Help write a poem review-"I hear the sound of snow falling in the water" thank you! !

Category: Culture/Art

Problem description:

Snow fell into the water, and I heard the sound of snow walking.

When a snowflake falls, my heart will tremble.

If all the snowflakes fall into the water together

Mianjiang in my eyes, how should I breathe?

Accept a winter, a fading peace and beauty?

The boat was moored on the water, and I saw it was quiet.

The ship's strings and paddles were painted white in the dream.

They don't talk, they don't sway-but

More snowflakes passed by them and melted in the cold water.

Snow fell into the water and fell into every crack in the water.

Standing on the boat, I convey the pleasure under my feet.

I hear the sound of snow walking in the water.

Analysis:

After reading it, people feel a sense of loss, just like the soul is clever, without beauty and a little pale. Really, from the heart to the feet, people live in a vast world, a misty snow, contained in the vast sea of people, nowhere to be found. Snow walks in the water, invisible, inaudible, but can be felt. ....