I want to hide the bed and sell it without authorization to reduce the disputes at home, but I am afraid that my mother will be very unhappy;
I want to leave my old bed with my mother and say I won't sell it, which will also reduce the quarrel at home, but I'm afraid my father will be unhappy.
Is this God trying to bully me lightly? Me, how to end this story.
The heart was born.
2. Change the composition (continue to write). No, I can only write like this. I'm sorry! "Mom, mom in candlelight, your eyes are full of tears.
"I didn't know how much you love me until I heard this song, mom, but I've never felt your love for me before. I feel so sorry for you. I have always felt that you have been very strict with me and educated me. I always feel nagging, but after last night, I know how much you love me. " Mom, mom by candlelight, your eyes are full of tears. "I didn't know how much you love me until I heard this song, mom, but I never felt your love for me. I feel so sorry for you. I have always felt that you have been very strict with me and educated me. I always feel nagging, but after last night, I know how much you love me. " Mom, I don't feel well. "I said slowly, and put my mother's hand on me. Let mom touch it. "Yes, it's burnt. Drink some boiled water, put on thick clothes and go to the hospital. "From my mother's eyes, I can see my mother's anxiety and worry. Mom quickly brought hot water and said to me, "Come on, drink!" " "It's so hot, how do you drink? "I blame my mother. My mother blows with her mouth again, because there is a lot of boiling water, which is very hot. Boiling water scalded my mother's mouth. I said to my mother, "Mom, your mouth is burnt." Then I looked at my mother's mouth carefully. My mother smiled and said to me, "Never mind, just a little." Then she started blowing again. After playing for a long time, my mother "I nodded. After drinking, I saw some blood on my mother's mouth. I was worried and said to my mother, "Mom, your mouth is bleeding." "It doesn't matter, it's just a minor injury." My mother casually said. "How can this work?" "It doesn't matter, it will be fine in the future." My mother said casually again.
I can't .. My mother helped me put on my coat, and then rode my bike to the hospital in the strong wind. My heart suddenly felt extremely warm .. After seeing the doctor, I went home. My mother told me to lie in bed quickly ... and then I ran up and down again, making my tears fall.
Ah! Mom, how selfless your love is .. You are great! ! ! ! ! .
3. How to rewrite the article 1? Continuation is to continue writing a paragraph into an article, or to continue the content of a complete article, that is, to supplement the original content and continue the development of the plot along the original ideas.
Note: 1. Read and analyze the written part carefully before continuing. Try to figure out the formula of}: carefully, and understand the center and writing ideas of chapter _ 2. Imagine or associate with Taiwan Province's theory to continue to write a complete article. To prevent you from abandoning the written part provided and imagining it out of thin air. For example, there is a continuation question in the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province: read the following materials. According to the topic and the relevant details mentioned above, the continuation of a narrative and continuation part should not exceed 250 words. This town has changed. At the corner leading to the town, there is an old wooden house. There lived a blind woman, Aunt Zhang, who helped people make a living since she was a child.
One day, with her savings and crutches, she trudged from the bumpy path in front of her house, touched the small wooden bridge, and went to the town to find the owner of the electrical store and asked him to install some street lamps. Boss Chen was surprised and asked, "You can't see it. What are you doing with a street lamp? " Aunt replied: "There were few passers-by before, and I didn't have any spare money at that time. Now there are more and more passers-by, and I have saved some money. In order to facilitate others to walk, please install some street lamps! " Boss Chen was very moved and decided to reduce the price and install street lamps for Aunt Zhang.
The news that the blind man Zhang Man Dayan installed street lamps spread all over the town the next day. Everyone was moved, so ... for example, the first topic of the composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Liaoning Province in 2002 was continuation: read the following materials and write as required. Long, long ago, in a far, far place, there was a big maze in which four guys lived: one was a little mouse named "Sniff", with an open personality. One is a little mouse named "Hurry", which is quick in character and bold in action; One is a dwarf named Hem, who is stubborn, content with the status quo and likes to complain. One is called "Yang Qing", who was timid at first. Four little guys live a carefree and happy life, guarding a delicious cheese mountain stored by someone who doesn't know.
But one morning, they suddenly found that the cheese was gone. Why? What shall we do? The story starts here ... Requirements: 1. Say, "The cheese is gone!" For the beginning, keep writing.
2. Imagination and association should be rich, narrative description should be specific, and plot development should conform to their respective personality characteristics. 3. On the premise of narrative description as the main form of expression, there are no restrictions on styles (such as short stories, stories, fables, fairy tales, plays, etc.). ).
4. Clear and neat handwriting, no less than 600 words. Second, rewriting is a form of writing that changes the genre or part of the content of the provided materials according to specific requirements.
Its essence is to re-conceive, cut, lay out and re-create the expression form on the premise and basis of raw materials. Pay attention to: 1 when rewriting. There are many kinds of rewriting, which should be rewritten according to the specific requirements of the topic.
On the basis of carefully reading the original text and fully understanding the ideological content of the original text, rewrite it. 2. When rewriting, you can't copy the gourd ladle, but re-process and re-create the original. So you can't copy the original text, you should write it in your own language.
3. Rewriting should be faithful to the basic content and spirit of the original text, and cannot be fabricated at will. The following article is adapted from He's poem "Homecoming Book". Let's see how the author rewrites this poem.
I resigned from my hometown and set foot on my way home in spring. Standing alone in the bow, the green hills on both sides of the strait quickly retreated.
"caged birds love to return to the forest, and fish in the pool return to their source." How many sleepless nights, I stood at the window looking at the moon and missing my hometown; Nowadays, the ethereal shadow of my hometown is already discernible.
After a burst of joy, more melancholy came to my mind ... Looking back 50 years ago, I was ambitious, in the prime of my life, striving for success, traveling around, working hard and tireless. Although my career is successful now, my hair is sparse.
50 years of wind, frost, rain and snow, scenes like smoke and fog, gradually dispersed, I looked up and sighed, feeling dejected. Walk along the familiar field path.
The roadside is lush, bees are dancing around butterflies, and the long-lost smell of earth is coming. I seem to be back to my childhood, a frolicking child, and back to my boyhood when I wrote and pointed out the mountains and rivers. Today, after many searches and treks, I finally returned to my hometown after a long separation.
"Grandpa, where are you from? Whose house are you going to? " The childish voice interrupted my thoughts. A group of lovely village children all asked me with a smile.
I suddenly froze. Faced with doubts and curious questions, I was speechless for a moment.
The children didn't seem to understand what this meant, so they suddenly dispersed with a smile-I was old and decadent, but I was treated as a new guest by my hometown! I recall the people and events of that year and slowly recall the past. Fifty years later, things have changed.
Only the old ginkgo tree in front of the house grows new green, and the lake behind the house is still rippling with the spring breeze. I am deeply moved by this situation: the spring of nature is always there, where can I find the spring of life? There are many ancient poems worth remembering in our textbooks. We might as well pick up a pen and turn these profound ancient poems into beautiful prose.
For example, students can try to write the following topic: Rewrite The Charcoal Man into a short story. Requirements: (l) Make reasonable imagination processing based on the plot of the original poem; (2) The original poem cannot be translated into modern Chinese; (3) The word count is about 600 words.
In recent years, among the composition topics of senior high school entrance examination in various provinces and cities, the composition topics about continuation and rewriting are more common. I hope that students can attach importance to these writing forms in their usual study, practice writing frequently, practice and study in middle school, and constantly improve their narrative writing ability.
4. A composition has a beginning. Keep writing. Please add the title of the composition. How to continue writing urgently? General requirements: the story must start. This is unshakable. How to continue writing a composition?
And the theme of the story must be healthy and meaningful. The content and plot of the sequel should have a clear and focused center.
When conceiving a story, the imagination must be reasonable and the plot must be coherent. The steps to continue writing are generally to determine the center first, then conceive the story according to the center, and then you can write.
Stunt is a good sequel. The little author looked at the family photo of Huang Xing on the wall and suddenly had the intention to leave.
He remembered the origin of the family photo: it was taken when he was separated from his parents when he was five years old and the police uncle sent him home. This is also the ingenuity of the article. Because of the insertion of this memory, it laid the groundwork for the activities of the following characters: Dad will change his mind because he loves his son as much as his own life.
In addition, there are two wonderful strokes in the article. The article closely revolves around the clue of "family portrait" and plans to be born from the family portrait. Finally, the teacher ended with "family portrait", which made the article seamless. Huang Xing's letter to his father in the article is sincere and true.
Unique skill: The materials for the continuation are taken from Children's Stories, and the articles are published in Children's Stories after the continuation. "Xin 'an Township Huang gu cun has a warm home.
I don't know when my father became addicted to gambling tables, often staying up late, and people became moody. Mother is helpless and worried all day.
On the first day of the lunar new year, my mother wanted to take the whole family to my grandmother's house to pay a New Year call. Who knows, in a blink of an eye, dad slipped out to "build the Great Wall" again.
Mother lost her temper at the empty house and couldn't help crying: "You don't want this home, and I don't want it ..." Huang Xing, 12 years old, hid in the corner without saying a word as usual. He is really afraid that he will be homeless. What shall we do? Looking at the family portrait on the wall, Huang Xing suddenly had a plan ... "(Use your imagination and write an interesting life story) Looking at the family portrait on the wall, Huang Xing suddenly had a plan.
Yeah, running away from home. He remembers that when he was five years old, he went shopping with his mother and got separated. His parents were so anxious that they searched the whole street. Finally, the police uncle sent him home, and the police uncle took their family photos.
But now ... Huang Xing thought: I'm going to run, take this family photo and sound the alarm for my father. Huang Xing took down the family photo and left.
On second thought, when I left, didn't mom and dad worry again? Leave a note first, then go to the teacher and ask his advice. Huang Xing picked up a pen and wrote: "Dad, Mom: My son is missing.
He longs for the warm home he once had. Dad, if you can find a warm home for your children, you can tell me on the village radio that your son will come back.
I look forward to your call. Goodbye! I have a family photo with me. "
At noon, Huang Xing's father came home and found the note left by Huang Xing. He suddenly shouted: "The child is his mother, and the son is gone!" ""what what! What did you say? " "Our son is gone!" Father Huang Xing shook the note in his hand and said. Huang Xingma burst into tears again: "You killed thousands of people, you bet, bet, bet. You must gamble away this family. " This cry doesn't matter, the neighbors are alarmed.
Everyone came to persuade. Finally, the village party secretary Huang Zhengdao calmed down. He said, "Keep the change. Huang Xing didn't say it. As long as you say it on the radio, he will come back.
Now it's up to you to give your child a warm home. "At dinner time, Huang Xing's father's kind call came from the village radio:" Huang Xing 'er, come back.
Dad must give you a warm home and never gamble again. The whole village heard what dad said. Please come back! "Huang Xing went home with a family photo, and mom and dad held him happily.
"Crack", the light flashed, and the teacher who accompanied Huang Xing home left them with this unforgettable moment. So how to continue writing? First, on the basis of reading the original text, write the development and changes of the story according to the end of the original text.
Second, develop full imagination and association to be reasonable, real and vivid. Third, the sequel should be consistent with the original in the main characters' thoughts and behaviors, personality characteristics, language characteristics and styles.
There are two kinds of continuations: 1. Fragment continuation: the original text is the beginning of an article, and on this basis, it continues into a complete article. 2. Full continuation: The original text is a complete article. Continue to write a complete article according to the genre, center, structure and language of the original text.
Continuation is to develop rich and reasonable imagination, imagine the development result of things, and complete a narrative according to the provided plot. Such composition exercises can not only develop students' imagination and thinking ability, but also cultivate students' language expression ability.
To continue writing an article, we should pay attention to the following points: 1 According to the materials given in the topic, make reasonable assumptions and choose the best angle. (2) The content to be continued must conform to the meaning of the topic and be integrated with the materials provided.
Writing techniques and language should be consistent, so that the whole article has no traces of affectation. (3) If it is a text, or if it is continued according to the relevant plots in the text, we should fully understand the center, characters and main events of the original text, and make reasonable imagination according to the original idea to reflect the characteristics of "continued writing".
2 How can I continue to write my composition (1)? We should read the provided plot carefully. Whether it is to provide a continuation of the plot or a continuation of the story of the text, we should read the original text carefully and deeply understand the author's original intention. The sequel is mainly written by our own imagination, but our imagination must be based on the original plot and follow the original idea.
For example, the word "unexpected" is very important. For example, children wear beautiful new shirts to school in the morning, and when they arrive at school, the students are envious. They are very serious in class and homework, and they are very happy. These are all unexpected things. This is logical. If you want to write something unexpected, you can't write it.
Otherwise, it is not in line with the original idea. (2) Determine the center of the article, and the story that has been continued will become a separate article. A center must clearly express its own point of view.
What should I do if my new shirt is dirty and torn? Running script
5. Revise the composition, and continue to write by the way. You will add the best examples of music score and say one or two things, which is more perfect.
Continued: Civilization starts with me. Dear teachers and classmates, hello! I believe everyone is familiar with the word civilization, but what is civilization for us middle school students? Just say hello to the teacher, pick up a piece of paper and throw it into the trash can. I think these are indeed civilized, but for middle school students, civilization is not just these, it has a new meaning. I think what the junior high school campus lacks is not greeting the teacher, but respecting the teacher's attitude. Greeting is just a way to express this attitude. Listening to the teacher carefully in class and taking notes carefully are all ways to express this attitude, which is called civilization.
Listening carefully in class is the support and recognition of the teacher's work, the responsibility for oneself, the quiet rest after class, the respect for other students and the quiet space for oneself. In the exam, the most important thing is to be as clean as possible, which can not only make the teacher clear, but also win more marks for himself. Civilization is the most important quality of our middle school students. If there is civilization, the teachers in the school will respect you, the students will like you, and even the headmaster will think you are a polite boy.
Let's work hard for civilization! There is still struggle! .
6. Continue to write the composition. Ma Ning's classmates went to play with him, but he was doing his homework. what should he do ? I hope I can help you.
I think the composition should be written by myself. Let me give you some advice:
1. You have to determine the idea of the story first.
Write an outline in the draft book.
3. The outline has not been completely revised.
Write it down in the draft book.
5. Continue to modify
6. Copy it to the official book
In this case, I believe that there is no problem. That's what I am. Remember, good articles are changed.
Sorry, I didn't see the topic clearly just now. What I told you was the method of composing music. I think he should do his homework first. I think so: I'll let him play games (computer or TV) in my house for a while first, and I'll finish my homework soon. Then, play with him.