1, avoid.
Excerpt from the original:
You don't want to plant flowers, you say, I don't want to see them fade a little. Yes, in order to avoid the end, you avoided the beginning.
Appreciate:
Avoiding is not giving up, but a great love and feeling! This little poem calmly tells a shocking story in a bystander's tone. Because there is no beginning and no end, just like unrequited love, it is heartbreaking! On the other hand, the author is telling us that you can't stop because you are afraid of something. If you want to be happy and don't want to be miserable, you will never be happy.
2. "In the faint autumn".
Excerpt from the original:
In the faint autumn, I want to cross the lifeless fence and walk towards you, whispering quietly, singing children's songs and carefully sheltering from the rain by the misty lake.
Appreciate:
In the faint autumn, the poet recalled the reddish dream in his heart, so pure and innocent, but the reality was helpless and sad. He could not go back to the past and could only look forward to the future life in the present. Gu Cheng's poems are fresh, and some sad stories can be described by pictures. In front of readers, some childhood memories seem to bring us to the past, and the interweaving of reality and memory brings a strong contrast, that is, the predicament in the real world and the unrestrained childhood.
3. This generation.
Excerpt from the original:
The night gave me black eyes, but I used them to look for light.
Appreciate:
"Night" and "light" form a sharp contrast between dark and bright colors, and "black eyes" are deformed intentions and permeated with strong emotional colors. This artistic expression has aroused readers' imagination, so that a suffocating era appears on the screen of imagination, distorting the growing young generation in the absurd reality, and the tenacious spirit of seeking bursts out from the potential buried in the bottom of my heart.