Before that, there were fifteen lines. In terms of formal arrangement, "mother" is in a marginal secondary position, which is exactly the living state of "mother" in modern society that poetry wants to record. The writing of "Mom" brings form into the category of content well.
Lei Pingyang, a poet praised by Poetry magazine at the same time as Jiang Fei, wrote in his poem "Carrying my mother up the mountain": "Carrying my mother up the mountain, let her see the place where she was in trouble all her life. Really, it's just a small place. Between several poplars, the river is a small river, the road is a path, and the house is a hut. I am her youngest son, as small as vanity, like the face of an ant, and can't bear the smallest lightning? There is no marginal small, spreading, like the grievances rehearsed over and over again in ancient times, lasting and simple. " This is probably the best footnote for mom.