Composition title: Where have you gone (imitation)
Keywords: Have you gone to imitate the fourth grade of elementary school
This article is suitable for: the fourth grade of elementary school
Source of the composition:
This composition is about 500 words about the fourth grade of primary school. The title is: "Where did it go (imitation)". Everyone is welcome to contribute.
Where have they gone (imitation)
Where have Mother Earth gone?
Grandpa Dong’s white cotton quilt was covered.
Where is Grandpa Dong’s white quilt?
Chun Wa's whistle blew away.
Where has Chunwa’s whistle gone?
Sister Xia’s cicada was stolen.
Where did Sister Xia’s cicadas go?
Brother Qiu turned it into fruit and hung it on the treetops.
Where did Brother Qiu’s fruit go?
Grandpa Dong put it into a white cotton-padded jacket.
Where has Grandpa Dong’s white cotton-padded jacket gone?
Mother Earth took away the knitted clothes...
Attached is the original text: Where have they gone
(Shaobai)
Spring Where did the baby's flowers go?
Brother Xia’s green leaves covered him.
Where are Brother Xia’s green leaves?
Sister Qiu borrowed it to make carpets.
Where is Sister Qiu’s carpet?
Grandpa Dong’s white quilt covered him.
Where has Grandpa Dong’s white quilt gone?
The spring doll is in the flower basket...
Appreciation: The language structure of the cyclic thimble and the vivid anthropomorphic image give the poem the beauty of repetition.
——From P101, second grade of primary school, "Something is given every day"
Self-evaluation: The computer broke down tonight and the mouse often failed. Nothing can be directed. I was busy for a long time just choosing the font size, and I couldn’t post the diary I had written. I updated this little poem that I imitated when I was reciting a beautiful article a few days ago.
This is a poem written using the "cyclic thimble" technique, describing the changes in the four seasons throughout the year. It feels very interesting. Teachers and fellow bloggers are welcome to provide guidance.
O(∩_∩)OThank you!