This year's senior high school entrance examination composition is still "one of two choices", and the composition score has risen from the previous 50 points to 60 points.
The first essay topic provides a poem: newborn calves/life is full of splendor/eyes are full of surprises to the world/smacking in the distance/the green hills beyond the mountain are always more beautiful/the reins are not tied/the wayward hooves are chasing the wind for fun/they are not afraid of tigers and leopards/their horns are not long, and they hold their heads high ... Candidates are required to write at least 500 articles on the topic of newborn calves.
The topic of the second composition is semi-propositional composition, "respect", that is, adding appropriate words after "respect" for writing.
Full score composition
1. Pursuing happiness
"Get up, skinny!" Hearing the roar of the chubby lion, I quickly grabbed my clothes and put them on, and crept downstairs.
"I'm still sleeping with all this noise." I rubbed my eyes. "It's past seven, still early?" "Go, go!" The tranquility of the island was instantly cut by several children.
This is the island in June. This is six-year-old us.
The island in June, shrouded in mist in the morning, seems to be in another world. After the rain, the uneven stone street looks particularly sticky, leaving the petals that have just fallen in my heart.
Unconsciously, our destination, XX Garden, is just around the corner. Xiao pang is sweating and panting. "Finally."
The garden in the morning is empty and very clean, except for the occasional singing of birds. I don't know how many times I've been here, but I can always satisfy the children's character of "liking the new and hating the old" with its uncanny workmanship.
This place has suddenly become a "site" for several children, but we won't wake up the flowers, trees, bridges and pigeons here.
When we came to the stone bridge, the sea beat against the stone wall, closed my eyes and opened my arms. I can feel the breeze kissing my cheek, the slightly moist air mixed with flowers, and the rhapsody of the sea reverberates in my ears. At this moment, although there will be no rhapsody of the sea. At this moment, although we don't think of the word "happiness", it has been chased by us unconsciously.
An old friend said, "The road to happiness is short. Can we stay?"
Petite Ying gently held "Rabbit Flower" in her palm, and we laughed. I think nature must like children.
Not far away, the gurgling stream washed the bottom of the bridge, and there was a spider. We screamed when we saw it. It is busy with its own "manual work". Birds came and stood on the bridge, watching curiously as we turned and flew away.
At this moment, time is no longer qualified to speak. What is this? What is its significance?
We pursue happiness, but we ignore time and how happy we are.
In a flash, the sun shone on us through the mist.
Who says we can never catch up with happiness? At this moment, we have happiness in our hands.
[Opinion] The full text is full of joy and liveliness. In the embrace of nature, children are running and picking happy flowers, and June is full of children's laughter. Nature, innocence, freedom and cheerfulness are the keynote of this paper. Here, children refuse to think about profound propositions such as time and meaning. Now they can't wait to catch up with happiness and jump all the way. In this world, there are only quiet islands and happy screaming children.
2. Catch up with Lu Xun's footsteps
Entering from the west gate of Xiamen University, the statue of Lu Xun is in sight within a few steps.
The master of literature is still standing, with a confident look, but the two golden lights on his brow are extremely sharp and far away, reminding us that this great man with a steady surface is red and sonorous at heart.
Lu Xun came to Xiamen to escape, because the situation in the north was too turbulent and his life was too dangerous.
This can be said to be the luck of Xiamen people.
Xiamen University also built a memorial hall for this purpose, so that future generations can restore Lu Xun's footprint through it. I strolled into the memorial hall, and everything inside still retains the traces of Lu Xun. Needless to say, some documents and even some daily necessities are put together, which is enough to show people's worship of Lu Xun.
Or the spirit of Lu Xun. Since giving up medicine in Sendai, Lu Xun criticized the reactionary forces for the sake of the country and the nation, and provided spiritual wealth after spiritual wealth for the weak at that time. He looked at the past and present with confused eyes, looked at home and abroad, tried to find the root of the country's weakness, and pursued a new life in the confused reality. This is the spirit of Lu Xun, and many people catch up with the spirit of learning.
It is not difficult to understand that Lu Xun was given preferential treatment in Xiamen, without the interference of war and the worry of food and clothing. Lu Xun also finished Morning Flowers in Xiamen. This is the luck of Xiamen.
But Lu Xun is also the misfortune of Xiamen. This stems from his very sharp evaluation of Xiamen: "It's too ineffective."
With this sentence, the trace left by Lu Xun in the memorial hall faded in my eyes, leaving only a long trace pointing to the north.
I remember Lu Xun said in the article Snow that the snow in the south is too gentle, unlike the snow in the north, which has a strong "qi". Lu Xun would rather be frozen than go to the north, because that is his battlefield and where he lives.
Walking out of the memorial hall, my pace has been much firmer. Now, there are fewer reactionary forces in our country and more peaceful and peaceful living atmosphere. This is especially true in Xiamen. Lu Xun's position as a "writer" has become more and more profound, but his "thinker" has been diluted in people's minds. But if I had a choice, I would like to follow in the footsteps of Lu Xun and go to the north. Even in today's peacetime, we still need Mr. Lu Xun's snowy war spirit. It makes us unhappy in peace, and it is the driving force of our progress.
Xiamen is too stable. Lu Xun is going to the north to continue fighting.
I will follow in his footsteps.
[opinion] this article is unique in material selection and full of associations. The topic "Catch up with Lu Xun's Footsteps" essentially shows that he will learn from Lu Xun's "endless struggle" and work hard to achieve his life goals. The author's familiarity with Mr. Lu Xun's personality and works on weekdays provides convenience for him to gallop in the examination room and make him stand out from the crowd. This article is a successful narrative essay composition in examination room.
3. Catch up with the distant sun
/kloc-when I was 0/0 years old, my father and I traveled to Huashan together in the summer vacation. It was always raining in Mao Mao in Huashan that year, and there always seemed to be a layer of fog in the sky, which covered the sun. I asked my father, "Dad, where is the sun?" Dad said, "The sun is hidden in the clouds! You have to chase it. " I asked again: "How to chase?" Dad smiled and said, "Climb to the top of the mountain and you will catch up with the sun." I was very happy and said, "Come on, Dad, let's chase the sun!" " "
So at the age of 10, I dragged my father onto the road to the top of the mountain. At first, the mountains were relatively flat, so I walked easily, thinking as I walked: there are only so many most dangerous mountains. But it didn't take long to relax, and challenges followed. Halfway up the mountain, the wind began to blow at the top of the mountain. People in the same trade are resting halfway up the mountain and don't go to school. I don't think I can be like them, so my father and I move on. After a while, I felt tired and wanted to back down. Dad saw it and said, "Daughter, the sun is waiting for you at the top of the mountain!" " "I listen, interest again, continue to climb for a while. A few minutes later, we arrived at the iron chain bridge.
I don't know how to describe my fear at that time. The iron cable bridge surrounds the mountain and leads to the top of the mountain. There is a fog under the bridge, so you can't see the scenery below. It was windy and the bridge creaked. Many people shook their heads and went down the mountain. It's like hiding a deer in your heart, pounding. Dad didn't seem to see my fear. He took my hand and said, "Go! Show those people the power of my daughter! " I was so scared that I broke free from my father's hand and begged, "Dad, let's go down, please, I'm afraid!" " Dad said with a straight face, "You are so timid and want to chase the sun!" " ! The sun is too easy for you to see! Forget it, I'll go by myself! "Hearing this, my self-esteem swelled and I said loudly," What's the big deal? "Step across the bridge.
The bridge that had stopped shaking began to shake again after bearing the weight of my body. The chain used for handrails is blown as cold as ice. I began to regret it, and the fear in my heart grew bigger and bigger, devouring me like a whirlpool. My hands and feet began to tremble and gradually stopped listening to me. Dad kept shouting at the back: "You won't be my daughter when you come down!" " I have to grit my teeth and make small steps forward. Finally, I reached the top of the mountain, and my endurance reached the limit. I shouted, "Dad, I won't climb, I'm going to fall to death!" " "Dad encouraged me to say," Come on, the sun welcomes you at the top of the mountain! ""hearing this, I took a few steps trembling again, and my feet really couldn't lift. There are clouds on the left and cliffs on the right. I feel like I'm falling apart. But I remembered the sun again. I think I must refuel. Almost there! So he clenched his fist and rushed forward. After a while, the chain disappeared-I reached the top of the mountain!
The wind is cold, but I don't feel cold at all. White clouds hung around me, and I felt the pride of "reaching the top, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky." and the spirit of "the mountain is the highest", and that unspeakable feeling filled my heart.
Then I turned around and saw the red, round and warm fireball. I know it's the sun.
[Comment] The article is unique in conception, closely linked to the center, and the characterization is very vivid. Through psychological and linguistic description, a girl who never gives up and dares to pursue her dreams, a persuasive father, shows a profound theme by seeing the big from the small. This article has more connotations.
4. Catch up with the dull life
Watching luxury cars pass by like lightning, raising bursts of dust; Look at the noise of the city, such as boiling water, noisy and boiling. ...
All this, when you pass in a hurry, does it make you stop and sigh, and does it make waves in your heart? No, the pace of scurrying has long been numb, and my mind is addicted to the workplace. When will our life be restored?
This may be because our hearts are numb and overwhelmed by all the fame and fortune, but I still hope that one day, the dust that has been raised can be settled, the sleepless paradise can be quietly closed, and the noisy boiling can be calm again. On this day, people will have time to sort out the mood disturbed by the rhythm of the city and have time to sort out those disturbed thoughts. On this day, our hearts can calm down and enjoy a dull life.
A dull life will make people find the joy of life and the happiness of being a man. Now, let's abandon all fame and fortune and set off immediately to catch up with the plain life, perhaps the plain life is ahead. Don't be tempted by anything. Come on, come on, we still have time.
The faint arrow of life, I hope you will shoot into everyone's heart like Cupid's arrow, and I believe that each of us will open our hearts to welcome you.
[Comment] The article is novel in conception and rich in literary talent. This is a good article.
5. Catch up with those faded figures
The axis of time is always turning, and I dare not slack off in chasing the drifting figure. ...
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In those shadows that drift away, some are tall and some are eternal, but only she interprets the greatness of life. When she was three years old, she lost the light of her eyes. From then on, her world was only dark. However, when the whole world thought that she was doomed to fall, she broke out of the cocoon and wrote dancing words with her magical hands, becoming a bright pearl in the history of literature. This is Helen Keller. I chased her figure, read her "If I have three days of light" countless times, and was moved by it countless times. She carved the angel in her heart with her own hands. She explained the powerful meaning and greatness of life with her own soul.
In the process of chasing her figure, I realized the power of life.
The reason why life can shine brilliantly is because there are ideals, which need to be fought for firmly. And this, I realized when I was chasing his figure. He, perhaps the first person to fire Harvard, is the only rebel in this institution that everyone dreams of. He chose to leave for his ideal. After he left, he founded Microsoft, which is well known today. He worked hard on the land he cultivated, and with his strong sense of competition and cooperation, he defeated one well-known enterprise after another, such as Hewlett-Packard, Apple and Lotus, and strengthened himself. Walking on this road, he paid sweat, tears and everything he could. He put all his eggs in one basket and pushed himself to the throne of the richest man in the world. I chased him, looked at his growth record, and was moved by his determination and courage to fight for his ideals. He showed his decisiveness and firmness in the face of choice with everything he had.
In the process of chasing his figure, I saw the firmness and courage that I should have for my ideals in wartime.
I always catch up with countless wandering figures on the way, including Beethoven, who loves art and life, Li Bai, who insists on himself, and Mr. Lu Xun, who is "ten fingers clasped". They use everything they have to shape themselves and interpret their pursuit, while I am chasing them and learning from them, I am also carving an angel in my heart.
Postscript: I'm still chasing their figures and looking at the other side of my dream. I will eventually get there on the way to catch up. ...
[opinion] the title of this article is written to catch up with those who are drifting away, and there is some suspense. At the same time, taking Helen Keller and Bill Gates as examples, I wrote about their spirit and quality, and I wrote that I was influenced by their spirit and quality. I have a deep understanding, compact structure and fluent language, especially the emotional expressions and topics at the end of the article are impressive.
Catch up with youth
-look at peach blossoms again.
Morning dew is a epiphyllum, close at hand. In our casual, colorful peach blossoms quietly opened again. Under our neglect, the beautiful youth passed away quietly. Clever you, have you noticed her light steps?
1. The hairspring is soft and flutters with the wind.
The wind never stops, the trees are green, the sun is shining and the sky is blue.
A group of us, not knowing that small place, were running and playing on the river bank, and a breeze was blowing, mixed with a little fragrance. "It smells good!" Xiao Zhi has the best nose. "Look!" My chubby fingers pointed to the rows of peach trees on the river bank, as crystal clear as jade grease. When the wind blows, the petals fall with the wind. "How beautiful!" "Well, we can eat peaches soon."
Lying on the grass, the soft grass caressed us. "I really want to be like a peach blossom when I grow up." "Well, it's good to be an adult, don't worry about others. You cannot run out of time. "
Young and ignorant, how did I ever know that a bud was quietly opening on a strange tree next to a big tree?
2. Wind, knife, frost and sword push each other.
Just entering junior high school, I leaned against a peach tree and looked at the white clouds in the sky with thoughts, patting the leaves gently.
Young and frivolous, how do I know the meaning of "plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold"? I have been longing for great courage and victory, but too high expectations always make me fragmented and everything in my life is too dull. The failure of exams again and again, the pressure of entering a higher school, and the expectations of my parents wrapped me up tightly.
"Sadly, this is growth, is it youth? I don't want it. " I muttered to myself.
However, when I am depressed, I know that the peach blossom in the rain is shaking my skirt?
3. Cui reduces red worries and kills people
This summer seems to have moved here step by step, but it has come after all. The day before school started, I walked by the river. The peach blossoms are blooming again. The green palm can't hide the pretty face and the quiet figure. The kind of blush that hides your face and smiles. "Are you laughing at me for being stupid?" We are about to leave. I suddenly realized: I lost my flower season inadvertently. What I long for is what I have lost, the most important thing in my youth-beautiful youth.
Are there any flowers and leaves left over from the previous year in those brilliant peach blossoms?
The rainy season, youth, we can't stay. Now, catch up with the existing years and don't let what is lost become the most important again.
Postscript: "The wind blew last night, who did Luo Ying listen to?" Please catch up with the existing youth.
[Comment] This article is exquisitely structured, especially in the form of subtitle. The unique angle of material selection and the gorgeous language of the article are the two highlights of this paper. In just a few minutes in the examination room, I fully demonstrated my rich inner feelings and excellent literary talent.
7. Catch up with your dreams
We all have our own dreams, which are beating violently in our young and restless hearts. They have become the goal and motivation of our life, just like chickens that have been formed in eggshells, ready to break out of their shells and meet the first ray of sunshine.
If the dream is a castle built by everyone, then now we are laying the first foundation for the firmness of the castle. We learn the nectar of knowledge in school, fill our spare brains, and draw the first color for the picture of our dreams. We are eager to learn and pursue our dreams. Faith is our pillar and perseverance is our medicine. We are brave and strong in pursuing our dreams. Any difficulty has become the driving force for us to catch up, which will only make us braver and braver, and will not break our heart of pursuing our dreams. We are like the arrow feathers leaving the string, shooting at the bull's-eye and marching forward bravely.
Since the birth of mankind, people have been chasing their dreams. Dayu worked hard to control water for the dream of people's well-being; Liu Bei visited the thatched cottage in order to revive the dream of the Han Dynasty, and he was thirsty for talents. In order to resist the tyranny of the Qin Dynasty, Chen Sheng and Guangwu launched the first peasant uprising in the history of China ... They are both trying to catch up with their dreams, opening up the road of dreams bit by bit with their own hands, and proving the power of dreams for future generations with firm steps.
Listening to the shocking symphony of destiny, I have to think of a person, Beethoven, the hero who fought for his dream and destiny. Beethoven had his own musical dreams. He had consulted Mozart and Haydn to learn music knowledge with an open mind. He has infinite talent, but unfortunately he envied it and accepted the injustice of fate prematurely. He suffers from ear disease, but he still doesn't give up his dream. He stubbornly fought against the disease and wrote one amazing work after another with the help of superman's sense of music and the vibration of melody. Although he was completely deaf, his health deteriorated, his life was poor and his spirit was tortured, he still wrote the ninth (chorus) symphony with great perseverance, which summed up his glorious life best. He bravely marched on the journey of chasing his dreams. Nothing can extinguish the flame of dreams, but it will only make this all-red burning, more and more prosperous and unstoppable.
We will inevitably encounter difficulties in the process of pursuing our dreams, but this is nothing compared with what happened to ostrovsky. During his serious illness, he still insisted on writing and continued his literary dream. Finally, a rare work "How Steel was Tempered" was born under his pen. He persistently explained his dream to us. He pursued his dream and then died.
There is a song that sings: "I have a dream, to struggle with a young heart, to make it shine with life, and to sweat. This is our youth madness." My friend, if you have a dream in your heart, please don't stop chasing and run forward bravely. One day, your dream will succeed and shine!
[Comment] The author quotes the classic of Bo Gu Golden Boy to illustrate that it will be difficult to pursue dreams, but as long as you don't give up pursuing dreams, you will succeed in the end. Finally, I quote the lyrics to emphasize once again that everyone has a dream to catch up with. Judging from the full text, the little author is talented and has the ability to master the language skillfully. I have mastered the basic writing of argumentative essays.
8. Catch up with your dreams
Is there a shortcut to realize your dream? I think there is. If you want to catch up with your dreams, you must know how to retreat and focus on a lower level, one step at a time.
Mesner, a famous mountaineer, enjoys the reputation of "Mountaineering Emperor". He is the only superman in the world who tramples on those dangerous and mysterious peaks without carrying any oxygen equipment. He climbed 14 peaks over 8000 meters on foot, including Mount Everest, the top of the world. This has aroused the curiosity of many mountaineering enthusiasts, and the medical profession has also examined his physical skills in many aspects and found that he is no different from ordinary people.
And this mystery was solved by Mesner himself: "Start from the bottom." In order to better preserve their physical strength, most mountaineers are used to taking a helicopter to the nearest town to the top of the mountain and starting from there to ensure enough physical strength.
However, this seemingly direct way to reach the destination is the key to success or failure. This method is extremely limited. When you go straight to that small town, you have actually lost the opportunity to adapt your body to the environmental conditions, while Mesner started hiking from the lowest place, adapting regular breathing to the changing air density, giving full play to your physical skills, adjusting your breathing frequency and climbing the peak of thin air.
He knows how to retreat for progress, starting low but setting high, showing his value to the whole world, successfully catching up with his dreams and realizing his wishes.
"Reach into the field with green seedlings and bow your head to see the water in the sky. Six quietness is the Tao, and retrogression turned out to be progress. " This intriguing poem was also proved by the Kung Fu Emperor Jet Li. Jet Li was not liked when he first arrived in Hollywood, and he was finally liked by a producer. However, the pay conditions and even the role they gave him were mean, which was obviously a distrust of his acting ability and box office appeal. And Jet Li agreed without hesitation, all he cared about was the opportunity to achieve himself again and again.
After the film was finished, the evaluation of the actors made people stunned. I didn't expect this rookie to be deus ex, who got the second highest score in this star-studded film. After that, he became famous and became the darling of major studios.
Years later, Jet Li said: I can only succeed today if I put myself at the lowest starting point and start from scratch. "In that way, today, his career is like Japan, and the road to performing arts is smooth.
Bow archery, pull before and shoot after; Standing long jump is also a kind of retreat after jumping first. Taking a step back doesn't mean that you are depressed and have no talent, but it can better reflect that you are down-to-earth and strive for victory in stability. Seriously engaged in those trivial things, sometimes determines the ultimate success or failure of a thing. If a person always aims too high, refuses to do small things and can't do big things, isn't that useless? If you want to walk into a door, you should keep your head below the door. If you want to climb the mountain, you should bend down and get ready to start.
Students, let's learn to retreat for progress in our study and life, focus on a lower level and catch up with our dreams step by step!
[Comment] The thinking is clear and well-founded, which shows the young author's extensive reading and profound language skills. It is not easy to make such an article in a tight examination room within a limited time.
9. Catch up with the drifting clouds
That night, I listened to Sanskrit singing all night, not for enlightenment; On that day, all the golden wheels turned, not to surpass them; That year, kowtowing and holding dust was not a Buddha; I've traveled all over Qian Shan in my life, not for the afterlife, but to meet you. In the cycle of history, I chase the clouds drifting away in the song.
Bleeding, Tuohong gradually disappeared.
The sunshine on the fifth day of May is still immersed in thoughts, and thoughts merge into a crying cloud in Wang Yang. You have seen through the secular world of mortals, and your faithful feelings are becoming more and more faithful, and you still have dreams in your heart, but the world is too dirty, and no matter how lofty it is, it can't save the whole step of Chu. You wander in the wilderness of time, and your bun and beard fall with the wind. Standing on the stone embankment on the Guluo River, looking back at the war-torn years, worrying about the weakness of national strength, lamenting the hardships of people's lives, watching Taotao River: the crisis of the country worries you, the court struggle of intrigue, and the days of worrying about greed and hunger make you miserable ... You have been calculating, and you have exhausted your heart, but you can't pay because you are in troubled times. From a distance, the mist caresses the sinking sunset, and the boundless twilight reflects your blurred eyes. You look up at the sky and sigh, "I am the only one who is drunk, and I am the only one who is awake!" " On the bank of the river, an arc leaps high, leading to the loss of the Millennium. Chu songs gushed out of the water, and the faint rhyme aroused hundreds of millions of echoes.
Crying clouds, you drift slowly, let me catch up with you and meet you in the darkness of history. Your patriotic ambition of "although you have survived a narrow escape, you still pity my heart" will be engraved in your heart.
Green Shu Yun, the rhyme is definitely gone.
In the historical sky, wind and sand often fall, and some people and things are lost. During the Wei and Jin Dynasties, the dark corner of history that was often forgotten was like the wind blowing my skirt, and I collected bitter green Shu Yun in the wind.
You and your friends are working while the iron is hot under the tree. The powerful clock will invite celebrities to be guests, but you ignore them. If you can't swing the hammer, the clock will get bored and leave. You said coldly, "What did you hear and see?" A: "I heard that I came and left when I saw it." Perhaps it was your unruly behavior that made you calmly play Guangling San before the execution, or perhaps you were just looking for the lost memory-the mysterious whereabouts of the village community Maodian communicator, which doomed Guangling San to be a distant swan song. At the end of the song, he said: "Yuan Xiaoni tried to learn this kind of sketch, but I don't agree with Jingu. Guangling sketch is absolutely out of date!" So you died because Guangling powder could not circulate.
Green tree cloud, you drift slowly, let me catch up with you and meet you in the entanglement of Qingyun, let your noble "staying in China for the night, playing the piano and singing poems, and forgetting your worries" stay in my heart forever, let your spoony pursuit release humanity, return to the natural realm of life, affect my life, and let your colliding piano and mysterious tunes float into my heart.
Being in the historical sky and looking up, I always feel that I am running, and there is an ethereal feeling. Finally, a bloody sunset is sticky and lingering, and the sky is ethereal and transparent. Stepping on the steps that were not washed away, I reached out and touched the clouds on the horizon, but the endless ice-blue water droplets slowly flowed down the fingertips and were embedded in my heart.
[Comment] The author of this article has not easily grasped the internal relationship between "catching up" and "floating clouds", which not only took care of the limitations of the exam-oriented composition, but also made his thoughts unrestrained, stretched freely and put into words. It is a rare masterpiece with rigorous structure and elegant wording.
10. Catch up with time
Who dried the tears on Daiyu's face in the buried flowers? Who turned Su Shi's sideburns white? Who shortens life day by day.
She has such great magic that everything in the world is getting old for her. She always takes her time and keeps a straight face. She never puts off anything for 24 hours. She is never late.
She always urges me. Starting today, I want to change this "history" that has followed me for fifteen years. I'm going after her.
There are many people chasing her.
Bailey, the king of the court, was once asked by a reporter: "What do you think is the best shot?" He calmly replied: "My best shot is the next goal!" " His answer is really good! Although he has been overwhelmed by her, his words are the best sweet words for her.
She already has sweet words, and she slowed down and waited for the best gift.
Turn your eyes from South America to North America. There is an NBA championship battle in full swing-Bulls VS Jazz. When there was only 10 second left in the game, the ball fell into the hands of the bull. As time went on, the ball passed to Jordan. Look, a beautiful change of direction knocked down a player.