There are cranes in front of the embroidered ridge palace, and they also sing Kaiyuan Taiping songs.
Spiritual Palace: the name of Tang Palace. The former site is in Shaanxi County, Henan Province.
Wang Heshang inspiration:
Please pay attention to the images used in the poem. In spring, the spring grass is green and the wild pond is full of cranes. Are rendering the desolation here. Also, the flowers in the wild pond fall like jade. The first metaphor is very novel. Second, it is easy to think of a beautiful woman as beautiful as flowers and pure as jade, with a delicate fragrance and nephrite.
If girls sing, this sense of historical vicissitudes is much worse. Someone commented on Du Mu: A strong businesswoman doesn't know about national subjugation and hatred, but still sings backyard flowers across the river. You are still drinking and sleeping with your little sister. Who cares what songs they sing? The pot calls the kettle black.
Comments of the Tea Fragrance General Group: In spring, the peaceful scene of Kaiyuan is thought-provoking in time. The first two sentences set off the flow of time with the scenery in front of us.
A group of how can I tell, through all these clouds? Comment: He Faweng is a witness of history. He is recalling the prosperity of Kaiyuan, but now things have changed.
Three groups of Qinghe comments: Xiangyu reminds people of the funeral lyrics in A Dream of Red Mansions, which has a sense of sadness.
Comments of Gentlemen's General Group: Spiritual practice once lived in a court band. Begonia was originally used to graft pear trees, but now it has become a wild pond, and the flowers are bleak. The last two sentences also describe the behavior of an old man: "There are cranes in front of the spiritual palace, and they also sing Kaiyuan Song Taiping." It took more than a century and a half from the heyday of Xuanzong Kaiyuan to the decline of Xuanzong. Naturally, there would be no one living in the Kaiyuan era. On the surface, the word "still singing" seems to be mocking the old man's love of turning over the old calendar, and it is not appropriate to sing, but it is actually deeply touched. This poem expresses the poet's deep regret for the current politics by remembering the old man's memory of the peaceful and prosperous times. All four poems are about scenery, but every word reveals the poet's sincere feelings of infinite concern for the fate of the motherland. This artistic technique, which shows the true feelings on the back of the text and the deep meaning in front of us, is subtle and elegant.
2. After Tang Dumuling Pond in Qi 'an County, the poem penetrates duckweed and green brocade pond, and Xia Ying makes thousands of roses.
No one watched the light rain all day, and the mandarin duck bathed in red.
Wang Heshang inspiration:
You should pay attention to the first couplet is gorgeous and lively. Loneliness is a person's carnival, and carnival is the loneliness of a group of people.
Comments of gentlemen's group: Du Mu's Poem of Back Pond in Qi 'an County wrote the pond view and the shore view respectively. Express the poet's loneliness and bitterness.
1 group jubilant comments: watching the rain through the window, enjoying the lotus and listening to the warbler, bored and envious of Yuanyang.
General manager Yangliuqing comments: The colorful scenery in front of us is in stark contrast to the loneliness and envy behind us.
3. The waves of pottery and smoke in Dongting poetry are not heavy, and the emerald color is slightly dark.
Maybe Xiang Jun came to wash, and Junshan looked at the mirror face to face.
4. Wang Dongting Lake in Yuxi, Liu Tang is in harmony with the autumn moon, and there is no wind mirror on the pool surface.
Looking at Dongting from a distance, there is a green snail in the silver plate.
Q: These two poems are almost the same in technique and content. Which reason do you like? What is it?
Wang Heshang inspiration:
In the first song, Junshan was compared to a snail, used to dress up beautiful women and put on a mirror. This metaphor is also very clever.
Eight groups of Adong comments: I like the second song, and the metaphor is amazing. At first glance, the lake is extraordinary, the autumn and the moon are integrated, and it is natural and harmonious. Looking from a distance, it turns into a wonderful metaphor, with far-reaching artistic conception and amazing words. Through rich imagination and image metaphor, he described the beautiful scenery of Dongting Lake under the moonlight in autumn night.
Three groups of Qinghe comments: the last group, the last group of sentences is very beautiful, and the previous group is a bit straightforward.
7 groups of light cold comments: autumn moon, silver plate, echoing from beginning to end. The green snail is a mountain, and the silver plate is the water on a moonlit night.
1 group How can I tell, through all these clouds? Comments: Liu Yuxi's metaphor skillfully compares Junshan Island in Dongting Lake to a green snail in a silver plate. The starting point of writing these two poems is different. Liu Yuxi's poems focus on "seeing" Tao Yong's poems describing Dongting.
1 Group Poetry Comments: The first one is good, and the imagination is more abundant. The second one is pure metaphor, the first one has imaginary metaphor, and the first one turns the mountain color into fairy dressing powder. There are scenery, people, things and agility.
Four groups of comments on Qing Qi Xue: The contrast between the second sentence and the last sentence is more vivid, highlighting a word of hope.
General manager Yang Liuqing's comments: They are all metaphors, but I still like the second one, which has a strong sense of picture and natural atmosphere.
5 groups of Tianshan snow red pepper: the second song is magnificent.
Nietzsche's comment on the overall situation: Lao Liu looks at the overall situation, disdains carving, and has a magnificent brushwork.
5. I am very happy to meet Shi in the autumn night. Wang Ji went to Beitian to play and mow the grass and go home.
It's worth flying at night when you meet a full moon.
Hu: hoe beans. Yun, through "rhyme", refers to self-cultivation. Huo, refers to bean leaves. Cut millet: cut millet.
Wang Heshang inspiration:
Harvest, old friends come, the moon is big, white and round, and fireflies are flashing. How do you feel? Friends who have experience in rural life know that it is most beautiful to sit down to eat and drink after a busy day.
Comments of Willow Green General Team: The autumn moon is full and fireflies fly. What a quiet and bright night, my heart is bright and satisfied. I feel a sense of accomplishment after working for a day. Moreover, the moonlight is so beautiful. I enjoy the beautiful scenery all the way, accompanied by fireflies, and life is enough!
1 Qunmeixin Comments: Meet good friends in good times.
6 groups of Chaishan comments: It's autumn harvest season again. I am very happy, I met my old friend, I am very happy, I saw the full moon, I am very happy, I am very happy, I have fireflies to lead the way. I talk about mowgli, and I am very happy.
6. In the autumn night, I sent a short message to 22 foreign ministers, Don Wei Wu Ying. When I was walking in the cool autumn night, I thought of you and sang my poems.
Pine nuts fell on the mountain, and you seem to wake up.
Genus: just right, just right.
Wang Heshang inspiration:
Distiller's grains comment: pine nuts set in the mountains, and the movements set each other off. This technique is very clever.
5 groups of sea reviews: dynamic and static combination, complement each other.
1 group comment on Chu Feng: Wei's song, a lonely night, walking alone, cool and empty in autumn night, I heard a pine ball fall, which seemed a bit like a noble scholar. In this environment, I miss my friend and can imagine his character. In the culture of China, hermits are all compatible with nature, and they are silent and indifferent to prosperity.
6 groups of Bona comments: pine nuts fall. This sentence, after deep study, is meaningful. It is much more meaningful to understand friends like a pine nut falling and a friend falling on an empty mountain, not just a pine nut falling.
Comments on 8 groups of willows: The word "ying" in the poem is well used.
7. The autumn rain lamented that the wet invasion of the fan by Yang Wanli in Song Dynasty could not be light, and the cold forced the solitary lamp to be particularly bright.
Banana leaves are half yellow and lotus leaves are green, and there are two autumn rains.
Wang Heshang inspiration:
Maybe you like to finish sentences. But I like it: the cold force makes the solitary lamp particularly bright. The lonely lamp in the rainy night gives people a warm and bright feeling, and a lonely lamp is bright in the dark. The source of this poem seems to be "a river boat alone is bright"
Reminder: two families do not mean two families, but two things are the same. The raindrops on the banana and the lotus leaf have slightly different sounds, but they all give the poet the same feeling: bleak and desolate.
General team Yangliuqing comments: The first sentence is about autumn rain, which makes the fan wet, so it looks heavy. The second sentence is about autumn rain. It's cold and the lights are cold. The third and fourth sentences are about beating bananas and lotus leaves in autumn rain, which is unbearable to listen to.
Eight groups of comfort comments: The contrast is obvious, and the cold light is particularly bright. Huang Bi tells the scene and expresses his feelings.
6 groups of Bona comments: Autumn rain, humid and cold air, will be said to be cold and lonely, very vivid.
8. The autumn rain is getting colder, and I miss the dream of traveling in Song and Lu, returning to the autumn night and staying in bed.
Suddenly I heard the rain sweeping through the window of the awning, and I was still looking at the iron horse at that time.
Two groups of Bai Xuan layman comments: This song is a journey to the land. Sorrow is like a heart, a lonely lamp in the dark world. There is also: Yazhai is lying and listening to the small voice, which is suspected to be the voice of the people's suffering, very similar.
1 Qun Chufeng Comments: Although lonely and cold, the heroic spirit is vividly on the paper. After the Song Dynasty crossed to the south, it failed to recover the Central Plains until its demise. However, there are still people who are worried about their homeland and their country and people, which makes people feel deeply. What I miss is not the war, but the obsession of the Han family to recover the mountains and rivers. It is sad to think about the deep desire of people with lofty ideals at that time.
General comment of Tutu: Is it crazy to miss the war? The sound of raindrops hitting the window is very similar to Wan's. Sadness and disability indicate that the light is flashing and will go out.
Group 3 pedestrian comments: the grab is very powerful.
Eight groups of Taihang Mountain people commented: It can be seen that the poet is very worried about the country.
9. In autumn, the Tang Dynasty is cool and the autumn wind moves Guilin.
Dewdrops condense thousands of Pian Yu, chrysanthemums sprinkle a clump of gold.
The sun rises and sets, and clouds and the sky are dotted with shade.
You can't count on Peng Ying, and Chunshi is entertaining.
Wang Heshang inspiration:
In this poem by Li Shimin, please pay attention to the exquisiteness and scenery of couplets, as well as the regret that couplets cannot become immortals and the restraint on self-calmness. In addition, Li Shimin's poetry has obvious Southern Dynasty style, which is exquisite, aesthetic and seeking for immortality.
Two groups of Bai Xuan lay comments: Dew condenses a thousand Pian Yu, chrysanthemum scatters a clump of gold. Good coagulation, dispersion and refinement. The first three sentences are close-ups, the high and low shadows of the sun, and the cloudy sky dotted with tree shade. This is a distant view. You can't count on Peng Ying, and Chunshi is entertaining. The country is so big, the politics is clear and the territory is unprecedented. The distance should be managed well.
General comment on Tutu: Be a down-to-earth person, and don't aspire to be immortal. If you are tired from work, you can have a rest and enjoy yourself. My brother won't do it.
General team Yangliuqing comments: the couplets are beautifully written, and the neckline reads the shadow of the sun, which leads to the couplet.
1 Group Qiu Jin Comments: It's crisp in autumn, and I'm happy when I look at the beautiful scenery. However, no matter how good the scenery is, you can't be too indulgent, you can only have fun once in a while.
10. In autumn, there are lonely Jiangting in Changqing, Liu Tang, and autumn aerial attractions in Jiangfeng.
Where is the world, Xiang Shui is an idle person.
Zhu Han has a lonely goose, and the setting sun is everywhere.
The ship is like a fallen leaf, which is gone forever.
Homework: Keep the number 10 for your own analysis, and write an appreciation of the word 100 as homework.