lived outside and continued to be filial to her mother-in-law, so she moved her mother-in-law away and let her go home. The result touched the sky, and their water tank automatically gushed out of the river every day, and two fish jumped out. This is a criminal record of a mother-in-law abusing her daughter-in-law. It is really hateful to promote it as an example of filial piety!
Sixteen, the tomb of thunder and tears. A man's mother was afraid of thunder before her death. After her death, it thundered every day and her son went.
Mother cried at her grave to comfort her and said, don't be afraid, your son is here. This set is purely a lie, because mother can't hear it, so he is putting on a show for everyone to show his filial piety.
Seventeen, nurses are not lazy. A grandmother feeds her with her own milk every day in order to be filial to her mother-in-law. Knowing that she was seriously ill, she asked her granddaughter-in-law to continue feeding her with her own milk like herself. Anyway, is it possible that grandma still has milk? Even with milk, can we allow such a mother-in-law to exist? Does such an example still treat the daughter-in-law as a person?
Carp sleeps on the ice. The stepmother abused her son, and the son not only didn't blame her, but also lay shirtless on the ice when his stepmother was ill and got two carp to honor her stepmother. This mode of filial piety is inhuman and demanding of children. On the other hand, the human body can turn ice into fish, and probably the palm can catch fish, which provides some ideas for the international problem of energy development:)
19. Mosquitoes are covered in blood. An eight-year-old child, in order to prevent mosquitoes from biting his father, slept in his father's bed before going to bed to let mosquitoes suck blood, and did not drive mosquitoes away, so that blood-sucking mosquitoes did not bite his father. This is not only stupid, but also reflects the cold-blooded father.
Twenty, seize the tiger to save the father. It is said that a child of 14 years old grabbed the tiger's neck with both hands to save his father, thus saving his father. This is a complete lie, because if a tiger can't fight a child of 14 years old, it can't fight his father who is farming.
Twenty-one, crying bamboo shoots. My mother was seriously ill and my father died. One winter, my mother was ill and needed fresh bamboo shoots as medicine. When bamboo shoots can't be bought in winter, the dutiful son goes to the bamboo forest to cry, and as a result, he cries out bamboo shoots, and his mother will be fine. This is another complete lie.
Twenty-two, worried about eating shit. The dutiful son's father was ill. The doctor said that if you want to know whether his father's illness can be cured, you can know it by tasting the patient's feces. So he really tasted it, and finally his father died. I think this is purely a prank by unscrupulous quacks. I didn't expect it to be promoted as an example. This is really stupid.
Twenty-three, abandon the official to find the mother. It is said that when a dutiful son was seven years old, his biological mother was kicked out of the house. Mother and son have no information for fifty years. Suddenly one day I got the news of my birth mother, so I gave up being an official and went to find my birth mother myself. In fact, it is easy for an official to find his mother, and there is absolutely no need to resign. Therefore, it is very hypocritical to boast that an official is filial to his mother.
Twenty-four, washing pro-drowning device. It is said that a dutiful son became a senior official and personally washed the toilet for his mother. This is purely an act of fishing for fame. As long as the mother's toilet can be kept clean, why does her son have to wash it? Who cleans the toilet by themselves?
—— The above concrete analysis is taken from China Youth Forum.
No matter how muddy the traditional culture is, it is destined to be something we must face calmly. This is true of any nation. Things created by ancestors, good and bad, can't be taken away or relied on. Any nation must stand on the cultural foundation created by its ancestors, so as to truly conform to the development of the times and "revive" its civilization. A few people judge that the destruction of the whole people without thinking is tantamount to the self-abuse of civilization.
The attitude towards one's own civilization is also an important aspect to test whether a nation is really mature. Summon up courage, calmly, rationally and frankly face everything in traditional culture, identify, learn from and discard it, and rebuild this lost rational attitude and ability of civilization inheritance. Therefore, I think the title of this poem is very inappropriate. I was even more worried when I saw the cheers. I'm afraid my brothers will even write "stock trading is a treat". (Selected Records of the History of the Song Dynasty I): "Take people with filial piety, the brave cut stocks, and the fearful are buried." ), ignorance and filial piety are all right, but if you put your parents in the position of cannibals, isn't it because of ulterior motives that the world is public? Wouldn't it be creepy to write another article "Women's chastity memorial archway"?
As for the language and skills of this poem, it is also lacking. Skill is nothing more than an oral explanation of allusions. The language is interesting. (I laughed with Xiao Dao last night. Literary works need to entertain the public, and your poems have done it-this harsh language really annoys you! )
"Mosquito, mosquito/come and smell me/tender meat/incense/……/I lost my fan/I stopped moving/come and eat me"-although it was meant to touch the breath of children, it was a bit slippery. At first glance, some vernacular poetry movements began with a masterpiece "Trial Collection", but Mr. Hu Shi was not so inclined.
As far as talking is concerned, my brother's poems are boring to read, so why should the editor recommend them? Personally, I think there are two reasons: first, the overall level of brothers is very strong, which is obvious to all on the whole website, so every work comes out as sound. Second, the editor's knowledge and thinking ability are slightly inferior, or he only looks at the name of Yin Jian Scholar without careful textual research, so his works are advertised under the banner of filial piety.
Amid the cheers, I'd rather have a basin of ice water splashed head-on, making your face tremble and your lips pale, than be killed or drowned in inexplicable pride! My brother and I are strangers. We only talk about each other in words. After reading your words, I applauded and remembered the outstanding appearance of your brothers, so you really made friends. A friendship between gentlemen is as light as water, which makes sense! Dude, you can keep an eye on it.
In addition, I would like to say a few digressions. Brothers and heroes should be open-minded and calm, not impetuous. The message behind the poem, I don't think so Follow-up, this is an exchange platform for Yanyu to provide freedom of speech. Correct the speaker if he is innocent, and encourage him if he is innocent. If there is nonsense, just ignore it or laugh it off. Why leave this unbearable language? Hehe, nitpicking.
Best wishes:
An Zhe!