The Mid-Autumn Moon shines from eternity to the future.
Become an eternal totem, and the wanderers in the distance will see you.
Think of the well in front of the old house, the end of the world at this time.
How many people really accept your gentle baptism?
How many wandering hearts have finally found a home.
Whose dream did you realize and who did you get rid of?
I take you as a mirror, but I can't find that lost emotion.
Your fullness and beauty aroused my sadness.
My boyhood dream is still a broken moon.
Hanging from the treetops
2. Self-created poem 2
Greedy autumn sucks the richest nutrition of the earth.
Quietly put a beautiful Hanfu on display.
Seen from all directions, this leaf is red and gold.
In the autumn sunshine, the beauty is so mature.
Such wanton propaganda, such a grand and affectionate curtain call.
On the stage far from heaven and earth, it sang for the second time.
Without reservation, passionate
Occasionally, in the face of this boundless autumn.
My heart is full of pity and I miss my summer youth.
Recall youth.
Extended data:
Poetry writing skills:
1, the picture of the poem
Appreciating a good poem is like appreciating a beautiful painting. With the help of words, it shows us an immersive picture, which makes us feel the ups and downs of our thoughts and feelings with the author.
Therefore, a good poem requires very high visualization, and the main feature of visualization is that it can't be "as straightforward as prose", but it should be told with images and pictures, and efforts should be made to achieve the picture feeling of poetry with pictures and poems.
2. The uniqueness of poetry
Good poetry always expresses feelings through scenery. Wang Guowei said in "Words on Earth": "All scenery words are sentimental words". When we write poetry, we must first find the most distinctive features in the scenery, and then express our unique feelings. It is necessary to combine the two, blend scenes and express emotions through scenery, so as to enhance the artistic charm of poetry.